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Revamp Changelog
I am currently in the process of revamping this series. Bones are good, execution not so much. Whether that means doing a complete reboot or just a revamp is still up in the air. Given the bones are still okay, I'm leaning towards a revamp, but that depends on how it goes for other stories in the series as well. Some may have their chapters consolidated, some may have chapters added, some may lose complete sections or have sections added in. If there starts to be too many changes, I'll switch from revamp to reboot. Otherwise, for now, keep an eye on any future changes I may make.
ARCHIVED Chapters:
These are chapters I have consolidated and added into other earlier chapters. I haven't deleted them outright because of the reviews attached to them, but I've moved them to the very end of the book and marked them ARCHIVED. They are blank. All that remains are the titles. These can be ignored.
Changelogs
1 New and Improved - Standard changes. Dialogue improvements. Scene expansion and cleanup.
2 Wrongsick! - Consolidated two chapters into one. Standard changes to dialogue, structure, grammar, and layout. Better flowing scenes as well were added, and some reworked a bit to not be so cheesy.
3 Obsession - Standard changes to flow, dialogue, grammar, et al. Cleaned up a lot of scenes as well.
4 Desires - Standard changes. Rearranged and expanded scenes. Some parts have been brought from the next chapter over to this one. Complete rework of this entire chapter, basically.
5 Consumed - Serious rework of pretty well everything. Better fight scene, more tension, better dialogue, rearranged scenes for better flow, the consolidation of two chapter I believe, or maybe that was last chapter, but you get the point.
6 Conquer and Clemency - Complete rework. Consolidation of two chapters. Expanded and elaborated scenes. Modified lore.