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A/N : No editing ample of spelling and grammar error... Sorry
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I Know U ppl were angry on me Right!... Ok I'm bearing ur anger...Sorry... But yaar Life is moving to a rough patch were I have to decided my career nd.. to be honest permanent financial independency in basic need in today's world... I'm as only a year left in completing my graduation I have to prepare for entrance exam too... for further course than graduation studies than... few other... personal reason and all.
Sometimes Mind really jammed due constant self-pressure... So I would Request, Bear us.. as writers To had a their good and bad days... I will repeat My words I will complete my every story give me Time.
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"Hath Choote Bhi To Rishtein Nhi Chhoda Karte, Waqt Ki Sakh Se Lamhe Nhi Toda Karte."
Terrified, Mother-son duo sat either edges of bed holding hand of Abhijeet, No matter what the circumstances were Abhijeet is the name of belief they have in them he's the thier confidence to fight with every odd.
He has a aura which gives a hope, Laxmi ruffle his hair, "Kya... Kya halat kar rakhi hai iss ne apni..."
Daya was removing his slippers, said " All Thanks to u Mom... " He just can't help and spited venom like words to her... turn his face away as He's don't have strengh. After watching his brother break down he's feeling low and drained.
Doctor interrupted who entered, in haste "Abhijeet"
"Dr. karan"
Daya called him intentionally as he has a clear idea about his brother condition. He patted his back "Relax! Daya kuch nhi lemme check him"
After checking, he injected him... medicine.. wrote some on paper forwards to Daya "yeh Medicine magalo aur ek set please apne pass rakh lo inka... as U r brother's BP fclulates frequntly... "
"karan Yeh! is umar mein BP... It's Dangerous" She said
Karan sign and Said "He has a very bad imune system Mrs. Rathore, and BP is just a matter how much u take stress in ur daily life and in Abhijeet case stress is the other name of his life... I guess! I don't have to ellaborate it" a meaningfully yet formally he concluded.
"Keep him... happy, stress free... add Yoga and healthy diet food... make him eat properly that's it... He will be fine " He console the well-built man standing infront of him. Honestly the he still remember a little boy who used throw ample of tantrums just after listing that his 'Bhai' has to go back his hostel.
Daya asked in unsured tone ... "Dr. karan... his bulimia he"
Karan snaps his head "U know "
"A day before"
"Good to know" He muttered
"Anyway! He's fine now, Bulimia is cure... but woh cha ke bhi apni... Smoking se picha nhi chuda pa rha hai as person rely on something to survive...specially when that person is going through sort off pressure... sometimes that thing literally destroys u in Abhijeet case... his smoking is the same support..." He said...
"U know so much about Him Doctor karan... isn't it?" Daya asked
"jab jumma-jumma mein Doctory ka matlab samjha tha na mein ya bolu enter kiya tha na , Abhijeet... ka Ilaz tab se kar rha hoon... senior ke pooch ke kabhi kitabe padh ke" He gave him piece of information,
"Paise nhi hote the uske pass jada... sirf pocket money... Dcotor ki fees afford nhi kar pate the hum, Ajeeb lagta tha mujhe, jiski mother ek itni success full business ki owner ho woh aise... khair aur sab chhodo proper illaz ke liye paise ka intezaam karta phirta tha"
He inhales deep breath, He knows very well that he had crossed the limit( Apologies) "I'm sorry Daya... Mrs. Rathore... but Mein ne usko suffer karete bahut-bhut kareeb se dekha hai... Mein usko uski Convocation mein... Apki aur uncle ki Picture pakad ke rote dekha... mein usko khud ke special days ki aam din taraf bitate dekha even bhool jate dekha...wahi mein Daya ke janam din ki 1 mahine phele ki tayario ko bhi suna hai"
"Abhijeet mera, phela aur ankhir khas dost tha... daya... par uski life mein Tum uske sab kuch the... uss ne tumko har woh cheez deni chaiye jispe uska haq tha... Khud se jada usko phikri thi tumhari..."
Daya look at Karan with different emotions.. He was feeling like a culprit now, Karan patted his shoulder "Never! Let him down Daya... jaise tum abhijeet ke bhai waise hi mere liye bhi ho, Let him do what he want to do for u he really feels happy and content.. as if he's making his father happy"
His phone rings, he excused himelf... "I'm sorry I have to go... he is Fine now.. hosh bhi aa ajyega Morning tak.."
