New chapter live guys! Longest one yet and booooy did I have FUN writing it :). Not sure when the next chapter is coming out but likely sometime either later in the week or sometime this weekend. Special thanks go out toward Kuriyan BBQ for reading the finished draft and giving me feedback during the chapters production. Thanks also go out toward my friend Meep and FrostyHawk, who also looked through in-complete versions of the chapter as I wrote it and gave feedback.

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Star snapped out of her bed, looking around frantically. Dilated pupils slowly calmed down, seeing her room on Earth. Nervously laughing, she placed a worried hand on her head, shaking it lightly. "That was only…"

"A dream?" Marco's kind voice emitted. Star looked toward her right, seeing Marco holding out a tray. It contained two cups of coffee and a few piece of toast. Taking out a fold-up table he took with him, Marco placed the tray out on the open object. "I couldn't sleep at all." He took a big gulp of the coffee, Star finally noticing his nearly bloodshot eyes.

Taking a cup herself, she took a sip. "Thanks…" She placed the mug on her resting lap, looking toward her window. Light rain was falling down, splashing the neatly cut grass. The warm vapors of the coffee got her attention, making a small smile form on Star's face. "I really needed that Marco."

He nodded, sitting down on her bed. Placing one hand on her shoulder, he had a horrified look on his face. "You… You really okay? Do you feel safe?" Star blinked at the question. She wanted to wave her hand and laugh at his nervousness or just spit out a playful jab. But her mind kept replaying the dream, where she talked to herself. Sighing in defeat, she looked up at Marco, gently taking his hand off her shoulders.

"Tom… Tom is coming back." Silence took the room, the only sound being frantic almost scared heartbeats from Star and Marco. The two felt fear course through their very veins. "I don't know if I can face him again Marco." She put the coffee down gently, curling into a ball. Light sobs escaped her mouth, covering her face with beds covers. "I… I might not be strong enough."

Marco just hugged Star tightly, refusing to let her go. "My dream, I saw him do things to you. And he made me watch, chained to a wall." Star's blue eyes went wide, tightly hugging Marco. "I will be damned if that dream becomes a reality. I…" He closed his eyes, letting pent-up tears come down. "I won't lose the thing I love so much."

Star felt her heart melt, pushing Marco back slightly. She gave a small smile, one that made Marco's worried face lose some tension. "Well, then we shouldn't be getting upset like this, right?" Lightly patting her face, Star jumped out of the bed. Taking a piece of toast, she felt something inside her scream proudly. 'I… We won't let Tom win.' Biting the toast harshly, she made a toothy grin toward Marco. "Come on, the food's getting cold."

Marco only nodded, his face retaining a look of horror from before. Sitting on the bed's edge, he took a piece of toast and resumed drinking his coffee. Star noticed his hands shake violently, nearly dropping the cup a few times. Marco saw Star's worried face, giving a weak grin. "I'm good at fighting, so I got your back." Slugging down the rest of his drink, he harshly put the cup down. Looking at his right hand, he saw a flash of blood covering it before vanishing away. "But um… I'm going to wash my face. Be right back." He got up and was about to touch the door.

"Wait." Marco froze in place, seeing Star stand up. "Look, I… I'm happy you always have my back." Star took a deep breath, giving a strained smile. "You know I can fight, right?"

Marco blinked at the comment. "Of course I know that! I just… Don't want Tom to do anything." Star folded her arms, raising an eyebrow.

"I'm actually getting stronger Marco." Her right hand glowed a bright gold, somewhat shocking her. "Huh…didn't think that would work." Shaking the thought, she resumed looking at Marco. "But seriously, I'm no damsel. So… Don't treat me like one, okay?"

Marco let his head hang down in shame. "Have I… Been a bad friend to you all this time?" Star bit her lip, placing a hand on Marco's shoulder. "I only want to protect you. And I will do my best."

"Marco, why are we dating now?" Star asked teasingly, making Marco's face grow red. His mouth was about to open but she silenced him with a finger over Marco's lips. "Don't answer that. We are together because we need each other. It's like… We are two puzzle pieces that just 'click', or something like that." Marco stood still, unsure where things were going next. "But point being, treat me like your partner, not as a princess, got it, Diaz?"

"Sure thing Star." He rubbed his neck, nervously laughing. "Our first fight went a lot better than I expected," Star smirked, lightly punching Marco's shoulder. He left the room, Star slowly closing the door. Out of her vision, Marco slid down the door, covering his face. "Don't bow the one thing keeping you together Diaz…"


River was flipping through TV stations mindlessly in his guest room. "Bah, nothing good on. Years away and all there is violence." He put the remote down, settling on one show featuring a cat-dog hybrid going on adventures. Snickering at the sight, he laid back on the bed and relaxed. A light knocking was heard on his door, sending him upright. Rubbing his long beard, he jumped out of bed and opened the door. "Marco my boy! Early morning isn't it?"

Marco rubbed his eyes, washing off tears from before. "I… Couldn't really sleep, sir. But how are you?" River put his arm around Marco's shoulders, guiding him inside. He intently studied the boy, noticing his horrified eyes and drained expression.

"What happened, son," River asked gently, placing both his hands on Marco's shoulders. "We might have gotten off on the wrong foot the other day, but I respect you. Please, tell me." Marco sighed, giving River a weak smile.

"You sure are Star's dad, having a golden heart under tough layers." River just watched Marco, starting to pace around the room. "I have a feeling that..." Marco closed his eyes, clenching fists tightly. "No, I know that bastard is coming back." River raised an eyebrow, folding his large arms. "Tom is coming back sir and I need to get stronger. We both know what he wants."

River has an enraged glared, ready to kick the door down, but Marco stops him with a mere touch. "Unhand me, going to protect my baby girl!" Marco only squeezed his grip, taking a deep breath. "Sorry, have to plan things." River calmed down, walking toward his bed. Ruffling his short blond hair, he was puzzled. "What do you have in mind boy?"

Marco folds his arms, looking around the room. "Do you have a pair of dimensional scissors? I know two people that can help us." River smiled, getting up and looking through his drawer. Passing Marco the scissors, he gave a stern expression.

"Marco, these aren't to be trifled with. I spent many years earning them. So, use them wisely." Marco nodded, putting them in his pocket. "And who exactly are you going to see?" Marco grinned, walking toward the door.

"A friendly skeleton. He wants dead demon too." Marco said dangerously. He touched the doorknob, not looking back at River. "I might not have magic in my blood or be very powerful. But… I will protect your daughter, even if it kills me. I lost someone very special to me." He turned the knob, opening the door. "Not losing another." Marco left the room, leaving a very worried River to his thoughts. Grabbing his compact phone, he dialed up a number.


