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govindvanjare320 : Abhi - Acp ke cute moments milenge but vo sab story ke end mai Hoga...Abhi sirf jealousy, Cold war, possessiveness or separation dekhne ko milega...sorry for this...but don't worry abhijeet ka real father acp hi hoga...
Suhani : Jealousy ke liye hi to Vardhan sir ki entry Hui hai...uske bina to story mai maja hi nahi aayega
Abhijeet (pov) : Yrr ye strike ko bhi aaj hi hona tha dur dur tak ek bhi auto nahi dikh raha... suddenly he saw a auto ... (Happy tone) thank God auto mil gya.. he immediately ran towards auto...at the same time someone also stopped the same auto.
Girl : Auto jaldi se mujhe aage jakar left side chod do
Abhijeet (looked at open mouth) : Excuse me pahele ye auto maine roka tha...
Girl (Smirked) : Ladies first ye to suna hi hoga naa aapne... ab aap koi or auto dekh lijiye kyunki mai to ye auto chodne nahi wali bahut mushkil se mila hai ye
Abhijeet (chewing) : Acha ji mai bhi dekhta hun aap kese jati ho esme...driver tum yahan se right side lo...and he sat on the seat...
Girl (looked at open mouth) : Driver aap yahan se left side lo and she also sit on the seat
Driver (made a crying face) : Sir madam pahele aap dono decide kar lo jana kahan hai..Both looked at each other.
Abhijeet : Ofcourse pahele maine tumhe roka esliye tum right side chalo
Girl : Tumhare rokne se pahele maine auto ko dekha...esliye tum pahele left side gadi lo uske baad chaho to inhe chod dena Abhijeet looked at her with angry eyes...he clenched his fist.
Abhijeet : Dekho tum janti nhi ho mai koun hun
Girl : Jante to tum bhi nahi ho mai koun hun...yun chutkiyon mai tumhe andar karwa sakti hun
Abhijeet : Mai bhi (imitating) yun chutkiyo mai tumhe andar karwa sakta hun... esliye mujhse panga mat lo
Girl : Dekho mera dimaag mat kharab Karo...(to driver) Or tum abhi tak ruke kyun ho chalo
Abhijeet : Ager tumne gadi right side nahi li to sare ki sare kanoni dharayn thok dunga tum par driver gulping his saliva
Driver (to himself) : Pata nahi subh subh kiska chehra dekh liya tha...zindge mai pahele baar aise sawari mili hai mujhe ...sala aaj ke baad ye auto chalunga hi nahi
Girl (to abhijeet) : Tumhe shayd pata nahi mai koun hun
Abhijeet (super angry tone) : Same ...tumhe bhi nai pata mai koun hun
Girl : Tum mere pahunch nahi jante
Abhijeet : Tumne bhi abhi tak mere takat dekhi nahi hai
Driver (Frustrated/loudly) : Aap dono pichle ek ghante se yahi bol rahe hai mera naam nahi jante, mere pahunch nahi jante, Mere takat nahi jante...are ab to mujhe bhi janna hai aap dono akhir ho koun
Abhijeet/Girl (same straight tone) : Cid officer...Both looked at eachother ...
In Cid bureau
Daya enter inside the bureau...he looked at Acp who is sitting inside cabin with down head ...he took a deep breath and go near acp ...
Daya : Sir
Acp Pradyuman (lost tone) : hmm Daya put his hand on his shoulder...he looked at him with jerk (shocked) Daya tum kab aaye
Daya : Mai just abhi aaya sir...(After a pause) mujhe aapse kuch kahna tha
Acp Pradyuman (worried tone) : kya hua abhijeet thik hai na or tum Bureau kyun aaye tumhe uske sath rahna chahiye tha
Daya : Sir Abhijeet bilkul thik hai...mujhe yahan aana padha kyunki humare pass sirf 24 ghante hai abhijeet ka case solve karne ke liye
Acp Pradyuman (confused) : 24 ghante matlab
Dcp chitrole : mai batata hun matlab duo turned back and shocked...
