Fighting Swords like the Egyptians
Out far in the hot desert where an ancient pyramid stands and inside showing a dark room where Menace and her fateful servant, Setra, on top of a dome-like structure with torched spears around and looking down at their newest slave.
"My word, princess, I was not expecting to meet this young man so soon after your fight that night." Setra giggled.
"Indeed, even though he's unconscious, he still put up a fight against my enslavement spell. His mind is quite the stubborn one, but in the end he's just like any other men, falling under my spell and becoming my slave." Menace smiled.
The new servant she is talking about is the unconscious Scar, laying down on a stone bed-like table wearing a completely different outfit similar to that of an Egyptian man who are servants to their rulers.
Menace chanted the spell and a few dark-purple ghosts appear flying around them and they enter Scar's body.
"I'm still surprise that you were able to spot him back at the riverbank, Setra." Menace said.
"Yeah, I figure you want a little revenge on this guy for hurting your sexy body. Doing whatever you want with the guy is getting some erotic ideas!" Setra squealed.
"Sheesh, such a pervert as always. Right, Menace?" Melona asked as she appears inside the pyramid transforming from her slime form.
"Ah, Melona, didn't expect to see you visiting me today." Menace said.
"What do you want from us now, slimy bitch?" Setra asked, snarling. While he does lovey sexy women like his beloved princess, there are certain little few that he dislikes in the world like Melona.
"Cool it, pervert, I'm not here to cause trouble for you two." Melona assured as she walks up the structure and saw Scar.
"Hey, isn't he that male warrior who entered the Queen's Blade tournament upon his first match?" Melona asked surprise.
"That's right, he's also the one who managed to defeat me in battle the night I had the family taken hostage by those demons I hired." Menace mentioned.
"Damn, never thought you grab yourself a special man like this one." Melona commented, reaching out her hand to touch Scar's scar but a suddenly little explosion blew her hand away.
"Careful, we're performing an enslavement ritual, powerful stuff." Menace warned jokily.
"Wouldn't want you to get hurt now, do we?" Setra asked sarcastically.
"Listen, Menace, just remember the only reason you are able to do all that is because the Swamp Witch resurrected you, we have a mission to do." Melona reminded the desert princess.
"I care little of what the Swamp Witch wants, my only goal is to restore the kingdom of Amara and make it better than it was before." Menace determined.
"Sheesh, are you still hung up that? Just let it go, that kingdom whatever its name is has been dead for a long time now." Melona annoyed that Menace just do whatever she pleases despite the face that she's supposes to be taking orders from the Swamp Witch.
Melona then transform into a different woman. She has sun kissed tan skin, Silver with multicolored highlights, and red eyes. She wears a fishnet unitard with metal caps, an ornate belt with rings in varying sizes, and a small dark blue blue cloth with a light blue Amaran symbol on it. On her arms she has blue and gold metal armbands on her upper arm, and blue and gold bracers with a golden ornament of a creature going down it. On her legs she has blue and gold metal ankle-bands. Breasts sizes: G-cup.
"After all, weren't you betrayed by this woman who you said was the reason for your kingdom's downfall?" Melona asked smirking.
Menace's eyes widen of anger and latch her cloth toward Melona's neck making her flinch from the sudden action.
"Don't you EVER take that form again, or else I will kill you!" Menace threatened with the dead seriousness in her eyes.
"R-Right, I'll be going now. See you later!" Melona said morphing into a slime leaving the pyramid.
Menace growls a little remembering how she was betrayed by Anarista, the only person she ever cared for besides herself, the mentor she once knew turned out to be a spy for another kingdom and letting the princess die along when her kingdom was conquered.
"Princess, I think it's working now!" Setra announced, snapping Menace out of her anger thoughts of the past.
"Oh good, now I have a very powerful young man at my side." Menace excited.
"Now, wake up my new servant and serve your princess for all of eternity." Menace whispered in Scar's ear and gentle kiss his cheek.
Scar's eyes snap open revealing them to be lifeless pale with thin red circles inside the pupils.
(Far from Menace's Pyramid)
"Come on, where are you, Scar?" Nanael asked worry as she flies around the desert trying to find any clues about Scar.
"Damn it, if I knew something like this was gonna happen I would've at least done something!" Nanael panicked as she remembers how Scar went missing.
(Flashback, One Day Ago)
Leina is sitting on the edge of the cliff with her armor damage after getting beaten by her big sister, Claudette and suddenly the edge gave in probably from Claudette's lightning strike.
"LEINA!" Everyone shouted.
Scar sprint toward the cliff leaving his sword behind and running past Claudette, in an instant he grabs Leina's arm and pull her in throwing the blonde woman at Risty.
"Scar!" Leina shouted.
