A soft breeze wafted in through the open window, gently rustling the drapes. The sound of birds chirping outside contrasted with the sound of light traffic cruising down Grape Street on Sunday morning. The window faced west so the sun did not shine through it and the closed curtains kept the room darkened.
The room's quiescence was interrupted as Raven softly moaned as she woke up. She opened her eyes and saw the she was in her room in the apartment above Azarathia. Still feeling disoriented she began to wonder if everything had been but a dream, a happy dream but a falsehood nonetheless.
As she continued to become lucid she noticed the silky feel of the satin sheets she recently purchased against her bare skin, satin sheets she purchased with a special occasion in mind. Suddenly she realized that she wasn't wearing anything, which was an interesting sensation for her as she didn't sleep au natural. It was then that she heard the soft sound of snoring next to her. She rolled over and saw him.
She smiled when she saw him sleeping peacefully with a subtle smile on his face. She also noticed that the only thing he was wearing was his wedding band, but best of all she knew for certain that none of it had been a dream.
Raven had insisted that they spend their wedding night at home, in their room and in their own bed. Her rationale was that a honeymoon suite in a luxury hotel was too impersonal a place to consummate the union of their love as husband and wife. And consummate they did, and this time the experience was different, as she experienced her first ever orgasm. The experience was electrifying; she remembered the sudden and very intense pleasure which came upon her with no warning. Her entire body tingled and goose bumps appeared on her arms, the sensation was both pleasant and at the same time it was agonizing. Without realizing it she began to scream her husband's name, asking him, no, begging him for more while at the same time she felt the delicious agony course through her body, unsure if she could handle any more of it and yet wishing for it to never end.
Now she understood all the fuss people made over sex.
The grandfather clock down the hall chimed 11 times. Raven gently sat up in the bed, not wishing to disturb the slumber of her green prince. Their flight to the Caribbean wouldn't be leaving until 5 that afternoon and their bags were already packed. Her head ached slightly and the two empty bottles of sparkling wine she saw in their respective ice buckets were the cause. Raven had never been a social drinker and she knew that last night she consumed far more than she normally did, which is why she needed to use the restroom.
She levitated and glided to it, her plan was to return to bed and snuggle up with him for a while longer, before finally getting up and getting ready for the trip.
As she emerged from the restroom she found that he was still asleep and glided her naked form back into the bed, curling up next to him. She rested her head on his shoulder and sighed happily as she closed her eyes. As she did that she heard a giggle in the deepest recesses of her mind. The voice was familiar, too easily recognized. Each of her emoticlones had a unique voice. Some, like wisdom and knowledge, sounded almost just like her, while others did not.
She heard the giggle again. This giggle wasn't high pitched; in fact it was the opposite. It was deep and guttural. That voice belonged to only one emoticlone: Rage.
Since when did Rage giggle?
Raven checked on her husband, who remained sound asleep. She decided that a quick side trip into Nevermore was in order … she had to find out what Rage was up to and why she was giggling, not only because she had intellectual curiosity but also because it sounded so creepy.
Raven pushed her bedcovers aside and sat up, adopting the Lotus position while completely in the buff. She closed her eyes and began to recite her mantra. Within a few moments she was standing in the green meadow in her mind. It was blooming with flowers, more like an explosion of them. The first thing she heard was joyful laughter. It wasn't Rage she heard, it was someone else, though she wasn't sure who it was, though she had her suspicions. She didn't have to wait long, as the laughing emoticlone soon made her appearance. It was Happy. And she was delirious. The emoticlone materialized in front of her and began to do cartwheels.
"We're married! He married us! He really did!"
"Did you have any doubt he would?" Raven replied.
"Of course not! That's Uncertainty's and Fear's job, not mine! If you're looking for them, good luck, no one's seen them since you married our Beastie Boo!"
"I'm not looking for them … I'm looking for Rage."
