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Chapter 5 : An angry amazon mom breaks my bones

I spent a wonderful afternoon with the heroes who made my childhood, now it was late and after my diner I had to make one of the most difficult choice in my life, something that everyone faced in his life, something that can stop us all, something

""Come on Zack, pick one !" Kara interrupted me in my thoughts

"I'm doing my best, it's not easy to choose a dessert among all of them !" Yes, choosing a dessert among a lot of delicious sweets was nearly impossible for me, the thing is that the team and I had pizza at the carnival and went to a shops called 'sweet justice' for the dessert but right now I had to choose but everything looked so good.

"Just take a Sunday !" told me Zee. I knew she went there often since the waiter knew what she usually took, but I wanted to choose myself.

""Hurry up you're blocking the queue !" someone yelled.

"Fine, Ice cream vanilla cake, please." I asked the blond at the other side of the comptoir, after I read the menu.

"Do you want strawberry coulis ?" he asked me

"No !" shouted everyone in the line except for me and Diana.

"No thanks …" I didn't know his name but he looked familiar to me, was he in high school?

"Barry, My name is Barry Allen." He answered.

You know, an hour ago I would have flipped out to see Barry Allen as a waiter but the last three days were so weird that I only reacted by a 'nice to meet you', even if it was 'the flash'
After that we sat down and our treats were in front of us in two seconds because Barry was really good at his job with his superspeed, I should be surprised that Barry had the speed force now but, after what happened with Hal, Zee and Karen I will just accept it as something in this world.

"Also thank you for giving me a disguise during the training, Zee, but can you create a magic item for me in order to use it without needing you ?" I asked the magician, the disguise was great but the problem with it was that I needed Zee for the transformation and she couldn't be there every time.

"It's not that easy to create a magic item, it demands years of hard work, knowledge and it's certainly not for something like changing the way you look without bother with creating a disguise." She quickly answered.

"you don't know how to create it." I blankly deducted since I saw her suit up in a second by using magic, Zee didn't answer but ate her dessert instead.

I tried to take another bite of my cake but when I looked at it there was only the plate, someone stole it, who the hell stole my cake!.

"This is better than italian ice cream. more… I must learn more of those magical concoctions." Diana was in a sort of trance, like when I spent all my pocket money at the beach to buy her ice cream; Diana pointed to Karen's milkshake "Are you going to to eat that ?!" she did not even wait for her answer before guzzling it down.

The Amazon did not stop there, she ate all the remaining desserts at the table, when she finished, she stared blankly forward and passed face first into her bowl.

"Do you think she is okay ?" Hal asked us.

"She kinda did the same thing yesterday so I guess." I answered before Babs turned to me.

"Yesterday?"

Suddenly, Diana shoots back up "Comrades ! those culinary creations are sweeter than ambrosia and this place is greater than Elysium, I declare that we must celebrate our every futur Victory here and thus !" She exclaimed, wow that was theatrical for sweetnesses but I don't think it would be good for my health nor my teeth.

"Diana, everything sweet has a bit of poison so you should slow down on it and about coming here. It would be good to do it from time to time like once per Week … or month with your sugar consumption … " I tried to warn her while everyone was giving me a 'shut up' look, given her reaction to sugar, no one wanted to upset her, seriously she was looking at me after her sugar frenesi and she seemed to be still in it, it was like watching a future psychopath.

"We can also go here after every victory, that's fine too." I quickly rectified myself after I saw her face at my remark about her sugar rush. I don't want to have problems with an angry amazon.

"Hey, what are you doing ?" Said a man, our eyes turned in his direction to see what happened, all the other customers were grouped at the entrance of the shop, it was the owner "we turned down the offer, get out of here please."

A part of me was thrilled at the idea to fight against anyone who wanted to force the owners to sell because 'beating up corrupt businessmen' was one of the many things I liked to see in television.

"Barry, go get our lawyer." The wife of the owner told the speedster before he was gone in one second.