Acp Pradyuman (irritated) : Ab aap yahan kya kar rahe hai Chitrole sahab
DCP Chitrole (pressed his teeth in anger) : Ye mujhse nahi apne es chiranjeevi se pucho ... tumhare ladlo ke karan mere noukri khatre mai aa gye hai (to daya) or tumhe Headquarters aane ki jarurat hi kya thi apne sath sath fasa diya na mujhe bhi
Acp Pradyuman (looked at daya) : Kya matalb...koi mujhe batayega bhi aakhir chal kya raha hai
Daya (took a deep breath) : Sir aaj subh jab maine or abhijeet ne aapko pareshan dekha to hume laga in sab ke piche dcp sahab or Vardhan sir ka hath hai esliye hum direct headquater chale gye dcp sir se puri baat janne ke liye and looked down
Acp Pradyuman (shocked) : Kya...tum dono ka dimaag kharab ho gaya hai...tumhe headquarters jane ki kya jarurat thi aisa hi tha to ek baar mujhse baat hi kar lete
DCP Chitrole (provoking) : Are Etna hi nahi tumhare us dusre chiranjeevi ne to vardhan ke aage gidgidana bhi shuru kar diya (imitating) acp sahab ki taraf se hum aapse maffi mangte hai aap unhe pareshan mat karna pls... acp stunned
Acp Pradyuman (stunned) : Kya
Daya (furious tone) : Sir aap plss acp sahab ko bhadkayea mat
DCP Chitrole : Acha to ab mai bhadka raha hun
ACP Pradyuman (To DCP) : Ek min (looked towards daya) mujhe pure baat janni hai
Daya narrated all the incidence
DCP Chitrole (Smirked) : Vese Pradyuman aisa kya hai tumhare us abhijeet mai jo dig sahab ka dil bhi pighal gaya...Jante ho Dig sahab ne abhijeet se kya kaha Acp looked at him...Mai aa gaya hun ab tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga Acp stunned
ACP Pradyuman (pressed his teeth in anger) : Aisa kaha us vardhan ne
DCP Chitrole (made a innocent face) : Or yahi nahi unhone to mujhe abhijeet ko dantne se bhi mana kiya hai...(whisper his ear) mujhe to lagta hai vardhan tumhare es bete ko bhi tumse alag karke hi rahega
Daya (Loudly) : ye sab aap kya bole jaa rahe hai...aisa kuch nahi hai sir ye jaan bujhkar aapko badhka rahe hai (to DCP) or sir noukri to aapka ab bhi ho jayege...shayad aap bhool rahe hai vardhan sir ne aapko sirf 24 ghante diye hai ager ye case solve nahi hua to aap yahan nahi road par dikhenge DCP made a annoyed face and went there
Acp Pradyuman (pov) : Ye vardhan aise hi kisi ke liye etna naram nahi ho sakta ache se janta hun mai ese...kuch to chal raha hai eske dimaag nai kahin ye abhijeet ko to mujhse chinne nahi aaya...nahi ager aisa hai to mai ye kabhi nahi hone dunga...(to daya) daya abhijeet ko Bureau bulao
Daya : Bureau lekin kyu sir
ACP Pradyuman (in firm) : Tumse jitna kaha jaye utna karo samjhe
Otherside
Abhijeet : Kya kaha tumne fir se bolna
Girl : Mai cid se sub inspector purvi hun
Abhijeet (pov) : Lagta hai ye mujhe pagal bana rhi hai
Purvi (suspicious tone) : Vese tumne kya kaha tha abhi thodi der pahele tum bhi cid mai ho
Abhijeet (proudly) : Jii , cid senior inspector abhijeet or acp sir ka right hand
Purvi (pov) : Ye jokar jesa dikhne wala insaan cid ka senior inspector impossible ye mujhe pagal bana raha hai
Driver : Ager aap dono hi cid officer hai fir to mudda hi kahtm ek kaam karta hun mai aapko office chod deta hun aap dono wahin se dekh lena kise kahan Jana hai...(murmure) mere Bala se fir koi kahin bhi jaye mujhe to dubara es auto mai bethna hi nahi hai
Abhivi (stern gaze) : kya kaha tumne driver made a crying face
Driver (gulping his saliva) : kuch nahi
and abhijeet phone start ringing
Abhijeet (on call) : Hnn daya bolo...kya acp sir jyada naraz hai kya ...yrr ye dcp sahab sudhrenge nahi ...acha thik hai mai aata hun ok bye and he disconnect the phone
Purvi (pov) : Eska matla ye jokar jesa dikhne wala sach mai cid officer hai...shitt yrr socha tha acp sir ko surprise dungi lekin ab es bandar ke sath Jana padega bureau
After sometime they reach Bureau
Driver (tired tone) : lo bhai sahab aa gaya apka destination ab mujhe maaf Karen esse aage mai aapko kahin nhi chod sakta
Abhijeet : Acha ye rakho apne paise
Driver (joined his hand) : nahi sahab aap hi rakho ye paise ...infact mujhse le lo chahiye to...
