Naruto a retelling
Chapter 1 meeting your idles
I do not own the rights to Naruto Hinata dose
Today Naruto was not having the best of days it started when he woke up after having a nightmare he could not tell what it meant it was about an orange flame destroying the leaf and somebody who looked like the 4th saving it he could never get past the point in the dream where the person who he assumed was the 4th nearly (he could never understand why the 4th was in his dreams) , defeated the orange flame but he all was woke at that point ,
once he had a shower and got dressed the day just got worst, he had no instant ramen packets and he had just run out of money "I guess I'm not having breakfast today" thought Naruto sadly
So, Naruto went off to the academy for the day on his way there he saw a little girl getting bullied by 3 older boys also from the academy
"Say sorry to us "said the first boy'
"Yeah, you also have those wired eyes … wait! Your just like that jerk Neji "put in the second boy
"let's beat her up for all the times Neji beat us in sparing!" said the third and final boy
As all 3 of the boys moved in on here Naruto was on the scene
"Hay stop she did nothing wrong!" shouted Naruto
"Yes, she did, she is in the same family as that jerk Neji" retorted the second boy
"So! The actions of one family member should not make you take it out on a weaker and younger member of that family" quickly snapped Naruto
Sadly, for Naruto even with his academy training he could not 3 boys that are a year older and have better academy training he was still savagely beaten by the boys
When he finally woke, he saw that the bullies had left, and the girl was staring at him tearful eyes and said "w why di id you'd do that t"
Naruto caching his breath said "because I saw that you needed help and even if I got Hurt your all right, right? "
"yes "spoke the girl
"My name is Naruto" spoke Naruto
"Naruto Kun" thought Hinata
"She's really pretty," thought Naruto
As they got to the academy, they saw their teacher Mizuki standing at the gates
"Naruto what have I said about being late and getting other people late" said Mizuki with a little hidden venom Naruto was only just able to pick up
"Sorry Mizuki sensei it was my fault" spoke Hinata quietly
That is all right Hinata why don't you do back to class, and I will go take Naruto to iruka sensei
"What why dose Naruto Kun get reprimanded when he did nothing wrong and when I say it was my fault, he just brushes it off?" Though Hinata
"Ok Mizuki sensei "spoke Naruto in a sad tone
"Good with this I can get the demon brat expelled because of this I can tell iruka and he will certainly expel him'' thought Mizuki with an evil laugh
"See Ya later Hinata Chan" said Naruto in a cheerful voice not mimicking his last tone at all
"No, you won't you insufferable demon" thought Mizuki with distain
Iruka was just teaching a class when Mizuki came in and Wisper into Iruka's ear "can you come outside it's about Naruto being late" "ok" whispered iruka
Class no response
Class! Still no response
CLASS! Iruka said with his famous big head no jutsu
"There was silence ok class I will be out for 5 to 10 minutes so do not make
Aney noise ok" iruka said
"Ok" the class said in a murmur
As iruka left the class he heard the class start up again and he sighed to himself
"Mizuki what did Naruto do this time" questioned iruka
"So, he got school late, and he was with the heirs of the huga clan Hinata I think he did something to her that demon brat" Mizuki said the last part with venom and disgust
"So, he is trying to get Naruto expelled I see you actually hate him Mizuki your no better than the civilian's people should be able to tell the difference between a Kunai and its scroll" thought iruka with loathing
Naruto listen to the whole conversation thinking
"Demon brat what does he mean is he talking about that mark that shows up when I channel chakra into my stomach?"
Naruto was no longer listened to the conversating thinking about what Mizuki had said
"I'll think about it later "he thought
"Ok Naruto go back to class" iruka said
"Ok iruka sensei" Naruto said happily
Now it was lunch time and Naruto was hungry
He saw Hinata sitting down by herself, so he went over
"Hi Hinata Chan," he said with excitement
"H Hi n n Naruto k Kun" stuttered Hinata
"How are you going Hinata Chan" spoke Naruto
"g g good h how a about y you" said Hinata blushing
"Good and thanks for what you said to Mizuki before"
" really i di did no nothing" Hinata said stuttering and creating a new colour of red in the process
"Hay Hinata Chan do you want to be friends Naruto spoke happily"
"Naruto Kun wants to be friends with me?"