NEXT MORNING
A identity entered inside the rathore mansion beaming, pressed the bell *ding**dong*
Muskaan sign in sleep last night they slept really late, she opens the door in half sleep.. "Suprise! lazy cat!" person screamed.
Muskaan, widen her eyes "Tarika U aaj... tum tho kal..."
Tarika entered insde.. "Oh! Mrs. CID lemme in first"
Muskaan signs, let her inside"ab btao" giving her water
"Woh! Papa ko kuch urgent kaam tha... so He had to return back earlier... Aur Sach batu mera maan nhi lag rha tha So I request him... aur bass Dekho I here... Waise mein upar jaati hoon dekhoon tho woh "
"Tarika woh listen"
Tarika turn a little serius "Kya hua...Maa, Daya aur Abhijeet sab kha Itna bhi... " She panic"bhijeet Muskaan Abhijeet"
Muskaan made her sit"Phele... dimagh ke ghode shant kar tu... Listen to me... I don't what excatly happened.. But yesterday night Abhijeet Bhai suddenly collapsed in his room... Due to stress... jita mein janti hoon... Something Happend between three and"
She run to her room, as soon as entered found the scene most memorable one... Abhijeet was surrounded by his mother as well as brother.. She was sleeping holding his hand. Tairka felt moisture on side of her eyes.
She left the room silently, Muskaan who was just behind... She drag tarika... "Chal tu phele"
Mukaan narrates her all happening in last Day's... excluding room scene which she herself was unaware. "bass room mein kya hua I don't know"signs.
Tarika inhales a deep breath, "mein fresh hoke aati hoon"
Muskaan nodded, She was aware her friend need some alone time... Tarika was a girl who was shy and smiling she has never faced such complication... her family was Happy, chripy family... with lots of cousins and uncle-auties who were also like her mother.
FEW HOUR PASSED...
He stirred from his sleep... with hand moment both become alert... Laxmi found her elder son struggling to avoid light she placed her palm above his eyes... easing him... with in few minutes he adjust his vision...
Daya with impatient tone asked "Bhai you ok..."
He nodded in yes... mouthing meek "I'm fine... rela..x"
"I want to sit"
"Bhai but"
"Daya Pls"
"Ok"
He make him sit... Laxmi asked "Abhijeet are you fine... weekness tho nhi lag rhi"
He nodded in No... "Nhi... I'mok thank u" he said with neutral tone... which depict nothing. Laxmi found it difficult to stand in front of him... lefts the place "Mein juice leke aati hoon"
He said nothing right now He really didn't wanna face her... He just want some alone time to compose himself... so that he can behave normal as he used to behave. A petite Figure entered with tray in hand which make gulp in terror... "Tarika " whispers
Daya exclaimed in happy tone "Bhabhi u kab aaye"
"Today... early morning..."
"Why don't u wake me up" Daya said
"U was looking so charming na" She said making a pout face...
"So chessy bhabi Ji"
"aw!... what to do.. When I have just Hi-man Devar... it's ok to be Chessy"
"Filrt bhai ke samne hi... daredevil haan!"
"Huh! Darti hoon kya"
"Excuse me... Sir-ma'am... for ur kind information... I'm patient here" Abhijeet interrupted.
"Opsss Possessive BHAI... " Daya laughs
Tarika join him... after watching both hi-fi and laughing Abhijeet to gave a sparkling smile... Which depict his light mood... Tarika signs in relief... as those frowns which she noticed after entering inside the room were gone.. all thanks to daya... who played along with her.
Daya who excused himself "mein aaya"
"Kidhar" Abhijeet asked
"Bhai...Biwi aa gayi hai yaar. uska pallu pakdo...aur meri shirt chhodo" said naughty smile lingered over his face. Abhrika blushed
"Abby sidha bolna... apni biwi ka pallu pakadne jaa rha hai" Now, it time for Daya to become tomato... "Huh!" stomped his foot and move.
"Juice" she forwards...
"Ni chahiye" He said,
She frowns "Are... aur woh kyu"
"Bass aviye" he shrugs off.