Sitting in his room, Marco was intently holding the dimensional scissors. "Is this a good idea? I mean… I will do anything for Star." He snipped the scissors, feeling magical sparks coming out of them. "But getting help? I should be able to protect her myself." As he got up, he froze hearing something. Looking around his room, he locked his vision at a corner. A dark frown was on his face, glaring intently. Feeling something leave his room, he sighed and walked toward his closet. Digging through the organized location, he found a black dress jacket and pants. Tossing them on his bed, he continued looking for something. His eyes went wide, spotting a brown box. Walking toward it, he gently opened a lid. It hid a small skull mask, one with decorated colors and a small sun mark on each cheek.

Getting dressed in the attire, Marco only had the mask in his hand. "Hopefully this works." Sliding the mask around his face, only brown orbs were present, the mask covering everything else. Oddly enough, the sun marks on the mask glowed. Marco rubbed his chin but shrugged the thought off. Wearing a red cape, large red hood hanging down his back, took out the scissors.

"Find Pete…" He snipped into the air itself, making a blue vortex. It was swirling as if the many circles spun for generations. Marco walked into the vortex but stopped as he felt something touch his shoulder. Looking behind, he saw nothing. He still smiled, jumping into the vortex.

The sensation of traveling through dimensions tingled Marco's nerves and skin. Coming out of the vortex, it vanished, leaving him in some odd town. Monsters were roaming around, chatting like no one's business. Marco rushed into an ally, being hidden from plain sight. Throwing up his hood, he tried looking around. The buildings were very naturalistic, seemingly built from solid dirt and red bricks. Taking a deep breath, Marco walked out of the ally and walked into the streets.

"Why hello good sir!" Marco turned to the voice's source, seeing a tall elephant monsters waving hello. "You seem a bit lost. May I guide you?" He nodded, walking closer to the creature. "See, we help our kind here. So just tell me where you need to go. I got a good mind up here." He tapped his large head, making Marco snicker.

"Thank you." Marco took off the hood, folding his arms together. "Looking for a warrior named Pete. I think he lives here and is a good friend of mine." The monster froze in place, blinking a few times. Marco let his arms drop, getting nervous. "You okay? I can ask…"

"No, anyone who is friend's with the king should be honored." He made a bow, making Marco feel very confused. "Follow me." The two walked in tense silence, passing various vendors and shops. Odd looks were given to Marco, forcing him to throw up his hood. The monster tapped his shoulder, pointing toward a bar. "Sir Pete is inside there. Please be mindful. You seem… Different, from other monsters."

Marco opened the door, giving a thankful smile. "This was cool of you, name's…" Marco froze, tapping his chin. "Sol." The elephant monster nodded and left, nearly running away from Marco. "Uh…okay, I guess?" He opened the door and went inside, feeling the aroma of alcohol rush toward his face.


Rasticore and Pete were laughing loudly at each other, slapping backs and snickering like idiots. "And I told him, 'You couldn't beat me with determination' and guess what? He still lost!" Rasticore slapped his knees at Pete's comment, burping slightly. Pete raised an eyebrow, picking up another glass of swamp-water flavored beer.

"You will love the stories I share partner." Rasticore tapped some buttons on his robotic arm, showing holograms of a chase. "I was after this odd blue fella, ran super-fast. But one quick blast in the head, the critter went 'poof', like nothing."

Pete clapped his hands mockingly. "My, you are such a great hunter. I should follow in your footsteps mighty Rasticore." Despite joking, Rasticore gave a genuine smile. Blinking in surprise, Pete smirked back. "Seriously though, you are a good at your job."

"Thanks, you are very good as well. We should team up again sometime. I'm sure Toffee has plans for us soon." Rasticore commented, folding his arms. "I get the feeling something's happening soon."

Pete waved his hand. "Come on, we just did a job. I feel… Really damn relieved personally." An honest smile went across Pete's face. "Hope the Princess is okay now." Rasticore pat Pete's back, giving a worried expression. "You feel it too, don't you?"

"I think our next job will be to help the girl," Rasticore answered, slugging down his entire drink. Wiping his mouth, he rubbed his tired head. "Ugh…this stuff isn't strong enough." Pete elbowed Rasticore, making the two snicker.

"I would like a drink please," Marco asked softly, getting the attention of the monster bartender. Taking out some Earth money, the monster glared at it coldly. "Come on, this joint has to accept that. It's all I got." Rolling its eyes, the monster poured a glass of swamp water, slamming it on the countertop. He spat into the drink, making Marco glare coldly. "Thank you so much… Jerk." Marco started drinking the water, chapping his lips. "Wow, this stuff tastes like…"

"Coffee?" Pete answered, getting the attention of Marco. "Kid, take off that stupid mask. I know it's you, Marco." He sighed, pulling the mask off. Pete snickered, folding his arms proudly. "Didn't know you completed the trials."

"I didn't, just borrowing the king's pair for now," Marco answered, taking out the pair and showing it to Pete before putting it away. "I… I came here for help." Pete and Rasticore gave each other a nervous look.

Rasticore spoke up first, looking at Marco darkly. "It's about the princess, correct? Why else would you be here now?" Marco nodded to his answer, having a fire in his eyes. "Well, how can we help? Pete and I are on break for a day or so."

"Can you make me stronger?" Marco asked with conviction. Pete stood up, seeing himself in Marco's place for a moment. "Tom is coming back and I'm not sure I can protect Star. Please, I need help." Marco took out some money from his pocket. "It's not much, but sure you can use the money for something."

Rasticore was going to take the money but Pete simply grabbed off the table. Giving it to Marco, he gave a kind expression from his eye-less sockets. "Marco… When it comes to Star, we have your back no matter what." He gave a playful but dark glare toward Rasticore. "Right, partner?"

"Yes…" He stood up, holding out his hand. "You never saw my monster appearance human, so I would like to properly introduce myself. Name's Rasticore, brother of King Toffee and leader of the Monster Armies. I like to hunt in my spare time, so if you need a target down, better pay up." He gave a sly smile. "Considering the situation though, my services are free of charge until I get that demon's head on my wall."

Marco shook his hand proudly, feeling the confidence and bravado coming off his touch. "Thank you. Thank you both so much." Pete gave a somber look of understanding. The trio sat back down, wondering what to say next. Marco looked at his glass, seeing some vapors coming out of it. "How can I get stronger guys? Some training is needed for sure, but I can fight. Black belt in martial arts can use a bo-staff, and faced some battles of my own."

