Hello, my name is Makoto Naegi. My talent is the Ultimate Lucky Student but, honestly I feel that I have more bad luck than good luck, like for example right before I came to this school I got chased by a group of bikers and, then the next day I lost my wallet. It's like how am I considered the Ultimate Luck if I'm getting into bad luck at every turn. Anyway I am pretty average compared to everyone else here, but that could be a good thing, I don't want to attract too much-unwanted attention, but it could also be bad for me, I could end up with no friends which would not be good. Anyway, I have talked to almost everyone I still have I think fifteen more people left. If I remember correctly my research was right but, there seem to be two people here I don't remember researching and, one that I don't know the identity of but, I don't see her here. But maybe something changed or happened or something but, whatever I have to focus on the here and, now which is with a girl who is really loud and obnoxious.
She had black hair with pink and blue strands as well as a white school shirt and, black skirt and leggings.
"Hi, there My name is Ibuki Mioda The Ultimate Musician,"
"Hi, Ibuki my name is Makoto Naegi The Ultimate Luckster,"
"Ibuki says hi and, she hopes that we can become good friends,"
"I hope so to Ibuki,"
"Ibuki wishes to give you an example of her music but, Ibuki doesn't have her instruments,"
"Ah that's too bad I'm sure you'll find your instruments soon,"
"Thanks, Makoto Ibuki will see you later,"
"Bye Ibuki,"
She is really odd but, really nice in her own way I guess. After meeting the crazy girl I moved on to the timid she wore a black dress and, she has those really old circular glasses from like the '70s and, she had long black hair that was braided into two long pigtails.
"Hi, there my name is Makoto Naegi,"
"H-h-hi-i-i my name is Toko Fukawa The Ultimate Writer,"
"That's cool,"
"Um ok then bye now?" I asked confused at her sudden silence.
That was probably the weirdest conversation so far. After that not so interesting but, a very weird conversation I was speaking to a very depressed midget. I mean I'm short but, he is even shorter. He wore a black beanie with cat-like ears on it, and a black leather jacket and, a pair of black and blue pants.
"Hi, I'm Makoto Naegi the Ultimate Luck,"
"Hey, kid Ryoma Hoshi The Ultimate Tennis Pro,"
"Hi there Ryoma, if I may ask you seem really down why is that,"
"Well kid I used to be happy then I went to jail and, it turned to hell that's why I'm depressed,"
"Why did you go to prison?"
"I killed the mafia," Ryoma answered nonchalantly.
"Wow the whole mafia, how?"
"With a tennis racket and metal ball,"
"Woah how did you pull that off?"
"I just used my talent to beat them all but, I went to jail for it,"
"Wow, that sucks for you,"
"Yeah it does suck so here's a lesson for you don't go to jail kid,"
"Thanks and, it was nice meeting you Ryoma,"
"Same here kid,"
After that sad and, depressing conversation, I moved on to a very excited boy who has a maroon jacket with only one arm through the sleeve and a white shirt with some red insignia on it he was loud and, obnoxious and, annoying but, in a good way.
"Hi, there I am Kaito Momota The Ultimate Astronaut,"
"Hey, I'm Makoto Naegi The Ultimate Luckster,"
"You're an astronaut I thought only people like 25 and older could apply,"
"Well I had a friend who knew a guy who knows a guy who could fake my ID and, get me in, and I scored really high on the test but, they found out about my age they almost booted me but since I got the highest score ever on that test they decided to keep me but, wouldn't put me in a rocket until I'm old enough,"
"Wow, that is amazing dude I wish I was that amazing," Kaito reassured.
"Oh, I bet you're amazing with your talent,"
"Thank you, Kaito,"
"No prob man,"
After that very motivating conversation, I moved onto the next person who was very mysterious and had all lavender color clothing."Hello, there my name is Makoto Naegi,"
"Um hi,"
"Oh, my apologies I am Kyoko Kirigiri The Ultimate Detective,"
"That's a cool talent,"
"Yes, it is now if we are done here,"
"Um ok then,"
She is definitely a bit bossy or maybe she is just a bit confused because of our situation. Anyway, I think I found Byakuya's fatter but, nicer twin. He looks like Byakuya but fat and in a white suit instead of a black one.
