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When did I become so numb?
When did I lose myself?
Tarika whispers, in his embrace, After listening that meek voice... Abhijeet hold shivered... which was sensed by Tarika... He didn't aked anything he just felt his senses stopped working...walked inside the room made tarika sat on bed. "I'm coming " He randirectly to Ajji's room.
For Abhijeet, Daya was like his son He had promised his Father while giving him mukhya agni that He will protect his family specially mother and brother... He would fulfil all his duties which he left... And he made his father prooud He did... Daya is a gentle man with a prestigious job and honor... Though His mother left everything but once their was time When she was leading Captalist in the business world.
He without even knocking entered "Ajji"
Ajji who was stting with Muskan, was surprised after watching him "Daya,"
Muskaan was nervous for her lying him was next to impossible because before her husbands Brother he was his Senior she was trainined by him those detective and disguse skills... So, she just dug her face in ajji's lap..
Ajji signs such a coward, she was... Abhijeet was standing his breathing was ragin' Ajji again lied like pro "We got call in evening as Daya had a bad fall from temple stairs... Laxmi, bua ji and Phufa ji and Om went to pune city hospital"
Ajji was a dynamic lady her solace and calm atittude towards life was brilliant example for today's generation... that Don't let problem suffer you... made that Problem suffer with your Positive atitude...
The way she handle's the situation it was bench mark for every guardian. She was leader aTrue leader She leads and turns the ball in her court without even a single shout and cry.
INSIDE HOSPITAL
A person lying on bed, another was standing with tensed face "Daya... are u sure..."
"Haan karan Bhaiya, I'm sure only this is the way " he said with a serious face.
Karan frustrated tone "U know what tum dono bhai mujhe pagal kar doge...Ek woh hai kuch karta hi nhi... ek tu hai ... jho kuch na kuch Siyapaa karta hi rheta hai... "
Daya made a grumppy face, "Yaar aap sara set up karo phir mera make up"
"Haan... Bhai sab action scene karne jaa rhe hai jho set up karo...What...make up mein ...Make up dada hoon kya.. "
"Karo na aap" He whines
Karan joints his hand "Daya... mein Doctor thosi tho Sharam kar... "
Daya said, "tabhi tho apke pass aaya hoon...(serious tone) Karan bhaiya please mom ke sath aisa karna mujhe bhi pasaand nhi aa rha ... but "
Karan signs "I understand... "
Karan was Abhijeet Cllg friend though he was in medical department but, friendship is always beyond all those things... karan was nerd well! he used say Perk! of being medical student, and Abhijeet was silent person you were met. Even Karan was nerd but he never bear bully of those Richie-Rich-fattly-spolied-brats. Abhijeet bears karan once safegaurd him getting bully, from that day Abhijeet used sit with him in free time... till the time they were friends only.
Karan got that golden heart man as his bestfriend When he share over eating problem, It was 'Bulimia' He was suffering stress and constant push towards some king of guily and aloofness leads such condition. He helped him gettng rid of his freaking disease.
He gave injured look to Daya... binding a bandage on head... a false fracture on leg and thick bandage on his hand... while doing he said "Sara kharcha bhaar ke jana..."
Daya showed his tong, Karan glares "Aree!"
Daya made a poker face "Thik-thik hai... kya yaad rakho kis... bade dil wale se pala pada..Bhar dunga"
karan raised his eyes... "Uf! Bahut bada dil hai tera... I'm amaze fit kase aa rha hai chote se space mein... (mocked him) bade dil wale... Meri naukri almost maut ke muh mein hai.. Baap ka hospital hai kya mere"
Daya poked him "mama Ka tho hai"
karan stomped his feet, "Abby " before he continues, A young lady entered "U two, ready... they arrived"
"We are ready Anuska... " karan said... Daya was a little nervous but his determination was big today...Karan signs... "I will give mild sedative taki... thoda real lage...1 ghante mein neend toot jayegi"
"Nhi rhene do... I wanna listen "
Karan Nodded in yes, went out... Daya closed his eye... being an officer all this was very easy for him but pretending against his own family was not Daya type...