"Before anything." Pete slugged down his entire glass before slamming it down. "We gotta properly introduce you to the big man." Marco scratched his head before piecing things together. "That's right, our boss actually wants to speak to you. So you came at just the right time, Marco." Pete stretched his back, standing up. "It's on our tab, as usual, Joe." The monster behind the counter rubbed his head, before taking the three glasses and started washing them out.

Rasticore pulled Pete aside, giving him a baffled look. "The kid might get chewed a life by my brother! You really think it's a good idea to do this now?" Pete nodded, having a thin frown on his bony face.

"The kid's family. Respect that now before its official, got it?" Rasticore only sighed, nodding in agreement. "Good. Hey Marco! Are you just going to stand around like that? Could get someone to fight you if…" Marco rushed out of the bar, making Pete laugh loudly. "I like him." Rasticore chuckled and the duo left the bar together.


Star lounged on her bed, groaning in annoyance. "Why is my mind so confused?! I can fight Tom but get all worried… Now Marco is scared." Sitting upright, she sighed, looking up at her ceiling. "Maybe talking to the walls will give answers?" The ceiling remained silent. "Right, you don't talk back."

"But I can speak." She turned to her right, seeing Glossaryck floating in the air, riding the spell book like a magic carpet. "So, what's wrong my student? Feel some dark magic in the air."

"Well…" Star sat upright, looking at Glossaryck somberly. "I feel like… My body was split in half. One half was here, on Earth. But another was on this odd adventure, with a cool demon fella. Now both 'halves' are together again but the other 'me' gave a warning. Tom's coming back and… I'm scared." Glossaryck gave a weak smile, hovering off the book to sit on Star's head, patting it softly.

"Worried? You are one of the strongest magic users in butterfly history." He held his hand over Star's head, feeling his eyes grow wide. "And you have Eclipsa's magic in you too. Oh boy, this is something. Tell me, what happens when you see this?" He snapped his fingers, making an apparition of Tom show up. In an instant, Star shot a blast of golden light from her hands, making it vanish on the spot. "Impressive! You are the youngest butterfly to use magic without the wand so skillfully in generations." Star smiled, rubbing her neck sheepishly.

"Well, that's good I guess." She folded her arms, hugging herself feeling coldness overtake her. "But I'm worried. What if Tom captures me again? I… I don't want to hurt anyone." Glossaryck said nothing, hovering toward the magic mirror. "What are you doing?"

"Something I should have done a long time ago." He pressed the diamond button. "Call Mom." Star's eyes grew wide but before she could leave the bed, Moon appeared on the screen. "Hello, Queen. I'm calling so you can finally do your job for once."

Moon frowned harshly. "Pleasure seeing you to Glossaryck. I don't appreciate how you tried to kill me last time." Star's eyes continued being wide, slowly walking over to the mirror. Moon put on a smile, waving toward Star. "Hello sweetie. What's wrong?"

"Glossaryck. Why did you call her?" Star didn't turn around, nearly boring into her mother with dark blue eyes. "She did nothing for me. Getting me stuck with Tom in the first place, sending me to that hellhole. How can she help?!" Glossaryck sat on Star's shoulder, patting her back.

"Look, kid, you are powerful and everything. But, a family is important. I'm always going to have your back, as my job is to train you into the best person you can be." Star looked in his direction, giving a thankful smile. "Now, you need to let Moon help. Besides, it's time she does her job. Even that lizard did a better job raising you."

"Enough," Moon said through gritted teeth, ignoring Star's confused face. "Look, if you want to visit Mewni to train, I'm more than happy to help you Star." She gave a hopeful smile. "I want to connect with my daughter again." Star folded her arms, raising an eyebrow. "I'm serious honey. Please, I know that…"

"Admit you were wrong," Star said with no emotion. Moon and Glossaryck were silent, not moving an inch. "Well? Say it. If you do, I will visit Mewni today." Moon closed her eyes, feeling her nerves burn from anger. Star darkly chuckled. "Fine, I'm visiting. But I am not staying on Mewni. Is that clear? Earth is my home. You banished me anyway."

"Fine," Moon responded, giving a tired look. "See you soon Star." The call ended but Star felt her anger bubble up. Eyes were twitching, arms shaking, body glowing faint golds and purple. Glossaryck backed away, feeling the intensity of the magic.

"Can you train me for now?" Star asked in a low voice, once that mixed kindness and command. Glossaryck simply nodded, flipping to a page in the spell book. Star walked to her bed, taking out a pink book from behind a pillow. "Also, here. Put these in the book." Glossaryck took the small notebook, flipping through its pages. Star smiled back at him, magic still glowing around her. "That large brick is mine after all. Should use it willingly." He grinned, tossing the pink notebook into his home. It glowed faintly, growing slightly larger.

Flipping to a random page, Star held her wand tightly, grinning at her mentor. "Now let us begin your training Star."


Marco was lead to the Monster Kingdom's center; Castle Avious. The skies were a dark blue, with faint clouds covering sunlight coming down. Walking to the castle doors and soon, through the very castle itself, Marco felt scared. 'Why am I nervous? I mean… Pete and Rasticore are good people. They helped Star. That's enough for me.' Shaking his head, he put on a more confident face. "So… Rasticore. You said your bother was Toffee. Uh… Can you explain why he attacked Star and me before?"

They stopped moving, now inches away from their destination. "Well, Marco, why don't you ask him yourself?" Pete asked casually. He pushed Marco through the door, the boy stumbling over a red carpet. Groaning from pain, he shot up, harshly glaring at Pete. Before Pete could quip back, a loud cough got the group's attention.

"Hello, Marco. Now, I'm well aware of your visiting my kingdom." He turned around his office chair, having a blank expression. "Tell me, what do you make of it?" Marco rubbed his neck, feeling the intense yellow eyes of Toffee look through his soul.

"I think it's real… Nice?" Marco answered sheepishly. Toffee folded his hands together, encouraging Marco to continue. "The people were very helpful to me and I never felt scared… Until now honestly." Taking a deep breath, he entered a fighting position. "I…I need your help, to protect Star. But you attacked us before. Why?"

Toffee slowly got out of his chair. Putting arms behind his back, he slowly walked toward Marco. "Marco Diaz, I was simply testing you and the Princess." He stopped moving, now only a foot away from Marco's face. "I have a keen interest in Star Butterfly. I know you are in a relationship with her currently."

