Naruto vs Sasuke: The Aftermath

by Kingkakashi

At the Valley of the End, Sasuke nearly kills Naruto and it affects everyone in many ways. See a vastly different direction after this battle to the Naruto story, than what the Canon did. There will be action, surprises, & romance NarxHin KakxKur JirxTsu & many more. Warning be prepared for the most Evil Sadistic Sasuke ever, and Sakura takes a beating in the early chapters. Enjoy!

61. Homecoming Part 2

Summary: Naruto, Kakashi, and Jiraiya have returned to the Leaf village after nearly four years away training. Many reunions and surprises awaited them upon their return. How will they react to the various changes to their home and the people they care about? As the Konoha they left years ago is no longer the same home they have returned to.

Author Note 1: I know I usually do my Author Notes at the end of my chapters and not to worry my usual A/N is still there. However, I wanted everyone to see this note as it something of importance I wanted to address. This chapter does contain a lengthy romantic lemon and I've tagged when the lemon is going to start and end in this chapter. However, about a third of the way through the romantic lemon is a short humorous non-lemon scene that I believe all readers would enjoy reading. I've placed page breaks where that particular scene begins and ends for easy access for anyone who wishes to find and see it without having to go through the lemon if they don't want to.

Naruto vs. Sasuke: The Aftermath

Chapter 61: "Homecoming Pt.2"

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"A-a son,….I have a son!"

Kakashi stammered in shock and disbelief, as he watched intently the miniaturized version of himself run around playing with the other children. He was only broken out of his stupor when he heard Kurenai say.

"No, we have a son."

"You, you mean it was from that, that night?" Kakashi openly questioned still staring at Minato.

"Yes, it was from that night and speaking of that night." Kurenai answered in a sweet tone of voice, before she whirled Kakashi around and slugged him in the jaw, knocking the silver-haired Jounin backwards, until he slammed into a nearby tree and slid down it onto the ground.

Wincing as he rubbed his jaw, his lone eye spied Kurenai marching up towards him and Kakashi sputtered in apologetic defense.

"Kur-Kurenai, I didn't mean to...I'm, I'm sorry...I, I didn't know!"

However, before Kakashi could utter anymore repentant words, he suddenly found Kurenai sitting in his lap and lifting his mask, before her lips crashed down upon his in a sizzling passionate kiss. After a minute, the two Jounin broke apart panting and Kakashi cocked his eyebrow in confusion and asked.

"I, I don't understand, I thought you were mad at me about getting you pregnant?"

"Idiot, why would I be mad at you about Minato-kun? He's been the most joyous blessing I've ever had in my life. I hit you because you didn't even give me a chance to say goodbye to you when you left that night." Kurenai stated with a smile, as she placed her palm on Kakashi's jaw and began to channel some chakra into her hand to alleviate any pain he might be feeling from her punch.

Kakashi's head dropped in a little bit in shame upon hearing Kurenai and he said with regret.

"I'm sorry for doing that to you; I never meant to hurt you. I know I was a coward in leaving that letter to you, but honestly I knew if I had to face you to say goodbye, I wouldn't have been able to do so."

"I forgive you Kakashi-kun, because even though you didn't let me say goodbye, you left me with the most wonderful and precious gift I could ever hope for in Minato-kun."

"You named him after my Sensei."

"I know how important and how much you revered the Yondaime and it just seemed appropriate somehow. Do you not like the name?"

"I think the name is perfect Kurenai-chan."

"I'm glad you like it."

"I do, but I guess you and I have some things to talk about."

"Hai, we do."

"Well, let me start off by saying I…" Kakashi started to say, before Kurenai quickly interrupted him.

"No, let me speak first. I know Minato-kun has come as a shock to you, but I don't want you to feel responsible about him. It was my choice to have him and I regret nothing about that decision. That being said, I would like you to be a part of his life. However, you need not feel obligated to do so, if you don't want to. As for the two of us, I want you to know that I still love you, but if you no longer feel that way about me I understand. I mean it's not like I expected you to return and marry me after just one night together. You've been gone for nearly four years and you might have found someone else during that time to love and….."

"Would you be quiet!" Kakashi snapped in slight irritation, interrupting Kurenai, as she had done to him.

"Wh-what did you say?" Kurenai stammered in shock.

"I said would you be quiet and quit talking such foolishness."

Kurenai's mouth hung open in shock and she felt her ire rise at Kakashi for interrupting her in a dismissive tone of voice and was about to speak once more when Kakashi put his finger on her lips and announced.

"Shush, I've listened to you, now you're going listen to me!"

Kakashi then exhaled a sigh, as he removed his finger and spoke.

"First off, yes learning of Minato was a shock to me, but it wasn't an unpleasant one. And you're wrong about me not feeling any responsibility for him, as it took the two of us to bring him into this world, not just you. I'm glad you want me to be a part of his life, because I want that more than anything and it's not because of some obligation as you put it. Now as for the two of us, I still love you as well my crimson-eyed goddess. I haven't stopped loving you since the day I left and there hasn't been a single day since I've been gone that I haven't thought about you. So this talk that I might have found someone else during that time to love is...…ridiculous to say the least. Now, whether or not you expected me to marry you upon my return is irrelevant, because I still intend to ask you marry me."

Kakashi then pulled out of the pocket of his dark-grey cloak a small velvet covered box and opened it to reveal a stunning engagement ring featuring a 0.80 Carats of round brilliant diamonds surrounding and enhancing a single 24 carat round diamond center. Kurenai nearly fainted when she saw the radiant piece of jewelry and her eyes began to well with tears of joy when she heard Kakashi ask, as he placed the ring upon her finger.

"Will you grant me the greatest honor I could ever hope to achieve and marry me Kurenai-chan?"

Tears began to roll down her cheek, as Kurenai gazed at the ring and then at Kakashi with love in her eyes and quickly shook her head and said in a choked voice.

"Yes, yes, I will marry you Kakashi-kun."

The two Jounin then leaned in towards one another and shared a loving and tender kiss, before a young voice asked.

"Mommy, why are you kissing that strange man and why are you crying?"

Kurenai and Kakashi broke their kiss and Kakashi pulled his mask back down, they looked over and see Minato standing a few feet away with a bewildered gazed plastered on his face. As Kurenai pulled back, it allowed the little boy to get a better look at the man his mother was with, as she began to say.

"I'm crying because I'm happy Minato-kun and this isn't some strange man he is you're fa…."

"Otousan!" Minato cried out with wide eyes, before racing forward and jumping up into Kakashi's arms embracing the Jounin in a tight hug. Kakashi returned the warm embrace, as his son carried on with happiness and joy.

"It came true, it really came true!"

"What are you talking about?" Kurenai questioned her child in curiosity.

"My birthday wish, it came true! I wished for father to return and he did!"

Kakashi looked over to Kurenai, while still holding Minato and silently mouthed asking when his birthday was? Kurenai mouthed back that it was a few weeks ago and Kakashi nodded before pulled Minato away from him and said.

"I'm sorry I missed your birthday son."

"It's ok, I'm happy that you're here now. Is Unca Nawuto here too?"

"Unca Nawuto?" Kakashi repeated, looking at Kurenai with a quizzical expression.

"Yeah Unca Nawuto, Awnty Hinata has told me all about him!" Minato exclaimed with excitement.

"Oh I see, well yes Uncle Naruto came back with me, but he ran into your Aunt Hinata and they're spending some time together right now."

"Oh, I wanted to play with him." Minato replied in disappointment.

"Well don't worry, you'll get to play with him soon enough." Kakashi stated, while rising to his feet and setting Minato down onto the ground.

Minato grabbed Kakashi's hand and attempted to pull him while saying.

"C'mon, I want you to meet all of my friends Otousan!"

"Hold on there Minato, your father can meet your friends in a moment, I want to talk to you first. What is this I hear about you getting into trouble with another classmate during recess today?" Kurenai sternly asked.

"Oh, you heard about that." Minato sheepishly stated.

"Yes I did."

"Shoda called me an Uchiha again."

"Minato, we've discussed this before, he's says those things because he's probably lonely and wants a friend. Have you tried to give him a gift like I suggested?"

"I did give him a gift."

"What did you give him?"

"A punch in the nose."

"I meant for you to turn the other cheek and be charitable towards him."

"I didn't charge him anything for it."

"I meant give him something for the joy of giving."

"I enjoyed it!"

At this point, Kakashi couldn't help but laugh out loud after hearing this exchange between Kurenai and Minato earning the silver-haired Jounin a frustrated glare from his fiancé. Kakashi merely shrugged his shoulders to her and pointed out.

"Well, you weren't specific about what type of gift to give him."

"I'm sorry mommy, but I don't like it when Shoda calls me an Uchiha just because my eyes are red."

Kakashi knelt down and looked his son in the face and said.

"Red eyes don't make you an Uchiha; here let me show you something."

Kakashi then lifted his hitai-ate to reveal his crimson-colored Sharingan eye, much to the surprise of Minato who exclaimed with glee.

"You have a red eye too, just like me and mommy."

"That's right, and your mommy isn't an Uchiha and neither am I and that means you aren't one either."

Kurenai's heartstrings tugged a bit as she watched the scene before her and she decided not to reprimand or punish Minato for his…..indiscretion and said.

"Alright Minato-kun, I'm not going to punish you for punching Shoda..…this time, but no more hitting your classmates ok."

"Ok mommy."

"Let's go meet your friends now." Kakashi suggested, as he let his excited son pull him towards the Academy playground.

"Hey everyone, my Otousan has come home!"

All the kids stopped playing and looked at Kakashi with awe, as his legendary shinobi status in the Leaf village was well-known even to them. After a minute, one young boy with a bandage on his nose spoke up and derisively said with skepticism.

"How do we know that's the real Hatake Kakashi?"

Minato scowled at the young boy and Kakashi thought to himself.

'That must be Shoda, alright Kakashi, time to step up and score some points with your son and his classmates.'

"What summoning contract does Hatake Kakashi hold?" The silver-haired Jounin asked the kids.

"He holds the canine contract, everyone knows that!" Shoda smugly answered.

Suddenly, Kakashi then bit his thumb to draw some blood onto his hand before slamming his palm onto the ground and shouted.

"Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" (Summoning Technique)

As the smoke from Kakashi's summoning disappeared, standing before the one-eyed Jounin for everyone to see was a pack of eight Ninken (Ninja Hounds) of various size and breeds. However, the leader of this pack was a small light brown pug of a dog with droopy eyes and a sharp witted tongue, who sat atop a very large, intimidating black bulldog and the pug spoke surprising all of the children.

"What's up Kakashi?"

"Hello Pakkun, there's a couple of people I want you to meet and you're always complaining to me that the pack never gets to play with anyone. Well here's a schoolyard full of children who would love to play with them."

The happy yips and barks of the rest of the dog's signified their joy and within moments all of the children were playing various games with them, as Pakkun trotted over to Kakashi, Kurenai, and Minato. The miniaturized version of Kakashi peaked the little canine's interest, as he sniffed Minato for a moment before looking up at Kakashi and said.

"You had yourself a pup."

"Ummm sort of, this is my son Minato and his mother and my mate Kurenai."

Pakkun then walked around Kurenai sniffing as he went, before he stopped in front of her and Kakashi and stated in appreciation.

"A fine looking bitch you chose for a mate Kakashi, she's got good breeding hips and should give you lots of pups in the future."

