~K2-Black-Panther
Well, I do write in pretty much all of my free time… Yeah, but I wouldn't be surprised if Sinon found him to be sweet and cool looking, just also immature and irritating (Especially when he yanked on her tail in ALO)
It's gonna be awesome! With Kirito, Sinon, Asuna, Kyouji, and Yui as main characters, a few of legally carried weapons Liz designed, a gun, a knife, a lethal injection, and a radio, what could go wrong?
I found that scene hilarious, and I have my own spin on it that I may upload because it makes Kirito even more embarrassed, pulls Asuna into it, and makes the other girls really complain to the point where Pina tries to take off with Kirito.
Huh, I guess I have to differ. I think Kirito's more torn up about the events in SAO, Asuna's learned that it's part of her and that she's had to atone for her mistakes while Kirito is still haunted by his demons. I do love how Kirito will do anything to protect Asuna but at the same time, Asuna's an incredibly strong character particularly inside SAO. I think Asuna would see her killing Kuradeel as justified when he was about a second and a half away from killing Kirito before she actually got to admit it to him. So it wouldn't bother her as much as it does Kirito because she knows that she did it to keep the man she loved alive and possibly to satisfy her own need for retribution with him killing Godfree like that. Plus Asuna broke the game's speed barrier during her run to them which should've been impossible so why not make her develop her character more? Oh, and if she did kill Kuradeel Asuna would be able to accurately understand what Sinon and Kirito went through with the risen memories of Laughing Coffin.
Hm… When it comes to Kirito vs Sugo in the hospital parking lot I had a completely different take that you'll see soon in the new Guilded Hero redo :P Buuut personally I would've knocked him out with his own blade, I've seen enough death in the world. I actually think Kirito didn't kill Sugo purely because of what he though Asuna would think if he did. There's a difference between killing people in a death game and in real life, Kirito had already brutally murdered him there and ruined his right eye. I don't think Kirito wanted to be any more violent than he already was when all he wanted to go was go to Asuna's hospital room and hug her and never let go. Spoiler: He does die in my version, *wink* don't worry
Hmm… I'm not much of a friendly person, I have an odd past and my life's pretty screwed up for a teenager so it's not personal... However, I would gladly work with you on some fanfictions and fanart pieces! (Crap! I need to upload that pencil drawing!) I go by Caylee online, and you'll be seeing me as a character in one of the chapters soon :D I don't mind being internet friends with people but I'm naturally seclusive soooo
Asuna crashing into Kirito and sending them into a fountain? Priceless! I love Argo as a character in progressive, she's the best! I think I need to make a chapter where I specifically focus on her as a character and her accent which is stupidly complex.
I like them both, but I'm leaning more toward the second one. Of which admittedly I did mull over a basic idea and pull inspiration from another SAO fanfic for a goofy piece PM me about it? I promise it's pretty funny XD Here's the Summary: AU possibly called "Silica's Charm." After helping her save Pina, Silica's sticking to Kirito like a curious flea, making Kirito reluctant to leave the young girl with those ridiculous players who wants Silica as their Mascot. So he takes Silica with him back to Selmburg to ask one of his friends for help training her and keeping her safe. Or more like two, no actually three of them. (Kirito, Silica, Asuna, Liz, Klein, Agil, and Leafa) Turns out Silica's the perfect one to bring all six of them together for once and for all. Although I may upload that one outside of this or double upload it like I'm doing with this chapter since it's technically a stand-alone.
~quiditchChick6~
Thx! I still don't know where that water fountain scene even came from...
2:15? That's nothin' I was up till 4:30 and had to get up at 6:45 today XD
I'm super happy you love them! I really enjoy writing these and it's been a while since I've written fanfiction without changing the characters.
This is very much an AU, I would never do this to the characters in their normal world. However, I do encourage you to read the whole thing, it's inspired by a fanfic I just read on Wattpad that I can't remember the name of, crap. One sec
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Here we go, it's called "Until The End" by FjDirectioner, and I liked the idea of ALO getting hacked all because Kuradeel had a girlfriend; so this tale of heart-wrenching moments, soft fluffiness, and heartless writing was born! Oh, and be glad I didn't put a cliffhanger where I really wanted to put one...
Deadly Hacker, MortemKur
AU It's an AU!
(ALO, SAO, IRL)
"Noo!" The yell tore from Kirito's mouth in a wail of fear and he struggled to finish off the enemies he was fighting. "Asuna!"
Asuna stumbled backward, the beautiful Undine's face had adopted an astonished expression and she looked surprised to see the knife currently in her abdomen up to the hilt. The color in her face drained as she coughed and her knees buckled, her assailant knelt as she fell, so Asuna's head rested awkwardly on his shoulder. Red bubbled at Asuna's lips, looking incredibly realistic for a hack and making ALO seem suddenly much darker.
