This my rewrite to the story I hope this is better than the last one

Hermione POV

Hello my name is Hermione and this is my story.

I just started my 7th year at Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry. This summer just before school started, I found out my friends no longer wanted anything to do with me. Something happened and I am not sure what. Earlier in the summer I found out from my folks that they did not want anything to do with me anymore. They had a reason after I took their memories of me. After they got their memories back, they said I was a freak and they hate me and they wanted me to leave and never come back. My mother Jane was going to have another baby. This time wanted to have a normal baby they wanted nothing else to do with magic or me. After that I left to go to the Burrow to see if I could stay with the Weasleys to find out that even that they did not want anything to do with me. They said that only reason why they were nice to me before was because of the war and they felt sorry for me. They got over it and no longer wanted me around, so I left devastated.

Then I went to 12 Grimwald place to see if I could stay with Harry my best friend who was like a brother said he only needed my brains for the war. He said that he agreed with Ron that I was an annoying know it all. His godfather said he didn't really know me but if Harry didn't want me there I wasn't welcome. After they said that I left to go to the leaky cauldron to rent a room from Tom. When I got to pub Tom gave me a room for the rest of the summer. When I got up to my room, I sent letter to Remus, Tonks, Luna, Neville and my uncle Tony.

The first letter I sent off was to Remus and Tonks to see if they thought like the rest of them. I started the letter like this.

Dear Remus and Tonks

Hi it is Hermione

I just wanted to see how you guys are doing and to see if you guys wanted and thing to do with me. It seems

like everyone I know does not want anything to do with with me and I want to know if you guys will do the same to me. Harry, the Weasleys and even my parents have turned their backs on me. I really hope you guys won't as well

love Mia

After I got done with their letter I sent one off to my uncle Tony to see if I could stay with him after I got done with school or before if it ended up like I think it will , and to see if I could come over for Christmas this year. I wrote.

Dear Uncle Tony,

It is Mia I wanted to know if I could stay with you because of everything that has happen over here. It started with my parents they said I needed to leave I couldn't get anything except what I already had on me. I will get a job for the rest of the summer to save money and rebuy all the essentials. I hope you will let me stay with you. I really need somebody right now.

love Mia

Dear Luna,

It seems like everyone has turned against me I could really use a friend are you still my friend. Please owl me back.

Love Mia

I sent a similar one to Neville. After I got done with the letters, I went to Diagon Ally to go to Eyelops Owl Emporium. I picked up an owl for myself it cost me 20 gallons. I sent out my letters then went to see if I could find a job. I first went to the bookstore to see if I could get a job there. I went to see the store owner she was a nice old lady and she said I could get the job for the summer it would be 20 gallons an hour. It would be 6 days a week as she did not open on Sunday and I would start today.

She told me that I would have to shelve the books then after that I got that done, I would go up front and work there for the rest of the day. After I was done working for the day I went back to the cauldron for the night. When I got into my room I sat down to eat. I needed to eat even though I did not feel like it. I ate a ham sandwich and a small bowl of butternut squash soup. After I got done eating, I went up to my room and saw that my owl I had named Snowstorm was not back yet with a letter from anyone. There was an owl that I had seen before it was Tonks owl, I fed it and took the letter it had for me. It said that they did not agree with everyone else. They told me they loved me like a kid sister, and they would talk to the others to find out if they were kidding. If they were not then they would knock some sense into them. They also wanted to make sure I had somewhere safe to stay.

After I read that I got ready for bed feeling slightly better knowing not everyone had abandoned me. In the morning I would get more clothing before I went into work at the bookstore for the day.

Tony POV

The day started out like any other day. I was working in my lab. I was working on my iron man suit when suddenly I saw an owl come to me. It started pecking on the window hooting. When it got to the window, I let it in. I saw it had a letter from my niece asking if she could stay with me because of what happened there. The letter also said that her parents don't want anything to do with her and they called her a freak, and they would not give her anything but what she had on her back and in her bag.

When I read that I got really mad at my sister and her husband for how they are treating my only niece. After I re read everything then I sent my own letter saying that she could stay with me at the Tower and there were others that lived with me if she did not mind them. Before I sent the letter off, I called Fury to talk to him to see if he minded if Mia could stay here. I would let her anyway, but it seemed like the nice thing to do. When he answered the phone, he asked me what I needed, and I asked him if my niece could come and stay with me. I told him all about the letter she sent me after I got done, he said that it would be all right and he wanted to see her after she got done with school or before. He wondered if she would join S.H.E.I.L.D. He was very interested in having a trained witch on the team. I said I would ask her in the letter I wrote to her.

I added the bit about S.H.I.E.L.D to my letter and I sent it off with her owl. After the owl left, I went downstairs to the living room to tell everyone that my niece was going to stay with us because of problems she has over in London. They all said it was alright with them if she wanted to stay with us. I said good cause I was not asking making them roll their eyes. After we got done talking, we went into the dining room to eat dinner. After we got done eating, I went up to my room to sleep. I hoped Hermione got the letter and then I thought maybe I should have sent her a card so she could buy whatever she needed. Oh well if she needs anything when she comes here, I will get it for her.

That is all for right now please tell me what you think