Ok, I've read the comments and I have to say...I'm now satisfied. I knew the minute I posted these chapters they weren't perfect and to be completely honest that was a big insecurity of mine. I was afraid no one would even be interested, or that people would hate the way I depicted the story. Getting compliments is nice, and I appreciate it immensely, but until now only a few people have said anything about what they believed I could improve on. Now some people have been getting annoyed with the way I'm doing things, and that...is amazing! I now know what to fix and keep all the same. Here's the deal. I'm going to go back and fix all three existing chapters. Give them more detail, words, and scenes of course. A lot of people had issues with chapter-length and how long the "comment" segments were. The pacing was also an issue I realised. There were a couple more issues, but I have some ideas about those. For now though it's time to get serious. I'm gonna post a NEW chapter around March 10-15th. In between those days, I will be fixing my previous chapters. I want to thank all of you for commenting and essentially critiquing my writing. Bear with me guys. I'm gonna fix this and make it the best I possibly can. I'm not abandoning this just because now I'm finally getting criticism this idea interests me and it will blossom into a long and beautiful fanfic. Once more thank all of you! Even the ones that are annoyed with me! This sincerely helps.
