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He held her from elbow"Huh!" He said, coming out from his trail...She looked at moist eyes, She eyes turn soft "Abhijeet tum"

He jerked his head avoid her "Chaliye" Show in passenger sit. She looked at his face it was as usual silent without any sign of turmoil. Although Abhijeet was her own blood and flesh she was his mother still from starting she failed to understand her elder son. He was riddle from her from starting... Well! initiatly she was interrsted in him. But after that terrible acciendent she left him on his own... that too without any single thought ... May be ... who know.!?

Being a sharp detective and experienced officer he could guess his mother's attentive stare on him yet choose to focus on the road... Everything in his life is sooo sooo much confusing and complicated...Uff! Only God know Why! ... Here God Smiles!... He is happy in his usual life ... Ohk! Not happy at least he is not a trouble for anyone (Whispers) especially for his mother. He perpetually wanted to be his mother's healing hand at least he wanted to after his father died... He tried hard to be that even from a fine distance... to be very honest even after lots of distance between them, her hard behaviour he has ample of respect for her. At a very young age, she widowed with two kids and so many wicked eyes were on his father's hard work... that time she was the one who overlooked her pain her tears immerse herself to save his father business, He had seen her crying wiping her tears alone than struggling alone for the whole night... He had seen her working even in high temperature...that too without any complaint... No one can change the fact her mother gave him a bright future even though he abandoned his desire that was his call she never said anything. She never said him to occupy her in business he preferred his father dream she let him do.

This is the veiled grace of their silent relation. Both are capable enough to understand each other thought process that still contradicts God! signs in convalescence As if he too bored of their firmness from each other

The car checks both came out from their thoughts. He cleared his throat. "Ghar aa gaya " She too nodded, decent down from the car marched towards main door... he left too park car. She entered shivani offered water to her, she smiled and took after sometime Abhijeet to entered Shivani said "Bhaiya aap bhi aa gaye"

"Ji Bhabhi" He nodded, she said "Main paani layi" she left

When they heared "Daya... pls... Stop... Dayaaa... Listen to me... Daya " it was muskaan pleading behind a determined Daya who was looking totally different from his usual self. Abhijeet was confused because this Avatar of Daya is very common in Cid bureau...But in home Strange!.

"Stup up muskaan ... enough of ur... bakewass" he jerked his hand. Whole family was standing

Laxmi said in stern language "Daya yeh Kya tarika hai"

Daya inhales a breath, "Mom I want to tell you something" He looked at Muskaan who nodded in No. Laxmi looked at them and than said... ""Hm.. bolo"

"Mom Woh"He gasps and blows oxygen, informs her the complete scene about Muskaan's job and re-joining, at last, He added, "Mom I want My wife to do the job wanted her to be Independent".

"What you want from Me Daya, I mean you had already decided that you wanted to ur lady work then, why this all drama," She said in a very casual way.

"No, please, your permission is also, Important "

"Seriously! Daya Permission... U are here for my permission Because the tone u used a mintue before was not for Request or permission it was for order" She said, Oh! she was former Business women no one can defeat her when come to arrogancy. She said looking directly in her son's eyes... She was broken by her sons tone which was lacking respect yet that long lost business women who had cover her deepest wound under facade of strictness and ruthlessness took command.

Daya's sub-counsious worked he rewind happening few second before, and regret took place...he look down "Mom... Wo..b" His words died in his throat he felt ashamed on his act...

Abhijeet who was standing their with down head, well! tone of Daya spoken made him feel like he failed teaching Daya... After his Father he tried to become his father... he treat Daya the way his father used to do him...Om who was standing their hearing everything... he felt a sheer urge to put his point to he to come up with bang without even looking at his wife who was busy in consoling muskaan... "Mami I Agree Daya ne jaise baat ki That tone was not acceptable but Daya is right... Me too want Shivani to work"

Shivani looked at him Wide eyes "Om"She whispers, Om looked at his wife who nodded in no... He smiled at her "Zip it Shivani... just zip it"

Abhijeet felt like left over till today His brother always included him in their every matter... But today..He smiled looking at Daya only thought came in his mind 'Bacha bada ho gaya' and than to Om... He Signs... nothing came in his mind he was blank... Stammered yes asked "Why don't you ppl shared with me" He asked from his brothers

Both said in tone "U was injured so..."

