Nlejawsig- Yeah i how I don't ruin it too, I don't have any plans to write a pretty good chapter and disappear off the face of the earth but who knows.
JintoLin- Yeah i like the idea of "Plot Magic" but who knows i might come up with something. I might just saw Hashirama cells because that is the answer to all plot holes. Izanagi, wood style, how Madara got the rinnegan, I think Kishimoto might've discovered a way to end all plot holes with that one. Don't have a solution to a plot hole just ask "Can it be Hashirama Celled?"
I might do a few flashbacks but who knows, also I would say Shino has it worse. I mean I don't particularly like Sakura as specially in part on. Plus he goes from a kind sweet girl as a teamate to a girl who reminds me of a velocoraptor. But yeah i do think she would be great in genjutsu, (maybe i can have her try to genjutsu itachi sometime.) Idk if she will become a medic nin. I might have Hanabi train under Tsunade but idk yet.
Ps- i dont own Naruto
Chapter 2:Bell Test
The three waited for another thirty minutes until Naruto had enough.
"Okay that's it!" Naruto shouted as he got up.
"What are you doing Uzumaki-san?" Hanabi asked.
Naruto then began to take his eraser and put it in the door.
"Dobe, he's a jonin that will never work on him." The bruting Uchiha said.
"You're right." Naruto said in realization.
He then began subconsciously channeling chakra into his eyes and instantly knew what to do. And just as fast as his eyes activated they deactivated, this entirely went unnoticed by the other two. Naruto just began to pull out some ninja wire and went to work.
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Kakashi began to walk toward the door to open it and instantly saw the eraser. "Hmm" was his response as he opened the door and it fell onto his head.
He then noticed the glint of a trip wire which he stepped over. However he stepped onto a makeshift pressure plate which sent a nearby desk toward the scarecrow which he did a quick substitution to avoid. He however substituted with a chair that had been set as a trap, he accidentally activated another pressure plate which sent a chair flying at him which he avoided. But there was another chair that flew at him to which he dodged again. However this was a distraction for a net that had been flying towards him. He could only try to substitute with a nearby object, this object however was a lone Uchiha sitting in the middle of the room.
"Haha, I almost got you! Although I still think I won" Naruto said, referring to the seething Uchiha in the net.
"So it was Naruto who made these traps. I thought he wasn't so good with this stuff?" Kakashi thought.
He paid attention to the others in the room, there was the stoic Hyuga who looked like she didn't want to associate with Naruto. There was also the Uchiha who couldn't escape with the chakra suppressing net.
"My first impressions are… I hate all of you. Meet me on the roof in 5 minutes and don't be late." Kakashi said.
OOO
On the roof
Naruto, Hanabi and an angry Uchiha who had been reluctantly released by Naruto were on the roof with a scarecrow.
"Okay let's start with introductions." Kakashi stated in a monotone voice.
"Like what?" Hanabi asked.
"Likes, dislikes, dreams and hobbies." Kakashi said.
" Why don't you go first since we don't know anything about you?" Naruto asked.
"Okay. My name is Kakashi Hatake. Likes and dislikes… I don't feel like telling you that. Dreams for the future…I never really thought about it. As for hobbies… I have many hobbies." Kakashi said with an eye smile.
"He really only told us about his name" the three graduates thought with a sweat drop on the back of their head.
"You next blondie," Kakashi said, pointing to Naruto.
"I'm Naruto Uzumaki,I like instant ramen, but what I really like is the ramen at the ichiraku noodle shop. What I dislike is waiting the three minutes after pouring the hot water in the ramen. My hobbies are eating and training. And my dream is to become the greatest Hokage! Dattebayo!" Naruto stated.
"He really is just like his mother," Kakashi thought.
"Okay now the blind girl," Kakashi said.
Hanabi got a tick mark on her head. "My Name is Hanabi Hyuga. What I like and my hobbies are cooking and training. I dislike losers. " she said with a glance toward Naruto. " My dream is to become a great clan head." Hanabi finished.
"Okay now… emo over there" kakashi said, referring to sasuke.
"My name's Sasuke Uchiha. I have multiple dislikes, but no particular likes. And I don't feel like summing up my ambition as just a dream, but I do have an ambition. The ambition is to restore my clan and without fail… kill a certain man." Sauske stated in a dark tone.
"I guess he's referring to itachi." Kakashi thought.
"Okay" Kakashi said, breaking the atmosphere. " You three are to meet me at training ground 7 tomorrow at 8 o'clock. There we will do the test to see if you are ready to become genin." Kakashi informed.
"But aren't we already genin?" Naruto asked.
