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I have started this profile on this website to upload my own adaptations, of famous fandoms, conjured up from my own imagination… Yeah, I'm just writing fanfiction to pass the time. Anyways this is my first story so it's probably going to be pure crap in quality of writing, but, please guys, read till the end, and if you can please recommend this to someone else as well. Please, guys, read so I can finally get something worthwhile started in my miserable and, hopefully not, short life.
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Konoha
Naruto's Pov
Naruto was done, he decided. At this point of time in his life, he was way past his boiling point. There was only so much shit, any person can take before they snap. Seriously, the majority of the genin phase of his life was spent with Sakura belittling, degrading, and downright abusing him, Sasuke insulting and humiliating him and Kakashi neglecting his training.
Nah, that's not good enough, the pink-haired banshee belittling, degrading, and downright abusing him, the broody teme insulting and humiliating him and the lazy pervert neglecting his training. When they weren't focused on making his life miserable, the banshee unsuccessfully and pitifully flirts with the teme, the teme practices any new brooding positions he came upon and the pervert only reads his porn.
For god's sake, they had 6 months with each other and all Kakashi collectively taught them was teamwork and tree walking, and that too was only because it was extremely necessary during the wave mission, and the result of that training can clearly be seen by anybody.
Their teamwork was atrocious and nobody was willing to work with each other, even when Naruto swallowed down his pride and tried to he was rudely rejected. He was done putting up this mask of loudmouth, idiotic and weak stubbornness.
Yeah, you heard it here folks, Naruto actually had a mask or façade on for almost his whole life. From a very young age, Naruto was way ahead of his age group and also very good on the uptake. Apparently, being chased by mobs from a very young age requires you to have that.
Being good on the uptake, he had to constantly change his routine behaviour according to the moods of the villagers which led him to become extremely adaptable with good observation and analysis skills, like the façade of being the dobe in the academy was because some drunks had beat him up because they heard that he was pretty decent in class and wanted to limit the 'demon's growth', so he had done that to get out of the jurisdiction of the corrupt civilian council and come under the direct jurisdiction of the Hokage smoothly to not get so freely ostracized anymore without any forms of repercussions for the villagers.
He acted as the dobe in public and trained in secret. Also, you might be thinking he had found out about the Kyuubi from Mizuki. Nope, he had actually met the fox on a day when the mob beating him up had gone too far and the healers, well those who like him anyways, were barely able to pull him back from death's door.
They had actually formed a sort of kin-ship over the years as Kyuubi helped him train in secret and guided him on missions while he allowed the fox to be able to look through and communicate through the seal. He even knew who his parents were, Jiji had told him once when he was in the hospital and he had been upset for days after, thankfully he came around, though he decided to keep his training and façade a secret from the sandaime as well.
(Flashback)
Naruto groaned as he came to and realized he was exhausted, just great! UGH! He wanted to open his eyes but it was really bright, when had he come so close to the sun? This sucks!
He vaguely heard 2 voices, though with his condition he was only able to make out a few words like "Naruto… 3rd time this week… lucky… be alive… barely… bring him back… Hokage sama." He groaned again, louder this time and heard some shuffling and what sounded like jiji when he dismisses someone.
"Naruto" he heard, "Naruto, open your eyes." Though he did not want to he tried for his jiji, "too bright" he whimpered and then the lights went dim. He slowly opened his eyes, blinking repeatedly, trying to adjust his eyes and saw his jiji. "JIJI!" he screamed and lunged for him, hugging him like he was seeing him for the last time. "Naruto, do you feel alright now?" Hiruzen asked the boy he saw as his grandson, 'The grandson he failed.' He thought bitterly but quickly squashed that line of thought to tend to Naruto, after detaching his arms from around him when the hug went on for too long.
"Hai, jiji I'm alright now, that you're here." Naruto responded, though he did so in a subdued voice. "Jiji, do you know why they were after me?" Naruto asked for what felt like already the hundredth time in his short life, already knowing the answer. Hiruzen grimaced internally but responded with the same answer he gave each time, "Naruto, you know that you are not old and mature enough to handle that truth, when I feel you are ready, I will tell you, I promise."
Now, Naruto was getting angry, "you always say that, yet I'm never ready in your eyes to know why I'm hated. But, I'm old enough to get beat up, glared at and chased on a regular basis, huh?" Hiruzen gave another internal grimace knowing what he was saying was the truth and it really wasn't fair on his part for not telling him but for now he would keep quiet. He really did not think that Naruto was ready to know about the Kyuubi and, like it or not, he did have a village to run.
A pissed off jinchuriki is the last thing this village needs.