"Oh! Nakre haan" She said
"Huh!" He huffs
She frowns little but found his face really desirable "Y are u showing tantrums man!..."
"Huh!"
"Abhijeet I will...hit... just have ur juice... and meds... warna meko btao hua kya"
"U never call me... charmin' nd all... " He said making face. A sweet jealousy AW!... She was spell-bound make a what-face. "U...jealous"
"No I'm not"
She just move forwards... sat beside him, making him shock kissed on his cheeks "I so like ur this avatar...yaar!"
He widen his eyes... than blush,, She gave toothy smile "Haw!... blushing as if we have a french kiss" After her words she realised what just she has spitted in flow. "Medicines lo" standing up from her place. He pull towards himself, she landed on his chest slightly... inspect her face with love-filledeyes... She closed her eyes... He was playing with her in a very loving manner her thin rosy slightly trembling pink lips were really tempting...both were sensing warm breath of each-other... He place a petal like kisses on her each cheeks... (whispering) "We will share french kiss too... very soon"
She just become a living tomato... "I just come" Not to make her more nervous, He picked medicine and juice. She felt the place... She felt really content...
"Nayi hoke bhi khas, hoti jaa rhi hai
Yeh Mohabbat beshram hai janab, Be-hisab hoti jaa rhi hai"
IN KITCHEN
Laxmi was preparing, light tomato soup... Tarika entered "Mummy ji app.. mein karti hoon"
"Nhi... Lemme Do...Tum bhi rest karo.. jet-lag nhi ho rha tumko" She asked her...
"Hai but.. it will go"
"It will go when U will rest... Baby" Laxmi mocked her.
"But..."
"Zip it... I seriously hate when u kids behave as if bahut bade ho... formality...I'm warning u tarika... I'm already bearing ur husbands formality dare u follow his foot prints" she warn her like a mother... Tarika down her head... smiled such serene scold.
Morons over her mistake she added, "U know what... main usko galat nhi bol rhi I'm responssible for What he had beared What he's bearing and... for his such uptight formal behaviour... it just... it's unbearable now"
"Mummy ji"
"No Tarika... I'm regretting What ever I have done in past...But I loved him.. He's My son... My and Shivs... first child he gave me feeling of completion I never hated him... "A Tear of regret slipped
Tarika pressed her hand "Mummy we can't change What ever happened in Past But We can change our Future...Somewhere Still that Little Abhijeet Who need his Mumma beside him is alive in him... It's just that... walls are too high and strong u have break them"
"I will... I want him back... He's my Pride" Changing topic
"Acha take this soup to him... He love tomato soup like this only warna he's a big time cranky kid when he's ill"
"Really"
"yes! And he know this very well... that's y all these year.. he used run away from hime in illness"
"What! How do u know... nd jaate kha the"
"Karans Hospital... And I used to put eye on him... In fear what if he indulge himself in some danger.. But I failed drastically... He was in pain... I was unaware... But only year I left him was his college time... Not becasue my personal but Work pressure... Company was constantly facing lose... from year which were tolling us.. I was bond to focuse their... "
"U know what Mummy ji Respect for u in my heart increaed 100time.. I really adore fight spirit in u... after lossing everything... u satyed strong"
"I was Bong to became Man Of My house tarika... I can't just leave my kids Life and future over destiny... I lost abhijeet But atleast he's successful in his life"
"Acha baba bass... Chalo yeh Soup le jao"
"Ah! Mummy... My back... u said abhi rest karo and My Pain Ah!... I'm going to ask Muskaan to give Massage" She left the place
Meanwhile, Laxmi was standing Open Mouth... What Oscar winning act she had Witnessed just"Stop spending time with ur devar Young girl!" She shouted
ABHIJEET ROOM
She entered inside... found her son sitting all pale and weak near window panel... One she has just decided that she will talk with him... and whatever will be the outcome she will perceive as her... karma... ever accusation and ever tear of her son... She absorb in her.
~Aaj Har Khamoshi Ko Mita Dene Ka Man Hain..
Jo Bhi Chhupa Rakha Hain Man Me, Luta Dene Ka Man Hain.~
Think Positive...Stay Negative ...
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