Then I saw what was the problem, robots who looked like trash cans on wheels

Quest alert : first fight

Something big is going to happen, you and your guild will have to play a crucial role in the following moments :

completion award : exp points.

ameliorated relationship with your teammates

completion failure : ?

they were robots with no arms nor weapons so it's going to be fine, with a kryptonian and an amazon on my side.

"By order of the city of Metropolis, you must vacate before structure removal begins; you have thirty seconds to comply" advertised one of the robots before customers started to leave in panic.

"What should we do." asked Kara.

"What can we do ? they're city robots." reminded us Zee.

While they were speaking, I put on my hood and closed the zipper until my mouth was completely covered because after I intended to do I was really gonna need that. "Wakmeha." I yelled when I created a laser beam by combining two portals, unlike Metallo, the robots in front of me were vaporised when the beam touched them, maybe it was because I had a higher level than before or they were just way weaker than Corben but I was happy it worked well.

"You have a laser ray !" shouted Babs with stars in her eyes.

"Yes and those robots are destroying a shop without authorization from the owners so it's very illegal, we destroy them of course !" I told the team, even if I was not sure if I could destroy those robots without my laser ray since I did not know my strength.
Then, ten more robots came through the walls, destroying part of them while they were at it but they got crushed in second

"Good enough for me." Then Hal was in his uniform with a hammer coming out of his ring.

"Refusal to cooperate, lethal force permitted." the robots opened, shoving chainsaws, demolition balls and even a flamethrower.

"we're not ready for a fight," said a frightened Karen.

"Just break every robots in sign." I shouted

All of us jumped in action, weirdly they were in their suits the moment after I told them it was fine to destroy the robots; but we were a team for such a short time that teamwork was not possible, Jessica tried to help the customers to get out the robots disturbed her, Karen was too small to hurt them and Batgirl did not have enough firepower to destroy them while Zatanna was showing off.
Then I saw a robot flying to the table of a family so I opened a portal and it landed on the wall next to me.

"Bumblebee, try to short-circuit them." I heard Jessica.

"It's too scary, I don't want to." I heard the bee heroine, she couldn't face them in her shrunken state

"Damn it, Batgirl, Karen Help Jessica to evacuate the civilians and take those fucking googles off, Zee fight them!" I screamed to the point that my throat hurt.

"Watch out." warned me Diana

The demolition ball of a robot struck me right on my left arm and sent me to the other side of the place and it hurt like hell, I never felt such pain before in fact I think it broke my arm but the pain started to numb as fast as it came, I guess it was the pro of my powers but it still hurt.
Then I saw Hal piloting a green steamroller to crush all the robots in front of me and he picked me up while he was doing it.

"Dude, are you okay?" He asked me.

"Yeah, I will survive."

"Follow the lines." It was Jessica who told this to the civilians while she was helding the ceiling, I could heard the sound of plastic hitting the floor while Batgirl was helping people to get out without meeting the robots; Bumblebee, Batgirl and Jess were following my directives and to be fair it feels nice, I understood why Robin liked that in teen titan go.

"Haaaa!" Diana yelled before she sliced the last robot with her sword, it was over, no more robots were coming, we won this battle and nobody got hurt as all the clients and the owners were gone, when I hal put me down I instantly felt pain in my body

"stats" I whispered.

Name: Zack Walkers

Species: Human/Eliatrope Hybrid

Level: 5| EXP: 05.00%

Title: The [Apprentice hero]

HP: 1300/1300

WAKFU: 1550/33500

STR: 16

VIT: 13

DEX: 14

INT: 27

WIS: 35

CHA: -5

LUK: 0

Attribute Points: 3

Money: $0

[You were hit by a demolition ball, your arm is broken so you won't be able to move it until you're fully healed]

"Zack, are you well?" Diana asked me.

"Yes, apparently I'm quite durable.", I answered before looking around me, a good part of the shop was destroyed but it was still standing.

"Good, now tell me why you yelled our identities !" shouted Supergirl to me, she was angry but I knew what I saw during the fight, even with robots coming out of everywhere.