Though he decided to give Naruto something at-least, "okay Naruto, I get your point, but I cannot and will not tell you the reason for you being hated, though, if you want I'll tell you who your parents were?" While Naruto frowned at the first half of his response, he immediately brightened up at the latter half and nodded enthusiastically. Hiruzen smiled at the smile on the blonde's face and led him to his office where he brought out 2 scrolls from his desk. Giving him the first one he also showed him a picture of his mother and said,
"Naruto your mother was a very fiery and hot-headed yet beautiful, strong and loyal woman named Uzumaki Kushina. She belonged to a very prestigious and strong clan from Uzushiogakure. While she was an angel with everybody around Konoha, she was just as much fierce and brutal on the battlefield. She was an S-rank nin, who could have rivalled me in my prime known as the Red-Hot Habanero for her famous temper and the Red-Death as the last thing anybody saw was her red hair before they were killed ruthlessly by her."
"I belong to a clan!" Naruto shouted excitedly, that was so cool! Hiruzen smiled at seeing Naruto in his usual demeanour again. "She is so beautiful!" Naruto was in awe of her bright and vibrant red hair in the photo.
Hiruzen chuckled "Yes she is, not only was she deadly, she was also one of the most beautiful kunoichi ever, well according to your father and the majority of the male adult population of this village and across the elemental nations anyway." Then he straightened up and hesitantly gave him the second scroll, followed by another photo, this time of Kushina and Minato together. Naruto saw the photo and immediately connected the dots, his smile widened and lit up the room so brightly, even the ANBU hidden in the room could not help but smile.
"The Yondaime's my father, that is the coolest thing ever. My idol is actually my father." Naruto exclaimed feeling extremely happy. Hiruzen smiled feeling the exhaustion for the day from his duties vanish due to the blonde sunshine in his room. "Naruto, open the scroll. It's your inheritance." Naruto opened the scroll and smoke erupted signifying the unlocking of a sealing scroll. Out popped a few jutsu scrolls and books and scrolls with the Uzumaki logo on them. "Jiji, do you know where they lived?" Naruto asked. "Yes I do, Naruto. It is a really big house and they owned a lot more property around Konoha including a rebuilt massive Uzumaki clan compound. I assume you want to live there from now on?" "No jiji, I don't think the villagers would like a demon brat 'defiling' the property of their revered hero with his presence." Naruto muttered darkly, though Hiruzen heard him clearly and frowned wanting to steer him away from those dark thoughts he said "ok Naruto, you must be quite tired. I think you should just go home and sleep."
Strangely enough, that worked…
A lot better than expected. Naruto suddenly smiled widely and hugged him then ran out barely having enough time to greet him goodnight. Though the abruptness of that smile was weird, Hiruzen dismissed that thought from his head and groaned looking at the stack of paperwork on his desk. He swore it winked at him and that he could hear his ANBU guard snickering in the room.
Naruto smile never dropped throughout the way to his apartment. Ignoring the glares, whispers and the occasional beer bottle thrown his way he went into his apartment…
And his smile dropped as he adopted a more emotionless visage and muttered in a bitter voice "Thank god, Jiji did not detect my façade." Sigh, "Even jiji lied to me, he did know my parents but all these years I was under the impression he did not. I still love him, but I cannot completely trust him anymore just like I can't trust anyone." He had not been lying the whole time, he did think his mother was the prettiest ninja out there and was happy about having a clan and that his father was the Yondaime but no sane person would be so upbeat after having their daily dose of near death beating by a mob of grown adults.
He then quickly opened everything in his inheritance. He saw the various seals and studies on them. The Rasengan and the Hiraishin and various other jutsus from both his parents. He also read up on the Humming-bird and the Uzumaki clan taijutsu style called Whirlpool. After a bit more reading he fell asleep, not knowing that his sleep that night would signify his waking up as a majorly different and stronger person, both mentally and physically aided by emotional ad physiological strength.
(Flashback End)
Anyways, back to the analysis of his skills…
For ninjutsu, he was pretty stacked as far as he knew, at least, for his age. He had the seal-less Kawarimi and Henge from repeated practice after Kyuubi had drilled into his head how they were simple, subtle, and useful. The shadow clones, exploding clones and he also had made blood clones in the past, all copied down from the forbidden scroll when he had actually learned shadow clones and found out the memory feedback feature which had helped tremendously in his training.
Jiji had also given him the Kunai Kage Bunshin and the shuriken Kage Bunshin on his request. He had even sneaked out chakra paper from jiji's desk to explore the branch of elemental manipulation when he had heard a jonin helping out a chunin on it. After learning that he had an extremely strong wind affinity with a minor water and lightning affinity. He had learned a variety of jutsus in all three affinities, ranging from D-rank to B-rank with an A-rank jutsu in each.
