Thanks to all of you who have read this story. This is the second chapter of my story, I have received comments saying that it will improve my grammar, I hope that in this chapter I will not have so many grammatical errors. I'm looking for beta if anyone offers to leave a comment.

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XxxMiguelfanfiction.

Interesting concept. There aren't many stories where Gohan is on planet Vegeta.

Will Gohan return to planet Earth? And if so, who will he be with... with Videl?

Bardork and Gine will meet Goky and Chi Chi.

R:Gohan will come back to the tiera in the future. Gine will not be able to travel in the future because she will be left to take care of Kakarot.

Aster's Descendants

This has potential. Unfortunately, some of the dialogue feels clunky and occasionally you forgot to press enter between switching speakers. There were also some places where it looked like you deleted a chunk of a sentence without realizing.

It looks like a good story, especially because I've seen others like itdo e very well. but it desperately needs an editor.

R:Thanks for your comment, I will try to improve the writing in the next chapters.

I will also try to edit the first chapter.

Victory

that an interesting and amazing story! Gohan going back to time and meeting Gine is intriguing. I'm glad Gine is taking this very well and getting along with Gohan. Frieza doesn't stand a chance against Gohan.

R:Thank you for your comment. And yes, Gohan will completely destroy Freezer.

WineIXI

Extremely good start. I enjoy seeing gohan going back on time to help people.
His confidence is a breathe of fresh air in my opinion.
Well done.

R:Thank you for commenting. Gohan will try to change the Saiyajin once he destroys Freezer.

xavex

Oh this boy is going to change history of this universe... wonder how this would go. I mean technically he can try finding namekian dragonballs in hopes of returning home, though kinda doubt it would work that easily. Now question would be if he can still perform super sayian at all due to mysteriously gaining a tail and all. Unless going with logic that goku as a teen gain it, so odds are he might as well.

Grammar wise, may want to revise a bit on some of the wording as some you that were suppose to replaced with hes

R:.Thank you for commenting. Yes Gohan will try to go home in the next chapters.

I will try to improve the grammar in the next chapters.

His :

Curioso fic ฅ•ﻌ•ฅ
1 a fuerza si o sí tienen que mandar a Goku a la tierra o si no:
- no hay Gohan
- ni todo lo bueno que hizo Goku por las personas, la humanidad
-ni existiría goku, existiría Kakaroto y quién sabe si se empatejaría con milk.
-etc
En pocas palabras TODO cambiaría
2 tu corrector hizo de las suyas, en partes aparece Ginny en vez de Gine
3 ¿Gine no tiene curiosidad de cómo es su nuera? Sería un milagro que Gohan lleve una fotografía de los 3, cómo familia.
Me intriga como acomodarás todo este asunto

Saludos

R:gracias por comentar. Como has dicho todo cambia no se si cubriré esa parte pero diré que Goku como tal no existirá solo Kakaroto. Gohan hará todo lo posible para que sus padres se conozcan y existir en esa línea temporal. Gohan cuando vuelva a su tiempo tendrá fotos familiares.


" How are you Gohan?" Gine asked seeing her grandson, the Saiyan woman had a smile on her face. It had been a day since Gine had found her grandson from her future. Gohan had just gotten out of bed, his stomach growling at the amount of food he had in front of him, the young Saiyan had forgotten how much food he needed to eat to stay stable and healthy.

"I'm fine grandma" Gohan replied as he sat down at the table.

Gine smirked as she placed the plate of meat, Gohan began to devour the food "Did you manage to sleep well?". Gohan nodded, "I managed to get some sleep, considering my situation," Gine looked sadly at Gohan, "I'm so sorry this happened to you Gohan, I'm sorry I couldn't help you get home."

Gohan shook his head "Don't worry Grandma, I'll think of something to get back home, now the important thing is to deal with Frieza". At the mention of Frieza, Gine tensed, "Are you sure you can beat him?"

Gohan nodded confidently, "Trust my Grandma, I'll beat Frieza easily." She sighed, "You say that like it's easy Gohan."

"Trust my Grandma"

She sighed, "Okay Gohan, do you feel like joining me later?"

"Where will we go?"

"I have to go get meat and supplies in the capital. My job as a meat distributor is to take care of feeding the entire population of the district" answered Gine. "How do Saiyans eat? I know a single Saiyan needs a lot of food."

Gine giggled "As you see, Gohan, Saiyans need twice as much food as other races. One of my tasks is that most of the Saiyans in my district don't go hungry. A hungry Saiyan is a weak Saiyan. And we don't want that in the army".