Marco felt his body grow cold, gulping in fear. "A-And I'm proud of that! I love Star and that's why I'm here. Pete helped Star sever that bond with Tom. You…sent him to do that. I'm confused Toffee. What do you want with us?" Toffee took a deep breath, kneeling down, meeting Marco at face level.

"Listen, my entire life, I wanted one thing." He placed his claw on Marco's shoulder. "Peace. That is it. My kingdom is built on that one sole goal. During my many, many years ruling… I grew attached to the Butterfly family. One member was Star." Toffee stood up, glaring at Marco with dangerous yellow eyes. "I know what her past lover did. Pete can say that much." Walking to his desk, he placed both claws over it. "Enough proof to end the Lucitors for generations. Give peace across the kingdoms. But no, that did not happen." He turned around, folding his arms. "Marco, will you hurt Star? A simple yes or no would suffice."

"Of course not!" Marco shouted, clenching his fists. "She is the reason I'm sane right now! I was alone for so long, losing someone very special to me. Star… She is my light. And I'm hers. We need each other to get better." He gave a kind grin toward Toffee, something the monster was surprised by. "Star is my…everything; I came here, a monster-infested kingdom, to get help in protecting her after all."

Toffee processed everything he just heard, closing his eyes and thinking deep in thought. Memories of his time with Moon and River flashed through his mind, joyful ones of their times growing together. Opening them, he held out his hand. "Welcome to the family, Marco."

Marco walked toward Toffee, shaking his hand firmly. "I don't understand that… But okay. Thank you." Toffee only nodded, folding his arms once more. "I told Pete this but…"

"That demon is returning." Marco had a shocked look, which Toffee held back a chuckle at. "Boy, I have eyes everywhere across Mewni. Know that." He walked toward his desk, pressing a button. A doorway opened up on the side of his wall, leading to stairs. "Pete, help Mewni's future king train. You know the demon's weaknesses better than anyone."

"Gotta ya boss." Pete placed a hand on Marco's shoulder, smirking proudly. "Nice first impression man." Marco and Pete were going to head downstairs before they heard another cough. Marco turned around, seeing Toffee smile at him.

"I like your attire, Marco. Very professional." Marco blinked before a stupid smile appeared on his face. Pete and Marco walked down the stairs, now leaving Rasticore alone with Toffee. "Brother, you know how to enter that void."

Rasticore's face contorted into a worried expression. "Brother, I'm not sure…" He held up his hand, making Rasticore confused. "What is my mission?" Toffee walked to Rasticore, placing a hand on his shoulder.

"Bring that lost brother to Earth and do what you can in warding off that demon's efforts." Toffee walked toward his desk, sitting down casually. "I have a feeling a special…person, is our target."

"Mmm… Okay." Rasticore's blade revved up and tapped some buttons on his robot arm. It glowed a faint purple, spreading to his chainsaw. Making a hole into space, it was a purple and black vortex. "Brother… You welcomed the boy into the family already?"

"Of course. He's the reason Star didn't kill everyone yet." Toffee answered blankly. "To be frank, my monster princess should have some happiness in her life." Rasticore nodded, jumping into the portal. Now completely alone, Toffee took in a deep breath. Pressing a button, a small speaker popped up. "Ludo? Can you come here? We are going to train some more."


Coming out of a blue vortex, Star leaped into the land of Mewni. The first time in weeks. Joining her was River, rubbing his beard in wonderment. "Pumpkin, you sure about this?" Star sighed, nodding her head. Glossaryck was riding on the spell book, eating some pudding.

"Oh come on River, the girl is ready to face Moon." River shoved heavy hands in his pocket. Walking ahead, Star and Glossaryck followed. Shocked eyes studied Star, who wasn't wearing her Princess attire. Instead, she donned an Earthly outfit; long-sleeve pink shirt, blue rainbow belt and black skirt with white stockings underneath it. Surrounding her neck was a simple butterfly necklace and blond hair was in a ponytail. "Though you think dressing like that is a good idea Princess?"

Star snickered at the comment, lightly poking Glossaryck's face. "Come on, they kicked me out, remember? I'm only here to get help and then we're gone." She folded her arms, glaring at the people watching her in confusion. "WHAT?! Never seen a teenager before?" Silence overtook the air, making Star groan in annoyance. "Of course they don't get it." Marching ahead, she caught up to River.

Walking inside the castle, they see Moon sitting down on her throne, having an unreadable face. River charged into her, giving a powerful hug. "Moonpie! I missed you." Moon closed her eyes, hugging River back lovingly. They stayed like this for a moment, but Star took it in.

"So you really do have a heart." Star spat, breaking the embrace. Moon coughed, having a smile on her face. "Just… Drop the act Mom. I know you really hate me. So… Help me train and I will be out of your hair." Moon just slowly walked up to Star. "Uh… I said I will leave when we're done here?" Star felt goosebumps, feeling Moon hug her affectionately. "M-Mom?"

Moon said nothing, tightly hugging her daughter. "Mommy loves you Star." Star just patted her back, not feeling completely convinced. The two let go, feeling awkward afterward. "So… How is life on Earth?" Star raised her finger but Moon clapped her hands. "I will get the dining room ready. Manfried? Get the chefs cooking a wonderful meal!." Her royal servant nodded, walking out of the room. Star bit her lip, rubbing her arm.

"Mom? So this is like, a family get together thing?" Moon nodded frantically, Star noticing a strained smile. "Just… I need to call Marco first." Her expression darkened. "Oh… You have a problem with him now?" Star clenched her right hand, the golden light slowly surrounding it.

"Save the fighting for training later Princess. And Moon, you approve of the boy. Right?" Glossaryck said joyfully, but Moon could tell the serious tone in his voice.

"Of course! The boy… Mango, is a lovely person. Hope to meet him soon." Moon said in fake happiness. She started walking, gesturing Star to follow. Star put on a poorly placed-on smile, marching ahead.

'Today was a mistake.' She hissed in her mind, marching off after Moon. Glossaryck rubbed his forehead, feeling annoyance take over. River looked at him, raising an eyebrow.

"Moon shouldn't set her off. You don't want that my liege." Glossaryck warned, floating after Star on the spell-book. River sighed in defeat, walking toward his family.


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"Ow!" Marco hissed, sliding back across the cold stone grounds of Toffee's private training room. Rubbing his cheek after taking a hit to the face, Pete simply smirked at Marco, folding his arms while spinning around a glowing blue bone. "Could be a bit easier on me…"

"Think Tom will give you a break?" Marco stood upright, having a blank expression. "Good, you get it. Now, I want to give you something." Pete snapped his fingers, making a small black box appear in his hands. Marco walked up to Pete, seeing him open the box. It was brass knuckles, each one being a different color. One black, one white. "Put them on, then I will explain how they work."

