Hey everyone!

I've finally finished the last chapter to edit! After that, I'm gonna create some questions till the end of this.

So anyway this is chapter 15 and I hope you guys enjoy this! :)


The next few days Yoh and the others were inside the van. Ren beats up Horohoro while Yoh tried to calm down. Meanwhile, Amu opened the window, feeling the fresh air, and looks outside with bunch of trees and clear sky.

Amu smiled, "It feels nice, don't you think, Rosa?"

Rosa appears in her spirit ball, "Yes. Today is a good weather."

She lower her head down and her eyes seems to shut down.

Rosa looks up, "What's wrong?"

"I miss my shugo chara so much." She answered with a sad tone, as she opened her bag and touched one of the eggs. It feels warm and she sighed lightly. "I wish they would hatch again someday."

"It ok," Rosa responded, " I mean they're probably taking a rest but I'm sure they will come back one day."

She looks at her and smiles a bit, "Yeah."

Ryo looks out the window and announced, "Hey guys, we're almost there!" The place looks like a city that has a bunch of tree in front of them. He continued. "The place Lilirara told us about Mesa Veldede, the place where we'll find the Patch Village."

Everyone was looking out the window and surprised about those place.

"Amazing!" Amu sound happily.

"This is wired," Ryo said. "Look at this place! All the houses look exactly alike! It looks like a maze, there are also 4 story buildings."

"It's the ruins of an ancient civilization." Horohoro commented.

"The treasures of the past never cease to amaze me." Ren responded.

"The guide said that the people here disappeared even before the Europeans came." Lyzerg said. "That means this is differently the Pache Village."

"We're lucky to have this info!" Horohoro exclaimed.

"This is so exciting!" Amu's tone sound thrilled.

"Alright! Let's go!" Yoh yelled.

The van kept on going to the village but then it got knock out so everyone got off. They were looking around the place, it had a couple of houses and few people around.

Ryo wondered, "It's another tourist site."

"Huh? Another?" Horohoro confused.

"This place look strange." Amu commented.

"We're finally get here and it's abandoned. We're aren't gonna get anything out of this." Ren responded.

"But we came all this way, let's enjoy the sites instead." Lyzerg said.

Yoh had a strange look, "You're right. We'll never know, we'll learn."

Everyone were walked to the cave and saw the sign.

"Hey!" Yoh exclaimed. "It says keep out!"

Ren walked up and said, "Ok, let's go in."

"Eh?!" Horohoro seem surprised.

Amu sweatdropped awkwardly, "R-Ren, what if we get caught?"

"Hey you there!" a voice called. "For conservation reasons, access is limited to those with a group pass. If you really want to go through, then let us pass. Will you join us?"

They appeared with a group of 6 men from left to right: one had blonde hair with a black cape, big guy with the glasses, tiny mustache and a vest on, in the middle dressed like Arabic clothes, next to him was a huge guy that wore a baseball clothes and the last one looks like a vampire who wore a black clothes. Everyone got so quiet for a few minutes.

Amu was shocked, "Ehh! Who are you people?"

In a few seconds, Ren seems mad and Yoh commented,"Cool! Hear that Ren? They're nice people!"

"Have you ever seen such suspicious tourists?" He looks up. "Look closer, I've seen them before."

Amu turned to Ren, "What are you talking about, Ren?"

"But it's Hao's henchmen!"

Everyone felt shocked along with Amu, "Hao?"

Yoh stopped him, "Lyzerg, calm down." He jumped, flipping his hair and asked. "What do you guys want from us?"

Amu wondered, "What the hell is he doing?"

The Arabic guy was staring at him.

"What?"

"Oh nothing, sorry!" He responded. " You look exactly like him, the resemblance with your great ancestor, our lord, Hao is unbelievable."

Everyone look confused, Yoh was shock, "But how?"

Amu looks at Yoh for a minute, she wasn't shock but she knew that Hao is his twin brother. She pondered, I got a bad feeling about this. What was his reaction if he knew that Hao is his older brother? Shock? Surprised? I don't know.