"That makes sense, I thought the Saiyans hunted their food"

"Oh we do, but if we do that the animal population will disappear in a few years so we try to avoid hunting animals en masse, even so it is done, people usually hunt to survive. For some years King Vegeta buys food from Frieza, once they arrive on the planet, we take care of distributing them to all sectors of the planet."

"Saiyans live all over the planet?" Gohan asked.

"For the most part, the vast majority live in the capital, but small communities like ours are distributed throughout the planet. Our area is the southern sector, around 5,000 Saiyans live in the entire area" explained Gine.

"Wow. How many Saiyans live on the planet?"

"It's estimated around 100,000 Saiyans" Gine replied.

100,000 Saiyans living on one planet seemed crazy to Gohan. "Of course Grandma, I'll be happy to accompany you."

Gine smiled "Great! Let me get ready and get you some clothes." Before leaving Gine lent some Radizt outfits to Gohan, unfortunately Gohan's clothes were torn and she would need some time for her to fix it.

Once prepared grandson and grandmother flew in the direction of the capital. As many questions flew through Gohan's head, he had to admit that seeing so many Saiyans alive was somewhat disconcerting, even more so seeing small children play and laugh like normal children. Even though his favorite activity was fighting each other.

"Grandma"

"Yes tell me Gohan"

"How did the Saiyans end up working for Frieza? I mean I find it hard to understand how a race as proud as us Saiyans ended up working for him and his father."

Gine sighed "The truth is that we don't work for him, we are more like his personal slaves in his army. You see to understand how we came to work for Frieza we have to start at the beginning".

Gohan nodded, somewhat excited to learn the history of the Saiyans.

"Before you start you have to know that we Saiyans are not from this planet"

This fact amazed Gohan "What do you mean?".

"That's right, Gohan, we Saiyans originally came from Planet Sarada, a long time ago there was a civil war and the Saiyans were forced to leave their home planet and come to this planet. Back then this planet was called Planet Plant. Planet Plant was originally inhabited by a race called the Tuffles."

"What happened to them?"

"The Tuffles were a race of humanoids, at first the Tuffles welcomed us on their planet, we Saiyans stayed to live in the mountains and rocky valleys. Over time the Tuffles began to discriminate and push the Saiyans away. You have to understand that while the Saiyans lived in shacks and small towns, the Tuffles lived in big, prosperous cities. In the end King Vegeta decided that if the Tuffles don't treat us with respect then it will be war."

"We went to war, right?"

Gine nodded "I was a little girl when that happened, the war between the Saiyans and Tuffles lasted around 10 years, the war ended when the full moon appeared on the planet. On the planet Vegeta the full moon appears every 10, in the The moment we transformed into Ozarus the war was over and the Saiyans were left as the winner."

"I see" Gohan said somewhat saddened by the fate of the Tuffles.

"After the war ended we renamed Planet Plant as Planet Vegeta in honor of King Vegeta. Shortly after we were discovered by the Arcosians and King Cold, King Cold was impressed by the Saiyans and their strength and demanded that we work for him by conquering them planets, even though the idea was appealing to most Saiyans, we Saiyans don't like being ordered around."

"In the end what happened?" Gohan asked.

"King Cold defeated King Vegeta in combat, humiliatingly I have to say, after that the Saiyans were forced to work in King Cold's army. Very few races willingly work for the Cold family, the Most of his men come from conquered planets. We worked for King Cold when he announced his retirement 5 years ago, he personally came with Frieza to announce it, ever since then we've been working for Frieza."

Gohan nodded, now understanding better the Saiyan history and his annexation to Frieza.

"Despite everything Frieza doesn't like Saiyans and Saiyans don't like Frieza, it's well known Frieza's contempt for us" added Gine. "And it seems he decided to exterminate us."

Gohan looked up at the sky, more specifically where Frieza's Ki signature was located. Gohan and Gine arrived at the capital city, the Saiyan capital had a large palace, with a large landing strip, surrounded by several houses made of different types of materials, some of poorer quality than others. "Grandma, why are the houses so different?"

"Oh Gohan, I don't know if you'll know in the future, the way the houses are built is a way of knowing what social class you belong to, as you know the Saiyans are divided into upper and lower class Saiyans, the upper class have the best houses and status, while the lower class usually have the worst housing materials" said Gine with a smile. They landed them on the huge landing strip.

"What kind of power does a low or high class Saiyan have?" Gohan asked.

"High class Saiyans usually have more than 5,000 power, low class are less than that amount, most Saiyans are low class, very few make it to high class."

"I see" Gohan said.