"Don't worry about me! I'll meet up with you guys later!" Scar yelled as he falls into the ravine.
Later, Leina and the girls went down to the ravine to search for Scar hoping he's okay but there was no sign of his body anywhere, Leina kept looking and looking hoping to find Scar before even thinking about giving up on him. She then stops when Echidna grab her shoulder.
"Don't worry about our Black Knight, kid, a little fall like this won't kill him." Echidna said.
"I know the kid is tough and all, but I'd be surprise that he's sleeping in a rushing river like this." Risty pointed out.
"Which is why we're going to rest up for the day and continue our search tomorrow. That is if the Thunder General still wants to take Leina home." Echidna turned around seeing Claudette a few feet away from the group standing near a tree.
"Claudette…" Leina said softly, knowing she must've worry her big sister more than she realize that she was about to lose her young sister.
"…I'll let you go." Claudette said, shocking Leina.
"You… you really mean it?" Leina asked, Claudette nod.
"Scar saved your life, strong warriors with a dark past and a kind heart are very rare in the world. And you two appear to be very close, so I'll honor him by letting you go do whatever you want, but should we ever cross path again before the main Tournament start, I'll force you to come back home." Claudette explained her reason and turn around, leaving the group.
Leina smiles widely and took two exciting steps forward before shouting.
"Thank you, big sister! And I promise to get stronger, so I won't lose the next time we fight!" Leina promised.
Claudette continue walking without giving her a reply, but her mouth forms a small smile on her face.
(Present)
"And after that, we rest in the forest for the night then Echidna I go on ahead searching for him in the air, but it's been hours and still no sign on him." Nanael winced.
Then Nanael spotted something on the sandy ground, realizing there are two women walking through the desert.
"Hey, maybe those two can help me." Nanael hoped as she flies down to the travelers.
The two travelers the Angel girl is about to speak with are Tomoe and Shizuka are they are making their way to the Capital for the Queen's Blade Tournament.
"Hey, are you two new in these lands?" Nanael called out, getting their attention.
"Whoa, a real-life Angel! This place has everything!" Shizuka excited.
"Hello there, I am Tomoe, the Warrior Priestess, and this is Shizuka, a ninja." Tomoe introduced themselves.
"Oh, you two must be here for the Queen's Blade Tournament." Nanael figured.
"Yeah, we are though I think we might be lost as we were trying to make our way to the capital." Shizuka stated.
"I see, anyway, have you two seen a boy name Scar around her by any chance?" Nanael asked.
"Scar, you mean the Black Knight and first male of the Queen's Blade Tournament, we only saw him from the first fight." Tomoe answered.
"Damn it, so much for that." Nanael winced.
"Did something happened to him?" Shizuka asked.
(With Menace)
"Wow, I never knew he saw such wonderful hands." Menace moaned as the brainwashed Scar is giving Menace a back message.
"I'm not surprise consider he has big muscles for just being 18." Setra commented floating around.
Then the waterfall came down from the ceilings and revealing Tomoe, Shizuka, and Nanael traveling together.
"Oh, looks like we got ourselves some visitors." Setra informed as Menace stop Scar and look at the image.
"Huh, what strange clothes those two are wearing and why is there an Angel with them?" Menace asked.
"My guess is from the looks of it, this one is more of the tight type, but she can't fool me. I know I there's body waiting to be free from under all that red cloth." Setra examined Tomoe then look to Shizuka.
"On the other hand, this one likes to show off her bastard skin. I like to Alabasta her, she's lethal!" Setra chuckled perverted.
"Hold back your erotic taste, Setra, I need to know if they make good servants for me." Menace reminded her floating ring.
"Of course, my dear princess." Setra said and look at Scar.
"How about we sent your new servant against them, test the girls to see if they are worthy to serve you and maybe you can get the Angel as a bonus too!' Setra suggested.
"Brilliant, Setra!" Menace smiled.
(With Nanael, Tomoe, and Shizuka)
"And that's why I'm out here trying to find Scar." Nanael finished explained to Tomoe and Shizuka of why the angel is out in the desert.
"I see, it was very noble of him to save Leina." Tomoe complimented.
"Yeah, I just hope Echidna doesn't let her snake bite me if I don't find him." Nanael shivered from the thought.
"Echidna, who's that?" Shizuka asked.
She's one Scar's friends, though I think she's the lover from the way I seen those getting closer to each other." Nanael answered.
"Oh, I see, he has a love interest." Tomoe said, a little sad.
"Aw, don't feel bad, Tomoe, I'm sure the guy won't mind having to girlfriends." Shizuka teased.
"Wh-What are you talking about? I'm not in love with him or anything!" Tomoe protested, but her cheeks are blushing like crazy.