Kurenai's eyebrow began to twitch and she began to angrily grind her teeth at being addressed in such a manner by the little dog. However, before she could speak or act upon what she perceived as an insult, Kakashi arms encircled her waist from behind and leaning in whispered in her ear.

"Don't be upset, it doesn't have the same meaning in the canine world. It may not seem like it, but Pakkun was actually paying a compliment to you."

Kurenai took a moment to calm down, before looking down at the small brown pug and said with a smile.

"Thank you Pakkun."

Minato knelt down and picked up the little dog and began petting him, as he asked in wonderment.

"How come you can talk?"

"I can talk because I am a superior breed of canine and the leader of your fathers Ninken."

"Oh, what a cute little doggy!" A girl exclaimed in delight, as she and a few other girls came over to see Minato and Pakkun.

"I am not cute. I am a vicious terrifying hound that could kill anyone here and furthermore….ohhhhhh, that feels good…..arooooooo, right there…..yeah!" Pakkun began to say with irritation, before his mood changed to pleasure, as the young girls began petting and scratching behind his ears.

"I like your little doggy Minato-kun." One girl shyly said to Minato in a sweet tone of voice, as she looked lovingly at the young boy.

"Be careful Fujiko, you don't want them to hear you."

"It's alright Keiko; they've already left, now come play with us Minato-kun."

As Kakashi and Kurenai watched their son and Pakkun start to play with the other children, the one-eyed Jounin asked in curiosity.

"Who did those girls mean when they mentioned them?"

"Oh, they were probably referring to Anko's twins."

"Anko has kids!" Kakashi exclaimed in stunned surprise.

"Yes she does, two beautiful little girls named Aniko and Anika."

"Wow, is the father still alive?"

"Of course he is still alive, why would you ask that?"

"Well, I always figured that when Anko mated, she would be like a female Praying Mantis and eat her lover afterwards." Kakashi quipped in amusement.

Kurenai giggled a bit, before playfully slapping Kakashi's shoulder about his joke regarding her best friend and replied.

"That's not nice and besides, according to Anko he's too good in bed and too good a father and husband to the kids and her to get rid of."

"Then, I look forward to meeting either the bravest man in the world or the most mentally deranged one to have tamed Anko."

"There's no taming Anko, you know that, but he has…..subdued her quite a bit." Kurenai answered in amusement.

"But why were those girls worried about Anko's daughters?"

"Well, Aniko and Anika have…chosen Minato-kun for themselves.

"What do you mean they've chosen him?"

"You see your son has developed a bit of a fan girl following with his female classmates and Anko's girl's have decided that Minato-kun is theirs and theirs alone. So, they tend to get a bit aggressive with the other girls when they see them hanging around with him and scare the competition away." Kurenai explained.

"I can empathize with him." Kakashi openly commented, as he remembered his own fan girl following during his time at the academy, before he added with pride and mirth.

"I guess he's a chip off the old block, I'm pleased he's so popular."

"Minato-kun isn't so pleased about it, but at least when Aniko and Anika are around he doesn't have put up with a large group of girls like you see vying for his affections, just those two."

Kakashi looked over to see that indeed Kurenai was right, as a large contingent of girls were following Minato and Pakkun around. Kakashi could only shake his head in sympathy for his son, as he wrapped an arm around Kurenai who laid her head on his shoulder and they watched their child run around and play with his classmates. After awhile, as parents came to pick up their children there were only a few kids left, when someone appeared surprising Kakashi when he heard a familiar voice call out.

"So I guess the rumors are true, the one-eyed pervert has returned."

Kakashi heaved a tiresome sigh, before turning around and greeted the new arrival in exasperation.

"Hello Anko, what brings you here to ruin….err…..I mean brighten our day?"

"Ha, ha, very funny Kakashi. I stopped by the Hokage's office earlier and she told me you were back in town, so I figured you and Kurenai would be here. And you should be thanking me instead of insulting me, as I'm going to be doing you two the favor of picking up my nephew for a sleepover with his favorite aunt and uncle, so the two of you can have some alone time together."

"Anko you don't have to do that."

"Please Kurenai, you've been wound up tighter than a drum the past few years that if you don't get your freak on soon, I'm worried you're going to explode." Anko replied in sarcastic amusement.

Kurenai blushed at her best friend's remark and was about to say something when a voice called out happily.

"Awnty Anko!"

"Hey kiddo!" Anko answered, as Minato ran up and jumped up into the Snake Mistress arms.

"Do you see, my birthday wish came true, otousan came home!" Minato exclaimed, in joyful excitement.

"I see that, you seem awfully happy to see him."

"I am and Unca Nawuto is back too. Now Mommy and Awnty Hinata don't have to cry anymore."

The mood of the adults dropped a bit after hearing Minato's comment, before Anko piped up and said.

"Minato-kun, you know your Mommy and Hinata were only sad because they missed them so much."

"I know, that's why I'm glad they're back."

"Speaking of the little gaki, where is he Kakashi." Anko questioned in curiosity.

"He ran into Hinata upon our return and they disappeared, so I'm not sure where they are at?"

Anko gave a puzzled look at both Kurenai and Kakashi, before she erupted in boisterous laughter.

"Ha, ha, ha, it seems the students are making better use of their alone time together than their teachers."

Both Kurenai and Kakashi blushed a bit at Anko's implied statement, before they then heard her say.

"Well not to worry Anko is here to save the day for the both of you. Come on kiddo, you're going to have a sleepover with your favorite aunt and uncle tonight."

"Awww Awnty Anko, I want to spend some more time with Mommy and Otousan."

"I know you do, but your mom and dad really need some alone time together just like your Aunt Hinata and Uncle Naruto. You'll get to spend a lot of time with them from now on starting tomorrow. Now, can you be a big tough ninja and do that for them?"

"I guess so."

"Good boy, I knew you were a big tough shinobi." Anko said with a smile to the young boy in her arms, before she turned her attention back to his parents and declared.

"Unlike your students, try not to waste this time I'm giving to the two of you."

Anko then let Minato hug both of his parent's goodbyes, before they headed off. As Kakashi and Kurenai watched the two of them leave, a slightly concerned visage spread across the Jounin kunoichi's face and she asked with trepidation.

"You don't think Naruto was expecting to do…you know….that right away with Hinata upon his return do you? Because I can assure you that Hinata is not that type of girl, so he better not try to force her to!"

"I'm shocked you would think such a thing about. I can assure you that Naruto has become a perfect gentleman and would never force Hinata to do such a thing."

The silver-haired Jounin then flashed his infamous eye smile at Kurenai and playfully said.

"I however am not a perfect gentleman and I think we should take Anko's advice, so your place or mine?"

Kurenai merely smirked at the question, before she lightly smacked the back of his head and sternly answered.

"Neither, at least not yet anyway, you're going to feed me first because I'm hungry. Besides, we've waited nearly four years, a few more hours isn't going to matter."

"Says you!" Kakashi muttered in disappointment much to Kurenai's amusement, as she looped her arm through his and suggested they stop by the apartment she shared with Hinata and see if the Hyuga girl and Naruto were there and if they would like to join them for dinner.

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As soon as the door to Hinata and Kurenai's apartment shut behind them, Naruto and Hinata were immediately locked into a heated embrace and kissing each other with wanton abandon. After a couple of minutes, Naruto finally tore himself away from Hinata's luscious lips and panting stammered in a lust-filled voice.

"B-Bedroom?"

"D-down the hall on the last door on the left." Hinata answered in a breathy voice.

Naruto quickly swept Hinata up in his arms and carried her bridal style down the hall, while she buried her head in the crook of his neck and nibbled on it. Kicking the door open the young couple fell onto Hinata's bed and resumed kissing each other with unfettered passion once again. Minutes passed and neither Naruto nor Hinata seemed eager to stop their endeavor, as rare and unexplored feelings of intense sexual excitement were boiling over inside of them and at that moment each of them desperately craved the new sensations they were experiencing.

Soon, without even realizing it, their hands were traveling freely across each other's bodies exploring every taut muscle and delicate curve, as they both reveled in the feeling of the others touch. Hinata moaned lustfully into Naruto's mouth, as she felt him squeeze her ass, while her own hand swept itself up inside his shirt to caress the rough skin of his muscular chest. Neither of them wanted to let go of the other, as they wanted to savor fully this passionate moment. However, with extreme reluctance Hinata finally broke away and stood up, much to Naruto's bewilderment, before she said.

"Wait here Naru-kun, while I slip into something more comfortable."

Naruto was about to protest, but was silenced when Hinata leaned down and placed one more heated kiss on his lips, before she sashayed away towards the bathroom, her hips swaying seductively causing Naruto to inwardly groan at the sight. Naruto wasted little time divesting himself of his dark-grey cloak and shoes, as he sat on the edge of the bed and waited patiently for Hinata to return. Minutes later, he was rewarded for his patience, as Hinata emerged from the bathroom wrapped from head to toe in a full blossom silk white kimono. The blossom design of the beautiful kimono was intricately-detailed with prints of very elaborate blue and red flowers and one could tell the garment had been made with much dedication. The blue kimono was also adorned with a gold obi sash and matching pre-tied butterfly bow.

Hinata had also affixed her long indigo-colored hair into a geisha style bun, tied together by a lavender bow. All in all Naruto thought Hinata looked beautiful, but then he always thought Hinata looked beautiful no matter what she wore. However, he had been hoping that when Hinata emerged from the bathroom she would be wearing something more seductive and...sexy.

Hinata seemed to sense Naruto's slight disappointment and she reached down and began untying the gold obi sash. When the obi belt was unfurled and Hinata opened the kimono robe to reveal what she was wearing underneath, Naruto's gasped and his eyes grew wide in shock and awe.

For Hinata was wearing a see through stretch lace lavender colored baby-doll negligee with a scoop neckline with ruffle trim showing off Hinata's ample cleavage, while the rest of the garment was adorned in ruffled flower detail flutter petal trim. Because the lingerie was so transparent, Naruto could see Hinata was wearing a matching black lace cut bra and g-string panties underneath the alluring garment. The final part of the Hyuga girls sexy wardrobe was a pair of five inch black stiletto heels, which not only added to Hinata's height, but also showcased her firm and tone legs.

Naruto stood up from the bed with his mouth hanging open like a fish and moved to take a step forward towards Hinata. However, he was so enraptured by how she stunningly hot she looked that he tripped over his own shoes and fell forward flat on his face.

"Naru-kun!" Hinata shouted with concern, as she hastily closed and retied her kimono and rushed forward to him.

Unfortunately, Hinata had not yet mastered walking on the high heel pumps she wore yet and she too ended up falling forward as well. Naruto looked up and couldn't help but chuckle at the sight of the both of them laying face down on the floor. However, when he saw the saddened look on Hinata's face he immediately jumped up and rushed to her side to make sure she was alright. When he reached her, Hinata seemed almost on the verge of tears and Naruto lifted her up in his arms and carried her to the bed. Setting Hinata down onto the edge of the bed and then sitting beside her, he asked with loving care.

"What's wrong Hina-chan, are you hurt?"

Hinata shook her head, before she sniffled and answered.

"No, I'm not hurt, but I'm so useless. I wanted this night to be special for you, so I tried to look as sexy as I could, but because I can't even walk right in these shoes, I end up looking like a fool, I'm so stupid."

Naruto didn't like Hinata berating herself and hugged the Hyuga girl to him, as he thought back to a conversation he had with Jiraiya and Kakashi when they were traveling together.