"Hello, I am Byakuya Togami The Ultimate Heir," The Ultimate Imposter introduced himself.
"Hello I'm Makoto Naegi but it's there another Byakuya,"
"Yes, he is an imposter,"
"Oh he is,"
"Yes, he is imitating me,"
"Ok, I guess I have to believe you,"
"You should have believed me in the first place,"
"Well, I don't know what and, who to believe right now with this very odd situation,"
"I understand but, you need to be wise in who you trust,"
After that, he walked off and I moved on to a very angry girl who had her black hair in pigtails and a red shirt with a black dress and she had piercing red eyes that if looks could kill I would be dead.
"Hi, there I'm Makoto Naegi,"
"Maki Harukawa The Ultimate Child Care Giver, now are we done here,"
She didn't even give me time to answer as she walked off before I could even get a word out. She doesn't seem happy to be here. After that, I moved on to another mysterious person who had dark blond hair and, a gray and black long sleeve shirt and, a pair of black jeans and, some metal necklace and piercings on his ears.
"Hi there my name is Rantaro Amami and I'm sorry to say this but, I don't remember my talent at the moment," What's with people not remembering their talent first Hajime then Kyoko now this guy. I thought to myself.
"Um excuse me is everything alright there,"
"Oh yes sorry I was deep in thought for a sec, My name is Makoto Naegi,"
"I didn't hear a mention of a talent at all,"
"Well I don't think I qualify for this talent and besides I'm more average than anything,"
"Well, we are all here for one reason or another so you must have a talent,"
"It's the ultimate Luckster, but if anything it should be the ultimate jinx,"
"Why is that?"
"I have way more bad luck and, I always seem to jinx myself,"
"I guess that makes sense but you were called the ultimate Luckster for a reason so act like it,"
"How do you act like a Luckster,"
"I don't know how but that's for you to find out,"
"Thanks, man I hope you remember your talent soon enough,"
"I hope so to bye for now,"
"Ok bye,"
He seems chill I hope he remembers his talent soon and, if I had to take a shot in the dark I bet he is the Ultimate Wiseman like those people who are really wise and, everyone goes to for advice but, I'm probably wrong. After that, I met someone who also had the same title as me sorta. He had crazy white hair a long black zip-up jacket and a white shirt he also had a pair of black skinny jeans.
"Hi, there I'm Makoto Naegi The Ultimate Luckster,"
"Ah someone who has the same talent as me, I am Nagito Komaeda The Ultimate Luck,"
"So you have the same talent as me,"
"Well I don't consider it talent but I have been told that I am extremely lucky,"
"Like how lucky,"
"Like if I jumped into a volcano I would still be alive,"
"Hmm that is very lucky indeed"
"Yeah I know but I wish I was the ultimate hope because I love seeing hope prevail,""Ok well I should probably leave, people to meet people to see,"
"Bye friend,"
I can't tell if he is nice or a weirdo like Teruteru. Hopefully, he isn't as we don't need a second psycho running around. After that eventful conversation, I moved on to a very petite redhead who wore a witch hat and a black version of a typical girls school uniform.
"Hi, there I'm Makoto Naegi,"
"Nyeh do I have to introduce myself it's so hard,"
"I mean if you want people to know who you are then yes but, if you don't then I guess not,"
"Well I do want people to know who I am so I guess it is worth the effort. I am Himiko Yumeno The Ultimate Mage,"
"Mage as in real magic like you can make something disappear for real not just with trap doors and stuff,"
"Yeah it's really fun, but, no one believes me because no one believes mages exist and no one believes that magic is real,"
"Well, it is sort of hard to believe,"
"Nyeh you're a nonbeliever to be gone, nonbeliever,"
"Ok, I'll be gone then,"
Yikes, that did not go that well and man when she is angry she can be scary and adorable at the same time. I moved on to my next person after the previous meltdown I moved on to a more gentler person who was tall burly and scary but nice he wore a pair of glasses like Toko's and he had kind red eyes and long green hair and a brown school uniform.