"That was just a test to see if you are ready to take the real test. This test only has a 33% passing rate so your chances of passing are slim." This shocked the graduates, and Lakshmi began to leave but said one final thing.
"Ohh… and don't eat breakfast or you'll puke." And then he left the three with a standard shunshin.
OOO
The next day at 8 o'clock
Naruto had shown up to the training ground and was the last graduate to arrive. He however wasn't the last to arrive on team 7, that role was given to their Jonin sensei.
They began waiting for their sensei to arrive, which didn't happen until two hours later.
"You're late!" Naruto shouted.
Kakashi rubbed the back of his head and eye smiled. "Sorry I got lost on the road of life." Kakashi stated.
"That was the worst excuse I've ever heard." Hanabi said.
" Okay let's get started! We don't want to waste any time do we?" Kakashi said.
He then pulled out two bells. "You guys will have one hour to retrieve these bells. When you get a bell you will be promoted to genin."
"But there are only two bells." Hanabi said.
"That's true, the one who does not receive a bell will be tied to a post and be forced to watch as we eat in front of you. You will get sent back to the academy."
"It's obvious that Naruto is going to fail, it's destined to happen." Hanabi thought knowing the blonde.
Kakashi then pulled out an alarm clock and set an alarm. "You will have half an hour to try to get the bells, and your time starts…now!" Kakashi said.
Instantly the ninja leapt back into the trees for cover. That was not the case for one blonde, who charged forward.
"Idiot" was the collective thought of both Hanabi and Sauske who were hidden within the trees.
"Multi-shadow clone jutsu" Naruto shouted and instantly 30 clones of Naruto engulfed the clearing and began to charge at Kakashi. The clones were no match for Kakashi's skill and were quickly dispatched.
Kakashi then vanished and reappeared right behind Naruto.
"Your first mistake was letting your enemy get behind you." Kakashi whispered to Naruto.
Kakashi then crouched down with a tiger seal.
Hanabi seeing the entire encounter "he's about to finish this fight with a jutsu, he could obliterate him ."
"Leaf Village Secret Finger Jutsu! One Thousand Years Of Death!" Kakashi then began to shove his fingers directly where the sun didn't shine. This sent the blonde flying directly into a nearby lake.
Kakashi then began to pull out something within his ninja pouch. He pulled out an orange book and began to read it.
This had been the opportunity a certain Uchiha had needed and taken it. He sent a hail of shuriken at the Jonin, which he effortlessly dodged with a substitution.
Sauske began to realize it was a trap and decided to run before Kakashi found where he was. It was no use and kakashi caught up with sauske in a small clearing. Having no other voice sauske began to fight. Throwing kicks and punches but none getting past Kakashi's defense. Sauske leapt into the air, after doing hand signs he shot a massive fireball toward kakashi. Kakashi was engulfed in flames and as the smoke cleared there was nothing left in his place.
It was then hands began to reach up from the ground and pulled sauske with them into the ground. Sauske was buried into the ground leaving only his head poking out the surface. Kakashi just left with a smug look on his face (probably … it's kinda hard to tell with his mask on).
Kakashi went looking for the final member to finish and be done with this year's team. It was then that Hanabi jumped on top of Kakashi. Using her byakugan it allowed her to find and ambush Kakashi.
Trying to hit Kakashi's tenketsu points was proving too difficult as Hanabi was too slow for the experienced Jonin.
Her byakugan allowed her to see in a 360 degree vision which meant that surprising her was a lot harder than others. Kakashi leapt back and went through quick hand signs and said water style:water bullet. This sent a fast stream of water toward Hanabi who was unable to dodge and was sent back into a tree.
Kakashi then left the girl who was in a daze and ran toward where they had started.
In the clearing there stood Naruto waiting for Kakashi. Kakahi just shunshinned behind Naruto and began to give him his two thousandth year of death.
"Don't you ever learn?" Kakashi whispered to Naruto. as he committed various levels of sexual assault on the blonde, Naruto however puffed into smoke. Kakashi felt a presence behind him, but it was too late. Kakashi felt a violent pain and it stemmed from behind him.
"Leaf Village Secret Finger Jutsu: One Thousand Years of Death!" Naruto said. Kakashi began to go flying in the air.
Meanwhile the Hyuga heiress who had come out of her daze was watching the scene unfold with her byakugan. "They both are idiots aren't they?" Was her only thought.
Kakashi had managed to get back to his feat. "Impressive! You managed to copy my ultimate technique. But you only have 15
Seconds left! " Kakashi had pointed to the clock that was next to Naruto.
