It has to be a time travel story. but with a twist.
1.) Shiki Raimundo (you can make up a last name) is the male OC who is sent back in time by Albus
2.) Shiki was there when Harry stoped Voldemort in the first year as he took the real stone while a fake was destroyed by Albus, he was also there when Harry went to save Ginny from the chamber. but was invisible so no one knows he develope a huge crush on 16 year old Tom Riddle.
3.) he hates Albus and dislikes Harry for destroying the Diary as well as 16 year old Tom Riddle. He hates Ginny weasley.
4.) He has to be a decendent of both Merlin and Le-fay as well as whoever else you want.
5.) Shiki likes pain and gets off on it. ummm think of Hidan from Naruto.
6.) Tom Riddle has to be more Sadistic Evil and otherstuff but also Charming and whatever you think will be good.
okay as for the Spells Shiki creates they are baced off the 3 unforgivibles so
Imperio Totauls: this control's the victim's body and there ablity to speek. has nothing to do with the mind.
Avada Kedavanos: Kills's someone by slowly and painfully , draining their life energy there is a reverse curse
Halt-can-tartum- stops the curse Avada Kedavanos.
Crucio Totalus: tortures the mind and body.
the new curse's that Tom made up are. or will have to be.
Ignis Sentire Dolor: makes the victim feel like their burning alive.
Dolor Supplicium: make the victim feel like they are being cut by whips with glass and then have a bath in the salt water ocean
Aug 30
Shiki Raimundo (whatever you want his other middle name to be.) Potter. Goes to Hogwarts with Harry Potter his Twin brother. so while Harry has the scar and Soul fragment Shiki has a Soul fragment and powers but no scar.
thus Dumby believes Harry is the only one to have or be a Hexorus [soul fragment] of Voldemort.
The twist is their Aunt and Uncle. (I have seen lots of stories where they are mean and absueive and muggles so nope )
There Uncle is not that fat wailer-thing!
There Uncle is a unknown Wizard (pick a name) who is somewhat rich.
And their Aunt is the same woman as the books and movie but she is a Witch.
She barly passed Hogwarts. so Albus doesn't remember her that well and thinks she was Jealous of her sister Lily . she was also in Ravenclaw.
(secret: Albus doesn't know the Husband/Uncle is a Wizard. he also doesn't know that Lily and her plained there fights and grades. cause if he'd known he'd find Petunia was the smartest witch and was not passing on purpose.)
Aug 30
Shiki can go into Slytherin Ravenclaw or Gryffindor. its up to you.
They have been tought how to use wandless magic but Harry didn't get it that well.
Shiki does.
also as I said before Shiki is there when Harry drops the stone. Shiki picks it up and keeps it. and doesn't get caught.
This is a Story Idea by Sarah132cs
