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if any likes the story enough Ill be happy to continue at a faster pase, but if not im pretty much wrighting for my own entertainent so I was thinking of dabboling in a cupple stories at once.
Her fiery hair flew in outrage as she turned to face her opponent eyes flashing an emrold green. Her victome, a rather popular boy who was paying more attention to her hair than the who it belonged to made fatale mistake of continuing hisj line of conversatinon. "Your burning your way across my heart that is." He smiled at his "clever" words placing a hand over his forehead melodramaticily.
"I am most certanly not a hot tamale or yours hec i dont even know you leave me alone." She smoldered.
"ahh quite the firey temper you have there hu?" he said raising his eyebrows segustively.
"Say one more thing about fire or heat and i'll make you regret it."
He finally pried his eyes from her hair and realised she wasnt joaking. He was anoyed this wasn't what he thought would hapen when he greeted the new girl in school. "Wait I only ment that you have cool hair! Its the color of fire! Where did you get it done." he said desprately.
"Yeah and i told you to leave me and my hair out of it!" the new girl snapped.
"Sheesh if you didnt want people to comment about it then maby you shouldn't have died it!" The girl layed him out flat with one punch turning abruptly and storming away.
Yeah so what if my hair is fiery red its not like I can do anything about it. Thats just the color its always been. Maybe i should try to dye it again. But as one of the blue strands from her last atempt fell into her face she quickly expelled the thought. Last time she tried to die her hair brown her hair refused to comply the anoyed hairdresser tried everything. The only coler that actually stayed in her hair was the little blue strands that only succeded in making her hair look even more fire like. She sighed I really could have handled that confrentation better its not really his fault, but I wish people would leave me alown about my hair. ItS only the first day of school and I am allready getting myself into trouble.
The bell rang and she snapped back to reality shoot where is my first class! As she burst into the clasroom the teacher was just starting class. Everyone stoped and stared as she blushed and said awkwardly um sorry I was late I ummm kinda got lost. The teacher sighed "Im gussing your Phoenix the transfer?"
The boy from earlier shickered in the back of class, and suddenly she did not feel so bad about the bruse she figured was forming on his sholder. "Yeah technically but I go Anna."
"Well Anna you and mat can enjoy detention tomarow along with Ryou"
"wait me?" said a blond boy near the front.
"Yes for having too many unexcussed absences in my class." the blond boy Ryou rolled his eyes muttering I shouldnt have to be here now. "And if you skip detention again for your 'sience experiments' again...
"but it is academic"
"Yes and while I believe that given its you" She looked at him like he was weird "unfortunately this is math class not science class so show up."
"well there is a lot of math innvolved in all sciences".
"so class today we are talking about..." and so the class began
About a quarter way throughout class Ryou took out a small machine and started messing with it it sparked and a flash blinded everyone, byt before he could see the readout the teacher took it from him "My class room is not a chem lab Ryou! What even is this thing it looks like it took a picture of the class... in 3D maybe...? But what are all these read outs and a mew scale is that some kinda sience term i wonder... what even is this thing Ryou and is it going to explode on me like the last one?"
"The last one didnt explode it just fell apart violently... and this one um detects certain um differences in someone's geneics...it doesnt really matter."
"Hey why is flame hair the only one thats red."yelled the kid behind the teacher
"Its Anna" the new girl growled.
"She's red! let me see." said Ryou snatching it and staring at it for a while. He muttered about needing to talk to someone.
"So are you gona tell us or just leave us in spence." someone elce said.
"oh umm right ..it says she is an inanament object, and um .. it can't scan her."
"So whats it say about me" someone piped up.
"Theoretically it could tell me but it ... umm is not finished yet." to this everyone groaned. Then the teacher sighed and back to the front of the class to stated teaching again. But all through class he kept staring at her and messing with random machenery untill even she niticed and glared at him.