"She's somewhere around, I'm not sure where, cuz I don't care … I'm happy!"
"That's pretty much obvious … see you later."
"Bye, bye Ravie-poo, kiss Beastie Boo for me!"
The emoticlone vanished.
"Ravie-poo? Beastie boo? Is this the effect sex has on me? It turns me into a dithering idiot?"
Raven peered through the meadow, looking for Rage. There was no sign of the four eyed emoticlone, but she did hear the sound of martial art yells. She looked in the direction if the "hiyahs" and saw a familiar green caped emoticlone performing a kata. She calmly approached the emoticlone that Cyborg had once dubbed "Brave" and the warrior version of herself completed her form and returned to the ready position. When she saw Raven approach she ran to meet her, raising her right hand in an all too familiar gesture.
"High Five, Raven!"
The blue clad demoness reluctantly and very half heartedly raised her own hand and Brave completed the celebratory gesture with loud smack.
"We did it! Beastie Boo is all ours now!"
"His name is Garfield."
"And Beastie Boo is your pet name for him; it has been since you were a teen."
"No it's not."
"Yes it is, don't deny it Raven, you know that we are you, if we call him that, it's because of you."
"Why would I call him by such a silly pet name?"
"Because you wuv him?" Brave teased her. Raven rolled her eyes.
"I … 'wuv' him? Since when do I do cute? Isn't that more Starfire's thing?"
Brave ignored her challenge and instead vigorously punched Raven on the shoulder, laughing as she did it.
"Ow! … What was that for?"
"The orgasm, baby! Oh man, that was good, I thought we were gonna die, he just kept going and going like a green energizer bunny! And he was a quivering mess when we were done with him too. You should have seen his face, he looked like …"
"I was there, in case you've forgotten." Raven interrupted.
"Yeah, you were … so why are you here and not with him?"
"He's asleep and I came to see Rage."
Brave grinned. "About time, all she keeps blabbering about is angry sex … which sounds hot, if you ask me … so is that next for us?"
"No, it's not … so where is she?"
Brave pointed towards a small slope. "She's on the other side of that hill."
"Thanks." Raven replied as Brave faded away. As she glided up the hill she wondered if this was going to become a recurring event every time she made love with her husband. When she reached the top of the hill she found Rage. The four eyed emoticlone was lying on the pasture, her arms folded behind her head as she stared at the blue sky and was humming happily to herself. She noticed Raven's arrival and grinned, her serrated teeth glimmering in the sunshine.
"Good job, Raven … now that's what I call getting laid."
"There's more to a relationship than sex."
"Yeah, yeah … love, affection … all that bullshit, I'll leave that to the other girls, like Happy and Love … say, have you seen Lust anywhere … that girl and I have a lot to talk about."
"Like what?"
"Oral sex, for starters."
"No." Raven snapped at her.
"Aw, c'mon … it'll be fun."
"No, I won't engage in Sodomy."
"Now you sound like Knowledge …"
"It's not up for discussion."
"You know what you are? … You're a prude."
"No, I am not. Gar and I are working on a healthy sexual relationship, there's nothing prudish about that."
"You make it sound so clinical. You weren't so intellectual last night while he banged us. You kept screaming his name and telling him not to stop … who do you think was saying that Raven?" Rage smiled seductively.
"Yes, I know, it was you."
"You bet it was. You owe me, big time. I subdued all those party poopers who don't know how to enjoy a good roll in the hay."
"I don't need you to enjoy intercourse with my husband."
"Yeah, you go ahead and tell yourself that, just don't forget, since he's your husband, then he's mine too. You don't expect me to let Timid be in charge? Every time she sees his boner she freaks out. What does she think it's for anyway?"
"Gar is not a sexual plaything."
"He is for me, sister. As far as I'm concerned, love doesn't have anything to do with it."
Raven groaned while she face palmed. "Why do I always have to keep you in check? Why can't you just cooperate for once?"
