Author's note
Hi guys, Ghost here. A small misstep from my end, did not mean to post the chapter in the state it originally was, will have it sorted for next week. Once again, I'm sorry.
But if you saw it within the hour I uploaded it, you now know how much editing I have to do to make sure the story flows well.
But don't worry, we have answered your reviews from Chapter 4.
Reviews:
Raven Soriano: Yeah, this was a needed wholesome thing. Yua's not actually a Tsundere, since they're not dating. Ah, so that's why. As for the quote, we meant this one 'stop blowing holes in my ship!'
MKDemiGodzilla-Warrior: Well, here's the thing. Korenosuke already made Izu's body and personality, Aruto just changed the appearance because that's what he likes.
Speed Reader: High praise, but we only make this as awesome as we could because of hindsight. In my opinion, Zero-One is a great series, one of my favourites. But certain events dropped the series' last third hard.
Dragon Rider 66: Here's the thing. Fuwa is an 'emotional person' and if given the chance to change the past, he'd be tempted. He'd want to save as many people in the past as possible. But time travel is such a problematic and fragile thing (ranging from 'Terminator' rigid time loops, BTTF malleability, or accidentally stepping on an insect and the whole world dies) you've got to be careful. You'll have to wait and see what's going to happen with the Progrise Key and Quartz. If Fuwa was there, he would kee over and burst out laughing. For the Proto-Izu design? I think I was thinking of the 'opposite' of what Izu looked like.
Spidey Viewer: Hey, don't worry about it. Yeah, that's a whole rant Grey's gone over. The whole 'ranting about ninja' stuff is a joke, media portrays Ninjas as unstoppable badasses, but they aren't. They were just stealthy farmers with ingenuity and knowledge of plants. And yeah, that last bit with Soren and Aruto was my idea, but Grey put it in the perfect place.
Toa Solaric: Well, yeah. We've gotta 'pet the dog' somewhere. And yeah, Aruto inherited his jokes from his granddad.
Shooting Star Dragon 3000: Yeah, all the good stuff and all the funny stuff in one chapter.
Magic Detective: Yes. *nods menacingly and smiles*
furyuu: It's not genetic, it's inherited. Bit of a difference.
sonicflash78: Oh yes, all the things are coming ahead.
Here are some reviews answered by our own GreyKing46:
Raven Soriano: Yeah, I'm evil, I admit that. My laughs are more of a teasing hint, though. Like a 'wait and see, you MIGHT be on the right track. Or you might get your heart broken. Wait and see'.
MKDemiGodzilla-Warrior: Not created. But her physical appearance was given by him, yes.
Spidey Viewer: That's fine. We prefer reviews which can lead to conversations or have actual constructive criticism, leads to a dialogue and we enjoy it. Don't feel like you have to review if you've got nothing to say.
But yeah. The rider name thing... MASSIVE pet peeve of mine. It's just so lazy.
The ninja thing? That was just a short joke. And Jin is basically a kid. It was a fun reference. Also, yeah, Japan basically thinks that's what ninjas are, to an extent, because of pop culture. Like how the west sees knights as the regal, strong and mighty protectors when a lot of them were powerful self-righteous dicks because they were from noble families.
Soren laughing at Aruto's joke? That was Ghost's idea. And a damn good one.
Shooting Star Dragon 3000: Don't worry. Defences are set.
furyuu: Bit genetic. Inherited, not hereditary.