Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or One Piece or anything thing that is not mine if I did sasuke dies and this chosen one stuff BS does not exist and luffy would get his DF awakened early but temporarily from time to time.

Talking

Thinking*

Tailed Beast Talking

*Tailed Beast Thinking*

Loud Speech

(time or place)

IIIRokushiki no narutoIII


chapter 1:How it all began

In Konohagakure


GET BACK HERE DEMON!!! A mob of people shouted

*gotta get outta here fast!* naruto thought out loud as he ran through the village.

Konohagakure where a bunch of villagers are going on their annual "fox hunt" as they chase the box in a attempt to kill the "demon" or avenge the fourth all that stuff but this time after Naruto lost the crowd momentarily decided to go to the one place he genuinely called home and that is training ground#44 aka the "forest of death" a place where even the great prodigys wouldn't dare set foot in,unless they are prepared. And here is the holder of the kyuubi a weak and helpless victim for many managed to survive and call this place home

/how ironic/

huff, huff, huff thank goodness we managed to get out of that one Naruto said in the rain

Agreed and I strongly suggest we get to a cave I am not gonna die like this yet the beast said

Ya... hey look there's one naruto said and began to rush to it

little did he know that it would change his life forever...

(Time skip no jutsu)

upMay Uzumaki Naruto and Hyuga Neji head down into to arena

finally I can stop with this disguise and the mask* naruto thought

Don't forget the orange too. Kurama added

Yup no more orange best day ever naruto thought to himself

hmmph proctor call the match it seems my opponent has accepted his fate

Well then naruto is-

HERE!!! Naruto shouted

oh well what are you waiting for get in the arena! Genma shouted

alright alright naruto said and jumps into the arena

I give you one last chance to accept your fate and forfeit Neji said

no I mean what I said Neji I will make you pay for what you did to Hinata! Naruto shouted

we will see about that I will show you your fate and my own the Hyuga said before dropping to the gentle fist stance

we will see about that. Naruto grinned

hmm...whats with that grin? Hiruzen

wondered

ready...Hajime! Genma shouted before disappearing

Neji then rushed at Naruto with a Juken blow ready to strike him with enough force to blow his heart up and when the strike connected Naruto tanked it and as his eyes began to dim before slowly falling to the ground

this is your fate Neji said

as he fell Naruto said these words

no... it's my turn to decide my fate before stopping mid way and did a rising axe kick to Neji's chin launching him far away

nmbefore repositioning himself

Kai! Naruto yelled before removing the triple layered henge he casted into himself revealing him in a suit with a orange bowtie and him being taller than normal(imagine him looking like Sanji except keep his facial features and the orange bowtie) before rushing at Neji.

What?! Neji yelled

now then it's about time I pull some of my tricks

Rankyaku!

Naruto shouted

releasing a sharp compressed blade of wind that hit Neji square in the chest sending him to a wall

out already and you call yourself a prodigy heh Hinata would have held on longer than you

DON'T COMPARE ME TO THAT WEAKLING!!! Neji shouted as he tried to hit Naruto

Kami-E

Naruto whispered as he effortlessly dodged Neji's attacks

How's is naruto doing that no way!

kiba said watching in awe watching as Naruto dodged Neji's blows like it was nothing

Troublesome so he finally dropped the act. Shikamaru mumbled

Shikamaru you know the whole time?!! Ino yelled

found out months ago maybe now he and I could finally stop playing Shogi

in the middle of a secluded place

he plays shogi? ino asked

yup won a lot of times 49-49 with a few ties from time to time

and I still owed him 50 ryo

Shikimaru said in front of a show of gapping Genin

you can pay me the money later pal right after I'm done with the chunin exams

Naruto said before dodging another attack from Neji then countering him with a kick to the side

And you still owe me the food for that favor last week! Choji shouted

Ok ok I will cook the barbecue later jeez so demanding.. naruto grumbled before back handing Neji

seriously you have so much hype by many people

and here I am beating you around like a

hacky sack and I still did not use half of my moves

naruto announced

How is this possible fate dec-

Neji said before getting kicked at the face

Well sorry but fate just ended your membership the day you beated Hinata

besides fate just gives us the materials and the situation and leaves us to our own devices.Why do you think your ass is being handed to you huh? Even if some old man comes to your own house and says "you are the child of prophecy destined to succeed in all your endeavors"(get the reference)

they will still fail if they slack off

get my point

Naruto said before dodging another attack from Neji

That's It!

(Jūkenhō: Hakke Rokujūyon Shō)

Gentle Fist Art: Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms

hmm pulling out your ace huh well then...

Tekkai!

Naruto whispered before Hardening himself as hard as metal

Two palms!

Four palms!

Eight plams!

Sixteen palms!

Thirty Two palms!

Sixty Four plams!!!

Neji shouted before finishing the attack

only for Naruto to be still standing untouched

and that's number three!

Naruto shouted

h-how?!

simple hard work ever heard of that before like I said fate gives us the materials and the situation I simply used what I can.

See now Neji fate does not define the result hard work does now out of respect for revealing your ace might as well do the same

Rokuogan!

Naruto shouted before putting his two hands together and hitting Neji launching him to the wall

and that's done

Uzumaki Naruto wins

sweet

Good job kit next up is the match with the uchiha

Now then Sasuke Uchiha and Sabaku no Gaara please enter the arena

uh chief he ain't here Naruto said

well then due to tardiness Sasuke Uchiha is disqualified Sabaku no Gaara wins by default

don't worry about that Gaara good things come to those who wait and I promise you blood is gonna rain when the time comes

Naruto said

and for once Gaara agreed even his "mother decided to wait"

Now will

Shino Aburame and Naruto Uzumaki

go down to the arena

Procter I forfeit I will lose its pointless to fight a stronger opponent shino said

very well uzumaki wins by default

will Temari no Sabaku and Sabaku no Gaara come down to the stadium

I forfeit too I'm not going to fight Gaara

Temari said

ok let's just skip to the main event will Sabaku no Gaara and Uzumaki Naruto come down to fight and no forfeiting

like I said best served last

Naruto said

I'm looking forward you spilling your blood

Gaara said

you too

before they can start a wild gust of wind flew and there in the middle of the arena there lies Pokemon Jonin Kakashi Hatake and his level 36 Sasuke uchiha(curse mark shiny)(get it)

are we late? Kakashi asked

yes you are Kakashi, and sasuke is disqualified

naruto said with Kakashi looking with shock

oh come on don't look at me like that.Just because the council kisses his ass does not mean there is a no limit sign to the privileges he will have

Dobe I demand you-

you to back off and take one for the team

Naruto interrupted

and as much as I would like to rip your eyes out and crush it while Gaara does the same to your body we have a match

to do so back off unless you want to push your luck to a place where It won't help you be my guest

You listen here I am a uchiha the elite-

was the elite Naruto interrupted before kicking him to the wall knocking him out

sorry about that Kakashi but he just won't shut up

naruto said cleaning his ears

fair enough Kakashi said

before he took sasuke and went to the sidelines

Now with that out of the way

let the final match of the chunin exams

Begin

(Hah hope you like my first chapter I'm still working on how to improve my work so please leave in the comments tips on how to do so

thanks)