Author Notes:
Hello Readers! Just a continuition of the previous chapter. Seriously!
I hope you guys enjoy!
Also great news. The story just passed 10K VIEWS! Now I know how they are registered and all. Each view is one chapter, with one single IP address for one visitor, but once it passes midnight in San Francisco, the same IP address restarts as a new visitor every day. So one person can rack up 1000 views but going through the story around 31 times. I'm stoked about reaching 10K Milestone. Hope more views come in the future! Bring on 100K!
'Controlchaos'
R: Great chapter, Sorry it's long thank you for bearing with it,I have a question for you and Criticism but not on you but the show. First is Paul ever going to upgrade his glasses to something high tech that can give him things like night vision, infrared zoom and give wade the ability to see what there seeing without having to pulled out there Communication device or all this but in contact lens form of course wade will need Paul permission to use the camera so he can't just spy on Paul, and as for the criticism I always found it weird that Kim never had or thought of using a Bluetooth style device when on mission to talk to wade, I know they existed back in the 2000s and it's more practical, I mean the Kimmunicator went from handheld to watch but for one you had to stop and pull it out from a pocket and the other you had to look at your wrist an both took your eyes off your surroundings but with a hand free device you could push a button or speak to it to turn it on and communicate and wade being a Genius he could make one that work just like the Kimmunicator and that what I found weird and odd that wade never made. Maybe you could do something about it's just an idea you don't have to it's you're fanfic an it's great thank you for the chapter and reading this comment.
A: My answer will be just as longer. Hahaha. Thank you for your review 'ControlChaos'. Personally I was thinking of more modernised gadgets within the story, but there is a few things that need to happen first. One's in play as we speak, but won't appear again until sometime February 2022. You can guess all you want, but no one will realise it, unless you dig deep. Hint: Occurred around Chps 28-30. I know, I'll be criticised for Paul being a Gary/Mary Sue type of character again. But he has flaws, just some of them haven't appeared yet. But I will be told again that the OC is too Gary Sue type way later on with what I have planned for the story. I plan not to change that at all. Now as for your question. Yes I plan to do something like that and it is a great idea, but... As I mentioned above. One thing needs to come into play. This will also relate to future gadgets Wade will invent. Contact lenses are out of the question though. Tracking chip running gag will appear if dire results. But then there's a theory that comes into play. Paul's temporary role in the team. Is it even worth having those type of glasses? For him yes, but we will have to see. Truth be told, I know it's a show made for kids... Not that young but over the age of... PFTTTT 13 or 14 considering it's violent battles and witty humour. Plus the kill count of... I think it's two, Lord Monkey Fist due to being a statue... Don't know for how long. Similar to Medusa type of shit. Shego getting zapped in So the Drama, which should have potentially killed her. While sometimes shows don't want to be technical with bit by bit. Nit picking all of this. If they did, I would love it. I dislike plot holes. I don't wanna ask questions in the end of a show that go unanswered. Like Shego's surname and IF Season 4 never existed, we would never learn Kim's mum's name! And Larry Possible. Who's the Auntie or Uncle? James or Ann? In this series I decided Larry was Ann's nephew. So there's a lot of indiscretions in the show. As for me, my version is more different. I mean some of the plots will be the same, different writing and humour of course. I can never match the whole trinity of what is Kim Possible. New character in play and the story will be more attached to criminal stuff down the track. Like heavy stuff. Crime Movie references galore. I think a lot will be satisfied with what I do, but there's sooooooooooooooooooo much that needs to happen before that occurs. It might be a bit messy, but I will do my best to make it great! Don't wanna spoil much but there's heaps of time for that. Sorry for getting off track. The show was based in 2002-2005, as the graduation class of 2005 was seen in the last episode. Most of it's technology was decades beyond what we have here in reality of 2022. Like Real Human Robots! Fast Sneakers! SADI the Systemised Automobile Driving Intelligence car! Same time as Tesla opened it's doors. BRAIN SWAPPING MACHINE! Now some episodes were beyond ridiculous and hope to avoid that in this series. And I've researched about the first release of Bluetooth devices, headphones or earphones. 1999. But not the ones that have advanced like Airpods Pro and Sony WH4s. A earpiece one. Like Motorola type! When you mention the handheld to the watch. That idea was great. For some situations where Kim is in, it's more practical to speak from the watch, hence why Paul the OC mention the watch thing to Wade... In Freaking Freshman year! Compared to Senior year! Where Kim started using the watch. I prefer both honestly. But I think it was the writers idea for that. I mean they did have some time to make big changes towards the last season. But Christmas is around the corner in this story and possibly Paul buying Kim a present which would relate to some Bluetooth earbuds (Wink Wink Wink). I think Wade will have a field day very soon and be creating a bunch of new ideas and gadgets when you hear this story line. Heads up. It involves a type of coin ;) That's all I'm giving away. Thank you for reading and thanks for the ideas! And kudos to the criticism on the show. If it was me talking about the show? I'd very critical, still a great show nonetheless despite only 4 seasons. Curse Disney Channel's 65 Episode rule. Made writers and producers scared.
'MonteMontero'
R: LMFAOOOOO BYYEEEEE ELON MUSK SHOWED UP? This story is too fire…
A: I'm glad you loved the Elon Musk appearance. Appreciate the compliment of calling this Fanfic... Fire! Also thanks for reading!
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Back in New Jersey. In a smelly place.
Team Possible were still trying to find Motor Ed's liar. It had been some time since they entered the junkyard. Little did they know, they had to hurry because Ed and a few of his lackeys would be arriving back very soon. Wherever his liar was. Was a pretty freaking good hiding spot. Team Possible were stumped.
Paul had stopped walking to tell Kim that time was being wasted.