Marco took them and slid them over his fists. Stretching his hands, he felt them fitting quite nicely, smirking at how light they feel. "So are these what? Magically enhanced or something?" Pete stood still, bowing mockingly. "Uh… What are you doing?"

"Getting ready for a punch. Now, hit me right here." He pointed to his chest. "Make it a good one." Marco nodded in response and dashed toward Pete. Landing a heavy punch with his right hand, the white-knuckle glowed brightly. Pete jumped away right when the hit was going to have an impact, sending a small shockwave. The waves hit the stone walls, making them crackle somewhat. "Hehe… Still, works like a charm."

Marco looked at his hands, feeling shocked. "This is magic, isn't it…" Pete shook his head, making a bone playfully spin in the air. "So I can use this alongside my martial arts." He smirked, folding his arms together. "I like that, matches my fighting style. Thanks, man." Pete hand waved the comment and grabbed the bone he was spinning. It tossed it at Marco with lighting speed but a quick punch by Marco shattered it into pieces. "I… I never reacted that fast to anything."

"Try and fight me now Marco." Pete made his two eye sockets glow a vivid blue, sending many bones hovering in the air. "I mean, want to see you try my new toy out." Marco grinned, entering a fighting position. He charged toward Pete with a flying round-house kick, but he swiftly slides to the side, avoiding the attack outright.

Pete shot a storm of bones toward Marco, which he avoided through skillfully rolling away and punching some heading his way. Seeing an opening, Marco clenched his left fist and punched the ground, making a small shockwave. Pete staggered for a bit, but regained his footing, not before getting punched in the face. Stumbling toward a wall. Pete shook his head, grinning darkly. A large bone soon appeared out of his right hand, spinning like a top. Flying toward Marco, he yelped in fear, ducking to narrowly avoid the attack.

Before he could stand upright again, Pete frantically punched Marco. Holding up both hands like a boxer, he blocked the rapid punches. "Seems you're a tough guy, huh? Princess picks them good." Pete grinned, sweep kicking Marco the ground, holding out his right palm, shooting a swarm of bones at Marco. Holding out his two arms in a defensive pose, the influx of objects turned to dust. Marco looked at his arms, seeing a faint white shield covering him.

Jumping back, he charged into Pete, only to get kicked across the room. Marco crashed into a wall, weapons falling off a nearby rack. Rubbing his head, he noticed a bo-staff laying across from him. Grinning madly, he grabbed the weapon and spun it in the air. Pete made a long-bone appear in his hands, blocking the frantic but skillful strikes from Marco. "Focused… Like that. Tell me, how long have you trained?" The two slid back, slight scuff marks emitting from their feet.

"Many years." Marco lightly lifted his jacket, hiding away his black belt. "Never leave home without it." Pete chuckled as he split his bone-staff into two pieces. Chucking one at Marco, he swatted it away, sending the object toward a picture. "Uh…sorry about that."

"It's fine. I break things here all the time." He shot a small bone toward Marco, who dodged it with a skillful slide. "But focus on the fight, you know…" Pete vanished, making Marco's blood turn cold. "…I can be anywhere I want, pal." He kicked Marco hard in the back, sending him skidding across the ground. Jabbing the bo-staff and one fist into the ground, he regained footing. "Tom will pull tactics like that, trying to appear friendly. Demon charms and all that."

Marco cracked his neck, tossing the bo-staff away. Pounding his two fists, small sparks came out of them. "Oh, I will be ready." Leaping into the air, he punched the ground, sending a small shockwave toward Pete. He took the hit, getting slightly staggered. Dashing toward him, Marco threw skillful slices and jabs with his fists, Pete blocking all the strikes.

Fixing his hoodie, Pete brushed some dirt off him. "You're quite good at this Marco. But can you take…this?!" Pete's eyes glowed faintly blue, unleashing bones from the ground beneath him. Marco felt the intense power coming from Pete, tightly clenching his fists. Noticing a cross-bow handing on the wall, he raced toward it, avoiding pillars of sharpened bones coming from the very ground. Grabbing the bow, he shoots various arrows toward Pete, but he blocked them all. Gritting his teeth, Marco rushed over to the weapons pile again, taking a shield.

Running toward a wall, Marco spotted Pete shooting another swarm of bones his way. Kicking into the air, he ran across it before jumping off. Taking his shield, he hopped on top of it. One of the bone pillars shot him high into the air. "AAAAAAHHHHHHH!" Marco screamed at the top of his lungs, feeling his right fist overcharge with some form of power. Letting gravity take it's toll, Marco crashed right into Pete's skull, making a loud impact. Marco flew back, bumping into a nearby table. Pete laid down on the ground, softly laughing. Marco slowly walked toward him, feeling his entire body tire out. "I…I did good, right?"

Pete got up, spitting out some blood. "Dude, that was one of the best fights I've had in quite a long time. You need work but…" He threw his arm around Marco's shoulder. "I can make a warrior out of you." Marco smiled proudly but soon fell to his knees, groaning in pain. "I think we should give it a break, I sorta dunked you."

"Shut up." Marco teased, seeing Pete walk off, heading toward some fridge-like object. Taking out a green bottle, he chucked it toward Marco. Without much thinking, he chugged it down. "Wow…this stuff works great! What's in it?"

"Don't want to know." Pete slyly answered, drinking a green bottle of his own. "Feel strong enough to protect Star now?" Marco lightly laughed before sighing, rubbing his neck.

"I'm… Still not strong enough. I mean… I nearly passed out after fighting you." Pete only laughed at the comment, making Marco fold his arms in anger. "Seriously, I need to be…"

"Dude, you held your own in a fight against me. I'm not someone you want to pick a fight with." Pete said earnestly, wiping a lone tear from his face. "And besides, I got your back when that jerk returns. So, don't worry." Both smiled at each other but was interrupted by a ringing from Marco's pocket.

Opening the phone, he saw Star's face. "Hey Star. What's up?" Some silence was on the other end of the line, making Marco grow nervous. Pete walked next to Marco, rubbing his chin in wonder.

"I'm on Mewni…" Marco felt his heart beat rapidly, something Star seemingly noticed. "But I'm NOT staying here. Came here to get help to fight Tom." He sighed in relief, nervously laughing. "I told you before Diaz, not leaving you so easily."