"He's right I need to get the bells somehow?" Naruto thought that repeatedly until he subconsciously acted the legendary eyes of the Rikudo Sennin.
"His eyes they've changed!" Both Kakashi and Hanabi thought
Sauske, who had managed to free himself, was at an angle where he couldn't see Naruto's face.
Naruto said. "Bansho Tenin!" It was then the bells began to fly off of Kakashi's belt and into Naruto's hands.
"What just happened?" Both Hanabi and Kakashi asked themselves.
Sauske who was just racking his brain to figure out what happened."Did he use ninja wire to get the bell?"
Then the bell rang and the test was over. Naruto's eyes began to turn to normal.
"Well this test can still end in my favor" Kakashi thought.
"Alright Naruto its time to decide who gets the bells." Kakashi said and instantly the two graduates came out. Each of them wondered what would happen.
Meanwhile Naruto was having an internal struggle. "Who should I give it to, Hanabi or Sauske. I don't really like Sauske but…" he didn't know what to do. He didn't feel like he had earned the bells, he just accidentally took them.
"What will it be?" Kakashi pressured.
"I…I" Naruto then turned to both of his would be teammates.
Naruto gave out a loud sigh. "I can't…" he then threw both bells toward his teammates and began to walk off knowing he failed. He turned back toward the three. "I didn't earn the bells, I guess I'll be at the academy for another year. But you can bet I'm not staying to get tied up." Naruto said, trying to lighten the mood.
Hanabi and Sauske were just stunned, they picked up the bells off of the ground. Naruto then felt a pain in the back of his head. He turned back to see Hanabi, only she didn't have a bell with her. "Sorry Uzumaki-San but I don't take handouts." Sauske then threw the bell at Naruto, he didn't get the bells, Naruto did. "Neither do I!" He said.
"Well then you know what that means!" A dark aura began to surround the Scarecrow. Clouds began to form and you could swear you heard thunder in the distance. "YOU PASS!" Kakashi said with an eye smile.
"WHAT!" The three new genin shouted.
"Let me explain, this was a test to see if you would work as a team to achieve your goals. As a ninja you always need to look underneath the underneath." Kakashi explained.
"Then why were there two bells?" Hanabi asked in disbelief.
" That was to throw you off." Kakahi said with an eye smile. He then went serious, " while it is true that those who break the rules are scum, those who abandon their comrades are worse than scum." Kakshi lectured.
"You two are dismissed," Kakashi said, pointing to Hanabi and Sauske. "Naruto, I'd like to speak with you."
For those of who don't know the rinnegan "give special abilities that some consider to be … unnatural." Besides the Six paths it give the user control over chakra, which mean perfect chakra control and an affinity for all element. It also helps you learn faster, Nagato was able to use all five chakra natures at age 10 which is a amazing feat.
I don't hate Kakashi by any means but Ithink he was a horrible sensei. He barely taught his team anything but tree walking and teamwork. Plus he enters his team into the chunin exams where they can actually die because they had one good mission. which if it wasnt for the Nine-tails within Naruto, Sauske and likely Sakura would've died. Plus Sakura had the skill of an academy student. Also he goes and just trains Sauske and give naruto a sensei who he knows hates him and thinks that its fine. Plus he gave an A rank Assasination jutsu to an unstable child. I'mgonna go an give some knives to babies and it would have a better outcome.
Rant on Kakashi over but rant is probably not done.
I haven't completelydecided on whether Sauske will defect or not and if it will be successful(because he would stand no chance.)I am leading to Sauske defecting because it might give some character developmentto the other two.
As for power ups I might come up with a middle stage like the Mongekyo Sharigan for the Byakugan. I mean the byakugan is said to be able to see everything within an area so maybe a power up would be that it can read minds of something. Or maybe Icould have Hanabi somehow lose her eyes and maybe Naruto can use Yin-Yang release to give her a new doujutsu. I mean did kishimoto just forget about the byakugan completely, hidden sharigan abilities are not the answer to every plot hole. I would say that the Eternal Mongekyo is more powerful than the Rinnegan. Kamui is defiantlymore powerful, take Pain and take Tobi, some might say otherwise but Tobi is defiantlystronger. Plus the PrefectSusanoo can litterally take on biju and cut mountains in half at will. While pain (granted it was the Deva path) couldnt take on a 6-8 tailed kyuubi. Come on is the Rinnegan a joke at this point.
(Also imagine in a differant universe where a different body part is a kekkei genkai. like substituite whenever they brag about their eyes to ears its kinda funny. )
Anyways this is the stuff i think about when im supposed to be doing something else.