"Hinata Chan?" Naruto said sceptically
"Yes!" Hinata Nearly shouted
As she said this the bell went and they went back into the class
it was the end of the day and Naruto was walking home when he saw a group of people out the front of his house yelling
Where is he
Where is the demon brat
let's finish what the yondime started
There he is yell one extremely drunk man
Naruto could not run, and he got beaten so bad he only woke up 3 hours later on the ground he did not want to go home so he went to his favourite spot in the village excluding ichiraku ramen the hokage mountain more specifically the yondime's head he sat there for longer than he could remember
Suddenly there was a flash and there was a glowing circle around Naruto that started to go down
What what's happening! Naruto shouted
help meeeeee! But the call fell on deaths ears
As Naruto woke up, he saw he was in a dark room
Where am I? He said unsure
Come to me a voice said for some reason he followed he didn't know why he did, but the voice gave him comfort and familiarity
for some reason
When he got to the source of the voice it was a man, he had a Konoha jonin vest with a coat with flames at the bottom
You're the 4th hokage Naruto shouted
Yes, I am Naruto
How do you know my name Naruto said sceptically
That is something you will find out later he spoke cryptically
Naruto spoke So how are you here
I am not the real minato namikaze only a chakra projection of him I made this place encase of emergencies like the nine tails attack or war it was meant for my precious people like my wife and child
What I didn't know you had a wife and child said Naruto perplexed
I did I wish the hokage said something to them only if he did not make that law
Wait what law Naruto said tilting his head
The law that should have prevented all the hate even if your last name was Uzumaki minato said with a sigh
"He is going to hate me before the night is over" thought minato sadly
Naruto, I want you to listen to me perfectly hokages orders he added with a grin
Ok hokage Sama Naruto said in a tone that did not sound like his at all
Ok good let's start
As he said this the world round them shimmered and then the world became white
What happened where are we
I used a technique that shows a person's memories to the person or people that he chooses
That's SOOO cool! Shouted Naruto
I know Kushina said the same thing he added the lest part in a Wisper but in the open space Naruto still hear it
Who is Kushina naruto asked puzzled
Don't worried all will be reviled soon he said with a secret tear in his eye
The first memory that they saw was of minato when he was talking to the 3rd hokage hirizen sarutobi
Minato namikaze I hear by pronounce you the 4th hokage" spoke hiruzen spoke with a booming voice most likely talking to the whole village "minato would you like to say some words to the Villigers of Konoha
People of Konoha ninja and civilian alike I promise on my own life that I will protect the village and defend it from harm internally and externally this is a promise I will never forget hokage or not hiruzen looked on proud he will do great things for Konoha.
As minato finished his speech the village cheered for him like he was a god (well Iwa would say he is the devil incarnate) he left to go to his new office when he sat down, he said you can come out I can sense you
As he said this a girl with fire red hair that went down to her waist that had a wite shirt under a green apron with open sleeves and grey and black shoes
Hi mini Kun said the woman
Hi Kushi Chan, I wondered where you went after the ceremony, and you came here, it's fitting don't you think
Yes, you finally made it it's been both of our dream since the academy spoke Kushina in a dreamy tone
Let's go home said minato in an also dreamy tone
_I remember that said the present minato it was the day I became hokage it was one of the best days of my life
I can tell said naruto happily, but he could see what minato looked like and he looked sad
Lord 4th are you all right naruto asked
Yes, naruto I am, and you can call minato I don't mind I am no longer the hokage minato said and he sighed like a weight was lifted off of his chest "ok that makes it easier to talk to him now"
The next memory started in a similar manner that the last ended Kushana was walking into the hokage office with a grin that could split her face in two as she entered her husband's office, he saw her and smiled at her with those blue eyes she loved
Hi mini Kun she said with jubilance
Hi how are you doing Kushi Chan said minato in a voice that radiated confidence
The best I can ever be she said happily her smile not faltering
You're up to something minato said with a quizzical look while at the same time he had a look of deep thought
You will have to find out later she said mysteriously
Ok I will I guess I have no choice but to wait
I will see you later mini Kun
Ok Kushi see Ya
How little did I know at that point that would be the greatest day of my life minato said like he was a kid who just got his first phone
Really what will happen naruto asked in a questioning voice
You will just have to wait like I had to with Kushina
Naruto pouted ok let's get going he said cheerfully
It was the end the same day and minato was heading home after the almighty amount of paperwork half asleep already as he was heading home when a store owner was closing up when he saw minato
Lord 4th Said the man
Hello said minato friendly
Would you like to come in to get some food said the man
No, I can said minato
Yes, you can on the house
Well ok then I will take it for only 50 % ok
Ok lord 4th if you insist on it
As minato entered the house he saw Kushina in the living room reading a new book
