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Hold on, I still want you
Come back, I still need you
Laxmi was not feeling bad or new when her son averted his eyes. She's habitual of such kind of action from his son. Then What's the problem? Well! It was her newfound emotions wait! wait newfound feeling? Hm! Na! not really newfound... feeling which she has caged in some deepest and most cryptic part of her heart long back for her elder son Now, those emotions were breaking crates like anything they are hopping and pounding the wall of that worthless crate and insignificantly demolishing it.
She signs follow his son to move to her room, When she heared Abhijeet asking abput Daya... She answered "Woh pune gaya hai"
Abhijeet cringed his eyes "Pune..? Suddenly"
She shrug off "haan bol rha tha... Kuch important kaam hai"
Abhijeet nodded, "Acha... thik hai" strange Daya had invested his hard earn Sunday holiday for 'Important kaam' than 'kaam' must be important. He thought and shrugs off... though such type of incident happens very leass... as Daya is very concern abut his holiday (Note the sarcasm)
He entered, Inside the room where his Queen was sitting with a book, reading He focused on the book name "Beauty and beast" He shooked with a though Such kid she is. She lower her book found him standing "Aap" She stands up from her sit, Abhijeet cringed his brows "Tarika... Why you behaved like a scare wife...I mean Main hi hoon... baithi raho.." He said in a little annoyed tone.
"Aree Nhi... I was not behaving like ascare wife.." She waved her hand, Abhijeet raised his one eye-brow "?"
"I was little eager that's Y" She said sheeplishly... Abhijeet again asked in confusion "Eager for?"
"chocolate Laye aap" She gave him a look and start looking his hand... Abhijeet felt fit of laughter "hahaa"
She frowns said in pouted tone "Abhijeeettttt"
"Oh! Sorry" He pull a bar of dairy milk silk from his pants pocket forward... "ye lo"
She took the bar... in hand, he went to fresh up... But... but... her twinkling eyes dwell up Why..? She looked at close door with childish anger... Sametime Abhijeet came out as he forget to took towel, Found her sitting with frowns ask
"Kya hua... Abhi tho u was eager for chocolate ... suddenly what happpen" he asked
"Who the hell told you to brought Dairy milk silk..." She asked
Only a word come out from his mouth "Hain!" Like seriously, She said "tell Me ..."
"Every girl Like dairy milk silk" He shrug off
"Not Every girl Like dairly milk Silk ... Damn it..." She said, throwing hand on air.. Ohk! He's scare husband now...because his wife is looking damn furious... Reason A Chocolate.. like seriously...
He again said in little courage he had "U don't like silk..."
"I only like simple dairy milk... Silk, bubbly oreo... pero I don't like" She said pouting, Abhijeet nodded like aobedient husband "I'm sorry " He pulls his phone out, called his khabri, order him to deliver some simple dairy milk just for a change his Khabri was teasing him. S.I Abhijeet was getting teased by His khabri Wow! clapping! He signs Ugh! Perk! of being a married Man.
Everything ended on a happy note. Daya had informed his arrival for tomorrow as his work is still pending,
AT NIGHT
INSIDE ABHIRIKA ROOM
A figure was cruling like a ball in place, meanwhile other person sleep was broken by the constant movement beside... "Mm...aa"
He looked at beside him, found something fishy, he looked at her she was shivering "Tarika" he called up...
"Mum,..ma"She again calls out with closed eyes, Everyone in this world can live anywhere But when they felt the pain they call for their knight who is none other than their mother.
Abhijeet places his hand on her head, Oh! God, She was burning he looks at the watch it was showing 2 am he rapidly went out bring cold water, start giving cold water spong to her as he didn't disturb anyone.
Made a call to his Doctor friend, "hello!" (On call)
"Karan" Abhijeet said, (panic) (On call)
Karan said (On call) "haan abhijeet bolo...itni raat ko sab thik hai"
Abhijeet said (On call) "I'm sorry disturb kiya.. karan Tarika is suffering High fever... can u please tell me some medicine to low her temperature"
Karan said (On call) "It's ok yaar Night duty hai aaj... Haan ruk bhai... aaj kal vaise bhi viral chal rha...check tere med box mein yeh! meds hai" He told some medicines
Abhijeet check luckly he had all prescribed meds "han.. han hai.."