"Kim. This is ridiculous. We've been here 20 minutes and haven't found anything yet!"
'BING BING'
"And Bonnie won't stop calling me!" Paul says, gesturing to his phone.
"She'll stop calling you soon. And it has to be here somewhere. Wade's never wrong." Kim says.
"Maybe it's a fake location. Surely he must live somewhere else." Paul says.
"Or not at all. He's probably watching us from one of those buildings." Kim says gesturing to the tall buildings. "What do you think the rent is for one of those apartments are?"
Paul had an idea pop into his head.
"That's it!"
"What? 1500 a month?" Kim says.
"No not that. We need a higher vantage point. Then we can spot his hideout. And I got the gadget in hand for that."
Paul puts down his backpack and reveals to pull out-
"A drone?" Kim says.
"Yeah. I bought it so I can use as a hobby in my spare time. Then I realised I could use it for missions." Paul explains as he holds the remote with a screen in his hand.
"That's a great idea! Now we can find his liar."
"Thanks. I wish I thought of it sooner. Thought finding his liar would be a cinch. Okay. Going up!" Paul says as the drone.
The drone moves up and stops, with a big wobble.
"Woah. A bit windy up there." Paul says as he shifts the camera down to spot a building of some sort. He realised how big the junkyard was. It was crazy! It looked like it went for miles!
After 30 seconds he manages to find a small office space inside the Junkyard.
"There it is! I found it!"
"Where is it?" Kim asks.
Paul was trying to figure out where he was. It was difficult to spot where he and Kim were. He then activates the H button on the screen, showing his current location. Popping up a letter 'H' on the screen, showing there location. They were only a few hundred meters away from it.
"Right, straight up and two lefts!" Paul points.
"You rock Paul! Let's get those batteries." Kim runs towards his directions.
"Wait for me!" Paul says following Kim.
Kim began following Paul's instructions towards Motor Ed's not so hidden liar after all.
Upon arrival she spots a small office space, alongside a big shed and a potty toilet far from the two small structures.
She hears a buzzing noise from above and spots Paul's drone. When looking up she notices it coming towards the ground. She makes space for it to land.
Then Paul arrived and picked his drone from the ground. Happily satisfied with the results it provided with.
Kim approaches him and gives her analysis of the small shed and office.
"So this is it? Nothing hidden or underground? Kinda weird for this Ed guy to have his liar above ground."
"Drakken has his Caribbean Liar on top of a mountain."
"Touché." Kim says,
"Maybe he has a small crew? Or possibly decoy location." Paul says.
"A pallet of batteries go missing and it doesn't look like a one man job. Guaranteed he had help. Probably half a dozen people would do the trick in this case."
"That's the part that gets me. Let's check the office first, then the shed." Paul suggests.
Kim agrees and both walk towards the office. Kim tried to open it, but Motor Ed was smart enough to-
"Locked." Kim says.
Paul try's to kick the door down, but to no avail. Kim looks around and see an axe in the pile of garbage.
Bit hestitant to touch something dirty, she'll definitely need to take a shower after this mission was over.
Grabbing the axe, as Paul still tries to kick the door down, "I got this." Kim says as Paul stands back a long distance, worried the axe head will fall off and poke someone's eye out... Or lose a head.
Kim swings at the door, causing the timber door to create a mark in it. She swings again. It was working. She then hit the doorknob and had a mark in it.
She hits the door again, this time the outside doorknobs goes flying onto the floor of the junkyard. Spinning out on the floor.
"Rest In Peace doorknob. We hardly knew ye." Paul says
"We're in." Kim says as she opens the door to the office space. She places the axe carefully on the floor and opens the door to Motor Ed's office.
They take a look at it and immediately think that no way the batteries would be in here. They instead look for clues.
"This guy's very messy."
"His office smells like fresh set of tyres in here."
They look around for clues. But both highly doubt that the batteries would be in this small construction site type of office. Paul finds a flimsy looking business card.
"This guy made his business cards on old receipts." Paul notices the back of the card and it's printed writing on it. Pocketing the card for future use and to get this guy behind bars.
They notice a sandwich sitting there and it didn't look appetising.
"I wouldn't even have a bite of that." Paul says.
"Maybe Ron would have."
"Not healthy if I do say so myself."
"Tell me about it. Ron once ate sofa pizza during our summer break." Kim recalls.
"Sofa pizza?"
"You know. A missing piece of pizza under the cushion of a sofa."
"That is a serve food poisoning warning." Paul says.
Both continue to look for clues and a hidden lever to access the hidden liar, they dub they are wasting their time.
"We should check out the shed." Kim says.
They exit the office and go towards the shed. Kim picking up the axe along the way. She notices the door wasn't locked. Surprised why the shed didn't have a lock, just like the office. 1 for 2. Not bad.
She throws the axe away and opens the shed up
They see some tools and screws. Looking around in the shed. Nothing in regards to Tesla batteries.
But saw heaps of boxes labelled Planet Tool on them.
Both exit the shed, as Paul closes the door shut.
Nuts and bolts, they got screwed.
"Nothing in there." Paul says.
"Nothing that will help us find their secret liar." Kim says.
Paul directs his attention to the portable toilet. He thought.. Why not? He's seen stranger shit since coming here.
"How about we try that toilet." Paul points towards.
'BING BING'
Paul sighs mentally at this. Couldn't Bonnie get the memo!
"Ew. Paul are you serious." Kim says disgusted. Paul decides to walk towards the portable toilet. "Why would they hide things in there? Nothing is going to be in that-"
"Look Kim! A secret shaft!"
"Toilet." Kim finishes off her sentence. She rushes towards Paul. She sees a mine shaft lift. It looked pretty deep in to.