"Because one, I'm Rage and two, I love getting laid … and so do you."
"Don't make me repress you."
"You wouldn't dare … if you do, sex will be dull again and if it is he might have to find someone else to please him, and you don't want that."
"You exaggerate, he would never do that."
Rage smiled maliciously. "Wanna bet?"
"You're crazy."
Rage smirked. "One word, Raven: Alexa."
Raven returned to the real world with a jerk. She was sweating and shaking. Garfield was still asleep. She slipped back under the covers, trying to calm herself, but no matter how hard she tried, there was a single word on her mind, a name that haunted her: Alexa.
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The limousine pulled up to the gate that blocked the entrance to the private hangar section at Jump City Airport. A security guard with a clipboard emerged from the small gatehouse and approached the driver's window, which slid down silently, revealing the driver, which was a certain Victor Stone, once known to the locals as Cyborg. After checking his clipboard the guard raised the barrier, allowing the car to pass through.
Vic guided the limo down a road that passed by several hangars and he pulled into a parking spot in front of a hangar with a large number 7 stenciled on its door. As he parked the car all the limo's doors popped open and the passengers emerged: Victor and Karen from the front while Kole, Jericho, Jinx, Kid Flash, Nightwing, Starfire and Nightstar emerged from the rear. While Vic popped the trunk open and retrieved some luggage from it Gar stepped out of the limo and offering his hand to his brand new wife he helped Raven out of the limo.
As they entered the hangar they were greeted by the crew of yet another Wayne Enterprises business jet. Raven used her empathic powers to scan the crew and to her relief she sensed nothing unusual.
"Welcome aboard." The captain greeted them. "We can depart anytime at your convenience."
"Alright y'all, have a great honeymoon!" Cyborg cheered. "And we're sorry about the parties."
"Don't do anything I wouldn't do … oh what am I saying … do whatever you want … it's your honeymoon." Jinx grinned. "And don't worry about the store, Wally and I run it while you're gone."
"And I'll save you a ton on delivery fees, since I'll hand deliver everything myself." Wally chortled.
"But he'll make up for it by eating all your food and then some." Jinx laughed.
The Logans shared a chuckle and hugged their friends goodbye, after which they boarded the jet. Cyborg and company watched the jet pull away from the hanger and taxi away. They stayed put and observed the airplane barrel down the runway and take off like a silver bird, soaring into the sky until it was no longer visible.
"They did it." Nightwing beamed. "They actually got married."
"Don't act so surprised bird boy, we all knew it was inevitable, who else but our Beast could tame and eventually win our little demoness's heart? In my opinion the only surprise is that it took this long to happen." Jinx smirked. "Though I think she still should have had a swing with that stripper dude, he was hot."
Her remark earned her a collective glare. "Sheesh, I was just kidding."
"They look very happy." Jericho signed.
"Well, I guess we'd better head back to the hotel." Nightwing remarked.
Cyborg cleared his throat before replying.
"Before we go, there's something we need to talk about."
"What is it Cyborg?" Kole asked.
"I know we haven't talked about it, but we all know that the Brotherhood of Evil will be returning. The Doom Patrol has already taken off to search for more clues about them."
"So what are you proposing?" Kid Flash asked.
"Bumblebee and I are going to restart Titans East, and we want you guys to join us."
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"Dr. Pontone?"
"Yes?" The scientist with the white lab coat replied.
Her assistant tossed a copy of People magazine in front of the scientist. There was a beaming photo of Brad Pitt and his girlfriend du jour on the cover. The scientist picked up the gossip rag and smirked.
"So Brad has a new squeeze? I care about this, because?"
"It's not that; turn to the page with the sticky note."
The scientist rolled her eyes but did open the magazine. As she opened it a small laugh escaped her lips. "Well … I'll be damned … he got married."
"And to the witch … did you ever meet her, Alexa?"