"Thik hai phir mere prescribe dose mein dede... She will be fine... don't worry seasonal change bhi ho sakta hai Kuch logo effect karta hai It's ok... cold strip karte rhena... Aur thoda thosa Pani pilate rhena... Dehydratation nhi hona chaiye"
He cuts the call, He wakes Tarika up, softly "Hey! Tarika...Tarika" He pats her cheeks lightly, precisely to be said he cares her cheeks with his rough fingers as if he was touching some fragile flower.
She opens her red-eyes, "Hm... " He felts a pang in his heart looking her drain out figure, Tarika had a different aura around her, She's a girl who can change hell in to heaven... The way she gave notourious stares and smile with full innocence like a toddle, with each smile and playfulness, she had taken a part of his lifeless heart and also return it after making it full of life.
Abhijeet said in soft tone "Shs! Abhi sab thik hota... Please yeh biscuit kha lo phir meds lelo... "
Tarika made sulking face nodded in no, Abhijeet sat beside her took her in beary embrace she put her head on his shoulder He place biscuit between her lips "Please na Tarika only 4 biscuit u have take meds... have it "
Some how he made her, eat meds lay her down She was not throwing tantrums but her Fever was high, it was tolling her ... He was putting strips... timely he was wiping her feets and hands... making her hand water with spoons as per karan saying.
Whole night went like this... it was 5 in morning, He placed thermometer finally temparture was normal, He let out a relife sign... He look at the watch found time, tension was tolling on him that's why he was having a urge to smoke but he can't smoke here neither he can go to beach... leaving his sick wife. His surprussed his urge went to take a shower he took shower to relax his stiff muscles, came out found his Queen sleeping her face was paled in one night.
"Mere bass mein hota tho tumhar fever mein khud jhel leta" He sat beside her, said in whisper ... place a get well soon kiss on her forehead. he left down stares to have coffee for himself.
It was know 6 Bua ji along with Shivani and Muskaan was busy in preparing breakfast, It's monday everyone had to leave alittle early. Sarla (bua ji) said "Tarika nhi aayi"
Muskaan said in confuse tone "haan pata nhi kyu...mein bula ke laati hoon"
Shivani who was cutting vegetable... sitting along with Laxmi... Meanwhile Abhijeet, came out with his empty coffee cup... When Shivani aksed "Aree Abhijeet aaj jaldi ready ho gaye" He looked at himself he was standing in his formals... "Haan bhabhi woh"
He was tensed because today he has to attend a important conference with ACP sir... He can't take off...Muskaan said "tarika aa rhi hai bhaiya"
He nodded in No "Nhi, woh abhi so rhi hai"
Laxmi cringed her eye-brows "Is she Ok... Aisa kabhi hota tho nhi"
Abhijeet looked at his mother, Wow! she has concern for everyone excluding him... Great! though he's happy that she knows his Queen efficently Still deep down it hurts!... But again he let everything go... as he had nothing in His hand... ""Nhi She had high fever last night"
Muskaan gritted tone "ma'am Garden mein taziii hawa ke maze le rhi thi...Kal... When she know how much cold whether effects her"
Abhijeet nodded his head in disappointment (murmurs) "Biwi nhi ek full size bachi mili... hai jisko kabhi-kabhi maturity ke jatake aate hai"
Laxmi listen his whisper, felt a chuck but manage.. Abhijeet frowns "Woh mujhe aaj off nhi milega aap log please dhyaan rakhiyega ... mein jald se jald aayunga"
Muskaan nods "Main dhayaan rakungi bhaiya... Daya waise bhi nhi "
Shivani said "haan Abhijeet U go mein bhi Office off le rhi hoon... My sister needs me more today..."
Abhijeet said in little hesitate tone "Bhabhi it's ok... Muskaan hai, na ,, Why u"
"shut up abhijeet... Don't u dare to interfer in our matter..." She scolds
Abhijeet rasied his hand a little "Ok I'm out" His phone rings, he made pace out side
"Breakfast abhijeet" Sarla Shouted, When he answers runing outside "I will have something in cafeteria Bye Ladies!"
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SOMETIME WENT OFF...
Ladies were at home taking care of Tarika,
"Yuck! Muskaan I will not have this beet root juice... Nope!" She pouted
Muskaan make a face "Tarika Drink it c'mon"
"Giveme Poison I will have that happily .. But not this .."