"Woaah! Well I'll be darned." Kim says amazed.
"You could fit a freaking monster truck in this lift!" Paul says.
They look down to see how far it goes down. Probably a hundred feet.
"They have no trouble emptying out their bowels." Paul comments.
"Eww Paul. That's so gross."
"Aw come on Kim. Don't be a stick in the mud." Paul says joking.
Paul enters the shaft and turns around towards Kim.
"You coming down or not?"
"(Sighs) I've been in this dumb for half an hour. I don't see why not."
"Ha! It's funny because it is a dump!"
Kim enters the mining lift. "Going down!" Paul presses the down button on the lift and shuts the manual gates.
Kim and Paul were descending down into an unknown unground place. They had to be sharp on their toes. They could be there working on their next evil plan.
The lift stops as Paul opens up and they are amazed to see what they found.
"Woahhh!" Both teens say simultaneously. They walk through and see a modernised car lab of some sort.
It was so neat on the benchtops. Then when you look at the floor, dirty again!
There was tools galore. Planet Tool again!
They must sure love that place.
"There's car parts everywhere down here!" Paul says.
"They must have at least a dozen people walking down here." Kim says.
Kim notices a very large vehicle with a small chassis on top of it.
"What do you think they were building down here?"
"Engines. Suspensions, 65 inch tyres!... Could be a Monster Truck? But it's a wild guess."
"You like those sort of things?"
"Not.. really. I prefer fast cars. Lamborghini's, Ferraris, Bugatti's. They are too expensive to own. People pay for the brand that's why."
"You mean people pay money for the logo?" Kim says.
"Yeah. It's the same with Club Banana... Gucci, Louis Vuitton, Armani and Supreme. I thought you'd know about this?"
"Does is really matter?"
"If you like trendy materials. Yes. If you're one a budget and a teenager. Hell yes." Paul says.
Kim didn't understand about brands like Paul mentioned. Sure she keeps up to date with fashion, but gets sucked into the brand too much. Like Smarty Mart and Club Banana selling the exact same clothes. Just paying extra money for the logo of Club Banana and fancy colour scheme name they put on their tags.
Marketing People!
The duo continue to look for the batteries, both could feel that they were close.
Within the next few minutes, Kim spots a tarp and walks over. The tarp had some writing on it and she reads in her head.
'Not the Tesla batteries. Seriously.'
It had rough handwriting on it.
"Hmm, even labelling it with the word 'Not' is suspicious."
Kim yanks the tarp off and sees the box will the Tesla logo on it.
"Bingo!" Kim says. She revealed the hidden batteries behind the cloth.
She opens the lid and Paul checks the batteries out. He gasps.
"Holy shit! They are small!"
"Is.. that a good thing?"
"Good? The old batteries weighed 300 kilos and was the length of the car! Now they are less then... Pft! possibly 1/10th of their size and weight. Also almost double their range! Elon you've done it again!" Paul praises the Founder of Tesla
"Wow. Talk about down sizing." Kim says looking at the batteries.
"I'm going to call a hire truck and small crane to lift up the case of batteries." Paul says pulling out his device.
"No need. We'll just get Wade to get us a free ride and get these batteries back to Buffalo." Kim insists.
"Good idea."
Kim contacts Wade.
"Wade. We found the batteries."
"That's (Freezing video) Kim. You (Freezing video) lift?"
"Say again Wade?"
"I (Freezing Video and major long pause) Free."
"Hang on Wade, I'm in an underground workshop. Let me try by the lift." Kim walks towards the lift shaft and begins to speak to Wade.
Paul looks around and admires the workmanship of this magnificent car workshop.
This Motor Ed guy really was dedicated at making cars, trucks, the whole lot!
Too bad he's villain and must pay the price for his wrongdoings.
"Looks like something Colin Furze would do" Paul says to himself. Comparing this guy to a famous British Youtuber.
"Thanks Wade. You're the best." Kim says as she wraps up her video call with Wade. She begins to walk back to the other teen.
"Right, Wade organised a truck to get us back to Buffalo all we need to do is-
"-Carry the batteries up the surface and load them to the trailer?" Paul says basically finishing off her sentence.
"You absolutely read my mind. Alright, you know the drill." Kim says.
"What? You want me to do it?"
"Well, you are the muscle right?" Kim says.
"Kim, this could way a few tones. I know there's wheels on it and all, but could you give me a hand though please?"
"Since you asked nicely. Sure." Kim gives a smile to the teen and smiles back.
Both steady themselves as they begin to push the heavy cargo of Tesla batteries towards the mining lift.
"Carry was the wrong word. Push was the one I was looking for." Paul says as he grunts heavily from pushing. Kim grunts as well.
Even though it had wheels on the bottom. Pushing hundreds of Tesla batteries is really a tough job.
About a few minutes of heavy pushing they finally make it towards the lift.
Paul wipes a brow of sweat, ensuring that batteries wouldn't shift around in the lift, he places them on the corner of the lift. Kim closes the gates and presses the button to go up.
Surprisingly the lift didn't struggle to lift the batteries, which could have possibly weighed almost the same as a SUV car.
Once they reached the top surface they automatically noticed a problem.
"Wait! How are we supposed to fit them by the small door?" Paul says just realising the situation.
Both teens realised that the cargo didn't even fit through the potty door. They then thought to themselves a major question.
The question is... How did it get down there in the first place?
"There must have been someway they got this down there. I mean the lift is huge! They wouldn't build something this big and not exit from here?" Kim says. She looks at the lift's panel. It only had two levels. Not a third level.
Kim leans against the crate thinking. She looks at the back of the lift and notices a hatch.
She looks through and notices another entry. She unlocks the hatch and opens a secret gate on the adjacent side of where they came through in the first place.