"Thank goodness. I got your dad's scissors and can be to Mewni soon." Marco didn't see this but her face glows at the comment. "Do I need to dress fancy or anything?"

"You might want to. Mom is… not happy with you." Star said in annoyance. Pete snickered loud enough to get Star's attention. "Where are you anyway?"

"I got some help to fight Tom. And I'm stronger now." He clenched his right fists, the knuckle glowing faintly. "I will be there soon." Star smiled brightly on the other line, feeling some worry leave her.

"See you soon Marco." Star was going to press the button before she stopped. "I love you, Marco." Now ending the call, Star opened the closet door on Mewni, seeing her blue Princess Dress. "Ugh… Time to put on a show for 'mother dearest'. Though… Can't wait to see Marco's face when he visits."

Marco gently put his phone away, sliding into the dress pants pocket. "I love you too, Star." He felt a stupid smile grow across his face, looking toward Pete. "I'm going to Mewni now but how can I contact you?"

Pete held out his hand, with Marco placing his phone on it. Typing in some numbers, Pete tossed the phone at Marco. "Just ring me up. Rasticore and I will be there like that." Marco held out his fist, which Pete pounded. "Tell the princess I said hello."

Marco made a rift into space, thinking about Star. Looking back at Pete, he saluted before jumping into the portal. Pete let himself put on a smile, leaning on a nearby wall. Looking around the training room, he couldn't help but laugh. "Things get worse, things get better, I made a friend." Looking at his bony right hand, he clenched it. "Funny how life works sometimes."


Star sat in her bed on Mewni, taking in the room. Looking at her blue-gloved hands, alone sigh escaped her tired lips. "Why did I come here again? Mom just is making me her 'doll' again, looking pretty for the nobles. Would leave…" She looks at her door, hoping someone's on the other end. "…but now's a good time for Marco to visit Mewni. We really need the help." Clasping her hands together, she focuses on her inner magic, feeling a sense of warmth and peace spread across her body.

"Star, I know you are scared but people have your back."

"But Dante! I never fought like this before. Even during my escape from Saint O's…"

"Look, I'm here, okay? Marco's waiting for you back home."

"I know… I know… Thanks for the pep talk."

"But know this, you are Mewni's Princess. One of the most important beings out there. What you do in the future, can change everything. Keep that in mind."

"I will."

Star felt a warm smile creep across her face. "Wish you could be here." She patted her cheeks, standing up. "No, gotta be serious now. Making a good first impression back on Mewni, despite hating this place, can be useful." Walking toward her mirror, Star took in her appearance. No longer wearing her Earthly attire, she was instead wearing her bright blue princess dress and a royal crown. Folding her arms, she made a small frown, tapping her arms in annoyance.

A vortex of blue soon opened in her room, making a faint humming sound. "Star? Uh… Can I come in?" She looked toward the vortex, seeing Marco peak his head from the other side. "I thought you were getting dressed and stuff so tried to be respectful. Not fully sure how these things work." Star grabbed Marco, pulling him through the portal. Both fall on top of each other, snickering like idiots.

"You dork." She helped him up, but they just stared at each other. "Wow. You look… Like a Prince. Why?" Marco rubbed his neck, nervously laughing.

"I tried to head into the Monster Kingdom, getting help to fight you-know-who. Figured looking like a skeleton prince might have worked. But Pete saw right through my guise." He passed Star the skull mask, who took it gently. Gently brushing her thumb over its cheek marks, they made a faint hum. "You noticed it glowing too? Just don't get why…" He looked around the room, tapping his chin thoughtfully. "This looks very similar to your room on Earth."

Star put the mask down, smiling proudly. "I designed it myself! Spent a while picking the colors and everything buuuuuut, was worth it." She sat down on her bed, lightly patting it. Marco sat down next to her, showing her his hands. "What's on your hands?"

The knuckles glowed dimly as Marco smiled earnestly. "I got these from Pete. With this… I can fight Tom. You don't have to face him alone now." Marco placed a hand over hers, giving a loving smile. "I'm only human but I won't lose you. No matter what." Star lightly punched Marco's arm.

"Stop getting all sappy on me. But remember our talk from…" Marco took Star's hand and nodded frantically. Star gave a loving smile, kissing his cheek. "Good, don't need a knight in shining armor. Just my best friend." She traced her finger over Marco's chest, having a sly smile. "Though you do look quite nice as a prince."

"I try my best I suppose," Marco answered back with a grin. Star took his hand and the two left her room, ready to face Moon.


Feeling the void's harsh sunlight shine through his window, Dante slowly got out of his bed. Rubbing his tired eyes, he looked to his left, seeing an empty spot on his bed. Sighing sadly, he got up, throwing on his royal battle armor and black hooded cape. He noticed an odd smell coming from the kitchen as he left his room. After coming down the stairs, his eyes went wide once he saw who was in his kitchen.

Placing down a plate of blue toast, the guest waved hello. "Rasticore… Didn't know you are a resident of this pit as well." He walked over to a chair and sat down. Taking the piece of toast, he harshly bit it. "I'm in a really sour mood, so make it quick. Had a rough night man."

"Seems you felt something for the princess, huh?" Rasticore teased, making Dante choke on his toast. Some chunks landed on his plate as he tried calming down. "Wow, didn't expect that."

"She's just my friend." He folds his arms, tapping his foot in utter annoyance. "What do you know about Star? I helped her and…" Taking a deep breath, Dante calmed down. "Point being, is she okay now?"

"For now, yes," Rasticore said bluntly. Pressing some buttons on his arm, the holo-image of Tom walking around the void showed up. "Tom needs to be taken care of and I'm willing to offer my services for a very small fee."

"Name it," Dante hissed, clenching his demonic claws violently. "That bastard hurt Star and is a disgrace to my family name. Want him alive or dead? Both work fine for me." Rasticore laughed joyfully, shaking his head. "What's so funny?"

"Nothing, just…" He wipes away a lone tear. "I figured you would have some ounce of love for your brother." Dante scoffed at the comment, eying a cup of coffee on the table. Slugging the entire mint-flavored drink down, he slammed the cup down. Rasticore held out his hand, which Dante shook right away.

"When can we start?" Dante asked bluntly, but Rasticore shook his head. Dante stood up, noticing Rasticore turn away from him. "I can find him myself if…"

"Do you love the Princess?" Rasticore stated bluntly, never turning around. "It's meant that she stays with the Earth boy, who proved his worth thus far. Are you going to cause issues? Because I can have two demon heads on my wall tonight." Dante tightly clenched his clawed fists, feeling his teeth grit violently.