Gine headed straight for the unloading area. While Gine took care of the meat supply, Gohan decided to explore the compound. Looking at the huge palace where King Vegeta lived, Gohan wondered if Vegeta was now on the planet. As Gohan walked along he didn't notice his surroundings, he ended up colliding with the person in front of him.

"Idiot! Be more careful" Gohan looked ahead only to see a young Saiyan woman, calculating her age to be around Gohan's age, maybe a little older. The woman was wearing classic Saiyan armor, she had long hair and a hard look on her face.

"Sorry I wasn't looking" Gohan said apologetically.

"Whatever weakling, don't get in my way again" she said crossing her arms.

"Hey I'm not a weakling!" Gohan protested.

"Tss, whatever, I'm sure you just got..." She turned on the tracker and stuttered at her. "It's not possible. As you have more than 8,000 power" she shouted calling the attention of those present. Gohan scratched the back of his neck not knowing how to respond, if she acted like this when she had her power suppressed he didn't know how she would act if she found out he was a Super Saiyan.

She grabbed Gohan by the shirt before shaking him furiously, "Tell me how you're so strong? Is it because you just came back from a purging mission and it was so hard? I demand you tell me now!" Gohan was a bit scared, his temper reminded her of his mother Chi Chi.

"Hey I just trained really hard to achieve this power" he said shaking off the Saiyan woman.

She crossed her arms, "Tss whatever, don't think you're better than me just because you're stronger."

Gohan smirked, "I never would, by the way I'm Gohan."

"I didn't ask your name." She said turning her back on Gohan.

"Hey no need to be so hostile" he said with a smile.

"Whatever, I'm leaving, the next time we see each other it will be stronger than you don't forget" she said as she walked away. "Wait you didn't tell me your name!" Gohan shouted before she left.

She stood up before looking at Gohan with an angry look, "My name is Renzy, don't forget it." She then disappeared, leaving Gohan very confused as to what had just happened.

"Who was that Gohan?" Gine asked with a smile on her face, Gohan shrugged "She just told me her name, her name is Renzy, I accidentally bumped into her and she got angry." Gine let out a laugh "Yes, Saiyan women tend to be very temperamental."

"Later when he found out my power level she got even angrier"

"Hahaha, I can imagine, I don't take it very well that someone was stronger than her. Something tells me that it won't be the last time you see her. You also have to admire that she is something beautiful" Gine said mischievously. Gohan's face reddened with embarrassment.

"Did you get the food yet?" Gohan asked trying to change the subject. Gine laughed, "Yeah I got it, now we just have to take it to our district."

Gine showed off a huge cargo speeder that carried an enormous amount of meat and food. "This is the vehicle we use to transport food around the planet, once we finish the journey we drop it back at the spaceport."

Gohan nodded as he and his grandmother entered the huge speeder. Gohan and Gine spent the next few hours distributing meat to the different villages in the region. Once finished they returned home.

"Wow I didn't know you had a job" Gohan said as he lay down on the couch.

"Believe it or not, it's a pretty busy job," Gine replied as the food arrived. Gohan took the opportunity to go see his father in the incubation pod. While Gine was working in the kitchen, the most anticipated Saiyan arrived.

"Gine"

Gine's face lit up "Bardork are you home." Gine hugged her husband with a smile "I'm glad you came, I hope the mission was completed without problems"

"It wasn't a big deal, the planet went down without a problem" answered Bardork.

Gine smiled "It's good that you're here, because I want to introduce you to someone, Gohan come here, Bardork is already home." Gohan walked out of the incubation chamber and into the reception area, his eyes widening at the sight of his grandfather. In front of him was the living image of his father, except for the scar, Bardork and Goku were exactly the same.

"Gine, who is this guy?" Bardork asked, for some reason the boy looked familiar. Gine approached Gohan with a smile "Bardork, this is Gohan, looking from the future and he is our grandson, he is the future son of Kakarot."

Bardork fell silent as he examined Gohan, Gohan flinched at his gaze, he turned his gaze to Gine "Wait for me to believe this woman! What nonsense is this to say that he is our grandson."

"It's the truth Grandpa Bardork, they are Son Gohan son of Kakarot and I come from the future" Gohan said with a sigh "It's better that we go in and I'll explain it to you better".

Three hours later Gohan explained everything to his grandfather, his grandfather listened carefully, when Bardork finished he heaved a big sigh.

"Are you saying Frieza destroyed planet Vegeta?"

"Yes"

"And you and Kakarot are Super Saiyans?"

"Yes"

"And Kakarot defeated Frieza on Namek?"