Dr. Alexa Pontone quickly read the article, which was accompanied by a glam shot of the happy couple, which Cyborg distributed to the media as part of an official press release.
"No, I never met her … though sometimes I feel as if I did. He wouldn't stop talking about her. What do you think of her, Cecilia?"
"She looks kind of weird … I mean, she's gray and has purple hair. But even if she was normal I'd say she's kind of homely. He is cute though. Did you ever date him back in college?"
"I did once … at the end of our senior year. I don't know why I waited so long."
"That would have been cool … to have a superhero boyfriend … so you guys were just friends then, huh?"
"Friends with benefits." Alexa smirked.
"Oooh! Sounds hot … so, is he good in the sack?"
Alexa closed the magazine. "I've had better rolls in the hay … but he was nice … you know, the kind of guy you could settle down with."
"So why didn't you?"
Alexa snorted. "I was 22 years old, settling down was the last thing on my mind. All I was thinking about back then was grad school and getting laid, and not necessarily in that order … still … seeing this wedding announcement … it makes me wonder if maybe I should have stayed in touch with him … Garfield was a sweet guy. I think he deserves better than that witch. I guess I'll never see him again." She replied with a hint of sadness in her voice.
"Oh well, no point crying over lost opportunities. Oh, you got some mail too, something really official looking from England." Cecilia replied as she handed Alexa an envelope. The blond opened it and read it.
"Well I'll be damned." Alexa blurted. "It looks like I'll be attending a special event in London."
"You get all the cool junkets." Cecilia grinned.
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Raven and Gar waved as the boat pulled away from the small pier where they were standing, its outboard motor buzzing as it sped away from the private island where they were deposited. A warm briny breeze blew off of the azure Caribbean sea and caressed their short and t-shirt clad figures.
"This is much nicer than Isla Poblada." Garfield joked.
"It's also a lot smaller, and there's no jungle. Shall we take a look at our home for the next week?"
The Chromatically Challenged Couple™ walked up to the bungalow that stood proudly on the beach like a miniature Taj Mahal. They were told that at high tide the waves would lap against the front porch. The interior was practical yet elegant. There were hammocks on the deck and ceiling fans throughout the open air house kept the air circulating.
The sun was beginning to set and another boat would soon be by with their dinner. Even thought their tiny island was private they could pick up the phone and have just about anything delivered to them via speed boat. The concierge recommended that they request a lifeguard if they wished to swim in the ocean. Even though Gar told the man he could become a fish the concierge insisted that it was highly recommended and was included in the cost of the vacation.
"Like we need a stupid lifeguard. C'mon Rae, put on your bathing suit and meet me outside." He said as he dashed back out the door.
Raven opened her suitcase and slipped on a purple bikini, which Starfire gave her for the trip. The swim suit wasn't terribly revealing and she admired her figure in the mirror. She had to admit that the swim suit did flatter her figure and remembering that Gar was waiting for her outside she dashed out the door.
The sight that greeted her was not what she was expecting. A huge green killer whale was waiting for her in the shallow water. Looking down in the sand she saw something written in it in large letters and she quickly realized that it was his work. It simply said. "Hop on"
Raven levitated and glided over to him, landing on the whale's back. As soon as she grabbed his dorsal fin he took off into the deeper waters, swimming quickly as he skimmed the water's surface, bobbing up and down. As they pulled away from the shore Raven's laughter could be heard bouncing over the water.
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"Well … we're home." Raven announced as she unlocked the back door to Azarathia.
"Fun time always goes by fast." He replied.
Raven walked over to her computer and saw that Jinx had indeed been on top of things while they were gone, as there were no unprocessed orders to handle. There was a post-it note stuck to the screen and Raven peeled it off. The note read: "Gar, call Dr. Washam at the university." There was also a letter addressed to Garfield from the United Nations.
Raven handed both the note and the letter to her husband. He opened the letter first and quickly read it. With a huge grin on his face he handed the letter to his wife, who also read it quickly.