"Listen here." Dante folded his arms, having a playful grin. "Star's a strong person, and I want to help her out, but these blockheads need to get their acts together. They're making me necessary." Rasticore turned around, seeing fire seep from Dante's right palm. "But you will not end me. I have my goals and future to think about, got it, pal?"

"Good, just wanted equal understanding. Welcome to the team." Rasticore walked out the door, closing it gently. Dante slowly made his way over to the couch, covering his two working eyes in shame.

"No, you are not like him." Letting go of his face, Dante looked at the light coming down from the sky. For a brief moment, a familiar smile shined down on him, before melting into the yellow light. "I got your back Star, no matter what." A confident smile grew across his face, sitting upright on the couch.


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In Butterfly Castle, Star and Marco were slowly walking down a long hallway. The only sounds were the gusts of wind and clanking from Star heels, both teens in complete silence. Marco looked around in awe, feeling the oppressive and proud atmosphere crash down on him. Star though felt nervous. Her blue-gloved arms were shaking and nerves jumpy. Never letting go of Marco's hand, he could feel the tension eating up Star's body.

"We don't have to see them you know." They stopped walking, stopping near some paintings. "You got Pony Head's scissors and I got River's. We can leave at any time Star." She let go of Marco's hand, hugging herself like a scared child. "Bad memories… I'm sorry. I… I don't know how I can…"

"Marco, stop." She placed a hand on his shoulder, looking away from him. "You did nothing wrong, okay? Just… I haven't been here in a while." Star looked up, seeing a large painting. It was of herself, Moon and River posing for the royal painter. "I look so lifeless, huh?"

Marco studied the picture, rubbing his chin. "Well, your expression screams 'Get me the hell out of here' but everything else looks really good. The colors used for painting this are really vivid and the thrones behind you guys show great power." Star smirked, elbowing Marco. "Hey, just saying the truth here."

"Would you change your mind if I told you something?" Marco raised an eyebrow, with Star leaning close to his ear. "Mom used a spell to keep me in place." His eyes went wide before an annoyed sigh escaped his mouth. "Now does it look good to ya still?"

"Yeah…but man, that's just wrong." Marco and Star shared a laugh before continuing their walk. "But I'm sorry for being a bit overprotective. We talked about this before but I completely get it." He shoved his hands away, looking down the long corridor. "People kept saying 'I'm sorry for your loss.' and 'It will be okay one day Marco' when Jessica died. It got even worse when Jackie kicked me to the curb." Taking a deep breath, he gave a guilty look toward Star. "You are so much stronger than people give you credit for. If you want, you could rip this castle in half."

Star slapped her knees, trying to wipe away some tears. "I'm not that strong yet… I think so at least." She shrugged her shoulders, letting her arms hang down. "I know you get where I'm coming from. Part of why I was annoyed earlier with you." She kissed his cheek, both exchanging smiles. "It's cool, trust me."

They continued their walk in silence, finally heading to their destination; a large dining room. A massive chandelier was hanging down, various stars and moons surrounding it. Royal blues of many shades coated the walls and dining table, silver utensils shining off bright reflections. Ringing of a small bell got Star and Marco's attention, coming from Moon Butterfly herself. "Hello, you two! Come, join us please."

"Thanks…Mom." Star said in a regal tone, lacking any emotion. She noticed others sitting at the table, being from various kingdoms surrounding the Mewni Kingdom. To her shock, even the Commission of High Magic was present, sitting right at the table's end. "What is going on? I thought this was just so we can catch up mother?"

Moon waved her hand, having a wide grin. "Just wanted to show the various kingdoms everything is under control, right dear?" Star felt her skin crawl, feeling the darkness in Moon's voice. "Now, can you introduce yourself to everyone Mango?"

"It's Marco. Marco Diaz, your highness." Marco said with as much respect he could muster. Standing up, he coughed, getting everyone's attention. "Hello, my name is Marco Diaz, but you know that already…" He fixes his collar, feeling the air seemingly get taken out of his lungs suddenly. "Now, I'm currently in a relationship with my best friend, Princess Star Butterfly. We are going to do great things for the kingdom. Thank you for your time." He bowed and sat down at fast speeds. Star noticed his skin getting pale, leaning over to her ear. "We should have left before…"

"Gee, good idea. But we can't now. Just play along." Star had a small grin form on her face for a brief second. 'Time that hellhole school was put to good use.' Star stood up, gently lifting her dress hemming before bowing. "Now, I'm honored to see you all once more. Generals of the Waterfoak Kingdom. Ambasitors of the Cloud Kingdom. Queen Lucitor of…" Star's eyes grew wide, seeing the Underworld Queen sitting near the table. Her mind was racing but the soft touch of Marco's hand pushed her onward. "…the Underworld Kingdom."

"Funny you say that princess, considering you killed my son willingly and left the altar before…" Queen Lucitor was going to finish her ramble before a loud cough was heard. River stood up, glaring evilly at the Underworld Queen. "…It does not matter, we could possibly arrange something once my son is found. Don't want war, do we, Queen Moon?"

Moon only nodded in response, looking away from Star's burning expression. "Now, may we enjoy a fine meal." Everyone continued eating, but Star never touched her plate once. Neither did Marco, just holding each other's hand under the table, trying to keep a happy expression. River noticed this, looking around the table in bafflement. Moon just continued eating, as if the world wasn't shattering around her. After a tense fifteen minutes of silence, Moon clapped her hands, getting everyone's attention. "Everyone, am proud to announce that my daughter will be returning to Mewni to resume her royal duties as…"

Marco shot out of his seat, glaring at Moon. He was going to open his mouth but looked at Star, silently asking something. Star shook her head, making Marco sit back down. Star coughed, folding her hands gently. "Mother, if I recall correctly, you banished me to the Earth Dimension, remember? After I was careless with my magic, you felt it was required that my training continued in a 'safer' location. One where I wouldn't be harmful to anyone." She looked right at Queen Lucitor, continuing to have her blank expression. "Now, Queen Lucitor. I'm well aware of how the marriage laws work in the Underworld Kingdom. The husband gives their mate a special headband. Not unlike my crown right now." Star took her crown as an example before putting it on. "It has very interesting effects, ones that I'm sure you wouldn't want to be shared among everyone right now, correct?"

Queen Lucitor felt her body sweat bullets, seeing the hidden grin on Star's face. She only glared in response, folding her arms. "Yes, that is private information that only us demons should know. You can continue princess."