"Hi there my name is Gonta Gokuhara and I am the Ultimate Entomologist,"
"Hi, Gonta I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Gonta hopes that we can become good friends and that Gonta can be gentlemen to everyone here,"
"I hope we can become good friends to Gonta and I hope you achieve that goal,"
"Gonta thanks you but, Gonta has one question,"
"Ok, Gonta what would that question be,"
"Do you want to become gentlemen too,"
"I feel that I am already a gentleman to the best of my ability but, I feel that I can always improve in anything I do,"
"Gonta feels happy with that answer and, wishes the best for you,"
"As I wish the best for you bye for now,"
So after I had my conversation with Gonta I moved onto the fashionista. She had blond pigtails with big bow ties and she had a really short purple skirt and, a dark purple school uniform and she also wore what seemed like a lot of makeup.
"Hi, there my name is Makoto Naegi,"
"Hi, there I'm Junko Enoshima The Ultimate Fashionista,"
"I feel like I've seen your magazines before but you seem I don't know a bit different,"
"Aw you hurt my feelings, but it's ok nothing a little photoshop can't do,"
"You use photoshop,"
"Well yeah, all of the magazine models and, movie stars and other famous people use it,"
"Like who?"
"Like Nikki Minaj, Justin Bieber and even me,"
"Wow, those are some big name celebs,"
"Well yeah, I said every celeb does it,"
"Hmm, I did not know that,"
"No one does unless you are some stalking creep like Teruteru,"
"Speaking of Teruteru I haven't seen him in a while,"
"Yeah, the creep has disappeared,"
"Yes that is odd but, I think we should move on bye,"
"Ok bye Naegles,"
Wait did she just call me Naegles how did she come up with that. Anyway, she seems...interesting anyway I'm going to move on to my next person who wore a maid outfit and had short blond hair and wore black gloves.
"Hello, my name is Kirumi Tojo The Ultimate Maid,"
"Hello, I'm Makoto Naegi,"
"Hello, Makoto I hope you are well and, I am also here to serve you," Huh, they don't call her The Ultimate maid for nothing she openly volunteered to serve me.
"I don't know if this displeases you but, I will not be needing your services, I don't want to be a burden to you as well,"
"Oh that does not displease me, but you would not be a burden to me at all,"
"I know I wouldn't be a burden but I really do think that I can take care of myself,"
"Well I can see that I won't win this argument but, the offer is still on the table,"
"Thanks, Kirumi but, I think we should get moving I think most of us are almost done,"
"I agree as well, bye for now,"
After speaking with Kirumi I moved on to a tall boy who wore a black hat and, mask that covered his mouth. He wore a sort of like a black suit but, without the tie and white undershirt. He also had those creepy goldish eyes and, as well as the eyes he had long sleek black hair. He had a low kind of hiss in his voice to which makes you want to jump out of your shoes and, run.
"Um hello there, I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Ah hello Makoto, I am Korekiyo Shinguji, The Ultimate Anthropologist but you can just call me Kiyo,"
"Ok Kiyo nice to meet you but, I have a question like I know the criteria for things like say a football star or as a mechanic but, an anthropologist, like what are the requirements to be one,"
"Well, you have to be an expert in the four fields of anthropology which include cultural, linguistic, biological, and forensic anthropology, although I specialize in cultural anthropology I have distinct skills in all four which is what got me my title,"
"Huh, that's cool and, interesting,"
"Ah yes it is but, I believe we should move on as well,"
"Ok then bye, Kiyo,"
After speaking with the ever so cheerful Kiyo I moved into a girl who seemed to be in the gothic stage that every teen seems to go through, but it was richer. She also had piercing red eyes that seemed to stare right into your soul. She also had raven black hair that was put into two drills like ponytails.
"Hello, I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Hello I am Celestia Ludenberg The Ultimate Gambler but preferably I would like to be called Celeste,"
"What's with your um… … … style,"
"Oh my style well it formally referred to as Lolita but others may consider it a more gothic maid look. So are we done I'm finding this a little repetitive,"
"I know but, it needs to be done,"
After Celeste, I was met with a more petite girl who wore a more poofy brown skirt and a green blouse to go along with it. She also had light caramel hair and light hazel eyes to complement the get-up.
