*Loud crashing noise coming down the hallway before the door slams open* IM ALIVE!
This week has been crazy and has been taking up all my time. I'm sorry this took so long to get out! I got food poisoning, my dog had to go to the emergency vet, THEN my niece just about lost one of her eyes cause she is two and likes to headbutt stuff she shouldn't, AND THEN I was learning how to pull a trailer with a pickup for my store and it dehitched and smashed up the back of the pickup cause they put the wrong ball on it. SO I HAVE BEEN A LITTLE FRAZZLED BUT IM OKAY NOW THANK YOU.
Anywho let's respond to some reviews.
To the esteemed no name: Dude. You nailed it on the head quite a bit, the main character I am writing as myself but I'm pretty much taking away my love of anime and games so he was much sadder just spending all his time at the store I run. Also you wrote a novel of a review for me and that blows my mind. As for personality and stuff I contribute that to I do a metric ton of roleplay for anime and games with my buds so that's where a lot of my personality comes from I bet. Also like I said I have been reading fanfic since I was like 12 or so, so I might have got some experience from there?
To phelipebr: Thanks man! It always blows my mind that people from other countries are reading!
To Luke1327: I appreciate that! One of the big reasons I decided to write this one was because it was something I hadn't really seen in my stories I'm reading so wanted to try it out. Also I'm working on making chapters longer! That is definitely on my list of skills I want to work on. I tend to read stories like 60k+ at the minimum so I really enjoy longer chapters it's just not quite there yet for me!
To DarkSecretPerson: Not quite but there is a reason things happened the way they did :) Also I'm well aware there hasnt been a name yet. People dont tend to think or refer to themselves as their name so once he has someone to talk to he will introduce himself maybe.
To ProjectIceMan: Same thing with Luke! Close to how his powers work but no cigar for a correct answer yet. More shall be revealed lol! Also I do hate wood so much, that does actually come from me, I really just want to stay out of the industry so much but its all around me lol. My store is right down the road from a mill so logging trucks are passing all the time.
To ComplicatedYetSimple: I have some ideas for the name of the quirk but that is definitely a cool one! I appreciate the review and idea!
Finally to DrunkenHamster: I only use the mobile app so I never saw the pic lol, that pic is just my profile picture because it always made me laugh. I have attempted to change it but I don't think it wants to change lol since I still see it as the other one. Sorry if it doesnt lol! Don't worry about MC being alone! He will definitely be noticed soon in the coming chapters. Remember Izuku is still a kid! Bakugo couldn't make huge explosions at the start either, quirks are like a muscle, they can be trained to be stronger :D
Story Recommendation today is Shinigami, it's not a self insert as far as I'm aware but the OC is the main character. A lot of drama in that story and a good read.
And now for our feature presentation!
~line break line break line beak?~
The day passed by quickly after the incident in the playground. Izuku got included in a few more activities now that he had a 'quirk' and I followed along behind him making sure nobody else tried to start anything with him. I wasn't convinced it wouldn't happen again. Bullying tendencies don't just stop out of nowhere.
I stared down at my hand, I used to throw Katsuki with a frown as the teacher droned on and on over the subject they were learning about. I had a much better grip on him then I had on anything else I tried to pick up so far. Maybe it was because of how close I was to Izuku this time? I mean last time he was in the other room with the notebook, and the pencil I could actually throw when he was in it.
I looked down at the kid, they had started coloring and drawing at tables. I guess that is a normal preschool thing right? Katsuki went to town on his drawing with crayons, it looked like a mess but I guess it fits a kid with an attitude like his. Izuku on the other hand took it slowly drawing the dude from all the posters in his room. He had just finished putting the finishing touches of the outline with a pencil before he started looking for a crayon around him. He had red white and blue, for the guys outfit but no yellow for the gloves or the hair. He spotted one at another table and stared at it with a frown. Nobody was using it, he could just stand up and grab it.
He reached his hand to its direction like he was trying to use a power to bring it to him with an intense look 'as much as a five year old can look intense' as he stared at it. Katsuki looked up at him and stayed silent just staring at him with a focused look. "Wow you can actually be quiet kid?" I chuckled before walking over to the crayon. I stared down at it and looked back at Izuku with a considering look.