"I'm not familiar with your secrets identities and I shouted we had to act fast as we weren't organized, Batgirl and Bumblebee were attacking the robots but they could not hurt them while Jessica couldn't evacuate the customers alone and Zatanna was not focused at all with her magic tricks and someone threw carelessly a robot that almost crushed a family, people could have died!" I yelled the last part while adrenaline was still overwhelming me, I was angry toward Supergirl and Zatanna, I didn't tolerate it when she created hands to applaud herself but worst, she did it while we were fighting and Kara could have crushed those people, what kind of hero or even person does that?!.

Zee looked ashamed at least but Kara, she just got angry.

"But you provoked them with your secret freaking laser ray ! in fact, those people were in danger because of you!" Supergirl responded.

"And you almost crushed a kid to death because of your inattention, superman doesn't do that." I quickly told her.

The kryptonian stopped, lookin at me in silence and I just realized that comparing her to Superman really hurt her feelings.

"You know what, screw you; I already told you that I'm not a superhero so' if I'm such a pain, I quit !" declared the kryptonian before she flew away, breaking the roof in her way out.

"Supergirl, waits !" Batgirl tried to talk to her but it was too late as Kara was too fast for her.

"I'm with her." I turned to the voice and it was Zee who returned to her civilian identity, her suit was gone "I never wanted to do this in the first place and you yell at me for trying !" she looked at me when she said the last part.

"you were doing a bad job" Maybe I was acting like a jerk but no way I would sugarcoat what she did.

"Yes I made mistakes but why do you think I didn't want to be a hero at first? I'm an artist and having powers doesn't make me a superhero but I gave it a try, I really did but did you even care how stressful it could be for me or how I could cope with that." She seemed sad when she told me about her powers and the stress … wait, she was acting like it was a show to cope with her stress? "Don't bother to answer, I know you don't." the magician walked away and Batgirl followed her but she fell down, there was too much sadness in her eyes.

"Do you all want to leave ?" the gotham girl asked.

"No," Karen answered.

"what ?" Batgirl looked at her, surprised at her answer.

"I wasn't sure at first but I helped those people even as a tiny insect, I mean I couldn't fight but I took off those goggles; helping them felt good, I was someone for once." Karen declared, smiling at the memory of her actions.

The female green lantern put her hand on Batgirl's shoulder "And I did good with this ring without using violence because I was in this team; If I can't leave the corps maybe having partners can make it more tolerable for me and we really did good there."

"I'm the best player of the school but not just because I'm awesome but because I work in a team, although I destroyed the most of those robots" Hal reassured Batgirl.

"Babs, we beat those robots and everyone is okay, you shouldn't be sad … okay, supergirl and Zatanna went away but that's their choice, you can't force them but you can put behind bars the person who send those robots" I told her

Batgirl was back to her previous cheerful personality after that, "Okay, so now we must knows who send those robots here and I got a clue" she showed us a logo composed of a 'L' and a 'X', "Lex Luthor"

"What could he have against cupcakes ?" asked Hal

"Babs, the logo is from the robot but they can be hacked by a lot of people, it can be a rival who tries to ruin his name, an angry employee or just a guy who did it for fun." I told her as I remembered that a lot of guys had a good reason to try to kill him, seriously Luthor was really a despicable human in all the cartoons I saw him in but I doubt he would go as low as attacking a sweet shop

"Euh' why is there so much fog ?" Karen asked and she was right, all we could see around us was fog that hid everything behind it. I felt like I was in a Percy Jackson novel.

"Oh no." whispered Diana.

Then, figures came out, eleven amazonians women taller than anyone I saw, they all looked angry, especially the blond one with a fur cape in front of the group.

"Friends, meet my mother, Hippolyta." Diana said with a ashamed face while the blond amazon was walking toward her.

"She looks like a final boss." A scared Batgirl, declared.

"Disguising yourself as a warrior, entering the tournament of Athena and Aphrodite against the wishing of your queen, leaving Themyscira without my permission." Diana looked more and more ashamed as she spoke

"Wait, you snuck out ? But I thought it was your destiny to save the world of man" asked Batgirl.