"Master Yoh." Ryo said.

"A descendant of Hao." Lyzerg replied.

"Bullshit!" Ren yelled.

"I'm confused!" Horohoro commented.

"What do you mean?" Rosa asked.

Yoh made the face, "I say he looks a lot like me."

Everyone get attention on him and Amu's face was shocked.

Horohoro exclaimed, "Hey you! You got some explaining to do!"

The Arabic guy was surprised, "Eh? Sorry, I can't reveal any more information. We have mission to finish."

"Mission?"

"Orders are to give something to those pink hair some secret information and to exterminate her four eggs inside. That's what Hao wants."

Amu's eyes were shaking, "He ..wants me?"

"Amu?!" Yoh yelled.

One blonde hair ran off, grabbing Amu and puts the sword on her face.

"Let her go!" Yoh screamed.

"She's too innocent!" Ren responded.

He smiled, "Let me introduce us. This is my spirit, Bromoro. He was a Vampire Slayer. My name is Boris Tepes Dracula. I'm a Vampire."

Amu felt shaking, "Vampire?"

"Vampire Slayer." His spirit corrected her.

"Dracula!" Yoh was scared.

"Bullshit! Dracula's just a legend!" Ren replied.

"And I suppose you're not even a Shaman!" Horohoro commented, pointing at the guy with the black cape. "You don't even look like Dracula! That guy does?!"

Amu sweatdropped, "Eh? What?"

Dracula was shocked, "What?"

"Eh? You're right. He has the moustache and the clothes." Yoh joked.

"Dumb Ass! You've fallen for such stupidly!" Ren respond to him.

Horohoro was laughing, "Sucker!"

Dracula turned his arm into pointy steel and stabbed him right on his back.

Amu asked in a serious way, "Why did you kill your own teammate?"

"That is my identity preserved." He looked down on her and getting closer to her neck.

"What are you going to do with me?" She got scared.

He bits off her neck, "Feels good."

"Stop!" He yelled.

He threw her on the ground, "Well, it's too late." He grabbed her bag and opened.

"Don't touch it!"

He grabbed all four shugo chara out of her bag, threw it and smiled, "I bet Hao wants to look at it."

"Hold it right there!" Ryo got up.

"Ryo?" Yoh called.

"It's alright, I can take care of that thing." He smiled. "Go take care of Amu-san."

While Ryo was fighting with the vampire, Yoh ran into her and carry on her back.

"Amu, wake up." He replied. "Are you alright, Amu?"

She opened her eyes slowly, her eyes color was changed into dark color. She took Yoh's sword and pushed him away.

"Amu! Are you ok? What's wrong?" He got worried. She pointed at him with the sword.

Dracula smiled, "The punishment of impalement! I made these pillars from the blood of those people, and now you will be impaled by them." He continued. "Of course, I won't let you fight back because any movement. This girl will stab herself in the throat and that man over there, just defeat me, right?" He glared at Ryo.

"Stop! Just leave her alone!" Yoh yelled.

"It's alright, Yoh. I can handle him." Ryo said.


Please R&R!

So this is where I left off, wow I have no idea what to write next and I haven't answered some reviews from my original one over a year (I'm so sorry).

I'm gonna take a break for now so I'm going to leave some questions for you guys while I'm out.

1. Which pairing do you like? (Poll on my profile) After that, I'll post the results for the next chapter.

2. Do you like this version (if you guys are new, then you don't have to answer this)?
3. For the next chapter, should I make Yoh vs Amu?

4. Do you have any ideas for the future chapters?

That's all the questions I have in mind so far.

So those of you who are reading this, thank you so much for your patience and supporting even though I have very little favorite/follows but I really appreciated it. Also, I tried so hard to make you guys happy and supportive. I really hope I can get some comments in the future when I come back.

So again if you have any questions about this or other stories then you can private message me then I'll answer it.

That's it and I hope you have a wonderful day guys!

Bye! :)