"Mar tho nhi Gaya tha... injured hi tha na" He said in low yet hurt tone

Both Om and Daya widen his eyes... "Nhi Abhijeet... Bhai Plss Galat Mat samjhiye" Said

He chuck every thought Calms... percisely to be said control his emotions looked at his mother said in composed tone "Ma... I know U have your own reasons... but we can't force ourself in anyone... we cant snacth their freedom and rights... So I think you should Let them work... " he looked both elderly womens of the house with all respect he went To bua ji.

"Bua ji pls... Shivani babhi ne aaj tak kuch nhi manga... Aaj woh bas apne apko explore karna chati hai Let her na" He said, Bua ji looked at his DIL... who was looking down she came to her.

"So kya karna hai"

"Mummy ji... I'm already working with Om... in office.. because om needs help" She told all happening how Much om was stressed his request and her agreement ... their Lie... Phufaji's involvment... and all.

Bua jii shooked her head "I won't call My Daughter... just for namesake... I really mean it... haan Hum ne mana kiya tha... tumahre work after Marrige ke liye not because any orthodox feeling and all... it was just" She signs..."Leave it... U wanna Work U can I don't have any problem ... Over All I'm Happy" She concluded.

Laxmi looked at her younger son and DIL... Said "Same goes to you both, I'm not Orthodox Saas... Muskaan don't know me but U daya... tumko bhi nhi pata who was I in past... ?... Just remember Shivani... Ka kaam Office mein but mUskaan ... you will work in Bureau... keep yourself safe... witnessing these two injured is enough for Me I can't bear u too injuured and wounded every second Day.."

"Mummy ji I will work in Hq Field work itna nhi hoga"

She nodded, Older party dismissed from there know only younger member's of party remain... Daya looked at his Bhai who was looking hurt, He signs to Om... Om follows his graze he took shooked his head as he hurted his Most sensible younger brother

He came forward "Abhijeet"

He looked up, Om continues "Dekh tujh ko na btane ke piche koi aur reason tha... it just ..You too have a life... Some issues.. Not issues atleast you too wanna Spend some gala time with your wife just nayi shaadi hai iss liye...Aur kuch You are my Brother... Aur koi baat hogi jo out of hand jaa rhi hogi tho tere pass hi ayunga na... kha jaunga" He said while patting his back

Abhijeet listen him, He know he was right at his place... Only thinking about him Still he was afraid of being left alone... He hugs him instantly "Bhai Pls never stop talking to Me pls...If u don't want than don't share ypur happiness... but At least remember me in ur sorrow pls..."

Om was taken back, Abhijeet was a person who never express himself... He embrrased in tight hug, Said "Kya Yaar itni si baat ko leke itna soch liya...Jeet tu Bahut innocent hai... sachii... Just remember Jeet... you are not some one to whom everyone wanted to leave... you are too desireable person of this family "

Daya came with "Dekho Bhabi's Yeh Dono Bro-mance kar rhe hai"

"Shut up!" Om scolded, Daya forward holding ears ""Bhaiya You know na How much I'm found of making mistake it's just I'm little Dumb! Still apko hurt Karna"

Abhijeet smashed his head "U r not Dumb! Idiot!" trio hug, meanwhile, their wives were standing them... Shivani cleared her throat.. "Ahem! Ahem!... Sab sort out ho gaya ho tho... Humein bhi yaad kar le"

"Aree! yaar itni sundar Biwi ko koi kaise bhool sakta hai" he said and pull her in side hug, Daya to did like his sab se bade bhaiya "Aa jao yaar Y so far Mussi" Muskaan smiled shyly as her both jeths were present.

Who gave a comforting smile, Tarika looked at them than her husband who was just a step away from her, Abhijeet observed her.. thought for sometime, snaked his hand around his wife shoulder, she looked at him in shock who gave her a 'What look' She down her eyes, He whispered "Why so shock Mrs. Purohit, You already embraced me so many time "

She was still shock to answer back, Abhijeet was enjoying his wifes nervous gesture... He then said "I think humein thoda aram kar lena chaiye"

All nodded, went to their room to spend some Gala time... Abhijeet looked his wife who was standing in his embrace...looking other side.. He did unthinkable He kissed Her cheeks lightly Marched to room with whispering "Natural blush looks... Beautiful on you"

She felt her breath stops... He Kissed! ... He Kisses! Oh! God! My! God! Her Husband is Not So serious type All these are facad For Sure... But for Now He Kissed!


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