A Loser's Quest

by Mika the Supreme Ninja

Trauma changes you. In this timeline, All Might never escaped the Press to talk to Izuku and thus he never got One for All and so, without the support of All Might, the Trauma of the Attack, Bakugo's abuse and life in general, something in Izuku Midoria... snaps. Only this time, he snaps out. Out of obssesion and doubt, and on to a path to make himself more then a deku.

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Should I rewrite this story? I realize, rereading it, I fell into some very specific tropes and cliches I do not like. I made Izuku op and kind of annoying...
So tell me, should I rewrite it with a softer more realistic approach?

I will put a poll up, please tell me what you think there or in the reviews.

Be honest, be brutal if you see issues that need to be fixed?

For example not regurgitating the og plot, and so on. You would be amazed how much you can learn over a short time...

I would keep the first chapter though, it was well done.