He had also found out from his developed stealth and poverty, which had caused him to even scrounge through trash for days, that there are a lot of old scrolls discarded from clans. If they were something uncommon but not required they were burnt, but otherwise they were thrown in the trash. He had found out that the trash cans outside the Uchiha compound had a pretty decent supply of old scrolls of fire jutsus, which had allowed him to develop a decent-sized arsenal of fire jutsus. The rest of the trash cans from the other clan compounds also had various scrolls ranging from taijutsu to elemental techniques.
For Taijutsu, he had a mix between the Humming-bird style and the Uzumaki clan style after receiving his inheritance. With the humming-bird style of speed and light but strong hits and the Uzumaki clan style of parrying and dodging while responding with a more impactful hit. He had also trained with Maito Gai and Rock Lee after the duo had caught him doing laps around the training field before the academy was to start for the day, with their training he had progressed fast with some forms of their style of Goken, which focuses on overpowering your opponent, accounting for strength in his way of fighting.
Also, with the weights Gai had introduced him to a few weeks before graduation, knowing his condition and the advantage his advanced healing gave him with the fast tear-down and build-up of muscles had helped tremendously in his bodily development, but the happiest he was due to the duo was because they were one of the few who did not hate him, in-fact, Lee and Gai had even cheered him up after a beating and he had become a student of Gai and formed a brotherhood with Lee, since, both could relate on working twice as hard as their peers.
For Genjutsus, he had to work the hardest as his massive chakra reserves did not allow him to have proper control. Though the fox had made sure that he knew how to break out of most if not all D-rank to B-rank illusions and a few A-rank as well. Kyuubi also made sure he worked on learning a few low-level Genjutsus to account for lack of illusions as it helped tremendously in his chakra control as well and since he knew simple but extremely effective illusions it increased his subtlety by a lot like the one where he turned invisible. Even the split second it takes for an enemy to break out of it could give him an edge.
Fuinjutsu was his favourite branch as he had gotten personal training from jiji in it from the age of 6. The sandaime knew how dangerous it could be so had decided to take it slow teaching him everything he knew within a time span of 3 years.
Afterward, Naruto had decided to just practice it on his own with help and advice from jiji and books from the library. He had well surpassed the sandaime but Hiruzen expected it with him being from the Uzumaki clan and the son of the Yondaime and the red hot Habanero, both Minato and Kushina being fearsome S-rank Kage level nins and level 10 sealing masters, and past it with their own seals, in their own right.
Throughout the years, with the amount of time he spent on Fuinjutsu, he was around level 7 with his teachings and personal seals. Though there was a big gap between level 6 and 7, which was why the sandaime didn't really try to get past level 6 in sealing even with the seals he himself had created.
With how advanced he was, it was no surprise he had detected a few well-placed seals on his body, and if he had to guess they were there from birth, probably the bastard council getting a seal master from somewhere else to make them and place them.
I mean, he literally had body development, height, and brain-to-senses suppressant and dispersal seals on him, with the latter probably being placed on him after some shinobi saw how quickly he adapted to situations. After taking them off, he still remembered his surprise when instead of a short and blond squirrel look-alike, he saw a tall, for his age, guy with bright blonde hair with a bang or two always protruding out the front curling on his forehead, tightly packed muscle and a taught set of abs. Though his fitness could be blamed on how much he used to run from mobs and shinobis after pranks and all the early training he did for years.
He also noticed how he could finally observe and analyse properly and most of all think clearly after a long while. That had been the push that had allowed him to jump from level 6 to 7 in sealing.
Though he decided to trust no one with his extreme paranoia and decided to create temporary and detachable forms of the bodily and height suppressant seals so he could further perfect his façade. Seeing as it clearly allowed him the major advantage of surprise due to enemies underestimating and dismissing him as a snot-nosed brat during missions.
How he developed this much was the memory feedback of his army of shadow clones and near unlimited stamina which allowed him to do months, even years of training in weeks.
This combined with the fact that when he was not training in the outside world, he was training in the mindscape with the Kyuubi who was very knowledgeable and knew just how to train him as he did not feel any exhaustion or strain of the mindscape in the outside world, the Kyuubi had told him he also could not get any physical developments he made in his mindscape outside.
So while his real-world training was largely composed of taijutsu with a good portion being ninjutsu and genjutsu, his mindscape training was of improving his Fuinjutsu, handwriting, fluency, and communications skills with whatever he could develop in the outer three.
Whew!
Anyways, finally first chapter is done it was just an introduction to Naruto and all his skills and traits.
Comments and reviews are being accepted, and constructive criticism is appreciated though do not go crazy guys, pls.
I am a new write therefore will try to take your inferences in to account but I need experience before I can properly tackle haters.
(Special message: I apologise as I just made a really big mistake. I posted the primary incomplete draft of my story rather than the complete one. This one has the flashback so I am taking my previous post down and posting this new version of it.)
Anyways any future suggestions can be PMed and I will save them for future works, sooooo...
being a rookie for now, I do not know what else to write so, see you next chapter and...
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