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She marched out When Om Said "main chhod rha tumko come"
Laxmi stared at the faded figure, inhales a deep sign told everyone to move back their respective room.
IN DAYA'S ROOM
Daya was crying why not his bhai think this much low for him, He think He will blame... Its really heart breaking for him... (pov) "Bhai How could think like this... I can blame apne apne aapko itna dur kiya humko pata hi nhi laga... u cheated us bhai... but, I know U need me I will be their for U don't have to handle ur self alone this time"
Wiped off his tears, (mutters) "Y Tarika bhabi was so enraged I have to Find... I mean Meri Sidhi-sadhi bhabi was angry Young lady today"
Daya was kind soul who can't talk and think so much deep, He has simple funda for living life... "jho hoga dekha jayega" Although he's great officer but that doesn't mean u have to make ur self serious soul talker... He loves his Mother and Brother like any thing... Sometimes Muskaan could be his second priority.
"Daya" Some halt his trail of though.
"I'm sorry Muskaan meri wajah se"
"Shup idiot! Tell me one thing Are u born as Idiot or this is special for me" She mocked, daya nozzle his head in her neck (whispers) "special for u"
She ruffle his hair "Hm"
"Hm" He answered
She keep doing that, "Everything will be fine... For now sleep..."Daya nodded, Slumber toll him in sometime... Muskaan shifted him in comfortable position and ruffle his hair,
Muskaan's (pov) "My Idiot Husband thinks he's a cool dude... Koi tension nhi hoti isko... Ajeeb hai yeh bhi... itni tension hai bhai was so much angered today I was expeting 2-3 slaps for him to daya but he controlled.. Abhijeet Sir was my ideal... Every New trainee Always wanted to be like him His Aura so charming his detection his disguise skills and perfection attracts and motivates freshers to be like him...yeh Tho Abhijeet sir the... I never though a person whose confidence even make his seniors stammer in front of him sometimes, living life like this... His own mom hates him... My God! "
"This family gave love like my own one... this Big family accepted me what I'm yeh! initially their was some problem but after that everyone was confortable...I feel pity for Abhijeet bhiaya as well Mummy jii... Khte hai .. Naftrat karne wala bhi uss aag sabse jada jalta hai..."
"I just hope everything settle in it's place... " With these thoughts Her eyes betrayed her.
SCENE CHANGED TO OTHER ROOM
Laxmi's Room
She was standing near window panel looking outside, whatever happened today was revolving around her mind from Daya's drama to tarika's departure... and Abhijeet words... Everything, Sometime she feels is she a women? Why? Because Women cries easily but she neverr gets her tears easily after her husbands departure U know Why because she had to become Father also for her kids...
"Stop overthinking Laxmi" A voice broke her thought
She inhales breath "Overthinking really Maa"
Ajji drag her made her sit near her, says in extremely calm and serene tone "Galti tho ho gayi tumse Laxmi... "
Laxmi gave a teary look to her, She continues "Dil tho toodh diyaa tum ne uska...Beta tha..aaya tha tumhare pass Shiv ke jaane ke gham mein Itna doobh"
Finally! her eyes betrayed her.. a tear fall from her eyes... "Haan, chhod diya mein ne usse... tha gussa mujhe par Maa thi mein dushman nhi, hating Abhijeet means hating Myself... Maa bane ka Yeh Eshaas yeh saj Sab tho usse hi juda hai... Gussa tha mujhe Uspar nhi uski aur meri hum sabki kismat pe...Kuch jaan ke kuch anjaane mein dil dukha diya mein uska... DUR KAR DIYA MEIN APNA BETA KHUD SE...Phir Usne dur kar diya khud ko MUJHSE... "
Ajji embrace her, consoles "galti ho gayi upe regret bhi ho gaya... Ab usko sudhar ne ka waqt hai... bahut saal gawa diye tumne apne iss regret mein... Laxmi..."
"Kya nhi kiya mein ... taane diye... Kitna dukh diya ... magar yeh ladka kabhi Uf tak nhi kiya...Aise sab kuch sun gaya jaise insaan nhi pathar ho... Sab ko lagta hai mein Abhijeet se Naftrat karti .. hoon Par koi nhi janta ... Usse baat iss liye nhi karti kyu ki mujhe mera beta milta hi nhi "
"Mere Sath kabhi kisi Trip pe nhi gaya...Daya wapas aake usko pictures dikhata tha...uss mein khush ho jata tha...Mein intentionally Trip ki baate uske samne karti thi taki jelousy hoke hi nhi HAQ tho mange ZID tho kare... Par... Par Sab bekaar... mere sabdo mere bache ki masoomiyat cheen li meri galti ka harzana mere bache ne bhara" Sobbed
How much she repent, How She regrets those words she venom out to her son, She was not in right state of mind that time but she get back her sense her mind poke her about her fault about those foul words she had spoken to her innocent son. She apporached her son but, He already Shut himself in cage where he bug to himself only no one else...