(Flashback)

It was late in the evening, as Naruto Jiraiya, and Kakashi sat silently around a dwindling camp fire each of them lost in their own thoughts. However, if one could glimpse into the minds of any of them, they would see that each man was thinking about the woman they loved waiting for their return back in the Leaf village. As Jiraiya glanced over at his grandson, it reminded him when he was Naruto's age is when he and Tsunade first made love. It was then the wizened Toad-Sage decided to impart some wisdom onto Naruto, as he said.

"Naruto, there's something important I want to talk to you about."

"What do you want to talk about pervy-sage?"

"Damn it gaki, will you quit calling me that!"

Jiraiya then took a deep breath to calm himself, before he continued on.

"I want to talk to you about Hinata."

"What about Hinata?"

"What are your feelings towards her?"

"My, my feelings, I, I love her."

"That's good, does she love you?"

"Yeah, she loves me."

"Good, now since the both of you love one another and you've both reached a certain age in your lives. When you return to the village the two of you are probably going to want to express your love for one another...physically."

"I'm not sure I understand what you mean?"

"He's talking about sex Naruto." Kakashi chimed in to clear up Naruto's confusion.

"Gaah, I'm not going to talk to you about me having sex with Hinata pervy-sage! You probably just want to teach me one of your perverted techniques in bed or something!" Naruto exclaimed in protest.

"You should be so lucky for me to teach you gaki one of my love making techniques, but you're lucky I'm a proponent of the first time between two people of being natural and special and that's what I want to talk to you about. Now shut-up and listen, because I promise you'll be thanking me one day for this wisdom I'm about to bestow upon you!" Jiraiya declared in a frustrated tone of voice.

"Alright, I'll listen to what you have to say, but if say anything perverted about Hinata-chan..."

"I promise I'm not going to say anything perverted about Hinata, now pay attention." Jiraiya assured his grandson before continuing on.

"Now when you and Hinata decide that the time is right and you want to take your relationship to the next level. There's a couple of key points you need to remember. When that day comes you need to remember that it's Hinata's first time doing...that."

"So, it will be my first time too."

"That's true Naruto, but a woman's first time has more meaning to them and is more special, as they are giving up the gift that transforms them from a girl to a woman."

"Kakashi is right, which is why you need to understand that the first time you and Hinata make love, you need to make sure that it is all about her not you."

"Ok, I get that, but what's the other thing I need to remember?"

"You need to also remember that most young girls get nervous and maybe even a little scared the first time that they make love with someone. So you need to take control of the situation if that happens and make sure that when you make love to her, it will as memorable and special as she always imagined it would be."

"What do you mean take control, I'm not going to order Hinata-chan around like some dog or force her to do anything she doesn't want to!" Naruto exclaimed in protest.

"That's not what I'm saying when I mean take control! I'm talking about being a man and taking the lead in the situation. As I said, Hinata might be nervous and scared, but she trusts you, so she's going to look to you for strength and support. She loves you, so you need to convey your love to Hinata and assure the girl that her trust isn't misplaced."

Naruto sat in muted silence, as he pondered what Jiraiya had just told him. After a couple of minutes, he turned to his two sensei's and nodded his head, while saying.

"I understand, and I promise that the first time Hinata-chan and I do make love, it will be all about her, not me."

"Good, one other thing you need to remember is that even though I said to assert some control, don't forget to let Hinata have some as well."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean at some point let her assume some control as well, allow her to set the pace. You don't want Hinata to feel as though she is just there, as the two of you make love."

"Well how do I do that?"

"Let her be on top." Jiraiya answered with a grin.

"WHAT!" Naruto shouted in embarrassment.

(End of Falshback)

'Damned if that pervy old man wasn't right, the way Hinata is shivering and beating herself up over not being able to walk in a pair of shoes and she's doing it all for me just isn't right.'

Naruto hooked a finger under Hinata's chin and lifted her face up to his. The kiss he gave her was both loving and comforting and when he broke it said.

"Hinata-chan, don't ever let me hear you call yourself useless, foolish, or stupid ever again. You're none of those things and as far as being sexy. You could be dressed in a burlap sack and I would still call you the most beautiful and sexy woman in the entire world."

Hinata blushed at Naruto affectionate compliment, before she then heard him ask.

"Do you love me?"

"Hai-hai, I love you more than anything." Hinata stammered in response.

"That's good, because that is how much I love you as well. Now, do you trust me?"

"Of course I trust you."

"Thank you, your love and trust means everything to me. And I appreciate that you wanted this night to be special for me, but you need to understand, this night is already special for me because it's you I'm with. So please allow me to make this night special for you for granting me the honor of being with you."

Hinata's lavender eyes began to well with tears, as she stared at Naruto and listened to the tender and devoted words he spoke and she nodded her head in acceptance. She knew Naruto wouldn't hurt her in anyway and wanted only to fulfill her lifelong dream. In the fading sunlight of the setting sun, the semi-darkness of the room could not hide the smoldering glimmer in Naruto's cerulean eyes as he stared at Hinata intently. The Hyuga girl was confused when he took her hand and had her rise from the bed and stand before him a few feet away and blushed furiously when she heard him say.

"Undress for me my hime."

(Romantic Naruto/Hinata Lemon Begins)

Hinata looked at Naruto with a bit of uncertainty, before she took a deep breath, as she realized the sound of Naruto's voice was gentle, but it also held a tone of authority that showed he was no longer the boy she had fallen in love with, but was now the man she loved. Naruto asserting some control was exactly what she wanted and needed for this night. However, knowing this still didn't prevent her hands from trembling with nervous excitement, as they came up to undo the knot of the obi sash. When Hinata finally untied the troublesome strap, she began to pull the robe apart, when she heard Naruto command.

"Slowly, remove the kimono slowly."

Hinata turned around and looked over her shoulder demurely at Naruto, as she slowly brought the kimono down revealing her creamy white shoulders and back, before she let go of the robe and it fell to the floor in a heap around her feet. Naruto took a sharp intake of breath, when the view of Hinata's thong covered ass came into view through the see-through lavender baby-doll negligee. Naruto thought to himself that while Ino's ass was indeed a sight to behold, it paled in comparison to exquisite beauty of Hinata's. Exhaling a deep breath, the blonde shinobi said in a leisurely voice.

"Lift your leg to me."

Hinata turned back around and complied, lifting her leg, as Naruto took hold of her foot and began undoing the straps of the black stiletto heel she wore and commented appreciatively.

"These shoes really do make your legs look stunning my hime."

Hinata blushed a bit at the comment and then squeaked in surprise when after Naruto had removed the shoe he began to kiss her toes one at a time.

"Wh-what are doing Naru-kun?"

"I showing that I love everything about you, from your head to your toes." Naruto answered sweetly, before he put Hinata's leg down and repeated the process with her other foot.

When Naruto placed her leg back down onto the ground the look in his eyes sent the silent message for Hinata to continue undressing. Once again Hinata took her time removing the lingerie she was wearing, before it to lay in a pile on the floor around her, leaving her completely exposed to Naruto, clad in only her silk bra and panties. Naruto could barely stand it and shifted slightly, as he was beginning to feel uncomfortable in a certain region, but he couldn't or more accurately wouldn't take his eyes off Hinata's graceful movements, as she began to unhook her bra. Turning her back to Naruto again, she allowed the garment to fall away from her body. Then taking a deep breath, she bent down and slowly slid her panties down her long lean legs, before stepping out of them. Turning back around to face him, she held one arm across her ample breasts and the other to conceal the junction of her legs.

Naruto was off the bed and stood before Hinata in an instant and she stared at him with huge bashful eyes until she heard him growl lustfully, as he pulled her arms aside revealing herself completely to him.

"Never hide your beauty from me Hina-hime."

Hinata looked up into Naruto's azure eyes, which seemed to gleam with pure desire for her and hearing his words she felt like the most beautiful woman on earth at that moment. For his part, Naruto ran his hands through her silken indigo-colored hair and removed the lavender bow releasing the geisha style bun and allowing her beautiful locks to flow freely down her back. Naruto then brought his hands down to rest them on her waist. Hinata's skin was so soft and smooth; he wanted to touch her all over and it was all he could do to contain that urge, as gazed over her body. The view of her narrow waist, rounded feminine hips, and generous full firm breasts was simply breathtaking to Naruto. Immediately, he swept Hinata lithe form up into his arms and carried her over to the bed and the Hyuga girl felt herself being placed onto to the mattress by him. She did not resist as he pressed her down against the soft surface and watched inquisitively, as he undressed himself for her. However, where she had been slow in removing her clothing, Naruto stripped so quickly that it was only a matter of seconds, before he stood before her fully naked.

Hinata did not seem to mind the quick removal of Naruto's clothing and her mouth went dry, as he stood unabashedly before her. The Hyuga girl couldn't help but stare admiringly at his broad shoulders and well defined chisled chest gleaming in the dim fading light, before her attention was drawn downwards to Naruto's bronzed-colored perfect six-pack abs, strong narrow hips, and lastly to his obvious...arousal.

Hinata's lavender eyes widened, both in appreciation and excitement, Naruto was large...very large.

Hinata gulped nervously and she wondered if she would even be able to wrap her hand around Naruto's rigid cock let alone take it within her. However, as much as his size alarmed her, she had little time to worry about it as he got on the large bed and his blue eyes locked onto hers with an almost predatory gaze like a lion stalking a gazelle, as he slowly crawled towards her. Hinata felt a sense of both apprehension and enthusiasm under Naruto's gaze, as she tentatively lifted her arms to him when he covered her body with his own. The Hyuga girl shivered in response at the vast difference between Naruto's sleek, muscular body and her own softer feminine form. The blonde Jinchuuriki began placing slow, wet, and soothing kisses upon her lips and throat, as his warm hands caressed her body with gentle touches.

Hinata couldn't contain the whimper that escaped her mouth at Naruto's touch and ran her own hands frantically up and down his muscled his back. The weight of his body against hers, his masculine musky scent, and his sensual attention to her body was making her feverish and restless with desire. Without even realizing it, Hinata began to rub her body sensuously against Naruto, as it searched, guided by some primal instinct for something to quell the fire building within her. A deep yearning began to build hotly in the pit of her stomach and the pressure between her legs, longing to be filled was beginning to become unbearable. On pure instinct Hinata suddenly bucked against Naruto and was rewarded by the feel of his arousal, which sent a bolt of pleasure throughout her body. The Hyuga girl began to squirm fervently under him, spreading her thighs and pulling her knees up around his hips.

Naruto groaned when he felt Hinata excitedly begin to press her wet heat against him. Looking down he grew even harder at the sight before him. Hinata's long indigo-colored hair was spread carefree around her innocent face, which was flushed with desire and her half-lidded eyes glazed over with lust, as her full pouty lips breathed in and out in rapid succession and her body continued to strain against him longing to be taken. Naruto bent down and quickly latched his mouth onto a hard erect nipple. The searing heat of his mouth over her breast triggered so much pleasure that Hinata cried out and she rolled her hips hard against him in reaction.

"OOOOOOH NARU-KUN!"

Naruto growled in response, which vibrated through the mouthful of her flesh he had, as Hinata whimpered with need. Hinata gasped aloud when he nipped her suddenly, grazing his teeth against her sensitive flesh in a way that made her grow even wetter with ever-increasing longing. She arched her back in an effort to force more of her nipple into his mouth and mewled softly when he began to suck even harder on the delicate nub. Hinata's hands shot up to bury themselves in Naruto's blonde locks, as she began to wriggle about in the pleasure he was causing her. Naruto decided to increase that pleasure even further, as his hand traveled down her supple body to get to her most intimate of places.