"Yeah, sure you aren't." Shizuka said.
"Wow, it looks like Scar may have found the heart of a foreign girl without even knowing." Nanael laughed a little.
"I told you, I am NOT in love with him!" Tomoe claimed, yet her heart won't stop beating whenever she thinks about Scar.
Then a sandstorm came at them out of nowhere as they cover their eyes to keep the sand from getting into their eyes as this only lasted for a few seconds, three suddenly finding themselves in front of the ancient ruin unknowing that they were brought here.
"Sheesh, what was up with that sandstorm?" Nanael confused as she dust some of the sand off her hair and dress.
"This is the capital?" Tomoe asked.
"Nope, this is just some ancient ruin though I never been here before." Nanael answered.
"What, then no water, I'm so thirsty!" Shizuka winced.
"Calm yourself, Shizuka, I'm sure we'll get some water once we reach a city." Tomoe hoped.
"And besides, it's not like rain clouds are going to appear out of nowhere." Nanael shrugged.
Then suddenly dark clouds appearing in the sky.
"What the… I was being sarcastic!" Nanael gasped.
"Be careful, those aren't rain clouds. I can sense a wicked present." Tomoe warned, but she heard Shizuka screaming as she is being taken away by the sand.
"Shizuka!" Tomoe screamed, hoping her ninja friend will be okay as the sandstorm starts to get stronger.
"Hey, I think I see someone up there!" Nanael pointed at the top of the ruin structure.
Tomoe look to where Nanael is pointing at, to her surprise it's a person wearing a familiar pitch-black armor and it's not just any person either.
"Is that Scar, the Black Knight?" Tomoe asked.
"Scar, no way! You're alive, I'm so happy!" Nanael cheered, then realize her tone. "Well, it's not like I actually care about you or anything." Her cheeks blushed.
"Hold on, something doesn't feel right about him. His aura is the same as the sandstorm." Tomoe sensed the wicked present earlier consuming Scar.
"Those who defy the kingdom of Amara will die!" Scar said lifeless as he raises a sword since he doesn't have his Dragon Slayer anymore and jump off to battle the two.
Nanael and Tomoe dodge separately to avoid Scar's attack and he charge toward Tomoe clashing against her blade with fierce attacks almost like an animal or a demon.
"Scar! Stop it, what's gotten into you?" Nanael asked, but Scar did not respond due to Menace enslavement spell on him.
"Those who defy the kingdom of Amara will die!" Scar repeated as the fight continues on inside the pyramid.
Tomoe blocks and dodge each of Scar's attacks, but the force behind them are too much for her to handle as she is being push back a few feet from the blows she blows.
"(His strength is more than I imagined, I must be careful not to get hit or else I'm done for.)" Tomoe thought worried as whatever is happening to Scar is making him go out to kill her.
Tomoe quickly block an incoming attack from Scar, but this time the force was much more powerful than before because Tomoe to be smashed right through a wall almost knocking her down. She groans in pain as she tries to get up and Scar is about to impale her with the sword, but Nanael quickly block it with her own sword and manage to swing kick Scar away.
"Come on, let's go!" Nanael helped Tomoe up and they run away before Scar could get up.
"Can you tell what was up with Scar all the sudden?" Nanael asked.
"From what I can tell, he appears to be controlled by the aura that is exactly like that black sandstorm we saw earlier. I'm not sure, but somebody must be behind it and that person is the one controlling Scar and it's that power that trap Shizuka here too." Tomoe figured.
The female warriors stop in their tracker after hearing a strange sound that coming from up ahead, the sound is getting louder and closer then revealing to be a giant boulder rolling towards them.
Tomoe acted quickly and grab the panicking Nanael hiding into a small opening letting the boulders and a few more rolling pasts them.
"I can't breathe." Nanael said as her face is shoved against Tomoe's breasts and one hand one of them.
"This space is too cramp to move in here, Angel." Tomoe pointed out.
"Yeah, but I'm suffocating because your boobs are huge!" Nanael exclaimed.
"I'm sorry about that." Tomoe apologized as her cheeks are blushing and Nanael lean her head up to breathe between the priestess's breasts.
Somewhere in the pyramid, Scar is walking around trying to find the two warriors he was fighting though not sure why he felt that angel girl was familiar to him.
KO a new chapter is done and hope you all enjoy it!
Scar has been mind-controlled to become Menace's slave and his first duty is fighting Tomoe for the desert princess to make her and the others into her slave too, let's hope Tomoe will be able to help Scar get free or else they're doom, but I believe Scar will manage to free himself soon.
Hope you like how I change Scar being with Menace instead of Leina and some other changes too.
KO comment, favorite, and follow through of how this story will go!