He already make his appreance in house least important, His wounds His Illness his griefs his pain nothing just waste of time. although She had wasted enough time in her regret, when ever she tried to spent sometime with him. He some how make sure the discussion involve around Daya...Daya's further study, his college In which feild Daya is interested Daya's Dream, career and all. Sometime She gets frustrated Why can't he talk about himself.
In that frustration, She start taunting him In beief he may answer back... A mother want that her son answer back her fight with her shout at her... Hold her arms tight and ask her Why she did that to him... Why she Spoken those Moron Words To him... Why!? Why!? Why!?
Ajji signs sadly, she mixed pills in water forwards her, She took the glass... In sometime she fall in deep sleep due to pills. Ajji covers her properly moves her hand on her forehead to remove those wrinkles.
(pov) "U made a mistake U repent...this world is Not about being Saint or sinner... Because no one is Always a SAINT or SINNER... It's About how deep u regret for ur sin... And Laxmi is regreating hard from years... Problem is She big time failure when it come to express She is a nervous soul when it comes to express her love "
"The only thing I wish for now is Peace for this sweet family, where everyone is concern about others solace... but they are hurting eachother unintentionally" She goes back... to other side of the mansion to watch out another wounded soul.
OTHERSIDE OF THE SAME CITY
A identity was sitting like lifeless soul with red sollwen eye... and unmanaged hair, A lady entered shooked her head sadly, cares her hair "Tarika.. Bettu enough stop crying"
She hugs her Mother... Her mother is soul who holds her customs and tradition in firm hold yet never try to impose them on her She let her live according to new world, that's why when she return back to her home She didn't asked said anything to her... Untill tarika told her...
"He Loves me Mumma but He can't trust me... he just just..." She felt short of worlds to explain her pain. She let her cry, for sometime. She said in strong tone "get up Beta... Go wash ur face... fresh up ... C'mon bettu Papa ke aane waqt ho rha... Do u really think he would like see u like this unmanaged state "
tarika Nodded her went to change.
After sometime she came out, She was relaxed a little her triedness was less after taking warm shower... Meanwhile, Her mother entered with foor tray in her hands
"Come tarika have some food"
"Mumma Maan nhi"
"Mumma maan nhi... hai... Mumma I'm on way to become... Morden paro for My devdas... haan ... Stop it Tarika... ur ansan will lead u no where Chalo khao aake " She mocked her.
Tarika pouted her mother teased her like seriously, She start having her fovrite Muffines only leaving everything else in that plate. Her mother (Pooja) start in her serene voice, "Try to understand Tarika, What I'm say ok"
She gave her a understanding look, Pooja smiles "Suppose tarika... Instead of Abhijeet It's U Who was suffering from bulimia had a bad past... a strain relaion with own mother all mess in which Abhijeet is It happend with u... and Than Abhijeet come in ur life.. like u came in his life, Kya tum sab kuch bata pati... And not to forget as u said he love U... Same way u loves him... Would U like to share ur painful past with him... "
Unintentionally she said, "Never I would never love to drag him in my mess... Instead I would love to start a fresh I mean, I can't leave My past But its not nessesry to drag him too "
Pooja Raised her eyes brow, Smiles on her naive daughter, Pats her head "Hope U get ur answer Betu"
Tarika bits her lips, "Mein sab kharab kar diya na?"
Pooja nodded in no "Hm... Na Bilkul nhi, Sahi kiya Yeh Rooth na mana yeh sab tho relationship ke liye jaruri hote Kya bolte hai chemistry mein catalyst haan woh hote hai...Pyaar badta hai pagal"
"sojao... kal subha Papa will drop u... "
"Woh"
"Jab apke papa ayenge Hum apko jaga denge... Promise Hm"
"Ji... Mumma Pls papa ko kuch mat"
"Mein bekar ke jhooth nhi bolti apke papa se aap janti hai Betu" She said, giving her aunderstanding look "And, Bacha never in life hide anything about ur self with us... tell ur everything Hm... "
Teasing her daughter lightning a the moment "well! U can hide ur private moments... from us that's not problem... "(wink)
Tarika become tomato on her mothers shameless tease, "Mumma" shrilled.
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"I wanna talk to u" on call... someone said
"Okh"
"Meet me at MR. Brown Cafe, now "
"I'm coming"
A/N : I know u ppl must be shock... Me and update itna jaldi... but their is a reason... Reason is I will not able to update next chapter this months means next chapter will be update in july... between 2-5 july.
Every character holds their own personality, In my story... Just like we all have in real life ... i agree, We can't compare reel with real still a writer writes Antagonist and protagonist... they have think with both the way... Although I never found Myself comfortable with villians that's y In my stories Vilians space is for Situation and condition because of which that person come up as negative on that particular moment.
Think Positive...Stay Negative ...
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