"This way." Kim says fully opening the gate and giving Paul a hand with the batteries.
Both teens push the heavy crate and hoped that it wouldn't be a steep exit
Soon enough.
They notice a garage door on the inside of the secret entrance.
Both stare at each other confused. They didn't even spot a garage door inside the junkyard. Did this perhaps led outside of the junkyard?
Paul walks towards a red button on the side and press it. In doing so, it enables the garage door to open up.
Sunlight seeping in slowly and notice the Junkyard's environment they saw about 10 minutes ago. They walk outside and notice the door had a hidden door concealed inside the dirt.
"A hidden garage door confined with dirt? How ingenious." Paul says admiring the great gadget installed.
"Is that even possible? Wouldn't the dirt just collapse on it's own?"
"Last I checked your surname. It ended in 'Possible'"Paul says grinning.
"Ha ha. Very funny. Now let's get these batteries to the front entrance. Directions?"
"Right. Drone time again." Paul says pulling out the drone again from his backpack.
After managing to get to the front entrance of the junkyard... eventually.
The directions were pretty easily. Only a right turn and straight line to the exit. But a slow push towards their ride.
Awaiting them, was a truck driver. He was using an mini crane which was installed on the back of his trailer, as he places the Tesla batteries carefully in his lorry.
"Thank you for helping us move our cargo Mr. Merle." Kim says appreciating the ride and the delivery of batteries.
"Please Miss Possible. It was the least I could do after you helped me get my rig back on the highway." Mr. Merle says in a deep rough voice.
"Yeah, a flat tyre can really ruin someone's day for hours and hours."
"Until you came along with the spare tyre from that gas station."
"It was no big sir."
"Alright. We better blow this joint before Eddie and his buddies come back." Paul says.
"Right. Buffalo here we come. And this time, I got 18 spare tyres in case!" Mr. Merle exclaims as he jumps into the driver's seat of his truck.
"18?"
"Hey kid, you never know who's going to need them."
"Fair point." Paul says.
Everyone was inside Mr Merle's truck and off they went. It would a few agonising slow 6 hours to get there with the speed they would be going instead of the 4 hour car ride, but they would save Elon Musk's batteries.
"Alright kids, hang on." Mr Merle declares as he puts the truck in drive and were about to exit the junkyard.
Suddenly the driver breaks near the exit as a man walks in front of the car, minding his own business.
"Woah, what the fuck!" Mr. Merle says.
"Aeh! I'm walking here!" A guy with a New York accent walks by and gives the middle finger to the three passengers.
"Phew, that was close. Now let's-" Kim says.
Loud motorbike engines could be heard and Motor Ed and his two lackeys arrive in front of the truck. Preventing the truck from driving off.
"Hey! What are you doing with that truck! Seriously!" Motor Ed says angrily.
"Just picking up-"
Paul gives him a jab of the elbow and a small shake of the head, telling him not to say anything about the stolen cargo that Motor Ed stole.
"Uhh... Just dropping off some used furniture. That's all." Mr. Merle says nervously.
"Really? What kind of furniture?" Ed says not believing him. He crossed his arms in anticipation.
"Erhh... A leather couch, some wooden chairs and a table." He says with a less nervous tone.
"Hoho! Radical! Maybe that couch has a spot in my office. (Air guitar solo)"
Both teens stare at him thinking this guy was a weirdo. Motor Ed was still doing his air guitar solo.
One of Motor Ed's workers notice something about the two passengers in the truck.
"Hey what a second! You look like those two from the video surveillance footage." Sam says.
Both of the teens freeze and get worried. They were legit 1/10th outside of the junkyard and this showed up.
Motor Ed stops doing his air guitar solo and que a pissed off Hulk Hogan lookalike.
"Heyy! So you lie about why you're here and the leather coach! Oh dude. Motor Ed is seriously pissed!"
"Uh oh." Paul says.
"Why are you here snooping at your place!" Sam says.
"They probably stole the batteries dude. Seriously!" Motor Ed says.
"You'll have to get these batteries from us first Motor Ed!" Kim shouts.
"Ha! I'd like to see you try Red. Get her!" Ed says to his two lackeys.
"With pleasure Ed." Kim exits the truck through the open window and begins to take on one of his lackeys. She begins dodging Sam and she tries to knock him down.
"Woah Boss, this girl is feisty." Sam says trying to pin her down.
"Last time I remembered, you two had four fists you can use. Seriou- OOF! All right, who did that? Liam you son of a bitch? Not the time for that, but sweet punch dude. 10 out of 10. You been practicing?"
"Uhh. IM STANDING RIGHT HERE ED! How could I possibly punch you?" Liam says trying to capture Kim Possible.
"Then who did it?"
"I did!" Paul says. Ed turns towards the teen looking very serious.
"Ha! Finally a neutral challenge. Sweet punch by the way."
"Thanks. But I'd bet Kim would kick your ass any day Hulk Hogan." Paul says.
"Hulk Hogan?! ... Nice name John Wick guy. But the Ed doesn't do lookalikes. Seriously."
"You seriously don't shut up, do you Eddie?"
"Ooooooo. I'm so scared. Check out the guns show baby." Ed flexes his muscles. Showing the tattoo of his name on his left bicep, kissing it in the process.
He looked big, but was he all talk?
"Then why don't you test them on me." Paul suggests.
"Good idea, John Wick guy." Motor Ed begins charging at Paul, who dodges Motor Ed. The blonde haired muscle engineer tries to punch Paul, but kept on moving.
Avoiding getting hit by the big man.
While Paul, wanted to tire out this muscle maniac. He looked liked he packed a punch, but wasn't much of a fighter.
Still Motor Ed looked like he could bench press the Statue of Liberty...