I reached down and picked up the crayon and held it in my hand waiting for it to fall through it like before. "It doesn't work like that kid, they just fall through after a few seconds and I'm not chucking a crayon at you." I chuckled at Izuku before looking down at my hand. The crayon was still there.
"What?" I muttered shocked at it. How am I still holding it? I looked back to Izuku to see him flashing a megawatt smile at the floating crayon. "Why are you just making it float Izuku! Is that all you can do? Bring it over here I need to use it too!" Katsuki finally snapped at Izuku, making him flinch slightly before looking over at Katsuku. "I'm trying but its just floating there!" He said back making me flinch in turn.
"Oops, sorry kid." I muttered walking back over to set it down on the table next to Izuku. "About time." Katsuki muttered before leaning over to grab it. I picked it back up and set it out of his reach before he could close his hand around it. "Izuku!" He growled at Izuku who looked confused at the development. "Wait your turn kid, geez!" I muttered at him while Izuku stared at the crayon with a shocked look. "I wasn't trying to move it though Kacchan it did it by itself!"
Katsuki grunted in response "Well hurry up with it then!" and went back to his scratching 'art'. Izuku just stared at the crayon before picking it up and starting coloring in his picture.
I stared at it before looking back at the table I got the crayon from. "That had to be like ten seconds, way longer than this morning…." I walked over behind Katsuki and stared at the collection of crayons he was done using. I reached down to the pile and picked up one of them, Katsuki's eyes snapping to it moving before turning to Izuku to yell at him before stopping with his mouth open. Izuku wasn't even looking over here hyper focused on his drawing. Myself and Katsuki stared at the crayon in my hand before it fell through it and back onto the pile. "That was more like three seconds that time." I muttered confused before the bell rang in the class.
"All right everyone! Time to pick up for the day and head home!" The teacher called out to the class. The rugrats quickly exploded into motion as they put their stuff into bags and began lining up to leave for the day.
~breaking the line breaking the line~
We all walked out together, me Izuku and Katsuki out the front door and into the parking lot. Katsuki quickly reached out and grabbed Izuku by the arm and dragged him over to the side away from the other kids.
"Were you trying to take my crayon earlier! I wasn't done with it!" He snarled at Izuku like an angry pomeranian, causing Izuku's face to look confused.
"I didn't do anything to your crayons Kaachan!" He said with a slightly hurt look on his face.
"Then why did it start floating like the other ones! That was your quirk Izuku! What can you not control your quirk yet? What, are you actually a Deku then!" He muttered angrily at Izuku, who flinched at being called a Deku.
"No! I have a quirk now so I'm not a Deku! I just gotta figure it out!" he cried out tears going to his eyes as he shook his head at Katsuki.
Katsuki snarled angrily, "Well hurry the hell up! You need to figure it out by tomorrow or you are gonna be a Deku again!" he snarled before stomping off.
Izuku looked sadly at his back before digging into his pocket and pulling out a phone. 'Holy crap who gives a five year old a phone.' I thought while he pressed a button on it and held it up to his ear waiting a few seconds before bursting out.
"Mom! I have a quirk! It happened again at school like this morning!" He listened for a minute as the voice on the other line talked before he asked. "Can we go to the doctor so we can have it figured out?" He said before a smile grew on his face and he nodded his head. "I'll wait at the school for you to come get me then. Thanks mom! I love you too!" he said before closing the phone and putting it back in his pocket.
He sat down to wait for his mom to come and pulled out a notebook from his backpack and started writing while muttering in it.
"It has to be some kind of moving things quirk like mom has, I'm glad we can go to the quirk doctor so we can figure it out, I wonder what he will say, it seems like it could be strong to mebutkaachanwassayingthatitwasmovingthingswhileIwasntpayingattentionsomaybeithasa" he started hyper muttering, completely losing me in the train of his mutters.
"We are going to a doctor then? That's good I guess huh kid?" I muttered as I looked out at the road sitting down next to him. I didn't even notice him quiet himself while I thought to myself about what the doctor would be able to do, he looked up around him in confusion.
"Who said that?" He muttered quietly looking around before going back to his notebook with a shrug. "Must have been the wind."
~line police! You need at least one line break here!~
And that be she. I think that was a pretty good chapter, next chapter will be better though~ We going to the doctor to figure this stuff out! As always I appreciate all reviews and I'll see everyone next time!
HarveyJarvey out!