A/N with myself and Lily (she my friends)

In a shining underwater castle. Talwyn thinking about Ratchet she want to see him again

Lily: Talwyn, dear, time to come out. You've been in there all morning.

Talwyn: emerges, singing to herself.

Lily: What is with her lately?

Sasha: I don't know she be singing to herself

Talwyn: *looks at herslf in the mirror, then picks a flower next to it and

swims away, but stops short when she sees her father* Oh. Morning, Daddy.

Max: Well

Talwyn tucks the flower next to her father's ear and swims off, continuing to sing to herself.

Angela: Oh, she's got it bad

Max: What? What has she got?

Teagan: Isn't it obvious, Max? Talwyn's in love

Max: *picks the flower from the side of his ear* In love?

Carmelita: Okay. So far, so good. I don't think the Max knows. But it will not be easy keeping something like this a secret for long.

Talwyn: He loves me Mmm. He loves me not. He loves me! I knew it!

Carmelita: Tal stop talking crazy

Talwyn: I gotta see him again...tonight. Daxter knows where he lives

Carmelita: Talwyn, please! *Hold Talwyn's fish tail* Will you get your hear out of the clouds and back in the water where it belongs?

Talwyn: I'll swim up to his home, then Sly Bentley Murry will splash around to get his attention And then we'll go

Carmelita: Down here is your home! Tal, listen to me. The human world, it's a mess. Life under the sea is better than any'ting they got up there! (sing) The seaweed is always greener

In somebody else's lake

You dream about going up there

But that is a big mistake

Just look at the world around you

Right here on the ocean floor

Such wonderful things surround you

What more is you lookin' for?Under the sea

Under the sea

Darling it's better

Down where it's wetter

Take it from me

Up on the shore they work all day

Out in the sun they slave away

While we devotin'

Full time to floatin'

Under the seaDown here all the fish is happy

As off through the waves they roll

The fish on the land ain't happy

They sad 'cause they in their bowl

But fish in the bowl is lucky

They in for a worser fate

One day when the boss get hungry

Guess who's gon' be on the plate?Under the sea

Under the sea

Nobody beat us

Fry us and eat us

In fricassee

We what the land folks loves to cook

Under the sea we off the hook

We got no troubles

Life is the bubbles

Under the sea (Under the sea)

Under the sea (Under the sea)Since life is sweet here

We got the beat here

Naturally (Naturally)

Even the sturgeon an' the ray

They get the urge 'n' start to play

We got the spirit

You got to hear it

Under the seaThe newt play the flute

The carp play the harp

The plaice play the bass

And they soundin' sharp

The bass play the brass

The chub play the tub

The fluke is the duke of soul

(Yeah)

The ray he can play

The lings on the strings

The trout rockin' out

The blackfish she sings

The smelt and the sprat

They know where it's at

An' oh that blowfish blowYeah, under the sea (Under the sea)

Under the sea (Under the sea)

When the sardine

Begin the beguine

It's music to me (It's music to me)

What do they got? A lot of sand

We got a hot crustacean band

Each little clam here

Know how to jam here

Under the sea

Each little slug here

Cuttin' a rug here

Under the sea

Each little snail here

Know how to wail here

That's why it's hotter

Under the water

Ya we in luck here

Down in the muck here

Under the sea

But, Talwyn has gone again

Carmelita: Talwyn? Oh, somebody's got to nail that girl's fins to the floor.

Fergus: Carmelita Carmelita, I've been looking all over for you. I've got an urgent message from the Max.

Carmelita: Max

Fergus: He wants to see you right away. Something about Talwyn

Carmelita: He knows.

Lily: I think we can go see our friends

Teagan: yeah we could trush her that's what friends do

they swim away find Talwyn with Sly Bentley Murry

Max: Hey, let's see now. Oh, who could the lucky merman be? *Saw Carmelita's here, hides a flower his back* Come in, Carmelita

Carmelita: I mustn't overreact. I must remain calm. *swim to Max* Yes? *Ahem* Yes, Max?

Max: Yes, Carmelita Carmelita, I'm concerned about Talwyn Have you noticed she's been acting peculiar lately?

Carmelita: Oh! Uh, peculiar?

Max: You know, mooning about, daydreaming, singing to herself. You haven't noticed, hmm?

Carmelita: Oh, well I.

Max: Carmelita

Carmelita: hmm?

Max: I know you've been keeping something from me.

Carmelita: Keeping something?

Max: about Talwyn?

Carmelita: (shaking) Talwyn?

Max: In love? Hmm?

Camelita: I tried to stop her, sir! She wouldn't listen! I told her to stay away from Lombax! They are bad! They are trouble! They are.

Max: Lombax? What about Lombax?

Carmelita: Lombax? Who said anything about Lombax?

*Max Garbs Her*

Carmelita: uh oh

Back at Talwyn's grotto.

Talwyn: guys You're the best! It looks just like him. It even has his eyes Why, Ratchet, run away with you? Oh, This is all so- so sudden

Teagan: Talwyn it that your collection

Talwyn: yes

Lily: a Lombax and galactic rangers objects gathered together

Sly: we've been treasure hunting for her collection

Murry: yes been treasure hunting

Bentley: and little robot call Clank he keep secret of us

Teagan: we can keep secret for you all

Lily: and not tell Mex

Talwyn was joyed to state of Ratchet but Talwyn saw her father, Max.

Talwyn: Daddy?

Cooper Gang hides in the treasure.

Sly: uh oh

Max: I consider myself a reasonable merman. I set certain rules and I expect those rules to be obeyed.

Talwyn: But Dad, I...!

Max: Is it true you rescued a Lomax from drowning?!

Talwyn: Daddy, I had to.

Max: Contact between the Lombax and some creatures world and the mer world is strictly forbidden! Talwyn, you know that! Everyone knows that!

Lily: He would've died!

Max: One less The last Lombax to worry about.

Teagan: You don't even know him!

Max: Know him? I don't have to know him! They're all the same: Spineless, savage, harpooning fish-eaters, incapable of any feeling.

Talwyn: Daddy, I love him!

Max: No. Have you lost your senses completely?! He's a Lombax! You're a mermarkazian!

Talwyn: I don't care!

Max: So help me, Talwyn I am going to get through to you. And if this is the only way, so be it!

He proceeds to destroy most of the grotto with his magic trident, Then He turned to Ratchet's Statue.

Murry: Max no!

Too late, Max destroyed Ratchet's Statue

Talwyn: (crying)

Max *Leaves*

Carmelita: Talwyn, I

Talwyn: Just go away

Bentley: poor Tlawyn