"Hold still! Seriously!" Motor Ed says.
Paul keeps on moving.
Swerving every swing Ed tries to place on him and eventually Paul stops moving. Why?
Simple.
"Had enough?"
"(Panting out of breathe) J-just give me a second. Seriously. I'll be fine... in a minute." Motor Ed was out of breathe, Paul didn't even lay a finger on him and was already tired out.
Back to Kim, she managed to easily handle both Liam and Sam. But they had to move quickly. Both of his lackeys were out on the ground. She cleared the motorbikes from the path of the Mr. Merle's truck.
She signalled the driver to start moving in case a gang of them came back. They were similar to motorcycle clubs. Big guys with tatts and scary looking guys.
She didn't want to take the risk. Even though it might be a narrow chance that both her and Paul would defeat them all.
"COME ON PAUL!" Kim yells out as she jumps into the truck's passenger seat.
Paul turns his head towards the truck and starts running. Ed realised he was getting away from him.
"O-oh no you don't. Motor Ed always has the last say!" Motor Ed starts running. Getting the last bit of energy he had in his system.
Paul was trying to reach the passenger seat door
Mr. Merle shifts into second gear. Kim notices the gap between Paul and her doorside was gaining.
"Mr. Merle! You have to slow down. Paul isn't in the truck yet!"
"I can't Miss Possible. It's a manual truck. If I stop now it will screw up the stick shift box!"
Kim sighs annoyingly at this. All was too hard for this guy. So she does it the hard way, as she rolls down her window and puts her legs out.
"Miss Possible! What are you doing?"
"Saving my friend!" Kim says to Mr. Merle, as she exits the truck. She holds on tightly to the side of the now quickly moving truck.
If she fell off. She could injure herself quite severely and the cargo of batteries could be missing somewhere between a 350 mile stretch of highway.
Paul was trying to catch up to the door, but the truck was gaining speed.
He then notices Kim on the side of the truck.
"KIM! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!"
"SAVING YOU! (Gasps) PAUL! ED'S RIGHT BEHIND YOU!" Kim yells at the teen.
"WHAT?!"
"ED'S! BEHIND! YOU!" Kim shouts again, trying to warn the teen. This time expressing each word.
"HEAD'S BEHIND ME?" Paul yelled back confused.
"HUH? WHAT WAS THAT BRO?" Motor Ed said, only a few metres behind the teen.
Paul turned around the noticed Motor Ed behind him.
"OH SHIT!" Paul yelled as he picked up speed upon seeing Motor Ed. The trailer door was his last chance on getting onboard the truck.
Mr. Merle turned right as he neared the highway, which led towards Buffalo. Kim hanged on for dear life as she reached towards the end of the trailer.
Paul had to avoid cars running him over, same goes for Ed.
"HAHA! Nothing beats a running adrenaline rush! Seriously!" Motor Ed says to himself as he almost got sideswiped by a car.
Meanwhile Kim tries to open the trailer, she narrowly avoids getting hit in the head, as she crawls into the trailer. The left side of the trailer's door was open wide. Paul saw this and knew it was his last chance.
"PAUL! GRAB ONTO THE DOOR!" Kim shouts.
Paul hears her and stares at the door. He prepares himself and jumps at the door.
He grabs on to it and holds for dear life! He manages to pull himself up and had his back against the door. Holding onto the door's steel frame, facing away from the truck.
"GRAB MY HAND!" Kim yelled.
Paul tried to move the door towards Kim, trying to close it. But the sudden gush of wind, slammed the door hard, making Kim move out of the way as the trailer door slammed. Prevent her head getting cut off.
Mr. Merle winced at the sound of that slam "Hey take it easy back there kids!" He shouts back. Doubting the teens could hear him at all.
The door was back to where it was. Paul started to worry...
Then a hand appeared near his feet.
"GOTHCA!"
"WOAH!" Paul shouts as Motor Ed managed to grab onto the trailer door.
Kim witnessed this and tried to see if she could try something at him.
"Those batteries are mine dude! Seriously!" Motor Ed says trying to pull himself up.
"These batteries are going to there rightful owner." Paul says trying to push him off.
"I might have lost these ones dude! But I'm going to miss the rail express to Grand Rapids! AKA The gold mine! HAHAHA!" Motor Ed suddenly lets go of the door, rolling off as he shouts something in the distance." I'll see you on the flip side brahhh!"
"What the fuck was that all about?" Paul says to himself.
Kim returned with a wrench, but noticed Motor Ed was gone. She directs herself to saving her partner now.
"PAUL!"
Paul swifts his head to the sound, he barley heard it from the wind in his face.
"SWING THE DOOR CLOSE!" Kim shouts out.
Paul hanging on for dear life on the truck trailer door, begins to swing towards Kim. But the wind caught it and was going towards Kim quite fast!
"TOO FAST!" Kim shouts as she jumps out of the way to prevent her hands and fingers from being chopped off.
Paul manages to close the door shut, as Kim quickly shuts the trailer door fast to prevent the door from swinging open again.
Paul collapses from the steel frame in exhaustion, but successful managed to hold on and shake Motor Ed from their grasps.
Both teens sit and lean against the door trying to catch their breathe.
Both breathe heavily from the extreme few minutes of madness they just experienced.
They feel the truck making a left turn.
They look in front as the cargo of batteries comes quickly sliding towards them and yell, as both both jumped over the cargo and avoid getting crushed and try to catch their breathe on the other side of the cargo box. Both let out a sigh of relief.
"You okay?" Kim asks.
"Never better Kim... Maybe a smoother ride will do it next time." Paul says with a tight throat. Nervous about what just had happened.
Kim grins happily and hugs him.
"I'm so glad you're okay." Kim says.