Naruto smirked, as he continued his ministrations on Hinata's breasts and the way she was relentlessly massaging his head made him groan with pleasure, as his hand drifted slowly over the sensitive skin of her inner thighs, making her squirm and pant with growing want. Hinata began to think that she was going to lose her mind at the intense pressure that was building up within her and she knew that only Naruto could release it for her and make her feel even better than she was feeling right now. She frantically needed him and she needed him…now!

Desperate to control his own urgent craving, Naruto was still mindful that this moment was solely for Hinata's need not his own. Naruto shifted slightly away and removed his hand from Hinata's inner thigh and released his hold of her breast and the wonderful pressure Hinata was feeling began to subside and she gave a small whimper of frustration at its loss. The Hyuga girl bucked her hips futilely against his him and her glazed lust-filled lavender eyes snapped open in confusion and she softly asked

"Naru-kun, why did you sto….Ooooooooooooooh Kami!"

Hinata's question ended abruptly in a long guttural moan, as he slipped a finger into her tight channel. Naruto then curled his finger against her walls of clenching muscles searching for her g-spot, while pressing his thumb firmly against her clitoris. Hinata's eyes immediately squeezed shut and a low throaty groan escaped her mouth, as her sleek thighs clamped down hard on his hand.

Naruto gazed at Hinata's face, which was contorted and flushed in wanton pleasure. As he slowly worked his finger in and around Hinata, she suddenly yelped in pleasure and Naruto realized he had found her g-spot. Immediately, Naruto added yet another finger into her, while at the same time started to rub the little bundle of extremely sensitive nerves at the apex of her pussy. This action was too much for Hinata and she screamed out in passionate and erotic pleasure, as her first orgasm hit her.

"YES, OH YES NARU-KUN….RIGHT THERE…..PLEASE DON'T STOP…..GO FASTER!"

Naruto complied with Hinata's wishes and he started to piston the curled fingers within her at an escalating rate. Hinata panted heavily and her hips seemed to move of their own accord, as she thrashed about on the bed in sexual delight. She rocked desperately against his hand and Naruto watched keenly her flaying form of satisfaction, before he moved up and began placing long loving kisses onto Hinata's lips and throat, which she welcomed most eagerly. Hinata was quickly becoming lost in the amount of indescribable pleasure she was feeling and was growing so slick and that anytime now she would be ready for Naruto to take her completely.

---

As Hinata was about to attain her first orgasm, the front door of the apartment she shared with Kurenai opened up and the Jounin kunoichi and Kakashi walked in.

"I hope Hinata and Naruto are here and can join us for dinner." Kurenai commented to Kakashi.

At that moment a pleasured-filled scream erupted from down the hall followed by.

"Yes, Oh Yes Naru-kun….Right There…..Please Don't Stop…..Go Faster!"

Both Kurenai and Kakashi stood frozen where they were standing for a moment, before Kakashi openly remarked.

"I'd say they're here, but I doubt they are interested in getting dinner at the moment."

Kurenai began to blush furiously, as a new set of moans and shrieks of enjoyment came echoing down the hallway.

"I could have sworn Naruto said he was getting a flower for Hinata, maybe Master-Jiraiya was right." Kakashi mumbled to himself, before he was being forcefully shoved out the apartment by Kurenai quickly shutting the door behind them.

Kurenai then shoved him again back first into the wall and snapped at him with fury.

"What the hell was that?"

"Well, you see when a man and a woman love one another, they sometimes like to express that love by physically engaging in….. "

"That's not what I meant smart-ass and you know it. What about Naruto has become a perfect gentleman and would never force Hinata to do such a thing." Kurenai brusquely stated, as she leveled a harsh glare upon Kakashi.

"Those weren't moans of pain or cries for help coming from Hinata."

"What's that suppose to mean?"

"It means Kure-chan that are you really so surprised about this considering how much Hinata loves Naruto and he loves her?"

Kurenai took a minute to calm down and think about what Kakashi had just asked, before she exhaled a sigh and answered.

"No, I shouldn't be surprised; I just didn't expect them to move so quickly."

"Well, if you ask me, they're making better use of their time than we are right now." Kakashi stated, as he encircled Kurenai's waist from behind and nibbled on her neck.

Kurenai stifled a moan, before she turned her head and kissed Kakashi, before disengaging from his embrace and said.

"There will be enough time for that later, feed me first."

Kakashi heaved a defeated sigh and Kurenai inwardly giggled at his frustration. Truth be told, she too would like nothing more than to immediately hop into bed with the silver-haired Jounin. However, she decided to give Hinata some special time with Naruto before they returned. Hopefully by then the two young shinobi will have finished and she and Kakashi can then have some….special time together.

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Naruto thought he heard a door being slammed, but it was difficult to tell as Hinata was still in the throes of her orgasm. Deciding it wasn't important, he continued to slowly move his fingers in and out of Hinata, as the Hyuga girl gradually began to calm down from the bliss of her climax. After a minute, Naruto withdrew his hand completely from her causing Hinata to whine in protest. Leaning down, he kissed her deeply, while he sensuously ran the length of his cock against the swollen folds of her hypersensitive core. Swiftly lubricating himself with the fluids that were leaking from Hinata, Naruto positioned himself at the entrance of her pussy and asked.

"Are you ready Hina-hime?"

Hinata gazed up at Naruto with loving eyes and nodded. Naruto placed a chaste kiss upon her, which she responded readily to before pulling away and holding her still. Naruto reached down between their bodies and pressed his fingers against Hinata's slick nether lips, stretching her as wide as he could. Instinctively, Hinata attempted to help him by pulling her knees up over his hips and curled her thighs slightly around his tapered waist. Naruto steadied himself with his other hand and rubbed the bulbous tip of his cock against her sensitive folds. Hinata began to whimper in craving for Naruto, practically begging, as she said in a choked voice filled with love.

"Pl-please Naru-kun, make me yours…forever!"

Hearing those words from Hinata made Naruto's heart swell, as he now truly understood what Jiraiya and Kakashi were talking about. This beautiful, wonderful, and special girl had chosen him to give her love to and the fact that she had done so above any others brought a tear to Naruto's eyes. He leaned down and placed a loving kiss upon her lips once more, before whispering in her ear.

"Your wish is my command, my hime."

Then without any warning Naruto thrust forward into Hinata in one smooth stroke, burying himself to the hilt entirely within her and causing the Hyuga girl to loudly gasp. Tears began to well in Hinata's eyes at the initial pain of being filled so fully. Luckily, being a kunoichi her hymen had broken a few years ago during a mission, but still this was Hinata's first time and she felt like she was being stretched beyond her limits. Hinata attempted to blink away the tears that were starting to roll down her cheeks. Naruto saw these tears and felt her fingernails clutch his back fiercely in an attempt to deal with the pain and he remained motionless to allow Hinata to get adjusted to him, as he peppered her face with soft butterfly like kisses on those tears, while whispering loving assurances and comfort to the Hyuga girl.

"I'm so sorry my hime, I know it hurts, but it will soon pass. I promise, I won't move until you're ready for me to."

Naruto's soothing words seemed to help, as Hinata's accelerated breathing began to lessen and she pulled her body closer into his for comfort. After a few minutes, the pain Hinata had been feeling began to diminish and was replaced with a strange new sensation of being filled so completely by him. This growing pleasurable feeling caused Hinata to shift slightly under Naruto causing him to hiss through clenched teeth a groan, as he felt her pussy clench around him. Hinata was startled by Naruto's groan and was fearful she had done something to cause him some pain and gazed up at his face with concern. Naruto's blue eyes stared back with passion into Hinata's lavender ones and he shook his head to indicate that she had done nothing wrong. In fact, he had been patiently waiting for her to adjust to his girth, which in itself was a labor of supreme self-control, as Hinata was so mind numbingly tight that the pleasure he was feeling was so intense it was borderline painful. So it was proving most difficult resisting the tremendous urge to just start pounding himself within her soft yielding flesh. However, Naruto still remembered his sensei's words of wisdom that this moment was about Hinata not him. So he continued to refuse to move until she was ready for him to.

"Do you still feel any pain Hina-hime?" Naruto asked in a coarse voice from the effort he was exerting to maintain control.

Hinata stared at Naruto's beautiful face and thought he looked so ruggedly handsome at that moment that her breath caught in her chest. To answer his question she slowly rolled her hips again and Naruto's jaws clenched tightly, as he bit back another groan. The pain was now gone and had been replaced by a very satisfying sensation, but Hinata wanted more and she knew so did Naruto. She smiled sweetly at Naruto and her eyes seem to take on a loving glint to them, as she shook her head no and that was all the consent he needed. Hinata gasped in surprise, as a lightning bolt of pleasure shot through her body, when Naruto's powerful hips retracted, as he pulled slowly out of her and immediately Hinata was distressed by the aching emptiness she felt.

A look of discontent on Hinata's face was evident, but before she could utter any protest, Naruto pressed back into her softness and slid himself fully into her with a hoarse groan once again. Hinata sighed in contentment at the myriad of wonderful sensations building within her and was starting to enjoy the fullness of Naruto within her more and more. The taut muscles of Hinata's pussy still continued to resists his rigid penetrations, but were beginning to yield more quickly with each powerful thrust. Hinata, contracted her muscles and promptly bit back a small moan, as a bolt of electrified pleasure shot up her spine and throughout her body yet again. Naruto growled in satisfied response when Hinata did that, as the pulsating sensation of her slick walls undulated around his cock. Naruto looked down at Hinata's angelic face, as her delectable mouth with full pouty lips panted softly and her gorgeous lavender eyes were half-lidded with desire, but when they locked with his own, he could see within them all the love she had was reserved only for him. Right then Naruto knew that he was with the most beautiful and desirable woman in the entire world.

"Wrap your legs around me, hime." Naruto openly suggested.

Hinata agreed to his request without question and spread her soft thighs apart, while wrapping her long supple legs around his tapered hips and locking her ankles behind his back. This new position allowed Naruto to drive himself deeper within Hinata and she clung to him even tighter like a tight velvet covered fist around his cock. Naruto was starting to grow addicted to the way her lithe body would try to force him out whenever he drove into her and yet would grab ahold of him tightly and not release him when he had to withdraw from her slippery tight sheath to repeat the process. The delicious friction of their two bodies together was amazing, as was the pleasure it elicited. Hinata was thoroughly enjoying the weight of Naruto's body against hers though, not to mention the decadent feel of his skin moving across hers. As for Naruto he was almost hypnotized at the sight of his indigo-haired goddess beneath him writhing and moaning in pure sexual gratification.

Hinata was so beautiful like this, as he bent his head down and kissed her lips. The Hyuga girl eagerly responded, but found it growing increasingly difficult to remain focused, as Naruto's thick engorged manhood was plunging in and out of her at an ever increasing rate was sending her mind and body into a state of frenzied ecstasy. Hinata strained hard against him whimpering in agitated need, as every slam of Naruto's hips against her own was driving her ever closer to another orgasm that his magical fingers had brought her to earlier. However, Hinata knew this climax would be even more gratifying and would send her soaring higher in rapture than the previous one had. She began to sob in joy, as Naruto dipped his head lower to and began to suck at the junction of her neck and shoulder marking her as his and his alone.