Hippolyta turned to us and her anger got worse. "This insolent child has no such destiny, she has brought shame upon her people. Come, Diana. It's time to return home." The queen ignored us and grabbed her daughter by the ear

When I saw the sadness in Diana's eyes when her mother talked to her, it was clear that she was hurting her, I couldn't stand it any longer. I had no more fear of dying after I met an angel and with no fear I could not control myself like before, unfortunately.

"You are the one who brought shame upon the amazons." I declared, then everyone looked at me, every single pair of eyes.

"Be careful, your life depends on your next words boy." the queen spat the last word as she looked at me, yep I definitely pissed her off, at least I did good till now.

"The amazon way is peace and prosperity with the strength to protect the others who can not defend himself but you have been on your island for centuries with no contact with the outside world, you did not even tried to learn our innovations and you were not there when the world was in danger, where were you during the two world war?! you have lost your way of peace while Diana follows it; you are the one who brought shame in what your people represent, not her."

Then everything happened too fast for me, I felt a crushing pain in my stomach as I spat blood, I never did it before but hurt way more than what it looks like on TV, my whole world was in pain.

"You have no idea of what you're talking about." the queen declared as she looked at me in the eyes with all her disgust toward me before I fell back down from the impact.

"Zack !" I heard Diana although I was fighting just to breathe.

[Warning : it was a critic hit, another hit like that and your life will be greatly endangered ]

"Come Diana, you're going to have the grounding of your immortal life." Hippolyta left me on the ground

"She doesn't deserve that." I declared as I painfully rose from the ground, my ribs hurted me but I didn't have time to care.

Diana was relieved but when her mother saw her expression she got more angry and all this anger was directed toward me.

"Stay away from my daughter." she tried to punch me, I wanted to move but after her last punch I was already barely standing, fortunately a green shield appeared in front of me and blocked her fist, it was Hal and Jessica.

"Leave him alone." Hal ordened.

The Amazons did not listen, they prepared to fight as they got in a formation while my teammates reunited around me.

"What should we do ?" Karen asked me. Apparently what I said at the shop made me the second choice for leadership.

"I know, SUPERMAN HELP !" Just for you to know, I screamed his name but it's actually my backup plan, "Okay, we take Diana with us and we get out of here the fastest way possible, Jessica keep protecting us, Hal you use the big guns and we don't fight them directly." I told my new friends and ignored how they blinked at how quickly I passed from begging for help to give them orders.

"Let's go." Hal said as his ring was brighter than ever and charged to battle.

To be fair, we were not doing great, Batgirl's gadget did not have effect on them, Jessica created an armor to protect herself but the amazons were too strong so it just protected her, Hal's tank was not enough, Karen was to small to be caught so it was good until they sorted a Butterfly net and my hand to hand fight was far from good, an amazon got close to me as I was punched in the face, the warrior tried to attack again but two blur came from nowhere and hit the amazon, Kara and Superman.

"I thought you quit ?" I smiled at Kara, glad to see her back.

"I heard you cry like a little girl." she responded with a grin.

"Superman, my old friend !" exclaimed Hal. at the view of Superman

"oh, you again." Superman was not pleased to see Hal, just what happened between them?.

An amazon tried to punch the man of steel but he blocked her hand. She just kneeled him in the stomach by surprise before slapping him, I forgot that amazons could be really strong with centuries of experience while Superman was holding back most of the time.

We were losing and I was too weak to act, I had an idea but I wasn't sure if it would work. "A point to vitality." I whispered.

Name: Zack Walkers

Species: Human/Eliatrope Hybrid

Level: 5| EXP: 05.00%

Title: The [Apprentice hero]

HP: 1300/1300

WAKFU: 1550/33500

STR: 16

VIT: 14

DEX: 14

INT: 27

WIS: 35

CHA: -5

LUK: 0

Attribute Points: 2

Money: $0

My body was back in full shape, no… I was better than before, I guess I should start to save my attribute points for cases like this one. "Diana, you said that you wanted to save this world." I teleported away from an angry amazon before Superman held her down, "You can do it, you have the heart of a true hero." A spear came out of nowhere but Supergirl just grabbed it and saved me. "You told me that Aphrodite chose you and she did it because you follow the original way of the amazons !" I barely dodged a punch from another amazon as I tried to get closer to wonder woman

"You are our friend." yelled Batgirl as she was on an amazon head, punching her in the face. "We will fight for you."