"I'm glad you're okay too. That was a dangerous stunt you did back there. What where you thinking?"
"I wanted to save you."
"I would have been fine from him."
"But still. I don't wanna lose you." Kim says letting go of the hug.
Paul thought to himself about what she said. He knew losing Ron was a big thing to her. And without a partner or a close friend. She probably would be a wreck, but he didn't assume that about her. She did have Monique and Josh.
He just gave her a smile and a reassuring pat.
Their thoughts were interrupted. Behind them, they hear a sliding noise.
"Hey, you kids alright?" Mr. Merle asked.
"Pants are clean. And yes we are sir." Kim says, still startled from the last two minutes of action.
Few Hours Later
Buffalo, New York
Inside the Tesla Gigafactory 2
Tesla workers were inside the factory about to finish off their shifts for the day.
When they noticed a red truck approaching the loading dock area.
"Oh dangnamit! My shift box is busted!" Mr. Merle says, two teens exit the truck and the manager of the operating floor instantly recognises them.
"You guys are back!"
"And with the batteries!" Paul says banging on the side of the truck
Eventually Mr. Merle assits Team Possible by placing the cargo on the loading area.
"Oh my god." The manager runs towards the track and sees the crate. So enough they get the batteries on the working area floor to inspect them.
"They are all here! I've got to tell Mr Musk about this!"
"Could be also see him. We need to tell him something important." Kim says.
"Certainly! Mr Musk, Kim Possible and her sidekick are back."
Paul frowned at this. Was he not even considered a partner? The nerve of some people.
He clears that thought and speaks to Kim.
"I thought he'd be busy?" Paul said to Kim.
"For a Billionaire, he sure does have time."
'Beep-Beep, De-Deep'
"Wade. Tell me the police arrested them."
"Two out of the three you took down. One is still at large. Motor Ed."
"(Groans) Of course he's still out there. Do you know his last known location?"
"Last seen in Albany a few hours ago. I'll try and figure out where he is now. He covers his tracks very well. Doesn't even use a smartphone. Pagers all the way for him."
"Okay good. We still think Mr Musk is in trouble of losing more of his batteries." Kim says to Wade.
"Maybe there's a mole inside Tesla."
"That's what Paul is dubbing, but we're going to get to the bottom of this."
"I'll check their employee records for any red flags. That's if I manage to get access from GJ. Tesla is a major company."
"Miss Possible. Mr Musk will see you right away. He's waiting in his office right now."
"Talk later Wade." Kim ends the video call with Wade.
"Mr Musk. We have some important to tell you... Paul please sit down." Kim says. Paul was standing near the window with a view of the factory.
"Hang on Kim, these guys are putting the chassis on." Paul says looking back while awaiting for the Tesla workers to place the body of the frame of the wheels.
Workers place a chassis on the car's plate.
"Remarkable isn't it." Paul says. Admiring the beauty of car production.
"Sorry about him."
"Don't be. I usually get people who would even look twice about how the car's manufactured." Mr Musk says.
Paul walks back to his seat.
"Right... Look Mr Musk. We think you may have a mole with your company"
"A mole? (Laughs) Miss Possible. This company hasn't got any moles, if we do, we might have 1 or 2 that have gone south in the past, but none to my knowledge."
"Okay... Motor Ed. How did he find out about the batteries?"
"Well I did hold a press conference about them." Elon admits.
"Mentioning this very location?"
"Nope. Never mentioned it Miss Possible. But what has happened in the past 24 hours, as precautionary measures, I decided to store the whole supply in the warehouse in Michigan."
"Michigan? Well not too far from here."
"Well I had to transport most batteries to the disclosed factory in Grand Rapids."
Paul froze when he heard that name. It was the same place that Motor Ed mentioned not too long ago.
"Grand Rapids?" Paul says.
"Yes. That's where the factory is located."
Paul starts to click the pieces together. Ed exposed himself!
"Ed's going to Michigan!"
"What!?" Kim says
"What! How do you know this?" Elon asks.
"The guy said it to me. 'I'm going to miss the rail express to Grand Rapids'." Paul says.
"That's where the batteries are going. So someone is feeding him information. Motor Ed must be on his way there too!" Kim jumps out of her chair.
"We got to hurry! If we drive now, we might make it there in time!" Paul says.
"Who said anything about driving?" Elon says smirking.
Undisclosed Tesla Factory In Michigan, United States
...Near Gerald R. Ford Internation Airport
...Just off 52nd Street SE
...Built in 2015
Just a hundred feet away from the entrance of the factory, stand guard about 8 men looking through a set of binoculars.
"God damnit, where's Motor Ed! It's almost time for the raid."
All of a sudden a blonde haired guy came alongside them
"Hey dudes!" Ed said worried and quite loudly.
"Shhh!"
"Sorry." Motor Ed whispered.
"Hey boss, where's Liam and Sam?" One of the lackeys whispered.
"They got caught!" Ed said in a loud voice.
"What! How?"
"This redhead chick and this John Wick looking guy went inside our hideout and took our batteries!"
"What! Oh shit man! There onto to us man! (Takes a deep breathe in) Alright... Okay, they haven't found us yet. We can still steal these batteries, but no more after this. We have to go into hiding afterwards!"
"Dude I couldn't agree more. Seriously. They'll make me go back to that... lab. What did Tyson say?"
"Ready to move at 0100."
"Radical dudes!" Ed said way too loud again.
"Shhh! Not soo loud Ed. You wanna get caught?"
He shook his head quietly.
"Good. Okay team. It's time. Go quiet. That applies to you too Ed."
"Chill bra. Motor Ed will be quiet. They'll never know I was even here."
"Move out."
Ed's crew moves in slowly inside the opened factory door.