"Pl-please Naru-kun…..I'm so close…..harder…..go, go harder!" Hinata breathlessly pleaded, as her grip tightened on his shoulders.

Naruto complied with Hinata's wishes and began thrusting his hips into hers with greater vigor. Hinata immediately began to wail, at the increase in speed and Naruto knew what to do to drive her over the edge. He reached down between them searching for Hinata's clit and finding the small bundle of highly sensitized nerves that would bring her to the release she craved and began rubbing her moist pearl between his fingers. It took only a few seconds of this action, before Hinata rose up to place a fiery passionate kiss onto Naruto once more. He moaned into her mouth and she did the same, before Hinata broke the kiss and threw back her head to scream in ecstasy.

"YES! YES! Naru-kun, I'm-I'm Cumming…..!"

Hinata flew backwards back onto the bed bringing Naruto with her and arched her entire body, as she pressed her mouth against his shoulder screaming into his skin, while her fingernails dug into his muscular back and her legs snapped out of their bent state straight into the air. Naruto felt his shaft become drenched in Hinata's juices, as her inner walls contracted and relaxed around his cock again and again. Naruto gave a loud guttural moan, as the extra pressure around him felt like he was caught in a vice, albeit a most pleasurable one.

Hinata was panting heavily and was dazed as she continued to feel the afterglow of the mind-numbing climax she had just experienced. Before she could prepare herself, Naruto slid his arm tightly around her waist and twisted them both around and reversed their positions so that he was the one directly under her now. The Hyuga girl suddenly found herself astride her handsome blonde lover with her small hands pressed flat against his chest for leverage and a slightly bewildered look upon her face.

Naruto's six-pack abs rippled, as he sat up slowly, while carefully balancing Hinata on his lap. In this elevated position, Hinata's voluptuous breast hung enticingly before him and he took a nipple into his mouth and began to nip and suck on the tender flesh ravenously. Hinata's breath hitched in her throat a moment, before she moaned loudly. Naruto then gave a powerful flex of his hips and Hinata suddenly realized she was still impaled upon his rigid cock. The Hyuga girl thought that she had already taken all that he had to give, But Naruto slid even deeper into her, as the tip of his engorged member nudged the entrance of her cervix. The pleasure was so exquisite that Hinata mewled softly in approval and instinctively rolled her hips against his. Naruto's groan at this action vibrated through her nipple and shot straight down her spine, as he abruptly released his hold on Hinata's breast and ordered in a husky voice.

"Ride me, my hime!"

Hinata looked at Naruto curiously, before she hesitantly moved her long legs onto either side of him. She placed her hands on his broad shoulders and then using him as leverage started to pull herself up from him before carefully sinking back down again. Naruto made no sound, as he watched Hinata experimentally explore the possibilities of this new position. He was glad he remembered Jiraiya's advice of making sure that Hinata felt she had some control during their love making and was not just a vehicle for his pleasure. And the wizened Toad-Sage was correct, as Hinata indeed liked this position and felt empowered by it. This time, it was she who was in control and it thrilled her beyond belief. And while at first her movements were inexperienced and somewhat awkward, Hinata quickly found her rhythm and began to pick up speed, as a sense of mounting urgency was beginning to boil within her, while she bounced up and then slid back down upon his slippery length again and again.

Naruto merely leaned back and watched Hinata, as she discovered her own speed and worked her way towards pleasing satisfaction. Her beautiful waist length indigo-colored hair flew about, as the pace she set was increasing by the second. As Hinata rode Naruto with wild abandon, her tongue hung out of her mouth, as she panted from her efforts. Her lavender eyes were glazed over in sexual bliss and her large breasts bounced around sporadically, as she impaled herself on his hardened shaft. Naruto gazed at Hinata's flushed face and also saw her chest rising and falling at a progressively faster rate, as the small breathy sounds she made each time she drove herself down was like song she was singing just for him and he decided to help her along.

Naruto began to drive his hips upward in time with Hinata's down-stroke and soon the sound of her butt slapping against his firm thighs echoed throughout the room. Naruto reached up and grabbed her breasts, as Hinata wiggled her hips in a circular pattern, grinding his member against her inner walls, while every few moments she'd stop and use her muscles to squeeze him. The Hyuga girl sat up and leaned back, one hand on the bed to hold her steady while the other went for that magical wonderful button Naruto had manipulated earlier. It only took a few moments of rubbing her sensitive spot before the pleasurable sensations, coupled by the feel of Naruto inside her sent Hinata crashing over the edge again screaming.

"OH KAMI NARU-KUN…..I, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!

Hinata's orgasm hit her so hard that the twisted look of ecstasy upon her face was one of the most erotic scenes Naruto thought he had ever seen, as he watched her ride out her third climax of the evening. The Hyuga girl was beyond words at the unimaginable pleasure she was feeling at the sensation of Naruto's rigid member pressed against her womb, while her grasping inner walls convulsed and clamped down tightly around him simply overloaded her senses. Fisting her hands in her long hair, as she rode out the orgasm, she finally collapsed forward her cheek lying on Naruto's chiseled chest, while the only sound she uttered was a soft panting from her rapid breathing and her body twitched with involuntary spasms.

Turning her face towards him, Naruto kissed Hinata deeply before he placed his hands on her waist and forcibly lifted her off him. Hinata was in a daze and barely registered this, as she tried to calm down from the sexual nirvana she had just felt. Before she even realized it, Naruto had rearranged their positions and Hinata suddenly found herself on her hands and knees, breasts swaying freely and her ass in the air facing her blonde-haired lover. The cool air of the room nipped at her exposed pulsating sex and the Hyuga girl to shiver slightly in response, as a small trickle of her essence escaped from her pink nether lips and slid down the inside of her trembling thigh. Hinata's eyes grew wide in shock when Naruto swiped the precious liquid up with his finger and brought it to his lips. She blushed furiously, both in surprise and embarrassment when she saw his tongue come out and lick his finger clean. Naruto then turned his gaze at Hinata's face and licked his lips, before saying only one word to her.

"Delicious."

Naruto then dipped two fingers into Hinata and her response was immediate, as she rocked against his hand and moaned. Naruto licked off the sweet tasting fluid once again, before his eyes gazed lustfully at the pristine sight before him. Hinata's ass for lack of a better word was simply…..perfect. There wasn't a single mar, blemish, or wrinkle of any kind on flawless work of art before him, as far as Naruto was concerned. Naruto placed his hands on the upturned posterior and gently caressed and fondled her butt, running his hands all over the smooth and well-toned alabaster flanks. Naruto sighed appreciatively, as the view from behind Hinata was simply breathtaking, before he said.

"Arch your back for me my hime."

Hinata peeked over her shoulder to look questioningly at Naruto, before he lazily ran a finger in-between her wet nether lips and the Hyuga girl stifled a moan. Hinata slowly dropped her arms and let the bed support the weight of her torso, while she arched her back and raised her ass high in the air. Her long hair was draped over the beautiful curve of her back and she pressed the side of her face onto a pillow, while she kept her rounded butt elevated. Hinata could not see what Naruto was doing behind her being positioned in the way that she was right now. On her hands and knees the Hyuga girl felt vulnerable, but also very excited, as she had no idea what he was going to do to her next, but couldn't wait to find out what it would be? Hinata jerked slightly in surprise when she felt strong hands wrap around her inner thighs and begin to nudge her legs apart. Following Naruto's lead she quickly spread her knees until she was open enough for whatever he was planning, as she thought to herself.

'I wonder if Naru-kun is going to do the doggy position that Kiba use to go on and on about with Shino?'

Naruto stared appreciatively at the enticing curve of Hinata's backside, as it was most alluring, but it was nothing compared to the treasure that was blossoming right before him. The moist glimmer of her arousal was obvious and her swollen lips seemed to slowly part under his gaze, as Hinata anxiously trembled before him. Naruto's painful erection was agonizing from the lack of relief, but he was still true to his promise of making this night about Hinata's enjoyment first, before his own. However, the blonde Jinchuuriki knew he wouldn't be able to hold out much longer. However, Naruto had tasted Hinata's exotically sweet and tangy flavor, which was almost intoxicating it was so delicious and he decided he wanted more of it.

Hinata loudly gasped, when she felt Naruto's mouth fasten itself onto her most sacred spot. This new and unexpected sensation nearly caused Hinata to jump up, if not for the pair of strong hands that were firmly holding her in place. What Naruto was doing to her was so thrilling that the Hyuga girl involuntarily tried to clamp her thighs shut and pull away from him, but Naruto's firm grasp kept her in place and his hot breath against her sensitive skin made her moan passionately, as he buried his lips into her. Hinata's shrieks of enjoyment and moans became even more vocal when Naruto plunged his tongue into her and he lightly scraped his teeth against her tender flesh. Hinata thought she might go insane with pleasure, as it was so exquisite that her eyes rolled into the back of her head. It didn't take long before Hinata was bucking back against him with shameless abandon, her hands gripping the sheets so tightly that her knuckles were turning white from the effort, as Naruto licked and sucked her clean of her essence.

Hinata had her head buried face first in a pillow, which was muffling her screams of delight, as Naruto brought her to yet another orgasm just with his tongue. The Hyuga girl was about to collapse when Naruto surged up draping his body over hers, while he positioned his aching erection against her dripping entrance. Any strength Hinata had was gone, as she felt a powerful arm encircle her waist and pull her up and tightly against him. In fact, all Hinata could do was whimper in satisfaction when Naruto slid his cock back into her in one swift fluid motion, as her gentle voice was gone from all the cries and moans that she had been uttering for the past couple of hours. The hold Naruto had around Hinata's waist tightened, as he steadied himself and then he began to…..move.

However, this time Naruto's strokes were not like the slow tender ones he had used the first time he took Hinata. No, this time his thrusts were rapid and powerful, as he relentlessly drove into her with a primal need for his own release. Naruto was slamming his hips into Hinata's bare heart-shaped backside at an incredible rate, as he grunted with each stroke.

"Ugh...Ugh….Ugh….Ugh….Ugh…."

Meanwhile, it was all Hinata could do to hang on, as each vigorous thrust pushed her further into the soft bed and she had to dig her fingers into the sheets to keep herself from moving too much. The Hyuga girl yipped and sobbed with joy, as she felt Naruto drive deeper and deeper within her giving her the utmost pleasure. The ecstasy Hinata was experiencing was so exhilarating that unconsciously she began to push her own hips against his in time with his forceful strokes.

Naruto's blue eyes were glazed over in blind lust, as he rocked vehemently against the female beneath him. Hinata was so hot, slippery, and tight and the soft delicate sounds she was making only added fuel to the growing fire within him. The way she was clenching her muscles around him to keep him inside of her told him that she was nearing her peak again and with his arm he forced her ass higher into the air, as it allowed for an even greater angle of penetration. When Naruto did this, Hinata sobbed frantically with elation, as now Naruto's thrusts went even deeper than before and she could feel the now familiar pressure building inside of her ready to explode once again. Hinata couldn't believe that even after the four mind-blowing climaxes she already had, Naruto had yet to have one, his stamina was godlike. The Hyuga girl felt Naruto's hand come up and seize some of the long smooth strands of her hair. Then he yanked her head up and to the side, before dragging his mouth over her own. Hinata responded eagerly to the scorching kiss and soon both of their tongues were swirling hotly around one another.