"Hi, there I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Hello, I am Chihiro Fujisaki The Ultimate Programmer,"
"Hi, Chihiro how are you,"
"Could be better but, considering our situation I am fine,"
"By situation, you mean waking up in the middle of the school somewhere and then having to meet in the gym after waking and, we still don't know what is going on,"
"Right,"
"Hmm, you do bring up a good point about our situation though it is a bit mysterious,"
"Yes, it is,"
"I think we will talk later Chihiro,"
"I think so to Makoto,"
After speaking with Chihiro I moved on to another reserved teen who was kind of tall and was very pale and he wore a black hat and black dress shirt and pants he also had black hair and black shoes.
"Hello, my name is Shuichi Saihara The Ultimate Detective,"
"Ah hello, Shuichi I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Hello, Makoto,"
"So what do we talk about I mean unlike the others you have no unusual quirks and, I mean I feel like if I ask how are you I'll just get the answer fine considering our situation,"
"Hmm you are right and that is probably how I would answer anyway perhaps we could catch up at a later time,"
"Agreed, see you around,"
"Bye Makoto,"
After Saihara I was met with a more loud mouth teen. He had an orange pompadour and, mullet thing going and he had a long black jacket that was unbuttoned from his ankles to his shoulder. On the back, it said Crazy Diamonds and, under his jacket, he had a white tank top and black jeans.
"Sup I'm Mondo Oowada The Ultimate Biker Gang Leader,"
"Hi, I'm Makoto Naegi,"
"Ok, are we done here because I seriously don't give two shits about this,"
"Ok, I guess bye,"
Yeesh, he is a handful I better not get in his way any time soon or I'll probably be clobbered. After the previous craziness, I was met with crazy times ten. She had extremely light blonde hair almost white in fact. She wore a yellow artist gown type thing and she had white short shorts and a white bra. She also had really tan skin like she tanned regularly.
"Hello, I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Ahh hello, Makoto I am Angie Yonaga The Ultimate Artist,"
"Hmm artist huh, does that include all forms of art or just painting,"
"Angie and, Atua can do both painting and sculpting,"
"Wait who's Atua,"
"Angie usually does not condone people not knowing of Atua but I will allow it this once, Atua is my God he guides me and, his followers, but he not only guides me I am his body I am the person he speaks through I am the one who provides his sacrifices,"
"Wait for sacrifices!" I was becoming alarmed sacrifices a weird god she was sounding like one of those cult leaders that are psychopaths at the same time.
"Oh yes humans are required but, sometimes Atua allows blood sacrifices as well, would you be willing to give a sacrifice,"
"How about no," I just left and, speed walked my way to another person. He seemed a little off. He seemed extremely zoned out like he was high. He wore his jacket without his arms in his sleeves and he had really frizzy long black hair and he also had slightly tanned skin and, baggy black pants and, sandals.
"Sup bro I'm Yasuhiro Hagakure The Ultimates Clairvoyant, but you can just call me Hiro,"
"Hello, I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Hmm, Clairvoyant as in like fortune telling, palm reading, and Tarot cards and that sort of thing,"
"Yeah, dude,"
"Oh cool, how often are you right,"
"Dead on thirty percent of the time,"
"Oh, is that considered good in the fortune telling world,"
"Yeah, I'm towards the top at the accuracy,"
"Thirty percent isn't necessarily good,"
"Well yeah, I guess,"
"I better be moving on Hiro,"
"Ok bro,"
After Hiro who although, I would say seemed high or something. I moved on to a boy about my night who had really curly sleek black and purple hair and, purple eyes that seemed to toy with you whenever you looked into them. He also had a checkerboard ascot and had a button up white straight jacket and white pants.
"Ah hello, there I am Kokichi Ouma The Ultimate Supreme Leader hahahahaha," Ouma laughed crazily.
"Um what's with the laugh,"
"It comes with the title now are you going to tell me your name or what,"
"Oh, I'm sorry I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Do you not have a talent like the other losers or do you just not want to say it,"
"I have a talent it's the Ultimate Luckster,"
"Oh, so you and Komaeda are basically the same thing,"
"Well I guess yeah, I don't know maybe,"
"Ugh I thought you would be someone cool like that Sakura girl but, you are just a boring average teen," Ouma taunted.