Purvi : Vo kyun
Driver : Are madam aapki jese sawari ek do or mil gye fir to mujhe heart attack hi aa jana hai esliye ab maine ye kaam chodne ka man bana liya hai Abhivi made a annoyed face
Abhijeet : Ager tumhara ho gaya ho to jaa sakte ho or ye pakdo apne paise..he give some money
Abhivi enter inside cabin...
ACP Pradyuman (irritated) : Ye Abhijeet abhi tak aaya kyun nhi
Purvi (with smile) : Uncle acp turned looked at her and shocked...he open his arm purvi run towards him and hugged him tightly (moist tone) kese Hain aap
ACP Pradyuman (with teary smile) : Mai bahut acha hun tum kese ho
Purvi : Mai bhi ek dam mastt hun duo looked at eachother ...
Abhijeet : sir aap ese jante hai
ACP Pradyuman (With smile) : Hnn abhijeet ye mere dost keshav ki beti hai or cid ki new member bhi ...kal se hi ye hume join karege...(to purvi) lekin tum aaj aane wali ho tumne bataya kyun nhi
Purvi : Vo kya hai naa uncle mai aapko surprise Dena chahte thi ...Lekin aapke es (pointed towards abhijeet) officer ke karan mera plan flop ho gaya acp just smile...he patted her cheek
ACP Pradyuman (serious tone) : Abhijeet tum mere cabin mai aao or purvi tum tab tak baki logo se mil lo purvi nodded...Trio moved towards Cabin
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Inside Cabin
ACP Pradyuman (crossed his and glare him) : Ye kya sun raha hun mai abhi
Abhijeet (In fear) : Kya hua sir..
ACP Pradyuman (Angry tone) : Kya jarurat thi us Vardhan ke pass jane ki jante bhi ho vo kitna ghatiya insaan hai... Abhijeet looked at him...(warn tone) dekho abhijeet mai nahi chahta tum dono mai se koi bhi usse mile ya baat Karen esliye aaj ke baad tum dono usse dur rahoge
Abhijeet (Frustrated) : lekin kyun sir or aisa bhi kya kiya hai unhone Jo aap unhe ghatiya bol rahe hai
ACP Pradyuman : Vo sab tumhare liye janna jaruri nahi lekin khabardar jo tum usse dubara mile to
Abhijeet (looked down) : sirr plss hum log bachhe thodi hai...or vese bhi dig sahab bure nahi hai aapko jarur koi galatpahemi hui hai
ACP Pradyuman (in anger) : Galatpahemi huhh!... Abhijeet usne kya Kiya hai mere sath ye tum soch bhi nahi sakte dosti ki aadh mai chura ghonpa hai usne mere pith mai...(Moist tone) mera hasta khelta pariwar tabah kiya hai usne or tum kahte ho vo bura nahi hai
Daya (shocked) : Sir Ye aap kya bol rahe hai jab nakul ki death Hui tab to vardhan sir yahan the bhi nahi or mam to apni marzi se gye thi naa
Abhijeet : hnn sir aap kis pariwar ki baat kar rahe hai...
ACP Pradyuman (In anger) : Tum dono ko ek baat samjh nahi aati kya...maine bola naa us Vardhan se dur rahna matlab Durr rahna ... it's an order duo nodded silently...