Naruto could feel his own release coming, as Hinata was clamping down on him so unrelentingly that he could hardly breathe at the intense pleasure he was feeling and the sensation was making him lightheaded. Naruto poured everything he had into his final assault. The squeaking sounds from the springs of the bed, the banging sounds from the headboard hitting the wall behind it, and the slapping sounds coming from Naruto's hips slamming into Hinata quickly reached a crescendo within the room. Suddenly, Hinata went wild under him, her body bucking and thrashing about from the intensity of her latest orgasm, as she screamed in satisfaction.

"YES NARU-KUN! OH YES, I LOVE YOU!"

Naruto could no longer hold back, as he felt Hinata explode all around him and with one final powerful thrust he ground his hips hard against Hinata's butt sheathing himself fully within her yielding flesh and he too shouted out, while climaxing.

"OH KAMI HINA-CHAN! I LOVE YOU TOO!"

Hinata could feel Naruto's cock pulsating and filling her womb with his hot seed and reveled in pleasurable warmth it gave her, as her inner walls gripped his member in such a fiercely tight and undulating motion, it seemed to want to suck him in completely and milk every last drop of his essence out of him. For his part Naruto's eyes were screwed shut, while he continued to thrust into Hinata and prolong their mutual orgasms as long as possible. Finally, Naruto collapsed on top of Hinata breathing heavily and placed tender kisses onto her slender neck and shoulders, while still holding the young Hyuga girl up with his arm, as her entire body had gone limp.

(Romantic Naruto/Hinata Lemon Ends)

Gently, Naruto pulled Hinata back against his chest and softly lowered the two of them down onto the bed. Hinata sighed gratefully at this action, as she barely had the strength to turn on her side and snuggle into Naruto to rest her head on his heaving well-toned chest. Both he and Hinata were exhausted and drenched with sweat, as Naruto gently kissed the top of her head before saying in a ragged voice.

"It's a good thing we didn't do this before I left, because it would have taken an army of 10,000 Leaf shinobi to take me away from you after that."

"Just 10,000?" Hinata lazily replied, as she lovingly stroked his muscular chest.

"You're right, 10,000 wouldn't have been enough."

"Hinata giggled, before she looked up at Naruto's face and appreciatively said.

"Thank you for making this night so special, it was more than I ever dreamed possible."

"I'm glad you enjoyed it my hime, but I should be the one thanking you for granting me the incredible honor of being your first, I love you so much for allowing me that special privilege."

"My first and only Naru-kun, now and forever."

Naruto leaned down and affectionately brushed some long strands of hair away from Hinata's face and the new lovers shared a tender yet passionate kiss with one another. Hinata snuggled her head back onto Naruto's chest and exhaled a contented sigh, before she sniffled a bit and Naruto asked in concern, as he saw a tear roll down her cheek.

"What's wrong my hime, why are you crying?"

"I'm crying because I'm just so happy that you're here and that I got to fulfill my dream of being with you like this. If I could have one wish right now is that time would stop and we could be like this forever, because that way I would never have to worry about losing you."

"I promise, you're never going to lose me my hime."

"You don't have to make promises to me Naru-kun; I've already accepted that one day I will." Hinata replied in a sad tone of voice.

"What are you talking about?" Naruto questioned in utter confusion.

Hinata sniffled once more before saying in a choked voice.

"You've, you've grown to become so strong and handsome since you've been gone. I know one day that a prettier girl than me will set her sights on you and take you away from me. I mean look at how Ino acted when she first saw you today. I know I'll never be able to keep you, but I am eternally grateful that you gave me this night. It's a memory I will always treasure for the rest of my life."

Naruto was stunned speechless upon hearing what Hinata had just said and he took a minute to process everything, before he did something that Hinata was not expecting, he erupted in boisterous laughter.

"Ha, ha, ha, ha, that-that is the most ridiculous thing I've ever heard in my entire laugh. Quit joking around Hina-hime…..my sides are hurting."

Hinata was mortified beyond words and thought Naruto's laughter was mocking her, as she rolled over onto her side away from Naruto and presented her back to him. Naruto stopped laughing when he felt Hinata roll away and looked over to see her body shaking and heard a soft weeping coming from her. It suddenly struck the blonde shinobi that Hinata hadn't been joking, but was actually serious about what she said. Moving over to embrace and spoon the Hyuga girl from behind, he softly nuzzled her neck and apologetically stated.

"I'm sorry my hime, please don't cry, I didn't think you were being serious about what you said."

"Why wouldn't you think I was being serious about what I said, it's all true. I just didn't expect you to laugh at me because of it, that's what hurts."

Naruto wiped some tears off of Hinata's cheek with his thumb and asked the Hyuga girl a question.

"Do you remember when we first kissed?"

"Y-yes, it was in your hospital room after the Sasuke retrieval mission where you got injured so badly."

"That's right, it's also the day you shared your feelings for me the first time."

"I-I remember."

"You also said something else to me that day; do you remember what it was?"

Hinata strained, as she searched her mind for the memory of what Naruto was referring to, but was unable to recall it and shook her head.

"You told me rather forcefully I might add, that if you heard me say something incredibly stupid about myself that you would hit me and you followed up with that warning later on when I did."

Hinata began to blush a bit at the memory, before a confused look spread across her face and she asked.

"I remember now, but what does that have to do with anything?"

"Well, I think if you have the right to smack me when I say something incredibly stupid about myself, then I think I have the right to laugh when you say something incredibly stupid about yourself."

"What did I say that was so incredibly stupid?"

"How about actually thinking that there are prettier girls out there in the world than you my hime. I've traveled in many lands the past four years and seen hundreds if not thousands of pretty girls during that time. And I swear to Kami, in all that time I've yet to meet or see a girl as beautiful as you!" Naruto declared, without a hint of hesitation or unwavering confidence in his voice.

Hinata blushed even more upon hearing Naruto's resolute belief and declaration of her beauty. It was so kind and complimentary that any hurt she had been feeling about Naruto's laughter instantly disappeared. The Hyuga girl turned her head and kissed Naruto deeply, before saying.

"Thank you for that Naru-kun, but it doesn't change the fact that I know other women will be after you. You're just so handsome and special that I can't even blame them for pursuing you."

Naruto merely smiled and replied playfully.

"Well it's true, I have become how did Ino put it…. a hot and sexy bronzed hunk."

"Yes, that's what she said." Hinata tersely replied.

"I wish there was a jutsu I could use to prevent all of these women from coming after me, as I don't want to be running from a pack of fan girls every day. However, I do have an idea that might prevent them from coming after me."

Naruto then let go of his embrace of Hinata much to her disappointment as he scooted down the bed and leaned over the edge to retrieve his dark-grey cloak and pulled something out of its pocket. Scooting back up to wrap his arms around Hinata and spoon with her again, he asked the Hyuga girl to close her eyes. When she had done this, Naruto grinned before he opened the small velvet covered box and took a dazzling engagement ring out of it, before sliding the ring onto Hinata's finger and asked.

"Please Hinata-chan, save me from the hoards of women that may pursue me in the future by making me the luckiest guy by becoming my wife and signifying to the whole world that I belong to you and only you forever."

Hinata's opened her eyes the moment she felt the ring being slipped onto her finger and her lavender-colored eyes grew wide, as she saw the engagement ring featuring a 0.80 Carat of round brilliant diamonds surrounding and enhancing a single 24 Carat Princess cut diamond center and heard Naruto's heartfelt proposal. Hinata's mouth hung open in stunned silence, as her throat had gone dry, before her eyes rolled to the back of her head and she did something she hadn't done in years…..fainted.

When Naruto didn't get an immediate response, he nudged Hinata, before he realized that the Hyuga girl had fainted. Smiling to himself, he kissed Hinata's cheek tenderly, before openly commenting in amusement.

"I'm glad not everything has changed since I've been gone."

Naruto then gently nuzzled his head into Hinata's neck and drifted off to sleep.

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As the two young lovers slept, Kurenai and Kakashi returned to the apartment. Not hearing any sounds coming from Hinata's room as before. The two Leaf village Jounin quietly snuck down the hall and entered the adjoining bedroom to Hinata's, which was Kurenai's. Upon entering the room Kakashi was immediately shoved onto the bed and Kurenai lustfully ordered with authority, as she began to quickly strip her bandaged attire off her curvaceous body.

"Get naked…NOW!"

Kakashi wasted little time of divesting himself of his own clothing. He and Kurenai had enjoyed a nice dinner and they had talked about a great many things. However, throughout the evening there had been an underlying sexual tension and yearning between the two and now was the time to quench their building desire for each other. A minute later, both Jounin were standing naked in front of one another and they both took a moment to gaze appreciatively at the other. A scant second later they were in each other's arms and falling onto the bed together attacking one another in a passionate animalistic fury. An hour later, Kakashi finally collapsed on top of Kurenai breathing heavily, before rolling off to side and bringing his forearm to rest on his forehead. Both of them were covered in a fine sheen of sweat, as Kurenai turned to her side and rested her head on his panting firm chest. She started placing soft butterfly like kisses onto Kakashi's torso, before commenting in a rasping and panting voice.

"Ka-Kami, you've no idea how much I missed this the past four years Kashi-kun."

"You and me both Kure-chan."

Suddenly, both Jounin were startled by a loud passion-filled scream from Hinata in the adjacent room.

"YES, YES…...A THOUSAND TIMES YES!"

A instant later, a thumping sound was heard and a framed picture in Kurenai's room hanging on the wall separating the two bedrooms began to rhythmically bounce off said wall, providing a strong indication to the two Jounin that Hinata and Naruto had resumed their earlier…..activities.

Kurenai smirked at this, before she mischievously said in a voice mimicking a certain green-clad bushy-browed Jounin, both she and Kakashi knew oh so well.

"Yosh, I can't let my former student Hinata outshine my flames of youth with her own!"

Kakashi looked at her quizzically, before idly commenting.

"Talking like Gai is not going to bring little Kakashi back to life, in fact it has the opposite effect."

A wicked grin spread across Kurenai's face, before she slid her body down Kakashi's. A moment later, the silver-haired Jounin grimaced in pleasure and exclaimed in a choked-filled voice.

"Kami, but doing that probably will!"

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Minutes earlier, Hinata had awoken and lazily yawned, as she had the most wonderful dream of her entire life. Reflecting on the dream, Hinata smiled as she recalled Naruto had returned to the village and she had made love to the boy she loved and then he had asked her to marry him. It was such a beautiful dream, if only it could come true, Hinata thought whimsically to herself. It was then Hinata felt a heavy arm draped over her naked body and she thought with horror.

"Naked…..why am I naked? Oh no, what have I done, who is this with me? Did I betray Naru-kun? I'm going to kill myself!"

It was with panicked trepidation when Hinata turned her head to see the familiar blonde hair and whiskered cheeks of the boy she loved and the Hyuga girl sighed with relief. It was then the realization hit her that it hadn't been a dream. Naruto had returned to the village and they had made love to each other. So if all of that was true that meant. Hinata immediately looked to her hand to see the most gorgeous engagement ring she had ever laid eyes upon adorning her hand. Tears began to well in her as she stared at the ring, which was even more dazzling under the light of the full moon that illuminated the room. When Naruto unconsciously shifted closer to Hinata, she felt something very warm, long, and rigid nudged against her sensitive core.