"I don't believe it! You're finally going to get recognition for developing the vaccine!" She gushed. "In a ceremony in London! … and it's next month."
In an unusual outburst, Raven hugged her husband.
"Works for me." He grinned. "I guess I'll have to arrange for a sub to cover for me at school while we're in London."
He looked at the sticky note. "I wonder what Dr. Washam wants?"
He picked up a phone and dialed the Dr. Washam's number at the university. Raven busied herself checking out the new merchandise that arrived during their absence. After a few minutes she overheard Gar say in a clearly dejected voice "Yes, Dr. Washam, I understand" before he hung up the phone. Using her empathic abilities she sensed a tidal wave of disappointment wash over him.
"Gar, what's the matter?"
He sat down on a chair.
"I lost my job."
"What?"
"Dr. Washam said that the regents had a meeting and decided that I'm a security risk. They're afraid that I'll be a target and endanger the school."
"Gar … they can't do that ... can they?"
"They can, my contract has a security provision in it. Dr. Washam said that he heard that Gotham State is still interested in me. But I don't want to go there."
Raven sat down next to him and wrapped an arm around his shoulder. He slouched and stared at the floor, sitting in silence. Suddenly out of the blue, Raven kissed him.
"I have an idea." She blurted out.
"You do?"
She stood back up and walked to one of the store's side windows, opening the blinds.
"The building next door is for sale." She remarked.
Gar joined her at the window.
"Rae, are you thinking what I am?"
They both stepped out of Azarathia to the sidewalk. Next door to Raven's building was another structure with a "For Sale" sign in front. The building was a single story structure and was unoccupied. It's previous tenant was a ice cream shop that had gone out of business two years before. The building's façade needed some work, but otherwise it was in good shape.
"Do you think it's big enough?" She asked.
"I think it's perfect." He replied.
"Then we'll make an offer on it this afternoon."
He pecked her on the cheek. "Lucky for me I married a rich girl." He smirked.
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Two weeks later …
Raven and Gar admired the shiny new storefront from the sidewalk. The building's exterior was now in perfect condition after the major remodeling on the outside. They did have it painted a bright white and the new sign on the front of the building stood out in sharp contrast: "Dr. Garfield Logan, Veterinarian."
They entered the building and toured it. There were two examination rooms, a lab, an operating room and the kennels were in the back, which Gar took special pride in, saying: "Nothing but the best for my patients."
They walked back to the reception area and Raven flipped over the "open" sign, officially opening Gar's practice for business. She kissed him and headed back to Azarathia, promising to join him for lunch.
Gar sat down at the reception desk and stared out the window. Flyers had been mailed out to nearby neighborhoods. All he could do now was to wait for patients to show up. Time passed by slowly that morning and he occupied himself reading some veterinary journals while he sat at the receptionist's desk. He would hire a receptionist once business picked up. Just as he finished reading his fourth journal he heard the door chime and looked up.
A young girl who looked no older than 8 years of age entered the reception. Her hair was dirty and her clothes looked slightly worn. She was carrying a small mongrel puppy in her arms.
"Hello there." He greeted her. "What can I do for you?"
"Finn isn't feeling well." She replied in a small and sad voice.
"Well, don't you worry; I'll take care of Finn. What's your name?"
"My name is Sally. You're Dr. Beast Boy, right?"
He smiled as he replied.
"My name isn't Beast Boy anymore. Some people call me Changeling, but you can call me Dr. Logan."
"I like Dr. Beast Boy better."
Gar chuckled.
"So do a lot of other people. Let's take Finn to the examination room and see what's wrong with him. Does Finn live with you?"
"I found him yesterday at the park. My mommy says he's too sick to live with us."
"We'll just have to heal him then, won't we Sally?"
Gar took Finn into one of the examination rooms and before doing anything he morphed into a dog and had a one on one chat with Finn. As soon as he was done he morphed back into his human form, while young Sally watched wide eyed.