OUTSIDE
Karan came out from Daya's wards... witnessed a crying Laxmi was asking about her son... Karan felt bad... He had not meet Laxmi for years... Last he had seen her After Abhijeet's convocation when he went to his home personally asking about his health and with the determination that he would told Anuty everything but like everytme Abhijeet played his emotional card and he had lost the battle.
"Tum... tho abhijeet ke dost" Bua ji said,
Karan Nodded "Ji"
Laxmi interrupted "Daya... Daya kaisa hai"
Karan composed himself "He's critical... head injury has cause internal bleeding as well as clot is formed... (he cleared his throat a little) We have to operate him... "
"Tho kijiye na"
"Dekhiye, We are not sure after operation he will gain his sense... their is possibility that he may slip into coma"
Laxmi stumbles "Meri wajah se Daya danger mein hai"(whispers)
Karan look at her, his eyes has spark That's the thing they had plan, He added further "If u ppl want u can meet him before we take him to OT... pls don't disturb him..."
Laxmi entered before, everyone gave her alone time with Daya... She slowly reached near stool sat on it... cares the bandage tho it was fake but for her, Her son was injured "d..aya... Beta... Aap uth jao... Mumma aise pareshan na karo mumma ko dar lagta hai na ... Hospital se aise bandages se u know na bacha get up na"(Sobs)
Daya listen broken shattered tone of his mother, fists otherside of bedsheet, Laxmi put her hand on his hand "Sab meri wajah se Apne kha tha apko nhi jana meri zid... I'm the reason I'm sorry Sorry Daya... Please... Daya I can't take this Guitl Bacha... I can't I never want this... Main tho bas"
"Muskaan ko kya bolungi... Uss ne mujhe blam kiya tho kya krungi mein Da...Yaaa Ahhhhhhh..." She once again broken in cry, Daya slightly opens his eye's... again closed them,
"Dil karta hai khud ko khatam kar du iss guilt mein kasie jiyu... Muskaan ne blam kiya tho kya krungi mein... Daya beta Please... If u will leave me Daya then I will die bata rhi hoon mein jaan de dungi... Muskaan ki Abhijeet ki Accusing "
She was cryin' puttin' her head down, Daya opens his eyes...Said "Bhai will never accuse Mom... u know that"
Laxmi was shocked he was sittin' on bed, "Daya u ok... woh doctor..."
He removed his head bandage, than he removed his hand and leg bandages, She shock "yeah!... Darma kyu? U played with my emotions"
"I'm sorry What did to u But I have a reason"
She slapped him "Idiot! jante ho kitni mautein mari hoon mein in kuch ghanto mein... Mazak sujha tumko"
"mazak karne ke aur bhi tarike hai Mom... yeh itna ghatiya mazak maze ke liye nhi karta mein" he herk from his bed...
"Daya" She was shocked...
He saind in a tone as he wanna made her realised her mistake"Sochiye Mom... kuch ghanto apko yeh guilt hua ki U are the reason behind my condition... Aap marne ki jaan dene ki baat kar rhi thi..."
"par apne kya kiya... apne bade bete.. ko.. uska pura bacpan iss guit mein Jala diya... U just destoryed bhai... u ruined his Childhood"
Daya shooked her "We lost dad, but mom Apne tho unko... anarth kar diya, u just bloody pushed ur son into a pool of guilt... U freaking taunt a small boy for bein' reason behind his father death... Mom have ever tried to listen urself after spitting venom" He said in frustration
Laxmi said in dangerous tone "Stop it... stop it just... Shut the hell up samjhte kya khud ko... kuch bhi karoge... Ek cheez yaad rakho mere aur abhijeet ki baat"
"Hoti apke aur Bhai ke bich ki baat... Jab yeh kisi aur relation ko ghar mein effect na karta...Jab yeh mujhe effect na karta tho mein bich mein nhi padta...Agar Bhai... 1% bhi normal ho pate...Unne tho khud ko kho diya... mujhse jada apne bhai ka bachpan dekha... jana unko... milta hai apko kabhi apka who Abhijeet... "
Where is the real me?