"Hey!"
But, he was already gone it seemed like he was done with the conversation and so was I, he left a very bad taste in my mouth so to speak. After speaking to that jerk I moved onto the jock type. He had multiple piercings on his ears and, had spiky red hair. He had a white jacket and a white shirt with a red skull as well as black jeans.
"Hello, I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Sup I'm Leon Kuwata The Ultimate Baseball Star,"
"Oh I've seen you on those magazine covers before but you looked a lot different,"
"Yeah they had me shave my head and, lose the piercings but, that ain't happening again because I've decided that I want to become a rockstar,"
"Oh really that's cool, I mean you should always follow your dreams,"
"Yep, I want to be a lead singer in a band and, have a ton of platinum albums and stuff but, now that we are stuck in here I don't know if that will happen,"
"What do you mean by stuck?"
"What I mean is all of the metal plates on the windows and the giant iron door at the front entrance,"
"Huh, you do have a point,"
"Yeah, and it sucks well see ya later shorty,"
"Yeah bye, wait did he just call me shorty,"
I mean he seems like a nice jock type but shorty couldn't he have come up with something a little bit more nicer and, creative. After my brief conversation with Leon, I moved on to a very cheery girl with blonde hair about shoulder length and, an ahoge like myself. She wore a pink vest and a white shirt underneath and she also had a purple skirt with music notes on it and, she also wore gold music note hairpins.
"Hello there my name is Kaede Akamatsu and, I am the Ultimate Pianist,"
"Hello, Kaede I am Makoto Naegi,"
"Hi, Makoto how are you?"
"I am ok I guess but, ultimate pianist, I guess that explains all the music notes on your clothes,"
"Oh, so you noticed yes I am really into music, especially ones with the piano in them,"
"So like if say something that had a piano in it but wasn't like an opera or musical you would still like it,"
"Well yes,"
"So like Lose Yourself by Eminem would that count,"
"Hmm, I can't say I have heard that song but isn't Eminem a rapper,"
"Well yes but, in this song, he starts and ends with a piano," I explained.
"Huh, I'll have to check it out, well bye for now Makoto,"
"Alright see you around Kaede,"
"I think that's everyone but, I feel like I'm missing one person," I wondered allowed.
"Makoto is that you,"
"Huh, Sayaka,"
I was both dumbfounded and, not surprised at seeing Sayaka. She is the Ultimate Pop sensation why wouldn't she be here, I was then jarred out of my thoughts after said pop sensation suddenly announce her appearance.
"Sayaka Maizono The Ultimate Pop Sensation here speaking to one Makoto Naegi,"
"Um hi there Maizono how are you,"
"Good now that I have someone that I know here, and you,"
"Same answer here,"
"That's good,"
"So how have you been,"
"Good, how about you,"
"And if you are done flirting then I would like to get back to my original point of why we are locked inside a school," mused a very ticked Togami.
"We were not flirting Byakuya," Sayaka deadpanned.
"Anyway, why don't we as much as I hate to say it, which I am we need to get back on the subject that Byakuya was suggesting we talk about," mused Ichiro.
"Why don't you worry about that later little heir," The voice from earlier spoke.
"Little did you just call me little," an agitated Byakuya said.
"Byakuya shut up, so screechy voice I can see you are back again why don't you show yourself," mused Ichiro.
"Well since you asked so nicely I will show my beautiful face,"
The ugliest thing appeared from under the floorboards seemingly out of nowhere, he rested his black and white head at us and stared at us with a devilish smile that could melt the flesh off of your bone.
"I'm right here Ichiro and, I'm ready to give you the most fun time for you, your friends and, myself with the once in a lifetime and, I mean literally once in a lifetime opportunity with everyone's favorite School Killing Game,"
A/N Chapter 3 is rewritten don't forget to vote on the poll.
Guest It is fixed thank you for the information.
Crit FailHey thanks for everything you have done and yes I need to start making longer chapters but intros are hard to make "long" as I think you know, I'm also planning on making longer chapters.