"Yes"

Bardork let out a big sigh "I know it sounds crazy, but I believe you, somehow I believe you"

"I know it all sounds crazy, I still didn't believe that this is in the past" said Gohan "But I can assure you that Frieza plans to destroy this planet".

"In truth, I already suspected it. Today I was talking to my partner about this matter, it was very suspicious that Frieza called all the Saiyans back to the planet to make an important announcement having the proper channels" Bardork sighed. "I had planned to steal a capsule and send Kakarot to another planet for his safety."

"Bardork!" Gine yelled in surprise. "Would you really do that for our son?"

Bardork nodded. "I was planning on sending him to a low level planet so he could survive, one on a planet far from Frieza space."

Gohan was surprised by his grandfather's attitude, if it was really like that his father was never sent to conquer the earth but to escape from Frieza, a smile adorned his face. Gohan was really beginning to see why his father was the way he was.

Bardork's eyes hardened "If what you say is true Frieza attacks the planet soon we have to warn everyone and escape as soon as possible".

"I don't think it's necessary, remember I'm a Super Saiyan, I can defeat Frieza" Gohan said with a smile. Bardock looked at him skeptically, "Are you sure, I don't want to risk Gine and Kakarot's lives."

Gohan looked determinedly at his grandfather, "Believe me, Grandpa, I will defeat Frieza once and for all."

Bardork saw his grandson's determination and agreed, "If so, I have to tell my squad and have them come as soon as possible."


From the orbit of the planet Vegeta, Frieza left his ship, from his little walking throne he observed the planet Vegeta, thanks to his tracker he was able to know that all the Saiyans were on the planet Vegeta.

Today was the day Frieza would destroy the Saiyans forever. Even though the Saiyans had served Frieza and his family loyally, but Frieza could see right through them, it was only a matter of time before the Saiyans would rise up against him. King Vegeta's face gave him away every time he had to talk to him, the proud man hated having to work for Frieza.

He knew it so he decided to take matters into his own hands, he also had the approval of Lord Beerus the god of destruction.

Frieza raised his finger before charging his Supernova. He watched with a smile as his attack slowly descended towards planet Vegeta.

"If you're going to do something, it has to be now," Bardork said as he watched Frieza's huge attack approaching Planet Vegeta. Most Saiyans were shocked, unable to believe what was happening. The powerful Supernova was moving rapidly towards the planet, already passing the atmosphere.

Gohan along with Bardork approached the impact area. Gohan had felt Frieza's Ki move and knew it was time to act.

Gohan patiently watched the attack before releasing his Ki transforming into a Super Saiyan, shocking everyone, especially Bardork, who couldn't believe that his grandson, his grandson, was the Super Saiyan of legend.

Gohan put his hands together charging his attack.

"Kame"

"Hame"

"Haaaaaaa"

Suddenly the powerful Kamehameha began to push Frieza's attack, Gohan put even more power into the attack, fully returning the attack. In space Frieza watched in disbelief as his own attack was returned.

"It's not possible!" Shouted the Emperor of Evil. Before he could react he was caught up in his own attack along with the people on his ship. Both Dodoria and Zarbon were killed in the explosion.

The powerful attack exploded into space. From planet Vegeta they saw how the sky lit up, seconds later Frieza no longer existed.

Gohan decided to go off planet, he took a deep breath when he went out into space, he had to make sure Frieza hadn't miraculously survived or he wouldn't be a problem in the future. He observed the remains of Frieza's ship, after verifying that Frieza had been definitively destroyed, he returned to Planet Vegeta.

Upon arrival everyone had faces of disbelief. Gine seeing her grandson ran to hug him "Oh Gohan I was worried about you." Gohan hugged his grandmother with a smile, Bardork cautiously approached, "Frieza is dead?"

Gohan nodded "Yes Grandpa, Frieza is dead." Bardork let out a contented sigh. The rest of the Saiyans looked at Gohan between fascination and disbelief.

Gohan dropped his Super Saiyan state "I think I have a lot to explain" he said scratching the back of his neck. A Saiyan approached Gohan cautiously, "I think you owe us all an explanation, boy." Gohan's sight caught Renzy's gaze, Renzy was among the Saiyans present, Renzy's gaze wavered between amazement, reverence and some jealousy.

Gohan turned his eyes to the Saiyan "Sure but first" Gohan's tummy rumbled "I'm hungry" he said with a smile. Gine smiled "Sure Gohan, let me prepare something for you, I'm sure King Vegeta's men will be looking for you to find out the truth."

As Gohan walked his family home his only thought was.

and now that?.


I hope you like the chapter. To get an idea of what Renzy looks like, just take a look at my profile picture.