"Finn says his stomach hurts. He might have worms, which is likely as he's a stray. Sally, I'll give you some medicine for him and he'll need some shots. But first he needs a bath, come with me."
Gar carried Finn to a large sink in the kennel area and gave him a quick bath. After drying and brushing the puppy he placed a flea collar around his neck. He then took him back to the examination room and gave him a rabies and distemper shot. He then went to his medicine cabinet and retrieved a plastic bottle of pills which he gave to her.
"Give him one pill a day and just one a day until they're all gone. You will remember to do that, right?"
"Yes Dr. Beast Boy, I will."
Sally pulled three crumpled dollar bills out of her pocket and handed them to Gar.
"Is that enough money?" She asked as Raven walked into the room.
"No charge, you can keep your money Sally." He grinned as he handed the money back to her.
"Actually, how about we charge her one dollar?" Raven, who had suddenly appeared for their lunchtime date, asked as she intercepted a single dollar bill.
Gar gave her a puzzled look before turning back to Sally.
"If Finn doesn't get better in a few days you just bring him back here, OK?"
"Thank you Dr. Beast Boy, you're a good doctor."
Sally walked out the door and waved goodbye through the window before walking away, carrying Finn in her arms. Gar turned to his wife and arched an eyebrow.
"One dollar?" He asked.
Raven smiled at him, smoothening the crumpled dollar on the edge of his desk as she replied.
"I'm gonna frame it. It is the first dollar you've earned as a vet."
"Oh yeah, I forgot about that. Hopefully it won't be the only one I earn today."
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A shorter chapter this time, but a long mailbag!
LSUABW - "I still love the storyline here! I hope Cy and Bee get back together! And I honestly knew that you would make the bachelor and bachelorette parties end in disaster! Haha great chapter!"
Ending in disaster is always more fun!
js12601 - "another great chapter. My favorite part was the two of them finding each other at the tower. it would have been funny if they did elope without anyone knowing. can't wait for more."
I thought that having them finding each other was a nice contrast to the sordidness of the parties, which really weren't their style.
checkit789 - "Beastboyand Raven are finally married, Cyborg is considering taking Bumblebee back, and four more chapters of who knows what! I can't wait for you to update!"
Well, four more chapters based on the original story. There will plenty more after that.
Tasa - "I really liked this chapter, I understand why BB feels this way about marrying raven but I know it'll work out for them! I also really hope cy and bee get together again soon. Thanks for this great chapter, cant wait too read more!"
The funny thing is that in the comics Bumblebee is married ... to The Herald!
ninjannikki - "Love the story! It's really good. I can't wait to see what happens next."
I hope I didn't keep you waiting too long!
The Cretin - "Well...those parties went well...D Guess the others didn't plan ahead as well as they thought. "In the comics, they were never clear about whether or not BB and Raven did the deed"...true but that doesn't mean we can't think ;) In a way, its better that way. It kinda suits them ..."
I still think they didn't do it in the comics. But that's just me.
TW - "Noticed you changed a few things from the original wedding scene."
The biggest change was that I had Steve and Rita change roles. In the original story he was the unhappy camper.
Anoymous136 – "I'm glad you're still keeping in Coraline. I was starting to love her character, well, the little I saw of her. I mean she DISOBEYED UP TO ALFRED! Only the daughter of Raven could do that. "
I have to confess, Coraline is not my OC. I use her with permission from the great Sir Alwick.
DeeThom - "This was a really good chapter and, for once, that's all I have to say. Great job!"
I left you speechless! Well, we can't let that happen again!
titanfan45 - "I know this is just a story, but I was still proud of both Raven and Garfield. Raven stood her ground with Wonder Woman (so much for them not being at odds!) and then she stood up to Jinx who was trying her best to lure Raven into a situation she most definitely did not want to be in. Garfield was at his best when he stopped the dancer from impersonating Raven any further. I think he showed great restraint by not going Beast on his friends for setting that fiasco up in the first place. I really enjoyed the part where he and Raven found each other and spent the night with each other rather than continue the traditional drunken antics usually found at Bachelor/Bachelorette parties."