Looking down, a lustful gleam appeared in Hinata's eyes and her breath hitched in her throat when Naruto rolled onto his back and his impressive manhood stood proudly in the air. Wasting little time, Hinata rose up and straddled Naruto, before she lowered herself down and he slipped into her with ease. Hinata arched her back reveling in the feel of him and began to set an ever increasing bouncing pace, while Naruto was slowly roused from his slumber. The pleasurable feeling rumbling through his body and the sight of Hinata's chest flopping up and down from the force of her driving herself down, as she rode his member was exhilarating and he asked panting.

"Does-does this mean you will be wife Hina-chan?"

The Hyuga woman threw her head back and answered, screaming in passionate joy.

"YES, YES…...A THOUSAND TIMES YES!"

Naruto growled out, both in happiness and pleasure, as his powerful arm suddenly encircled Hinata's waist and he quickly reversed their positions. He then began to thrust into her with such wanton passion and force that once again the squeaking sounds of the bedsprings and sound of the headboard hitting the wall behind it echoed in the room once again.

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It was nearly 10:00pm, as Tsunade made her way to the Hokage residence. She thought with amusement at how proud Shizune would be her, as the blonde Hokage had actually stayed late to finish up all the paperwork she had. Tsunade gave a sad chuckle that her assistant would think it was out of some form of dedication or duty of being the Hokage. However, the Slug Sannin knew the truth of why she had stayed so late. She had been secretly hoping that Jiraiya would come swooping into her office as he always had in the past. Boasting and bragging about his adventures with their grandson and Kakashi, while declaring his love for her once more and accepting her proposal of marriage. Sadly, that did not happen and Tsunade could only think with regret and sorrow to herself.

'I guess Jiraiya-kun couldn't find it in his heart to give me one more chance. I can't blame him, as much as I've hurt, neglected, and abandoned him time and time again. If was in his shoes I wouldn't give me another chance either. Everyone, even Jiraiya-kun has their breaking point and after all of the terrible things I've done to him throughout our lives, I finally reached his. So I shouldn't be surprised, I mean I've no right to ask for his forgiveness, because truthfully I don't deserve it after everything I've done to him. So if I don't have the right to ask for his forgiveness, what a hypocrite I am to ask for his love now after rejecting it all these years.'

Heaving a sad sigh, as she turned the key to unlock the door to her home, the blonde Hokage stepped inside and turned on a light. However, the sight that greeted her was both surprising and unexpected as her living room was filled with flowers, chocolates, and sake. Looking around in confusion someone tapped her shoulder from behind and began to say.

"It's about time you came hom….."

Reacting on pure battle-tested instincts, Tsunade whirled around and threw a chakra-filled punch at the unknown intruder, which connected and sent the man flying across the room and crashing into a heavy oak wood bookcase. As the man slumped down onto the floor, Tsunade was able to get a better look at him and her eyes grew wide in shock and began to fill with tears when she saw the unmistakable waist length spiky-white hair and distinctive red lines that ran down from his eyes on his face and she cried out in horror.

"Jiraiya-kun!"

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Author Note 2: I think this might have been one of the most difficult chapters I've written so far. As I mentioned last chapter, this is the very first Naruto/Hinata romantic lemon scene I've ever written. And trying to write it as a romantic piece and not pure smut was incredibly challenging. Not just because of the explicit nature of the scene itself, but in trying to set a romantic mood or tone, the dialogue, and the thoughts of Naruto and Hinata the first time they were together. So many different scenarios went through my mind about how that scene would be conveyed and be believable. I want the reader to say from that scene, "Yeah, I could see it going like that for Naruto and Hinata's first time." In the end, what you saw is the best I could come up with, so I leave it to my readers to judge, if I nailed that scene in all of the aspects I described. As for the rest of the chapter, you can see it was a mix of a little drama, but mostly some joy and humor surrounding Kakashi's reunion with his new family. The ending, it had a little angst to it with regards to Jiraiya and Tsunade, which will be addressed in chapter 62.

As for why I tagged when the romantic lemon begins and ends, I do this as a cautionary procedure out of respect for my readers who do not wish to read a romantic lemon. It's my hope that those readers who do not care for or wish to read a romantic lemon respect that as the author I feel it was necessary for the story. Just as I respect them by providing an indicator of when one is beginning and ending, so they do not have to read it. Thank you all for your understanding on this matter.

Anyway, I hope everyone enjoyed this chapter and I'm anxious to see what your reviews will be for it. I do wish to thank everyone both old and new readers who took the time to review my last chapter. It set a brand new record for me in reviews for any of my chapters. For those of you who did review, you all had a lot to say about it and I'm pleased that this story has such a strong fan base with readers who actually write out well thought-out reviews. Because of that, I enjoy reading many of your reviews, so please leave lots of them, as they do help a writer get a sense of the thoughts and opinions of the fans of a story. They also can help lift the spirits of an author as well. Also, to any readers who are staff members to any C2 communities, please feel free to add my story to your community if you feel it is worthy of it. I won't mind, I swear. I'll even pinkie swear if I need to?

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News:

As some you may know, I recently finished writing the story "Supreme Genetics – Creation of a New Bloodline." I first began co-writing this story with Hefster and it was called "Supreme Genetics – Creation of a Bloodline" back in late October of 2009. I was a huge Hinata fan for Naruto and Heftster was a huge Sakura fan for Naruto in the manga. So, we decided we wanted to try and produce a quality Naruto/Hinata/Sakura story of decent size and length for people to enjoy. Because quite frankly at the time we started writing the tale, neither one of us had read a quality story in which Hinata and Sakura could coexist as a pairing for Naruto and be realistic and believable to the readers.

I suppose the reason for the lack of such stories is because of the vast divide of fans of the canon who want either Hinata as the romantic pairing for Naruto or the fans who want Sakura as the pairing for him. So we wanted to see if it was possible to write a story involving Hinata and Sakura as the pairing for Naruto, while at the same time providing a story that the readers would enjoy and thus "Supreme Genetics – Creation of a Bloodline" was born.

Unfortunately, life pulled Hefster away and he ended up leaving the world of fan fiction midway. I did my best to finish our joint effort on my own, hopefully to everyone's satisfaction. I'm proud of the work I did on this story and I hope that when future readers interested in reading a tale involving Naruto/Hinata/Sakura as a romantic pairing that this story will be a benchmark that all others are compared. I want to thank all of those readers who stuck with this story from the very beginning and all of those readers who have become fans of it since. I appreciate it very much and I will write an epilogue chapter to finish it off probably within the next two weeks.

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In 2010, my fellow author brown phantom initiated a poll asking the following question.

Who is the best Naruto fan fiction writer on this site?

Upon completion of that first poll I finished a very respectable 8th to which I thank all of you who voted for me on that poll very much for making that happen. Now brown phantom has decided to run a second poll asking that same question. So I humbly ask if you feel I'm worthy of being one of your 10 author picks to please place a vote for me on brown phantoms second poll. I thank you in advance for your support and normally I would provide you the links to the profile pages for brown phantom for you to use. However, one of the "oh so wonderful" changes FFNET has recently made is making it more difficult to list a link anywhere even if it's a link on their own freaking site. So just do a quick search for the author, brown phantom. As I said I finished 8th on his first poll and I would be ecstatic if I could improve on that showing, but I urgently need everyone's help to achieve that.

End of News:

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Now, onto everyone's favorite section Kingkakashi's rants on the manga yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!

I have very little positive to say about the following issues of the Naruto manga.

*Warning I do give away some spoilers in my rants, so read at your own risk.

#628 – We return to the battlefield with this chapter and Obito and Madara let loose two powerful katon and kunai attacks onto the Alliance army, but fortunately Naruto's distributed Kyuubi chakra to them protects everyone from harm. But how long can Naruto continue to protect everyone? Obito attempts a sneak attack using his space-time ninjutsu Kamui, which Naruto avoids, but Obito mocks him for his efforts in protecting everyone. Naruto of course responds in his usual hyped of fashion saying "I'm on cloud 9 when my comrades are near me! That's what fuels and empowers me!" We then get some more insults and philosophical banter between Obito and Naruto before Naruto declares "Having no comrades around at all makes my heart ache so much that I can't put it into words period!" This apparently provides inspiration to the entire Alliance army for some reason? Madara then senses Hashirama's chakra and gets all giddy with excitement. The chapter ends with the Juubi finally breaking out of its containment and unleashes its fury upon the Alliance army, while Obito and Kakashi use their Kamui on each other and go off to fight in another dimension. This chapter was alright, but also kind of boring as well. Its saving grace is the cliffhanger at the end of whether or not the Juubi has eliminated the Alliance shinobi?

#629 – Good news, the Alliance army survives thanks to Naruto's chakra protecting all of them yet again. However, in doing so Naruto uses all of his chakra up and is exhausted. Madara is about to have the Juubi unleash another attack onto Naruto seeing as he's now vulnerable. Fortunately, Hinata rallies the Alliance army to get between the Juubi and Naruto, while Sakura attempts to heal him and replenish his chakra. Props to Kishimoto for making Hinata so cool, which is why what he does later on is so disgusting. Anyway, we then cut to Obito and Kakashi's fight and the silver-haired Jounin still can't bring himself to kill his former teammate and friend. Obito mocks Kakashi for this and reveals he knows why Kakashi killed Rin or more to the point Rin had Kakashi kill her. Apparently, the Mist village had captured Rin and implanted Sanbi (Three-Tailed Demon Turtle) into her and was plotting to send her back to the Leaf village, where it would break out and destroy Konoha. Rin purposely threw herself in front of Kakashi's Chidori, as he was attacking a Mist ninja, sacrificing herself to protect her village. Obito goes into another philosophical rant and purposely impales himself onto Kakashi's Chidori, but it doesn't kill him. He points out to Kakashi that his body is hollow and feels nothing, which is confirmed by showing Kakashi the gaping hole his Chidori just made ending the chapter. This wasn't a bad or good chapter per-say, it was just sort of…..there.

#630 – This chapter is a continuation of the Obito/Kakashi debate. Obito attempts to persuade Kakashi to stop fighting and join him in the world the Moon's eye plan will create. Kakashi refuses and calls it a sham and then we switch back to the battlefield. The Juubi begins to transform once again and is close to reaching its final form. The Juubi is starting to get desperate and creates a massive Bijuu bomb and targets Naruto. The Alliance army is starting to crack under the pressure, but Sakura gives a rah, rah speech inspiring them. Shikamaru comes up with a way for the entire Alliance army to protect Naruto from the Bijuu bomb, while he's being healed. You then switch back to Obito and Kakashi still debating with one another. Then you switch back to the battlefield again and the Juubi unleashes his bomb towards Naruto and the army is trying to protect him, but it looks like it's still going to get through when suddenly it disappears. A second later the Edo-Tensei revived Yondaime Minato Namikaze arrives and greets his son Naruto ending the chapter. Overall, this chapter was ok, the inspirational speech from Sakura was a little nauseating, but I should have realized when I first read it that it was a portends of the disgusting evilness of Kishimoto would soon heap upon us.

#631 – Oh my God, this is going to be a long rant! The putrid stench of this chapter rivals #619 and is just….infuriating. The chapter starts off with of course we learn the Minato redirected the Juubi's bomb away using his Hiraishin jutsu. He then approaches Naruto who is still being healed by Sakura and asks if she is his…..girlfriend. Naruto answers "Ummm...the thing is…yeah, you could say that! I mean if you're splitting hairs I guess." I have to say when I read Naruto's answer, at that moment I wanted to have the psychic powers from the 1981 Sci-Fi classic movie "Scanners" and melt Kishimoto's face off. If you haven't seen this early 80's cult-classic, I highly recommend it, as Michael Ironside plays an awesome villain in it. But then Michael Ironside always plays an awesome villain in anything he does.

