Ok yeah if you are wondering some thing happen to the last three chapters I had, (10, 11 and 12.) which covered the numbers getting to the old neighborhood and sitting up shop. As they brought ready to go walls, along with a bunch of other crap to make it go faster.
Then the ed boys would fine out thanks to jimmy (which would have been the first time you heard from him.) and would get ready for war.
Chapter 11 would have been them going to war and winning after rolf and kevin died. After that johnny would have got word from a CB radio they set up, which was how they were finding out so fast about every thing to be begin with.
Chapter 12 was going to be a flash back to what really happen to johnny and how the DR had him so fucked up, he couldn't even move. Also how they abandon him during the bombs dropped.
Yeah all that got deleted some fucking how! also I will not redo that shit at all. Lastly I will just tell you how this story end, as i'm not going to finish it.
Chapter 13 the eds along with jimmy is pissed as they found out who the leader of the numbers are. As such are getting ready for a full on assault on the numbers base. It would also reviled kevin was fixing the power armor that was out side the vault and the Kanker sisters going to help out as range support.
Chapter 14 would have been the assault as ed (with a modded heavy version of the power armor.) double d, eddy and jimmy all in power armor taking on the last bit of the numbers gang.
Chapter 15 would have been the end of the fighting and with double d being the one to kill johnny as every one else would be dead.
Chapter 16 the last chapter and resolution of every thing that happen. With the last thing being double d and nazz going to a settlement out east they heard of.
If you are also wondering why this seem so raw, well that's because I started this story as a way to keep my self entertain as my internet went out for like three weeks. As such I was just going to fix the problems right before I up loaded all the chapters I had done.
Also if you want this is up for free adoption, aka you don't need to ask me at all.
So yeah sad to see it turned out this way, but that's life I guess. At least I did give it closer.
