The next scene was initially going to be the second take of Mike and Nancy taking down Crystal but this time with the assistance of the bear thugs who pursued them, but I'm still waiting to see if anyone else would like to take over in doing that scene. Meanwhile, here is another idea for a scene of what could have been that wasn't where another one of Buster's friends gives Crystal a well-deserved beating.
This takes place right when the Moon cast takes their bow at the end of the show.
(Scene #3: Meena Pummels Jimmy)
Buster and his group bowed once again. They've really got the taste of success now. Then Jimmy walked past the group as he spoke into the microphone, "Thank you, thank you. Too kind. I appreciate it, really. I-I do." The group looked on in shock, and a bit of anger. He tried to kill Buster and stop his show, and now he dares to take all the credit?! "Look, I am very proud of this show. We did great work here. Great work. And my good friend, Clay...great to have him back, right?"
The audience cheered some more, ignorant to his lie about Clay being his good friend when he didn't even know him. He continued, "Yeah! And listen, I look forward to seeing this show run at my theater for many, many years to come."
Suddenly he was grabbed off stage with a yelp. He found himself out of sight from the viewers' eyes and was slammed hard against a wall. The culprit was surprisingly not Marcus or his guys but Meena.
The elephant girl, usually timid or shy, but not this time, yelled at the wolf mogul, "Us work for you again after you tried to kill Buster?! Are you screwed up in the head?!"
"Ey, ey, ey, ey! You better watch who you're handling!" retorted the wolf. "I happen to be a very powerful mogul here. Besides, you should thank me for throwing him, then Mama Pig wouldn't have faced her fear and saved him. I'm not about to be threatened by some 'pick me' pachyderm, I do the threatening around here!"
With that, the irate elephant then grabbed the wolf by the torso with her truck, flipped him upside-down with the panicked wolf saying, "Wait, I'll make my attempted murder up to all of you! How about I buy each of you all a coffee? Maybe a giant jar of peanut butter for the elephant?"
Meena didn't accept the offer and just went right ahead in using her trunk's strength to hold the wolf upside-down and pound his head into the floor repeatedly with the wolf shouting, "Ooh! Ow! Ow-ow-ow-ow-ow-ow!"
Everyone else just stood back in shock as they watched the elephant continue giving the wolf a beating. They saw her use her trunk's strength to slam Jimmy back and forth, shouting in pain, while the others winced and cringed. At each slam, some new set of teeth were knocked free from his mouth.
Then Porsha put her paws up, saying, "Wait, wait! Uh, Geena, is it?"
"Meena!" Meena said in annoyance. First Darius gets her name wrong, now Porsha?
"Right, listen, that's enough! The police will take care of Daddy."
"Hold on, just one more."
She then held up Jimmy over her head with her trunk and then swung him around in circles as he yelled, "Whoa-whoa-whoa-whoa-whoa-whoa!" She then tossed the screaming wolf out the doors, landing hard onto the ground in pain, all battered and toothless.
(End of Deleted Scene #3)
And that would be if Meena beat up Jimmy as revenge for harming Buster.
I realize it's out of character for her shyness, but I thought it would be funny if she just got a sudden boost of courage by inflicting pain on this big bad wolf.
I plan to have other takes of old Jimbo getting beaten up by other animals on Buster's behalf:
1) the bear thugs, as I mentioned before, if Mike and Nancy teamed up with them to help protect Buster in exchange for Jimmy's money, but if anyone else wants to take over the scene idea from me, I give my permission.
2) Suki and Eddie, if he came with them, and that may happen in "Am I Good Enough?" if I ever get the spirit to continue it and continue shipping Buster with Suki.
As usual, if anyone has any suggestions for any of my stories, such as the Bremen one, please let me know. I'd also like a review here and there.