Anyway, back to this disgusting chapter, so does anyone want to guess Sakura's reaction to Naruto's answer? Why of course it's to physically hurt him, which Minato laughs at (what a nice dad) and he comments that Sakura is eerily similar to Kushina. Once again I'm super-pissed that I don't possess those psychic powers! The First, Second, and Third Hokage's arrive on the scene and Sarutobi reveals that Orochimaru is the one who used the Edo-Tensei on them and that they're here to end this war. Now this brings up an interesting point that a few of you have brought up with me, but I think my reader Kyuubi123 once again summed it up best in his chapter 60 review.

"But the one thing that really angers me is the fact that all four Hokage's are about to join the battle. It's a complete contradiction of what Kishi seemed to be trying to convey in Shippuden which was a changing of the guard form the older generation to the new one. Asuma, Shikaku, and Inoichi all commented on this, leaving the future to the younger generation but now in the 11th hour when Naruto and the younger generation are attempting to take charge and battle without the supervision of their elders Kishi brings back the four Hokage's?!"

Kyuubi123brings up as others have a valid point about this overall storyline contradiction, but unfortunately Kishimoto has dozens of contradictions about many things throughout the Naruto tale.

Back to the chapter, upon seeing Hashirama, Madara looks like he has an orgasm he's so happy. The First Hokage tells Madara he'll deal with him shortly and he the Second, Third, and Fourth Hokage's prepare and entrap the Juubi inside a powerful barrier. Sasuke arrives and Sakura practically wets herself and screams lovingly "Sasuke-kun!" Ino goes into the same fan-girl mode as Sakura and rushes towards Sasuke only to be stopped by Shikamaru and Chouji. Sakura asks Sasuke why he is there and he answers that he's there to help protect Konoha and that furthermore he's going to become its next…..Hokage!

I'm now on the verge of tears of not having those psychic powers! What a freaking insult to Naruto and mark my words here. Even though since day one of the Naruto series that to become Hokage has been Naruto's ultimate, dream, passion, and goal for his life. Don't be surprised if Kishimoto does make Sasuke the Hokage when this story finally ends. It will be the crowning example of Kishimoto's all-encompassing and undying love he has for Sasuke!

The chapter ends with Naruto declaring that he'll be the next Hokage and he, Sasuke, and Sakura stride forth to battle the Juubi together. Team #7 is reunited, all is good now, blah, blah, blah! Pardon me while I go puke because of the atrocity of this chapter!

#632 – Well, the vile stench of the previous chapter continues on into this one. This chapter starts with the rest of the Rookie 9 class joining up with Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura to go battle the Juubi. I'm guessing Kishimoto got a lot of negative feedback regarding Sasuke declaring that he will be the next Hokage. As he now has Kiba announces much to the chagrin of everyone that he'll be the next Hokage and Hinata stating that becoming Hokage should be everyone's goal. I think Kishimoto is trying to deflect some of the criticism from the Naruto fans about Sasuke's statement by sugar-coating it by doing this. Too bad it doesn't work, once the evil Uchiha toothpaste is out of the bottle, it can't be put back in no matter how hard he tries.

After all of this silliness, the Juubi attempts to break out of the barrier the four Edo-Tensei Hokage's have erected by unleashing a Bijuu bomb within it. The barrier holds and the blast is directed back onto the Juubi and funneled up and out of the barrier. Now this should have injured the Juubi severely, but for some unexplained reason it did not, thanks for the explanation Kishi. The First Hokage Hashirama then splits off into five wood clones and leads a four sided attack onto the Juubi. He also traps the Juubi's head and arms in some type of wooden stock like from medieval times. Then the entire Alliance army attacks each side with the Rookie 9 leading the charge head-on. The four wood clones of Hashirama then lowers the barrier so that the attacks can get through, while a fifth clone meets up with Madara, who refuses to fight him and only wants to fight the original. The Juubi in defense suddenly starts spitting out of various sizes from small to gargantuan monsters, which are made up of its body.

Now we get to the start of the true meaning of this chapter, which I like to call "I am Sakura hear me moo….err…I mean roar!" Anyway, it's the typical Sakura complaining that we've heard before about how she was always following in Naruto and Sasuke's footsteps and that they always had to save her. So predictably a Hyaku-Gou diamond seal suddenly appears on Sakura's forehead indicating she has mastered Tsunade's Infuuin Kai or (Secret Mark Seal Release) technique. Which powers Sakura up immensely and she goes on a rampage knocking the crap out of numerous Juubi monsters. After Sakura does all of this, she's standing proud and smug looking back at Naruto and Sasuke.

This is just the smartest thing in the world to do, turn your back on the giant 500ft tall 10-tailed Juubi demon in the middle of the battle just to gloat. As Sakura does this a couple of gargantuan Juubi monsters are about to attack and kill her. Unfortunately, this doesn't happen and once again just like always Naruto and Sasuke swoop in and save her dumb ass. Of course Sakura thanks Sasuke for saving her, but ignores that Naruto also helped. And then the chapter ends with Sakura comically stating to Naruto and Sasuke that she might become the next Hokage. Once again, this is just a cheap deflection on Kishimoto's part trying to get readers to forget about or lessen their angered views about Sasuke's declaration in the previous chapter. The only thing of any worth in this chapter was all of the action scenes, the rest just makes me want to puke again.

#633 – This chapter starts off with both Naruto and Sasuke observing that the other one has increased their skills and powers massively. Team #8 and Team #10 of the Rookie 9 then start kicking ass of a bunch of Juubi monsters as well, not wanting to be overshadowed by the reunited Team #7. Sai then jumps into the fight saying he too is member of Team #7 and attempts an aerial assault using a giant ink bird. It fails and he's shot down by the Juubi's monsters in which I can only guess is some sort of symbolic message from Kishimoto to the readers that Sai really isn't a true member of Team #7. Sai asks Naruto if he can utilize the Kyuubi's chakra again and is told that he can't. Sai devises some muddled plan of attack onto the Juubi's main body and the chapter ends with Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura summoning up a giant toad, snake, and slug. This chapter was alright, but its only meaning was as a vehicle to show off the increased power and skills of the Rookie 9.

#634 – This chapter starts off with Naruto being surprised that it's Gamakichi he's summoned super-sized and not Gamabunta. To which Gamakichi explains that Gamabunta is busy elsewhere and that the toads grow at a different rate than humans. Wow, what a clever idea on Kishimoto's part, where have I seen it before? Oh that's right; I did the same thing over a year ago in chapter 56! I'm not sure which worse, thinking Kishimoto scammed one of my ideas or the thought that he and I think alike? A chill goes down my spine at either possibility, lol. So the chapter starts off with the three summons facing off against an equally super-sized army of Juubi monsters. Naruto and Sasuke along with their summons lead the attack, while Sakura has Katsuya split apart and start healing all of the wounded Alliance shinobi. Naruto and Sasuke combine their attacks of Narutos' giant Rasenshuriken and Sasuke's Susanoo arrow increasing the power of their attacks and nailing the Juubi's main body and it begins to burn in a black Amaterasu flames. The chapter ends with Orochimaru arriving at the battlefield where Tsunade and the rest of the current Kage's had their butt's handed to them by Edo-Tensei Madara. This chapter was decent mainly for the action scenes once again.

#635 – This chapter switches over to the wreck of the Five Kage battle and Orochimaru arrives to find Katsuya attempting to heal all of them. Orochimaru offers to help and the giant slug agrees. Orochimaru has Tsunade bite into Karin to replenish her chakra and soon Tsunade is back to normal. I'm happy about this, as it didn't seem like the Slug Sannin was going to survive considering her body had been torn in half. I'm not thrilled that it was Orochimaru who helped save her, but I'll live with it. Tsunade wants to know why Orochimaru is helping them now and we get some weird nonsensical rambling about Sasuke and wind from the Snake Sannin.

He leaves to go to the Juubi battlefield leaving Tsunade behind to help heal the rest of the Kage's herself. Back to that battle, Naruto wants Sasuke to put out the Amaterasu flame on the Juubi so he can free the other Bijuu within it. Sasuke refuses, but before the argument/fight can proceed the Juubi is able to detach the flesh that is burning away from his body. Sai puts Sakura on the spot and tells her that Sasuke cannot be trusted, but of course Sasuke's #1 fan-girl replies "It's alright, Sasuke-kun came back for us…I'm happy about that and…I trust him." You know, it's scenes like this why I laugh whenever someone says that Sakura should be the romantic pairing for Naruto. Sure only if you want to see him as a cuckold for the rest of his life. The chapter ends with the five current Kage's healed and heading off to the Juubi battlefield and then a cliffhanger final page of Kakashi and Obito apparently killing one another. Overall, this chapter was ok, but it was a filler chapter more than anything, as the story didn't really advance along very much.

#636 – This chapter starts off revealing that the simultaneous death of Kakashi and Obito killing one another was a genjutsu. Then the majority of the rest of the chapter was the final fight between the two with Kakashi apparently landing a killing blow onto Obito. He says Kakashi can win this battle, but will lose the war and uses Kamui to return to the Juubi battlefield. Madara sees Obito wounded and betrays him ending the chapter, as Obito writhes in agony. And that pretty much sums up the whole chapter. It wasn't a bad or good chapter per-say, once again, it was just sort of…..there.

#637 – This chapter begins revealing that Madara is attempting to control Obito to use and help make the elder Uchiha the new Jinchuuriki of the Juubi, but Obito blocks the attempt and Edo-Tensei Minato appears to kill Obito ending the threat. However, it turns out to be a ruse on Obito's part and he blocked Madara's attempt at becoming the new Juubi Jinchuuriki so he could become it instead. When this happens the Juubi is able to break out of its confinement in the stock, ending the chapter. This chapter was alright, but it was mainly a set-up chapter to see what is going to happen next now that Obito has become the supreme Jinchuuriki.

Yes, I'm still thoroughly disgusted that Kishimoto hasn't done anything yet with Hinata's confession to Naruto now reaching 200, yes that's right 200 freaking issues!

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Now I'd like to give a shout out to a couple of stories of quality work that I recommend. I urge all of you to check-out these fine works when you have the time.

Recommendations:

"Kitsune Clan" by roamer79: This story is a gripping Naruto/Hinata pairing tale, in which Naruto had to tap into the Kyuubi's chakra and ended up slaughtering several villagers, when they turn their violence and hatred of him onto Hinata, when she tries to save him. Now Naruto and Hinata are on the run, trying to find a place where they will be happy and safe together. The story is superbly written and the author does an excellent job in the development of all of the characters. The tale has only reached the fourth chapter, so catching up on it will take little time. If you're a fan of Naruto/Hinata, then I'm absolutely positive that you will enjoy reading this tale.

"Godfather's Wish" by sourmoebot: This is a light-hearted and enjoyable Naruto/Hinata tale and is deserving of far more readers and reviews than it has gotten so far. It's a creative story in which Jiraiya has taken his duties as Naruto seriously and raised Naruto on his own, which is a rarity in most stories on this site. I don't want to give away too much of the story, but if you're looking for something fun and different to read in a Naruto story, then this is one you should checkout.

Now please be kind and leave precious valuable reviews on these stories.

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Take it easy and be good!

Kingkakashi

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Etymology: Middle English 1350-1400a.d.

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