Thanks for reading this book. I hope you'll take the time to leave some feedback, since this was the first long-form story I've written, and I'd like to improve a bit for the sequels (which should be a good bit less grim than this one was – even after cutting out most of what happens to Liriel in Chapter 16 it's still painful to read that). I actually made a survey on my own site ( surveys/akrasia/) if you'd like to use that. I also included some more information in the foreword and afterword there to explain some of the canon differences I had in mind when writing this story, particularly regarding the forces of Chaos, who I think act a little too simply in the official canon to be taken as serious threats.
I would especially be grateful if anyone was willing to become a beta reader for my next novel. It's a prison break story set in a drukhari space station (really doesn't sound like it's going to be any less dark, does it?) featuring some unusual protagonists.
In any case, I hope you've enjoyed the story and are excited to see where it goes next.