"Thank you for your kindness. To continue my point, I will continue my training on Earth, as I'm learning new cultures, gaining valued knowledge from Earth's education system and connecting with my future husband. The one that I choose willingly, of my own volition." Marco had a blank expression, but inside he was frozen in shock. Star gave a quick glance at him, pushing Marco to nod and smile in response. "So, after this lovely meal, I will be returning to Earth with my Prince. I'm sure you would be very understanding of this mother. Father, you come from Earth too, if I'm not mistaken."

"Of course! I know that dimension like the back of my hand pumpkin." He laughed boastfully, looking across the table's shocked expressions. "Now, my daughter picked a wonderful prince, I must say. Wouldn't you agree, Moonpie?" Moon noticed River's kind blue eyes but felt a message being told to her.

She closed her eyes, pounding the table. "ENOUGH! Star 'Stella' Butterfly, you will respect my orders!" Star only blinked, tilting her head in response.

"Mother? Why are you acting so foolish? We have guests in our presence." She covered her mouth, making a mock laugh. "To think, I was the one that needs to be reformed into a model princess." Hekapoo and Rhombulus laughed loudly in the back, much to the anger seeping from Moon's pores. "Enough of the jolly laughter my friends and allies. Would you all care to partake in a discussion about the Earth dimension? Or would you rather hear the another…more interesting tale?"

"What tale do you speak of Princess?" The Waterfoak general asked, folding his scaly arms together. The Pigeon Kingdom ambassador echoed his thoughts, cooing loudly. River saw the dangerous look in Star's eyes, as did Glossaryck.

"Princess, you shouldn't talk about that here," Glossaryck said carefully, sitting on Star's head casually, summoning a pudding cup to eat. "Or you could. Interested in seeing how you tell the story actually. The details are kind of fuzzy."

"What story are you talking about?" Marco asked worriedly. Star gave him a kind smile, kissing his cheek. His eyes grew wide, realizing what Star was going to share. "That sounds… Very interesting. Though people here might get sick."

"Oh nonsense Marco dearest. It's a jolly good story. One that I'm sure mother and Queen Lucitor will greatly enjoy." Moon was about to get up, a small smile graced Star's face, making Moon grit her teeth. "You shouldn't miss this mother, after all. You know the story quite well. Just… Refuse to share it with our allies." Star turned around, taking up her glass. "Before I met my lovely boyfriend Marco, I encountered another charming fellow. He was quite the interesting one, always using fire magic and having quite the temper." Star looked at the red liquid in the drink, seeing a reflection of Tom laughing at her. "But sometimes, snakes are always very interesting creatures. Shedding their skin, exposing their honest selves."

Queen Lucitor stood up, laughing nervously. "Princess, you don't need to continue. The Underworld kingdom will…"

"I'm the guest of honor, Queen Lucitor." Star said coldly, eyes glowing a dark shade of purple. "Now, let me finish my story, please." She slowly sat back down, feeling her body shake rapidly. "Thank you, though I apologize for my outburst." Star laughed girlishly. "It's not proper to act like that, very un-ladylike."

Moon closed her eyes, feeling them turn a vivid blue. Leaping out of the table, she grabbed Star by her hair, throwing her on the ground. "You nasty little brat! Why are you acting like this?! You should have died in that school." Star only had a false look of shock, her blue eyes looking toward the table. Everyone looked horrified at the display, causing Moon to slowly letting go of Star's hair. Marco raced over, helping Star up; his eyes fully devoted to her disheveled state.

"You okay? I can…" Star waved her hand, taking out her scissors. "I can carry you home." Star smiled, letting Marco pick her up. As she opened the portal to Earth, the duo left. Leaving the ballroom in intense, horrifying silence.

"We need to talk. Now." Glossaryck said coldly. "Hekapoo, get our guests out of here." She nodded, making portals for everyone. One by one, the room only had Moon, River, and Glossyrick remaining. "Why did you do that?"

Moon grit her teeth, pointing toward were Star left. "That nasty daughter… You heard her! She was…"

"What? Tell the truth?" Glossaryck hissed, folding his arms. "In fact, going to that school really did something. She knows how to speak well, has some of the most powerful magic in the multiverse, and has my support 100%." He lightly chuckled, rubbing his beard. "Boy, she takes after him though. Wouldn't you agree River?"

River only bored into his wife's face, clenching his fists tightly. "After tonight, I will be staying on Earth for an indefinite amount of time Moon." He took off his crown, walking to the throne room. Gently placing it down, he let out a single tear. "Mewni, hope you can respect my choices from this day onward." Standing back up, he looked at Hekapoo, who was back in the room. "My dear friend, can you make a portal to Earth, please? That boy borrowed my scissors."

"What did I say about that?" Hekapoo said half-seriously. "Fine, here you go." She cut a rift into space, stopping River before fully going through. "The kid has to…" River only nodded, heading into the portal. Once it closed, Hekapoo looked at Moon. They just stared at each other, the silence saying everything unsaid. Clanking from her heels echoed through the halls, leaving Moon all alone.

"Star will make a wonderful Queen one day." Glossaryck hovers away slowly, refusing to look at Moon any longer. "If she wants that role to begin with." Moon slowly walked back to the throne room, taking in the silence around her.

"What have I done…" She covered her face, sobbing loudly. The Queen of Nothing, sitting in her empty throne.


Review Round-Up:

SirSaysNiceALot - Thank you, good sir, for the stamp of approval! Happy you are enjoying the story thus far :).

Momijifan Low-Ki - Opening kinda confusing for the last chapter but I felt Eclipsa sorta helped people get into 'what' was happening. And yes, Dante in 'CTS' is 'inspired' somewhat like the iconic devil hunter from Capcom's fun series :). Keep an eye out for Dante, he will have a key role in the story as it continues.

HorizonIV - The pit of darkness has light at the very top. Keep climbing my fellow reader... though the light's really bright when you do finally see it. To be serious, thank you for reading and I'm happy you are enjoying the story!

Nina - Sorry for the confusion at first but glad you enjoyed it!

Bedrock Armor - Very interesting indeed ;).

RobLebron - Your character's backstory, future role and more have been decided after a lengthy talk with a friend. I think you are going to be very, very happy with your character's role as the story continues. I've taken a liking to Leb :).

Oracle6044 - Uh... Star's not getting a break this chapter sadly :P.

Kuriyan BBQ - I cannot thank you enough for all the help you've given me thus far. Glad you enjoyed the last chapter and I think many will enjoy this chapter. For those wondering, the scenes with Dante and Pete in this chapter were originally shorter and different but after some discussion with Kuriyan, I made them even better.