This is the reboot of my first fan-fic, you can bash and criticize the story as much as you can. I have a basic understanding of the story of Naruto. With my limited knowledge, I'll stick to the cannon, with many changes.

I take inspiration form:

-Uzumaki tales return of the whirlpool

-Naruto the gamer (Manhwa)

-Once More

-The Jinchuuriki's Brother

Most of Part 1 will be rated K (with a bit of T)

Shippuden will be rated T

Summery

Hagoromo knows that the Ōtsutsuki clan is getting closer to finding Earth. With his now enlightened state, the Sage of Six Paths, forges a powerful seal, in the hopes of changing the fates of his sons.

(Old) Summery

After many years of the reincarnations of Ashura Indra fighting, their father Hagoromo was likely done with their bullshit. To change the fates of the reincarnations of his sons, and after learning about the Karma seal, he gave the current reincarnations of his sons both a special seal.

[ Disclaimer: This is just a fan-written "what if," Naruto, Naruto Shippuden, and Boruto are all own by Masashi Kishimoto, Shueisha, Viz, and Shōnen Jump ]


"Monstrous voices"

"Normal dialogue"

["Thoughts"]

{Sound}

(Detail)

"Justu" (In normal conversation)

(Jutsu/New Jutsu) [in action]


[Chapter 1: Leaving a Mark]


The dispute between two brothers.

Once it began as a relationship of union, turned to conflict.

Cursed to reincarnation by fate.

Disputes left Unsettled,

Full of regrets upon death.

The old man left one,

Fulled with pain watching,

Alone.

His sons fighting,

His creations ever bitter.

He failed as a father,

And as a guardian,

But there is still salvation;

A way to fix this.

He would have to trust the

Ancient seal


In a secluded location; a realm that is both everywhere and nowhere, where the all seeing eyes of a pale man watches the world, he lifted behind.

In his secluded area, Hagoromo continued to focus his thoughts, mind, and spirit. Expanding his chakra, and his wisdom. Through this training the sage reached a form of enlightenment. He was now connected (nearly) all of chakra its self! Knowledge across multiple realities. Knowledge of other existing worlds. A world covered by sea, to one in which life could break the lines of reality through will power alone [Spiral wasn't it?].

Even with this knowledge, Hagoromo, never forgotten, his origins, and the world he loved. He never hated his mother, even when she sacrificed, the people he loved, or trued to kill him and his brother; He still loved her. He understood his mother's motives, and tried his best to do the same (in his own way). Successfully, hiding a planet form his mother's, world concurring, clan. A clan that is hungry for chakra is what someone could consider, difficult, especially if that clan is looking for the planet, in which certain princess/heir to the clan was last known to be on, before any communication with her was lost.

For now, what remains of his unfinished duties, was the situation of the world he left. Seeing everything that has happened, the wars, death, sadness and pain; The unending hatred that was brewing in his creations, the 9 biju. The question ["How did things get to this point?"] Would be the first thoughts of anyone in his situation. He left his job of guiding the world to his sons, but one was corrupted by darkness. Now cursed, his sons will forever clash. An unending dispute, that has raged on for countless decades, to the point to became a the designing factor, on how history will play out in the future. To be honest, it felt like 2 children bickering, endlessly.

How could Hagoromo fix this? Easier said than done. Stubbornness seemed to be the common trend with his sons. Hagoromo had an idea, an reversed engineered/experimental seal, forged from the Karma mark of the Ōtsutsuki clan, and the ability from another world's bridge of peace.

For now he'll hope if the finished product could become the worlds salvation, before it's too late.

Once again, on the day 2 boys were born, the graving of the sun/moon was marked on their palms


Author's note:

This is the end of the Prologue.

The Author's not is what I will use to spill info and write down my thoughts for the time being.

As you can see I'm bad at writing. I can make a story but fucking terrible at writing. When I get better at writing I'll fix these chapters.

My uploading time will be the most random dates in time, and likely I would post more than 1 chapter [likely the max would be 2]

The format of the chapter will be heavy from Uzumaki tales return of the whirlpool, and The Jinchuuriki's Brother

About the seal the Hargoromo made, it will not be on Naruto and Sasuke. The seal is obviously functions like the Avatar state and the Karma seal, due to how Hagoromo in cannon sees both Naruto and Sasuke as individual people from Asura and Indra. Makes no sense for the seal to strip/rewrite Naruto and Sasuke, if Hagoromo made it.

I have no experience in writing in the form of prophecies, legends, and ancient writing. This is the best I can do for now

(If anyone has any corrections or additions, I beg of you to send them [please!]. Bash this as much as you want because I need the help)

If you are wondering what happened in this version of the story:

Sasuke and Naruto are going to be stupid broken in the war arc [before So6P got involved]

Sasuke will actually mellow out before Chūnin Exams.

How will seal interact with the curse mark? That will be unknown until later

I plan to make these chapters longer, like people who make 10k words per chapter, but that's not likely to happen.

The purpose of this story was the answer the question, on "What if Naruto had the Karma seal?" And now it has evolved to this.

Stay toned to next time, "And let's keep this discussion running."~ MasakoX