I didn't have a Bachelor party, and I doubt I missed out on anything.
Bluedog197 - "DUDE THAT WAS AWESOME take that wonder woman how dare you try to take raven away from changling and i mean whats wrong in owning a bookshop way to go raven show em who's boss and it was sweet you made them meet on the roof top and i loved the wedding part with rita becauseshe was all like and i qoute (Oh, so his name was good enough to take after all) just got to love em so much right. but overall great fantastic awesome story can't wait to see what happens next."
I've always thought that Wondie has a chip on her shoulder.
JOHNXgambit - "great chapter its nice to see them both stick to their guns at the party and its always funny to see raven kick her own ass, BTW don't worry I still remember her from the first time around"
She's being a lot more introspective in this rewrite. Lots of trips to Nevermore to sort things out.
WishToBeUSomeday - "I absolutely love this story u did a nice job making it so like how many chapters are u gonna make till u stop and plz make it alot cuz i adore this story. :D"
I'm not sure, but I'm guessing 30-40, plus some have asked me to post the original eding as well. If I do that it will be from 50-60 chapters
Manga154 - "I actually expected BB's first lover to show up at the gentalmens club... But the raven look alike was a curve ball I didn't see."
Well, Alexa has a Ph.D, so I wouldn't expect her to be a pole dancer.
krostovikraven1 - "Loved how the bachelor parties ended. way better than what their friends had planned for them. and Raven will be able to have kids, right? if at all, Rita is expecting that. maybe that would be an easier way to get to love her new daughter in law and it would make Garfield so happy. how come Cyborg doesnt know who Nightwing is? Is Garfield the only one that knows? Loved the wedding. glad nothing exploded."
Why does Cyborg not know? It's mostly a wedge device between him and the others.
ferlion - "good stuff. Close to divergent time.I'm kinda digging Raven's new backstory in the new 52 though. I think I kinda like it more."
I'd say that the divergence has already started. We have Alexa in the picture!
greenhatred77 - "great chapter, very nice and very familiar. i remember this from the last time this story was up. i like the story and i look forward to what other changes you make to it. I noticed that you also deleted animal attraction, is there a reason why you deleted it? That story was in my top ten favorite stories. i'm just curious"
As I already mentioned to you in a PM, I just didn't like Animal Attraction. It wasn't original enough for my taste. It was too Fullmetal Alchemist.
gabylokita41 - "They should have taken him to Disneyland haha both their parties were disasters tho ur right gar's party was worse haha i love where this story is going and i have to say its way better reading it the second time around i loved it the first time but im loving it more this time keep up the good work :)"
Thanks, I wish I had been taken to Disneyland!
Hairul The Nightrage Beast -"**** YEAH ANOTHER NEW CHAPTER YES! THE WAIT WAS KILLING ME! Well then, now we know why Wonder Woman wanted Raven in the JLA and smart move of Rae to decline the invite, WW had an ulterior motive on recruiting Raven, JLA Zatanna or Dr Fate not good enough for you guys?"
There's no way Raven would have accepted WW's offer.
Shadico - "What extremely awesome timing, both yours and Lamont's Bachelor and Bachelorette parties for BB and Rae were posted recently, haha. Felt kinda surreal reading them back to back. Loved BB and Rae's reaction to both of their outings, and the fact that they found each other on the tower was just awesome. Also really glad that Cy might be getting his happy ending as well, hope Karen treats him right this time. Also, go BB, rawr! Haha. Here's to hoping BB's little soldiers are overpowered as all hell and overly successful on the first attempt, because I am absolutely shamelessly hoping for Spawnies, and soon! ahahahaha."
I did spill the beans regarding offspring, didn't I?