"You said that you wanted to help us to be heroes, a true leader would never let down his team, I would never do that during a game and I know you wouldn't do that to your friends." shouted Hal because his ring created a bazooka with balloons instead of bullets bazooka.

"We need you! you're our friend and you shouldn't give up because things get hard" said Jessica as she protected herself with a shield.

"Diana, I told you I was not a hero but I know that you are a real one !" said Kara as she punched an amazon twice as big as her.

"If you want to stay with us, do it, you're the one I choose to follow, you're Wonder Woman, a real hero" I screamed before I was hit from the back, I felt my ribs break then I was held in the air by my throat, the queen was there, angrier than before

"I will have my daughter out of your spell." she tried again to punch me and the green lanterns could not protect this time, I guess it's the end… But I'm sure I got a good karma now.

But I was saved from her fist by someone, a princess saved me.

"Amazons, your princess commands you to stop !" Diana yelled with all her authority while I was in her arms, my body could not move any more.

This time, the amazones listened and we really needed that, we were a mess, even Superman with his suit shredded with a blackeyefrom the battle, Kara was barely standing and resting on Jessica shoulders although I saw some amazons on the ground, while Bumblebee seemed to be too stressed and Hal looked like he did not sleep for a month.

"Mother, he is right; I survived the Twenty-one tests of the tournament of Athena and Aphrodite, I have proven I'm my own woman, I'm the one who decides how I will live but most importantly you were the one who attacked him first ! you lowered yourself to violence toward him because of his words who weren't even insulting you, you lose your temper while even when you want to kill him he is still holding back! you go against everything you taught me about our ways."

Her mother frowned at her. "You are only three hundreds seventeen years old, a girl too naive to understand the madness of this world." the queen responded.

"So why is she more mature than you !" Superman told her; " she lived more than anyone in our world and every parent must learn to let their child go; she passed your trial and she deserves to be treated as an adult."

"She is not mature enough, the evil of evil in your kind knows no limits." Hippolyta

I didn't read a lot of comics besides apart of the one in the library of my hometown but I read one when the amazons met hercules and he was way worse than what Riodan described, I couldn't argue with that but I remember something Diana's said who changed everything.

"Maybe but the world changed since the last time, humanity suffered from its own atrocity and we evolved but your people stagned, for example : how many of you met a living soul that doesn't live on Themyscira before today?" I quoted 'kingdom come'.

Some of the amazons raised their hands but they quickly went down as if they realized they actually didn't meet one.

"You hid from the world but you imprisoned yourself… you gave up too early." I told the queen of the amazons as she stared at me then her daughter

"When I finished the test I got the right to decide my life, It is law, your law ." declared Diana.

"It is law." repeated the amazons.

Hippolyta looked like she could kill me right now but instead she sighed and walked slowly toward her daughter.

"Fine, you have won Diana, you can stay here, but I warn you, this world knows nothing more than violence, war, cruelty and the day you will understand why we left it, you will be welcome." The mother declared before she turn away!;

But then the whole pier began to tremble and shake, we all turned to see massive robot like in the movies but to be fair I was more in awe than scared because I had a giant robot in front of me, it had also robots to back him up.

"You were Lucky last time but now you will be defeated by me." the robot said with a modified voice, by watching it closely I could see on his torso the same logo that the robots from before.

"I knew it, I knew it, I knew it, I knew it !" Batgirl exclaimed to the whole team " Lex Luthor was behind it, only he could use that mech." she so energetic that I could barely understand her, heck even the amazons were surprised to see how she acted

"I'm not Lex." the robot opened its chest to show a little girl, the one I saw in the commercial. "I'm Lena, Lena Luthor !"