"You will only get this Juice Sweet heart... not poison... And U have to dear" Laxmi said in stern sweet tone... Tarika gulps in fear "Mummy ji"
She took glass from Muskaan's hand "Apne Mujhe bahut juice pilaya hai Madam... C'mon now, its ur turn Taste ur Medicine bete jaan..."
Doctor already assured family that she had suffered fever due to weather change nothing serious... She only need rest. Abhijeet had called asked about Doctors arrival... everyone assured him.
Tarika start drinking, Suddenly Laxmi's phone rings... "Haan Daya"
(On call) "Hey! Mom... Whats up" cripping voice of daya, enlighten her face...
(On call)"Hm... janab ko yaad aa gyi mom ...Kaam hua apka" She asked in little playful tone.
(On call)"Ofc mom ho gaya... Acha mom... Agar sidhivinayak mandir na jaun tho" He said in unsured tone.
(On call) "No Daya Darshan karke... aana bacha... I had Wish that u will offer prashad to Bappa... When u had stuck in that building" She said in tone She was not orthodox but religious lady.
(On call) "Mom please na yaar..." Daya said with a pout.
(On call) "Daya please na bacha" She pouted back.
(On call)"Ohk Fine... bas aapke liye" Finally he defeated against his mom's cute request.
Muskaan listen conversation, Shooked her head (pov)"No doubt! He's a great Drama queen... Oh! God Please help us na..."
Ajji who had just return after meeting one of her old friends, Enters "How's ur fever baby" She aksed to tarika who had answer in that she's ok.
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SOME MORE TIME PASSED...
NOW IT'S LATE EVENING...
Abhijeet had yet not return, from his work... Tarika was now ok as fever had not return back.. Laxmi and other ladies were sitting happily... excluding Ajji and muskaan both were tensed as the plan is super-duper risky.
Laxmi was lookking at door... "Kal se Daya ko nhi dekha tho dil nhi lag rha"
Muskaan (Pov)"By God Daya... I just wanna break ur head... right now..."
Suddenly her phone rings, "Daya kitna late "
"Hello" A unknow voice alert her,
She said in stern tone "kaun"
Person answered" dekhiye, Yeh jinka phone hai woh...Sidhivinayak mandir ki stairs se gir gaye hai... we had Admitted him in near by city hospital Pune"
Laxmi hand limped and phone slipped from her hands, Ajji and muskaan look at eachother... they were feeling bad for her... But just for the sake of Daya they are silent. Ajji moved to support her "What happen Laxmi..."
"Daya... he slipped ... stairs..." She spoken in broken words... "Ma" (Sobs) "Maa... My son... hospital"
Shiavni took the phoen question, person answrred her too, Shivani hurridly called Om and Phufa ji who had said they are leaving office instantly, Tarika took her phone called abhijeet His phone was busy... that Female machinery voice irritated her.
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With in hour, Laxmi, bua ji and phufa ji left for pune... Leaving Shivani, Tarika , Muskaan and ajji Back as Abhijeet phone was still busy... Tarika was crying, muskaan was sitting silently, As she was aware of drama, Ajji was said her to go her room... she went
Tarika said "Ajji Aap usko akele kaise..."
Ajji gave a excuse like a pro "Let her alone for sometime... Tarika let her console her self, tum abhijeet ka call try karo and please don't let tension toll you dear... U had suffered fever last night hmm Everything will be ok haan relax... sab gaye hai na"
Around 8 Abhijeet entered... he was dead tired, Today's Day was really long... Unwanted ranting of DCP chitrolle had really sucked his patience level, the heated argument between him and him was something he really didn't wished for... But Damage had already done... though that DCP CHIPKUROLLE will not take any action against him he's sure still he never wanted to get involve in arugements and blame games.
He found lawn empty, strange this dead silence was weird at this hour, he directly wnet to his room... He open the door... Before he could register anything he felt pressure on his chest his best-half was hugging him sobbing
"hey! Tarika... Are u ok... how's ur fever"
"Abhij..eet..(sob)" she said
"What happen tarika u r scaring me... yaar" he said tried to break hug but she was not ready so he let her be. She cluthed his coat "He fallen from temple stairs..."
"He ? who " He asked
"Da...ya"
Loving and fighting, accusing, denying
I can't imagine a world with you gone
Hold on, I still want you
Come back, I still need you
Think Positive...Stay Negative ...
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