... Kinda weird for the door to be wide open.
"Bingo!" One of them says.
A whole cargo of Tesla batteries staring right in front of them. Must be hundreds and thousands of them!
Heavy too according to Kim and Paul.
The crew tip toe slowly towards the crates to see if they goods are actually inside.
"Whatcha got there Hulk Hogan?" A voice can be heard.
The crew turns around a stares at the teen from a distance. He had a grin on his face as he watched them attempt to steal the batteries from the factory.
It was revealed to be Paul.
"John Wick guy!" Motor Ed says.
"You forget about me as well." Another voice, but this time with a feminine tone.
It was revealed to be Kim.
"Red!" Motor Ed says.
"Yep. That's what the colour is on the company's logo." Another voice, but this time, a masculine tone and sounding more manly.
It was revealed to be... Elon Musk himself!
"Tesla guy!" Motor Ed says shocked. "Big fan by the way dude."
"Thanks. But it doesn't stand for what you stole from the company."
"Stole? We didn't steal anything. We're your mechanical engineers. Here to help you install those batteries efficiently. Seriously." Motor Ed says grinning for the charade. But they weren't buying it for one second... Maybe Ron would.. But he isn't here.
"Well I'm not buying that for one bit." Elon says crossing his arms.
"You see Eddie. We figured you have a mole within Tesla."
"A mole?" Ed says sounding stupid. "Don't they live in the ground?"
"Cut the bullshit Ed. We found your boy." Paul says walking towards Elon and Kim.
"Boy? What boy?" One of the lackeys said.
A guy in handcuffs comes out of nowhere. He was wearing a puffy jacket too.
"Tyson!" All of Ed's crew exclaim.
"Ahhh! The name says it all." Paul says.
"But how? Seriously, how? We put him knee deep undercover." Motor Ed says surprised how they found out about Tyson.
Few Hours ago up in the air
"This jet is cooool Mr Musk!" Paul says admiring the interior of Elon Musk's G650 jet.
"Please, call me Elon."
"Okay... Elon. Gee doesn't sound right out loud." Paul says to himself. Kim on the other hand was doing her homework while awaiting a special request granted by the CEO himself.
"Alright Mr Musk, so we've got a list of all the employees working at the Grand Rapids factory, we've got photo ID of all of them."
"Thank Gene. Okay guys, take a slow look and spot someone who you might think is the mole." Elon hands a folder to the teens.
Both take a good look at all the employees.
After probably about a minute, both speak at the same time.
"That one."
"Him for sure."
"You guys positive?" Elon asks.
"Positive? Positive isn't even the word for it. I would have debunked him if I had my eyes closed and heard every Tesla employee speaking."
"Why's that?"
"His face and clothes instantly give it away." Kim says.
"And that's because..." Elon asks for further clarification.
Tyson was wearing similar clothes to Ed's crew had. Plus it was simple, due to his prior criminal history and all. And being born in New Jersey didn't help at all. Making it easy for Kim and Paul to identify Ed's mole.
"Hey I didn't do anything." Tyson says.
Small parts come out of his big jacket and it kept on awkwardly falling out as everyone stared at him. It eventually stopped.
"That still-"
More parts come out. For a few more seconds.
Paul checked at this watch and he waited for the parts to stop falling out. Once it stopped, he spoke up again, but this time in a defeated tone.
"I think (Single piece falls out) I swallowed (Another piece falls out) a magnet."
Paul speaks up after the awkward half a minute that just occurred.
"Look like your buddy here has been your mole this entire time and been boosting parts too."
More parts being to fall out of his jacket. Making Paul lose his patience.
"Ah come on! How many parts you got under there?"
"Well you may got our pal. But the way I see it. You're out numbered. Seriously out numbered." Motor Ed points out.
"Yeahhhh I was expecting something like this to go down. Actually quarter dozen more if I'm being honest. But Tyson was your driver too and we got his truck locked up in the back." Kim says giving a devilish grin.
"And we got police on route to the factory as we speak."
All of Ed's crew gulp at this.
They hear police sirens in the far distance.
"Speaking of which. Here they come!"
Motor Ed's crew starts to panic.
"Oh man. We are so fucked!"
"Okay bros. Don't fear. We can out run the cops and we can't hide, so just keep on running."
"And if they're on bikes?"
"Well they can't fit us in their baskets now can they? Seriously dude. Read a book." Motor Ed starts to run off.
Some of the others get tackled down by Team Possible. Others manage to get further away, but were tackled down soon enough by incoming police officers
Motor Ed sprints away and jumps onto his motorbike.
He quickly starts it up, while doing so he sees Paul running towards him.
His motorbike engine starts up.
"See ya later John Wick guy! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA- OOF... (Loud Groans)"
A cop car rams into Motor Ed's motorbike just a few yards after he took off.
"Got really far there huh blondie." The police officer says, as he places the hand cuffs on him
Motor Ed groans heavily, as he took a big hit from the cop car. He blows up to clean his moustache to remove the dirt from it.
"Thank you soo much for your assistance Team Possible." Elon says happily
"Just doing our job sir." Paul says grinning, same as Kim.
"I thought I'd lose billions because of these batteries. These aren't cheap as well. 50K a pop." Elon says.
"$50,000 each!" Paul says.
"Yep, expensive little buggers." Elon says lighting tapping on the batteries.
"But I thought Tesla batteries were worth around 15,000-20,000?" Paul says.
"Ah but these new Tesla's go up to a range of 1000 miles, guaranteed whatever the conditions and environment it's based in."
"That means the price spiked up." Paul says.
"Correct. Our Y model's price was 120,000 drive away this year, when we release the new model with these new batteries the price should spike up to around 200,000 by next year, which includes a 5 year insurance and 5 year free repair service with a purchase of the 1000 mile Tesla Model. It's the way of the future now these days."