Abhijeet (pov) : I'm Sorry Sir mai aapka ye order shyad follow nahi kar paunga...Mujhe nahi lagta Vardhan sir galat insaan hai mujhe aapke or unke bich ki kadvahat Durr karni hi hogi
At the same time Purvi Enter inside cabin
Purvi : Uncle aap etni der se yahan kya kar rahe hai... mai bahar bore ho rhi hun
ACP Pradyuman (with smile) : Kuch nahi bus (looked at abhijeet) kisi ki akal thiakane la raha tha abhijeet made a annoyed face
Purvi : Uncle kya mai aaj se hi cid join kar sakti hun
ACP Pradyuman : Aaj se kyun kal se tumhare joining hai naa aaj aaram kar lo fir kal se to join karna hi hai ...or aaj tum mere sath chal rhi ho mere ghar
Purvi : Aapke ghar kyun
ACP Pradyuman : Purvi tum bilkul mere beti jese ho balki mere liye usse bhi badhkar ho tum...esliye mai chahta hun aaj lunch tum humare sath rahkar hi Karo
Purvi : Ok uncle (to daya) vese ye koun hai
ACP Pradyuman (pure loving tone) : Ye senior inspector daya hai cid ka dil (proudly) or ye jiske bina cid adhuri hai senior inspector abhijeet cid ki takat
Purvi : Takat...(murmure) Lagta hai budhape ka asar hone laga hai in par abhijeet looked at her with open mouth
Abhijeet (In anger) : Sir plss smjha lijiye apni es muhboli bete ko mujhse bekar mai uljhe nai
Purvi (same tone) : Mujhe bhi tumse uljhne ka koi shouk nahi hai...tumhe to mere juti bhi bhaav naa De
Abhijeet (Smirked) : Are Mujhe chodo tumhe to gali ka kutte bhi bhaav naa den
Purvi (chewing) : Ooo Mister
Abhijeet (innocently) : kahiye madam
Purvi (to acp) : Uncle samjha lijiye ese Verna
Abhijeet : Verna kya kar logi
ACP Pradyuman (frustrated) : Chup ho jao tum dono... abhijeet kya tarika hai ye baat karne ka
Abhijeet (Like a kid) : sir aap ese bhi to dekhiye ye kis tarah baat kar rahi hai mujhse
Purvi (Made a annoyed face) : Uncle aapne dekha naa shuruaat esne hi ki thi
Abhijeet : shuruaat tumne ki thi maine nahi suddenly his head spinning...daya immediately hold his arm
Daya : Boss tum thik ho naa abhijeet nodded
ACP Pradyuman (worried tone) : Abhi ek kaam karo tum bhi humare sath hi chalo sath mai lunch kar lenge...fir dawai bhi lene hogi tumhe
Abhijeet (in painfully) : Sir aap shyad bhol gye aaj subh hi aapne mujhe apne ghar se nikala tha
Purvi (shocked) : Kyun
Abhijeet (chewing) : Tumhe har baat janne jaruri nahi hai
ACP Pradyuman : Abhijeet tum mere ghar rah nahi sakte lunch to kar hi sakte ho naa kyun daya
Daya (pov) : Idea bura nahi hai vese bhi ghar jakar Khanna banane se to acha hai sir ke sath hi kar le (to acp) hnn sir
ACP Pradyuman : to thik hai fir chalo
Daya : lekin sir abhijeet ke case ka kya
Purvi (confused) : koun sa case...
Abhijeet (in anger) : tum se matlab
Purvi (Innocently) : hnn hai matlab...afterall tum mere dost ho
Abhijeet : Ek min hum dost kab Bane
Purvi : Just abhi 2 sec pahele ab batao koun sa case
Daya : vo purvi abhi ke upper 2 logo ke murder ke aarop lage hai
Purvi (hell shocked) : kya tum khooni ho
Abhijeet (frustrated) : mujhe khooni mat kaho...(to acp) sirrr
ACP Pradyuman (dissapointed) : Abhijeet shant ho jao beta...(to purvi) nahi purvi mujhe pura bharosa hai abhijeet nirdosh sabit hoga ...ab chale ghar
Daya : lekin sir case
ACP Pradyuman (irritated) : Daya mujhe bhi chinta hai Abhijeet ki mai bhi hun uske liye pareshan... samjhe...Or vese bhi DCP sahab kar rahe hai naa case ko lead...vo khud sambhal lenge sab...Abhijeet looked at him with jerk...he remembers Vardhan word...
Abhijeet Pareshan hokar bethne se case solve nahi hota...