I did not know that Lex had a daughter but right now I got really beat up and I was in the mood for a villain speech so just when I had her in sign I created a portal behind her and in front of me to pull her out,nteleportation was really cool.

"Let me go, you big meany !" she shouted as she was holding the grips of the mech and started to kick me in the face.

"Help me !" I told my team as I was kicked in the face but then I got an electric shock,yes she used a taser on me, who gave a taser to a child?! We are not in gotham!, I couldn't hold her any longer because of the electricity running through my body and she got back inside the robot before closing it.

When the robots charged us, the amazon easily fought them, the kryptonians went against the mech while we were destroying the robots.

Hal created a giant golf club to hit the robots, Jessica created a car to take us to Lena, although I would have prefered she use her ring in a more offensive way, as we crushed all of her mechanic minions.

"Okay, Kill mode." I heard, as the mech started to open various parts of its body to threaten us with canons, chainsaws, and a green laser ray… okay, it's an anti-superman mech.

I quickly created two portal in order to use my laser on the weapons, the laser came out and touched the kryptonite canon only for it to not even have a scratch

"My turn." Lena wanted to attack us but before she could do anything, her machine became wrapped in a purple light… wait a minute.

"You're cheating, cheater!" The deformed voice came out of the mech as it started to fly higher before it suddenly dropped on the pier and fell into water.

"Does it count as an elephant?" I heard someone but I didn't care who it was.

"Kid!" I yelled as I ran to where the mech fell, that kid may have been a villain but she was still a child.

Fortunately, She came out from the water in an ejectable seat, she was going to be alright even if she would catch a cold

"No fair, no fair." she whined before Jessica took her off the water.

Since the threat was over I turned to our 'savior' and saw Zee, she seemed horrified at what just happened.

"So you came back." I told the magician.

"Only because I saw a giant robot coming to your direction, you may be rude but you don't deserve to be crushed by a robot … although I didn't know it was a child inside of it." Zee was embarrassed at the last part.

"Does it means you're in?" I asked her.

She seemed outraged at what I said. "No, I told you that I'm not a hero, I only came to help you because it's common sense to help people in danger when the danger is in front of you." she saw my face and her expression softened. "Look, I'm not going to seek trouble just because I have superpowers, I just want to live a normal life so if you're as good as you pretend to be then respect my wish." She told me before she left… in her own portal, since when she can do that?!

"So, what do we do with the brat ?" Supergirl asked everyone as I wasn't sure how to deal with the situation.

"I don't know, she is just a kid, maybe she has her reason." Jessica answered as we all gave her a look who said 'really?' even the amazons and superman gave her the look.

"she came after us because we destroyed her robots but why would she destroy a sweet shop?" I asked.

"Of course you can't understand my brillant plan to get ride of all the stupid teenagers, I reprogrammed Lex's worthless VR glasses; Then, I hacked the demolition robots that my doofus brother made, and finally, I destroyed every "fun" and/or "cool" place to "hang" in Metropolis, so you morons will have nowhere else to go but to buy those googles I created just for you. with all you out of the way children will rule metropolis." The young Luthor started to laugh maniacally.

We were all looking at her disturbed, in disbelief and even the amazons were shocked by her actions at such a young age and her motives, she seemed to be ten but she was already a hacker, stole from Lex Luthor and tried to kill us.

"Hera, this world became crazy." the queen of the amazons declared at the same time I told my thoughts on what she said

"Damn, you are an evil genius." I said as everyone all looked at me like I was crazy.

"Zack, don't encourage her !" Jessica yelled to me.

"But she could rule the world in adulthood if she kept going like this." I answered.

"Really !" I was seeing stars in the eyes of this young Luthor, it was so cute that I forgave her about the taser.

"Yes, everyone with the goggles were like zombies but your goal could have been bigger like "ruining your brother' s reputation, getting rich if you touch a percent of those goggles or put subliminal messages in it in order to control people later but doing what you did at your age it's impressive, almost scary !" I told her, seriously, I was watching Tv when I was her age.

"It is scary ! what's wrong with you ?" Supergirl yelled to me.