I'm lost and it kills me, inside
"Apka pata nhi mom mujhe mera Funny, always teasing crazy smiling bhai dekhe utne hi saal ho gaye jitne DaD ko gaye... uss samsaan mein dad ke sath mera bhai jal gaya... bacha hai tho sirf ek insaan jho Duniya ki koi bhi baat ka blame leke saans lena janta hai"
"Jisko saans lena tho aata par zindagi jeena nhi..." a tear slipped from his eyes.
Daya broken in tears, "Dad chale gaye Mom...He left us, when we needed him he left us..."
Laxmi gritted "He didn't left us willingly..."
"Jnta hoon mom... but u tell me... Who in this world wanna leave their Love one that too for forever...Mom... tell me one more thing... Dad would ever imagine his Sweet family like this .. A broken one... He ever wanted his Apple of eye.. Shattered like this ... "
"Dad jaha bhi honge Mom bahut naraz aur dukhi honege apse... the way u behaved with bhai na... He must be very angry on u..." Daya said in shattered tone...
She look away "Stop ur ranting, Daya...Aur yeh drama dubara nhi karna main aur abhijeet are far away now nothing can mend our relation better u concentrate on ur slef and ur job and wife. "
She left the place,
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PARALLEL TO THE ABOVE SCENE
IN RATHORE MANSION
I'm paralyzed, I'm scared to live, but I'm scared to die
And if life is pain, then I buried mine, A long time ago, but it's still alive
A person was sitting moron, He had tried to call get some information for his baby brother but got nothing, Phufaji was not picking call, bua ji forgoten her phone in home... Om had attend but cut the call in 15s saying he's completing formality will make call back... and his mother No he didn't even tried to make call to her. He suddenly stands up went to hic locker put his packet in his pocket but for his badluck, tarika came out from washroom he left place in rush without staring back... He tried to lock the locker but but urge of addiction, tension toll him he rushed from their left it unlocked.
Tarika felt little akward the way he left place, she glance at slightly open almirha She open it, beam a little because today, god was with her he found his locker open, She open it starts taking things out from it.
Their were some important file and all, Suddenly something enraged her like any thing their alleast 12-15 packets in a small bag of moron cigrtte, A stalk... She fisted her hand timw was not right to confront him, But he has to answer him for sure. Again, a hospitaal report snatched her attention She read the file it was some old report and prescription for insonmia and bulimia, She understands the medical terms and condition were on that file. A tear fall from her eyes... (whisper) "U are a lair! Abhijeet... U have to answer "
TIME PASSED...
Abhijeet returned back, after spending enough time with his bad habit. He entered found his wife was stting with straight face, She had already place the file and everything back
"Don't worry, bhai ka call aaya tha... Daya's fine They are coming back... tell muskaan about Daya... She must be worried"
She just nodded, left for out saying she going muskaan's room. He felt little strange as she didn't tried to console him
Here otherside
Tarika reached the muskaan room where ajji was also pesent, She put her head on Ajji's lap and cried her heart out, After a good session of crying sh conposed herslef.
Ajji and Muskaan aksed her about matter before she could answer,
Servant call out that... making everyone aware to teh arrival of them from pune... Ajji and muskaan gave eachother tensed look meanwhile Abhrika rushed to front lawn from respective places...
Ye Kah Kar Mere Dushman Mujhe Chhod Gaye,
Ki Tere Apne Hi Kaafi Hain Tujhe Rulane Ke Liye
Story is slightly turning towards it's end... when I started pen it down I had very simple plot... well! not even a plot I just wanted to write a Broken mother-son relation.. With a beautiful concept Of arrange marriage...brotherhood and ofc family drama..
So many Of u complained About less Abhijeet-mother scene... guy Yes I agree Abhijeet and his mother scenes were less but If u look into the story Every character was somewhere some how talking about them... mending them..
But! But, Story is yet not completed.. after 2 or 3 chapter... ABHIJEET SIR KE BAHU KHANE KE DIN SURU.. (WINK) bade sahab aage aage... abke sab piche piche... (hehee)
Next Chapter will held a Outbrust... but Whom... Abhijeet or Tarika? Socho! socho!
Think Positive...Stay Negative ...
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