Jab tak un par talwar nahi latkege vo log case ko lekar serious nahi honge
Abhijeet (pov) : Aap sahi the Vardhan sir...He smile painfully
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At Home
ACP Pradyuman (stunned) : Sarla tum yahan he immediately hugged her tightly
Sarla (Fake Teary Tone) : Mujhe maaf kar dijiye Pradyuman maine bahut der kar di...mujhe aapko chodkar Jana hi nahi chahiye tha
ACP Pradyuman (teary tone) : Nahi sarla abhi der nahi hui hai ...thank you mere zindge mai wapas aane ke liye abhijeet and daya looked at eachother
Daya (whisper to abhijeet) : Abhijeet kya tum bhi vhi dekh rahe ho jo mai dekh raha hun
Abhijeet (Rubbing his forehead) : Daya daal mai jarur kuch kala hai subh tak to ye jwalamukhi bani hui thi or ab achanak chandramukhi kese ban gye
Daya (Suspicious tone) : Boss mujhe to puri daal hi Kali lag rhi hai
Purvi (whisper) : Guys tum log kya baat kar rhe ho mujhe bhi batao na plss
Abhijeet (stern tone) : Tum fir se tapak gye jab do samjhdar log baat kar rhe ho to bich mai nahi bolna chahiye
Purvi (Innocently) : Koun samjhdar...mujhe to yahan koi samjhdar najar nahi aa raha ...sivaay daya or mere Daya hid his smile...
Abhijeet (chewing) : tum...butt he stopped and control his anger
Sarla (wiped his tear) : Aapko thank you mera nahi apne in dono officer ka kahna chahiye in dono ne hi mujhe mere galti ka ahsas karaya hai she narrate all the story
ACP Pradyuman (with smile) : Abhijeet daya mujhe samjh nahi aa raha mai tum dono ka kese sukriya karun
Abhijeet : Plss sir aisa kahkar hume sharminda mat kariye
Daya : Hnn sir humne Jo kuch bhi kiya apne pita saman acp sir ke liye kiya hai
Sarla (pov) : Tum teeno ka ye rishta jalakar khaak nahi kar diya to mera naam bhi sarla nahi...Aise aag lagaungi jo tum teeno ke rishto ko rakh mai badal dege ...(Fake loving tone) tum dono ki inhi methi methi bato ne mera dil jeet liya hai ... esliye aaj maine ek faisla kiya hai...(to acp) acp sahab ager mai aapse kuch mangu to kya aap denge mujhe
ACP Pradyuman : Hann kyun nahi kya chahiye tumhe...Ager tum mujhse Chand bhi maangoge to vo bhi tumhare samne lakar rakh dunga
Sarla : Mujhe mera beta chahiye acp sahab...Acp looked at her with teary eyes ...(heavy tone) mai janti hun nakul to waps nahi aa sakta lekin nakul ki jagah par koi or to aa sakta hai naa
ACP Pradyuman (Hurt tone) : Tumhe lagta hai koi humare nakul ki jagah le sakta hai
Sarla (hold his hand) : Aap hi to kahte hai naa vo ek criminal hai or koi criminal aapke beta kahlane ke layak kese ho sakta hai
Daya (whisper) : Yrr abhi mujhe apni aankho par bharosha nahi ho raha purvi looked towards duo...
Abhijeet : Hmm
ACP Pradyuman (shocked) : Tum kya kahna chahti ho...mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha
Sarla (In hope) : Acp sahab Mai aapke in dono officer (pointed towards duo) ko aapka naam dena chahti hun duo hell shocked
ACP Pradyuman (hell shocked) : ye tum kya bol rhi ho sarla
Sarla (in broken tone) : mai aapke aage hath jodti hun Pradyuman ek maa aaj aapse kuch maang rhi hai mai nakul ko to nahi bacha payi (While crying) ab apne in dono beto ko nahi khona chahti aaj jis tarah in logo ne mujhe samjhaya hai mere dil mai inke liye Mamta jaag gye hai aap plss inhe apna lijiye she crying harshly... Acp looked at duo...duo looked at eachother
Abhijeet (pov) : Acahank ho kya gaya hai inhe...subh tak to ye humse nafrat kar rahi thi kahin kuch gadbad to nahi hai
Daya (pov) : Subh tak zehar ugal rahi thi or ab aise baat kar rahi hai jese inse acha koi or dusra hai hi nahi...kahin es masum se chehre ke piche koi bahut badi sajish to nahi hai...mujhe pata lagana hoga
ACP Pradyuman (Took a deep breath) : thik hai...duo shocked...Mai daya ko apne bete ke rup mai accept karta hun lekinnnn Abhijeet...
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To Be Continued...
Author Note
Kya Hoga ACP Pradyuman ka faisla??? Kya Vo Duo ko denge Apna Naam?? Ya Fir Badh Jayenge Trio Mai Duriyan...??? Sarla Ka Maksad kya ho Payega Kaamyaab??? Next Chapter Aap Logo Ke Review Milne Ke Baad Hi Hoga...
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