"I know but how many kids can do what she did? she could become the next doctor doom." I answered.

"Who is doctor doom?" Batgirl asked…. I forgot there were no more Marvel's universe.

"Enough." Shouted hippolyta.

She seemed angry as everyone was surprised at her outburst but she quickly regained her composure.

"Amazons, it's time to go back home but before that I have to talk to my daughter in private." The queen declared, her subject walked away while the royal family went to talk away from our ears, I was curious of what they were talking about but it wasn't my business.

"first fight" completed

you gained free exp.

your relationship with your teammates upgraded

The exp bar started to fill itself, until it raised to two more level

Name: Zack Walkers

Species: Human/Eliatrope Hybrid

Level: 7 | EXP: 0.00%

Title: The [Apprentice hero]

HP: 1400/1300

WAKFU: 3650/33600

STR: 18

VIT: 14

DEX: 15

INT: 28

WIS: 35

CHA: -5

LUK: 0

Attribute Points: 2

Money: $0

I was fully recovered after gaining two more level, even my clothes seemed to be new as the blood was washed out of my hoodie.
Apparently, Diana's conversation was short as her mother was soon in front of me and looked at me with so much furry that I would have soiled myself if I was still fourteen.

"If you hurt my daughter, I will reap tear off your heart to feed our griffin then asking Hades to take you to the underworld so I could personally supervise your torture until you beg for mercy, are we clear?" She threatened me.

"Yes ma'am." I quickly answered to her, afraid of her.

After that, the amazons went to their ship, weirdly enough I didn't notice it before. Not long after they left, people came to see what happened. I could not blame them because there was a giant robot near me so of course I would come to see it even if it was the middle of the night; then a car came and three people came out, a middle aged blond woman who was a bit chubby, the car driver who seemed to come right from 'Smallville' and a bald man around my age, I was watching the bald one because I had an idea who it was.

"See, mom; She stole my war suit." he told his mother who seemed angry.

"Lutessa Lena Luthor!" shouted the mother, eyup, Lex Luthor was in front of me.

"Excuse me." I interrupted them while I walked toward them, my hoodi still covering my face although I could swear that Lex's eyes widened when he saw me.

"What do you want?" the bald asked me.

"I just want to personally ask you : who was taking care of her?" I seriously asked the Luthors.

"I asked Lex to take care of his sister while me and my husband were on vacancions…" the mother answered before I interrupted her.

"Don't you think it's a bad idea to ask someone who makes money out of weapons to look after a child when not only he is a CEO but also when said child can have access to weapons."

"Yes, it was a mistake." The mother looked at her son who seemed a bit embarrassed, look like even he couldn't stand against an angry mother.

"But mom, I had a company to run, a billion dollars company." He answered.

"But you can't even look after your sister, she fucking stole a warsuit so not only you're a bad brother but also a bad CEO since a child stole weapons from you… that's irresponsible on so many level that I can't even find the words to describe it." Seriously, I may have not been the best brother in my past life but I could at least take care of my siblings when my parents asked me.

Lex didn't answer but if looks could kill I would already be dead.

"My family life doesn't concern you." He coldly answered.

"So be better." I know I shouldn't bully a dragon but I hated Lex Luthor in Batman vs Superman, Superman 2, the movie where he was president… I think anyone could get the idea why I wasn't nice toward the one in front of me.

"Hi, Lex." Superman flew toward us as Luthor seemed to be annoyed to see the man of steel in front of him. "Sorry but I think your warsuit is lost." the kryptonian told him as the bald genious started to get angry

"Did you know it cost thousands if not millions of dollars to make it."

"Do you know that using lasers, particularly kryptonite one, is now considered a war crime?" The man of steel replied.

I could see lightning was between their eyes, they really despised each other.

"Did you know that kryptonite gives cancer ?" I asked Lex in hope to prevent him to become like in the DCAU as I was deeply scared of fighting Brainthor

"Yes, I heard your advice after the incident at Metropolis' mall." I could feel the contempt in his voice toward me, it was probably his ego that could stand the fact someone thought about the dangers of kryptonite before him.