The tale of a utterly gutsy ninja minato said as he entered the living room
It's the new book Jiraiya wrote Kushina added as she said this minato remembered the surprise his wife had for him but before he could do something to ask her about it, she beat him to it and said "about the surprise I said I had for you I will be back in a minute with it "as she said this she got up and went upstairs just before minato was about to sit down on the couch kushina's head popped out from the corner to the stairs and said "Mini Kun don't yours your senser ability's on me because that would be no fun and would ruin the surprise of it ok she said this with a bit of ki to drive the point home"
O ok k Kushi Chan" minato stuttered Kushina giggling in the proses
"She is the only person in this world that can make me stutter like that "thought minato chuckling nervously as he was doing this, he looked at the book Kushina had left in the room he decided to look at the first couple of pages by the time he was finished with the 4th page he was in love with the book " this book is amazing well Jiraiya made this he was good in the art of literature but this beats any expectation I had" minato thought
Just 5 minutes later Kushina came back to the room with the biggest smile on her face he had ever seen it was even bigger than the one she had at their wedding she looked so happy like nothing could ever break that smile and she could walk through hell with it and come out like nothing ever happen
It looks like your happy minato said in a joking tone while he said this even with how impossible it seemed her smile widened
Well, you should be too as she said this her hands fumbled behind her back know minato was really wanting to know
Pleas just tell me Kushi Chan he whined to her
She saw this and smiled ok mini Kun "ok mini Kun I just don't want you to yell too loud" as she said this, she knew that this would not happen, and she laughed to Herself thinking about what he would sound like she handed him the thing in her hands he stared at it for a couple of seconds before he yelled " IM GOING TO BE A DAD!?" "YESSS" Kushina said in the exact same tone of voice he hugged her and started to cry joyous tears
Minato wiped tears of his own tears and to see Naruto staring at the memory with closed eyes he looked sad depressed "wow so that's what you felt like when that happened, I wondered if my parents where like that he said in a low voice
Minato felt a twang of guilt from this statement "naruto I'm Shore your parents were happy to have you
Then why did they leave me! He yelled with tears streaming down his face
Minato turned away from him and let out some tears of his own he then spoke to naruto "naruto let's have a talk it's about your parents ok"
Naruto was about to yell but when he heard about his parents, he stopped in his tracks "d do y you kn know a a about my parents" naruto finally managed to stutter out
Yes naruto" minato said with sadness in his voice "I did know them they were the greatest people in the whole world the best people you could meat naruto me and your mother are so proud of you you can't even begin imagine it we love you with all we had and we are sorry we had to die me and kushina we are sorry if you want you can hate me I won't be hurt by it we were horrible parents I'm so sorry we could not see all those wonderful moments a parent should share wit ...
Just as minato said this naruto came up and hugged him fiercely like he never let go "dad I don't hate you I love you I know you had to die to destroy the nine tails with mom and I am thankful to have a dad as cool as you."naruto finished
Minato never felt so much pride in his life all that had happen like becoming the hokage getting married to the best woman in the world " naruto thank you, you have known idea how long I have wanted to hear those words he said tearing up himself
About 20 minutes later naruto finally calmed down " naruto do you want to be a ninja"
, dad I would love to be a ninja could you help me" naruto said completely forgetting before
"Good he wants to be a ninja" minato thought with a smile "ok naruto I will teach you but there is one thing I must do first
Ok dad what is it naruto asked curiously
Ok naruto could you go to the room next to us and get a box's labelled redo and plan z
I will dad naruto said as he left, he saw minato had a smile on his face "he will love what I have planned for him I will make him the best ninja in history will know" thought minato
When naruto got back 2 minutes later he had both boxes in his hands "ok dad what do you want me to do" naruto said "naruto do you have a Kuni" minato asked naruto "yes dad naruto said pulling out a Kuni "ok naruto I want you to cut your thumb and get blood on the seal on the chests to open them and get out the scroll called embodiment sealing jutsu and the scroll called memory transfer jutsu
"Ok dad" ouch" naruto said quickly after, after doing this he put the cut finger on to the seal on the chest and I glowed and disappeared "ok naruto I want you to get the scrolls and lay them on the floor then I will do the rest " naruto did as minato said" ok dad your up" naruto spoke "ok Naruto stand back" after naruto was at a good distance minato did some hand signs the room started to glow and then naruto saw on the
ground the living bereaving body of minato the 4th hokage
Ok that's the first chapter ends I hope you all like it if not tell me sadly I will not be able to satisfy all of you and it will never be perfect If only ok so if you all like the fanfic I would love it if you sent constructive criticism but that's your choice and I might look for a batá reader thanks
Next chapter old perverts and old truth's
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