"That seems fair in regards to the extra services and that 1000 mile range is outrageous! But it's way to far out of my reach to buy one now." Paul says about money wise. Plus was a bit too young to be driving. Both teens are.
"Well, if you two are ever interested in purchasing these cars in the future, I'm more than happy to give you two a 25% discount. One time purchase. It won't expire until the company disbands. I've made a custom letterhead for you two to show at any Tesla dealership in the world." Elon Musk hands the teens, two sheets of paper.
In short it mentions a discount of 25% for any Tesla car. Signed by Elon Musk himself and stamped.
"Thank you Mr Musk, we appreciate that offer." Kim says accepting the letter.
"Thanks sir, that's such a generous offer." Paul says.
"It the least I can do." Elon says, "Come on. I'll give you guys a ride back home. It's waayy past your bedtime." he says.
"Bed time and crime don't go well with each other." Paul says.
CIA Headquarters
Virginia, United States
It had been a day since the arrest of Motor Ed and his crew, after their failed raid attempt at the Tesla factory in Michigan.
Motor Ed was in a confined room with his hands in chains. Wearing the same clothes for the last 24 hours. Hasn't seen his crew in that time as well.
He was staring at a ballpoint pen on the table.
The door opened and saw a African-American male walk in with a CIA Jacket.
"Eddie Lipsky. You certainly got a reputation for yourself?" A male voice says as he takes a seat.
...
"Not talking? Hmm. I'm just going to keep it nice and short. I just don't understand. You topped in your college classes. Honours in Diploma, Bachelor and Master degrees in Mechanical Engineering. Reverse Mechanical Engineering. And you still end up as a criminal! Why's that? Where did it go wrong?"
"This is rank dude. Seriously!"
"And what even is that? Rank? What does it even mean? Ed you had your whole life ahead of you and you want to spend it being a criminal? Stealing parts and experimental car parts that don't belong to you? I-I just can't comprehend why you do this sort of stuff?"
"I do what I do best. Building complex vehicles that no one else can. I love what I do and they had their chances!"
"(Sighs) Look Eddie. I know you've had a hard past. I know why they kicked you out of the government lab. But rules are rules Ed. Probably due to a health hazard... Well? Are you going to answer or you going to sit in silence?"
"Look, my answer's going to be the same as it was before. Unless the mullet stays, I'm going to be who I am. You can't change Motor Ed! Seriously."
"Well." The CIA officer stands up and grabs the folder off the table. "Couldn't say I tried. Cut you a deal, use your skill for good. Some pretty hefty charges are on you and your crew. You'll be enjoying prison food for a while." He grins smugly at the criminal.
The CIA man exits the interrogation room. He leaves with a sigh of dissatisfaction.
"Any luck Director?" A women CIA agent asks him.
"Still won't budge." He throws his folder down on the table.
"He has an impressive resume."
"Impressive, but still wants to live the life of a criminal. I just don't understand. He topped every class in college, did well in mathematics, science and physics in high school. Almost flunked English, and still doesn't want a top government job in Mechanical Engineering! What more does he want?"
"Maybe he'll take it one day."
"One day, will be too late for him. He could be dead."
"All because of a dress code?"
"Pathetic, I know. But government bodies are trying to get him to work with him. Even though he can be a pain and nuisance." The CIA director says.
"What about car manufactures?"
"They are not interested. This guy is the real deal, he would just get less cash working for car companies."
"But why salvage a guy who's not going to work for the government? He's just a lost clause."
"He's gonna want out and once he does, well monitor him when he's working in the lab. But he only has a few chances left. Maybe one more time and deal will be off forever." The CIA man says.
"I'll get him talking about the stolen parts he stole. Small charges but we want him behind bars."
"Do you what you have to do." The guy says.
The women enters the interrogation room and a glimpse of both the table and Motor Ed being shown.
One thing wasn't shown on that table.
The pen was missing from that table.
Author Notes:
I know my custom made chapters aren't the best... But I'm trying! I'm glad that a lot of people are enjoying it. Plus I needed to bring Tesla for a future plot point. It won't be appearing for a bit, but it's pivotal for the story.
So Motor Ed and his squad are arrested. Elon Musk made an appearance again! Wonder who that CIA Director was?
- One of the reasons why I'm redoing episodes from the main series is to fill in chapters so I can add my own episodes/chapters. I've got a few in mind, but they are for way down the line.
- As I said earlier. No character will have one appearance in this fanfic. I will try and make them appear twice in two different missions. This will be extremely hard to do with some characters like. Liam and Sam, but worth a try. And to ensure no confusion. Motor Ed's crew never got names in the series. So it's pretty hard to do that. That's why some characters I label guy or girl will appear once. Plus I had a few future missions where OC Characters might make one appearance in a mission and reappear again. I can't give much away and it's a bit hard to explain.
- Colin Furze is a Famous YouTuber who uses his engineering skills to create unconventional contraptions. Like his Hoverbike, Jet Bicycle, Wolverine automatic claws and staircase treadmill. He currently has over 10 million subscribers on his YouTube Channel. If you've heard of Mark Rober, Colin is the British version of that guy. I enjoy his content.
- Great news in regards to King of the Hill. The show is getting a revival after 12 years being out of production. Another key into the change of cartoons for the future. Could this push see a Kim Possible revival coming soon?... Only time will tell. If it does happen. I want to get credit for making such a bold prediction. If it doesn't happen. EPIC FAIL!
Oh well, that's life.
Well, I hope you enjoyed this chapter. Apologies for the late post, had to work on it for some extra times . Custom chapters are so hard man.
See you in 10 days. Until then... Take Care!