"Thank you, you saved his life." His mother genuinely smiled at me before she took her daugher me with a smile before she went to her car.

"I could have found it without help, he did not save me !" Lex told her.

"would you have bothered to check if he didn't say it could?" The man came with the Luthors talked for the first time.

"Not now, Dad." The guy was his father? he's not even wearing a suit.

I didn't see clearly what the Luthor family did next because a crowd started to form around me and the other superheroes, it was a bit embarrassing to be in front of so many people even if it was for praise although I could see a big smile on everyone's face, especially Hal and Superman.

"If we become a team we need a name, any idea Bro?" Hal asked the man of steel as he put his arm on the kryptonian who quickly took it off his shoulders.

"I think you don't need me in your team, in fact you could defend Metropolis while I go away, I was thinking of helping people in Kahndaq." Told us Superman before he flew away, it seemed to be like him to help people in need.

"We could just be a team, Green Lantern and Superman or superbros or… " Hal started to enumerate different names for a duo between him and Superman as he flew to his direction, I think Hal was a bigger fan of Superman than me but now that I think about it.

"Are you okay Zack?" Jessica seemed worried when she asked me that.

"Yes, I just forgot to ask for an autograph from Superman, again." How could I forget that for the second time!

"That's rude" Supergirl comforted me. "Want mine?"

"Yes please." I told her while she smiled


It was Saturday, the morning after, even if I came back home a bit late I just explained to the Zeuls that I got late because of the attack on the 'sweet justice', since it was on the internet with the attack of the giant robot they understood that I was back late.

Since there was no school today, I was quietly eating my breakfast at the table with the family.

"So, how was your date with Hal Jordan?" Doris teased me.
I almost spit my hot chocolate, "It was not a date, I was just going ot with friends, six girls and two boys." I told her before she could do any remarks about my sexuality.
"Six girls, I did not know you were that kind of guy." she laughed as I was embarassed at the allusion.
"Be nice toward Zack, sportmonkey." Baetrice asked her daughter.
The tv was on, broadcasting the news, I wasn't particularly interested until the last one.

"An alien was seen at Metropolis Junkyard." The journalist said as a picture was on the screen, it was me when Zee disguised me back when we trained.

"I was in the middle of my Jogging when I saw it coming out of this blue portal." A man talked on the television before an old man took his place : "I was looking for my dog when I saw the alien using his weird portal, he' s preparing an invasion, an invasion." the man started to panic.

Someone took a photo of me when I was in the junkyard, I caused a panic about potential alien invasion, I got beat up by amazons and robots before telling to Lex Luthor how much of a shit brother he was before being on the new nor even a day after I started to be a superhero.

I think I did great for a new hero.


Finally, after four months, the rewritting is over, the two following chapter don't count because they will change entierely, but I hope I devlopped it enough for everyone to appreciate it and I'm proud of my work.

Don't worry for what happened with Zee, she won't be out of the team for all season one and she was more angry at herself than with Zack; she told him she did not wanted to be a hero and when she tried he reminded her that people could have died, it was the last straw for her. Beside a self insert should Always change the story.
About Hal, he is a green lantern and unlike Jessica he use his ring in an offensive way and if you want to know wy he should join the team I respond "why he shouldn't join them when he get along with everyone ?" the way he use his ring greatly helped against the robots and to be fair he was quite happy to be noticed by the media in the end.
For the Amazons I was sure that Hippolyte would hate Zack and when she looked at Diana, she knew that Zack was the first man her daughter saw, just for that she wanted to kill him and what he said made her more hangry.
About Lena, She is eleven and super rich so about the taser I could Believe it and even if Zack is durable against hits he can be electrocuted badly, he encouraged her because he has a soft point for children and he was impressed by what she has done.
For superman, I was thinking that if he is not involved in the show I could give him a good excuse instead of making of him a bad guy, a bit less mature than in the animated but still a good man; about Kara, yes she thinks Zack is a jerk but she heard him and knew he was in danger so she saved him.
I hope you enjoyed it.