"Asuna!" Kirito slashed through yet another player who could revive and roared in fury at the enemy pushing him back, away from Asuna when here they couldn't respawn. The blood on Asuna's lips was real, in the real world she was losing blood, real blood, and he couldn't do anything but struggle to try and reach her. Kuradeel had gotten his revenge, with this massive hack that mixed GGO and SAO all together, corrupting the world of ALO and targeting SAO survivors.
"Mommy! Yui howled, the little girl was lying sprawled on the ground in a small nook in the back of the cave they were fighting in, and Kirito saw Asuna's magic, the concealing magic protecting Yui, flicker and waver. Asuna wasn't going to last much longer, and when she disappeared Yui's protective magic barrier would fail.
But Kirito caught sight of and heard Asuna forcing out ALO spell words in a croaking voice. (I apologize now for butchering this but I tried six different Old Norse translator and this is what I managed to create with English grammar rules. Old Norse is one of the few common ancient languages I can't read in or speak.), " Sū brjóta snarp-liga," the rather familiar cylinder of spell words appeared around Asuna's body, words sluggishly moving around her like they were affected by Asuna's weakening consciousness. "frān iord-rīke," Asuna forced the words through her bloodied lips, the chosen words appearing in front of her and her assailant. Asuna's voice was barely audible to Kirito's ears even with his high listening skill, and it was a croaking whisper, "Overja ok hylja sjá," Asuna coughed and her magic faltered, but even as blood from the hack dripped down onto the ground from her wound in abdomen, Asuna continued. "kind þótt æpte Ekku skaði…" The spell finished and an invisible ripple went through the cave, temporarily stunning everyone in shock and Yui's wavering barrier turned solid, preventing other players from even getting close to her. |Sū (spell directed toward Yui, a player) pull energy from this world to protect and conceal this child even after Ekku (the spell caster, my) death.
Do not fear, child, Yui heard a faint whisper through her ears as she trembled with fear, now unable to see what was going on in the fight. You are protected...
"Someone get to Asuna!" Kirito pleaded with his friends, half of them were in the real world connected by audio via Yui and half of them were here helping him. They all were running around, either in battle or racing against the clock to save as many of the other SAO players as possible. "Asuna can't die!"
"We're trying Kirito!" Klien and Sinon's voices were frankly pissed off and stressed, they were in the real world, and by the sound of it, they were trying to knock down a door. "The door's locked and the hospital staff are responding to another emergency!"
"Open up you damn door!" Klein swore and Kirito heard him ram the door again, "nobody's taking my brother's future wife!"
A pink haired leprechaun jumped in front of Kirito and used a sword skill on her mace to send fifteen enemies flying before they turned into remainder lights. "Go to her!" Liz shouted, the pink haired SAO survivor was cut up and injured but wasn't seriously hurt like Asuna was. "She needs you!"
Kirito didn't have to be told twice and started charging through the enemy ranks to reach Asuna, "Asuna!" He yelled her name, "just hold on!" He knew deep in his heart they weren't going to make it. Asuna's eyes were already dulling, blood was getting all over the ground and her clothes, she was coughing up blood from being stabbed in the real world, and yet she was still casting spells.
"Ōsu Þeír fylla gullin öl," Asuna spluttered as the Undine's chest heaved for air, struggling to breathe in the real and virtual worlds, "helgask allr eitrið, rísa folk." Her voice shook and her head drooped, almost losing hold of her magic and staying in the virtual world. "Gefa þeir þroski ok skjót-fœr fara fram áðr hríð endi ok una standa fólcvíg annarr dœgr!" With that Asuna's attacker sprang away and vanished, Kirito fell to his knees next to Asuna, and the Undine fell, her blue eyes struggling to stay open. |Ōsu (casting a spell over the groups of allied parties) "Heal them, golden ale, cleanse all toxins, and have them stand to the line of battle once more." ( " " is a standard Undine Healing Spell) Give them strength and speed to continue on till the battle's end and live to stand in battle another day!|
"Asuna!" Kirito cradled her in his arms, staring in horror at what had happened to her. It was like SAO all over again, but this time Asuna was targeted instead of him. "Asuna!" He lightly shook her when her eyes closed, "stay awake! Sinon! Klein! We don't have much time!" Asuna's lips were stained red with the blood from the hack, simulating what she looked like right now in the real world, having been stabbed there at the same time. Asuna's boots were becoming transparent, the soles of her shoes were becoming a faint transparent blue, a color that would match her remaining light if she were able to respawn. "Asuna!"
"Klein move!" Sinon snapped and Kirito heard a gunshot, likely Sinon managing to use a pistol to shoot the lock.
Asuna was clearly drained, the magic had taken it's toll on her already weakened mind and body, and while everyone else in their group of allied parties was enveloped in a watery glow that meant they were all fully healed and restored, Asuna's ALO blue eyes slipped closed.
Kirito's yells of her name turned into broken wails of grief as Asuna's head limply turned toward him and her character shimmered and vanished with a slow-burning blue flame. Leaving behind nothing but a tiny flickering blue flame Kirito now held in his hands. "Asuna!" He yelled and held the in-game item close to him with a broken sob, "Asuna!"
The tiny flame flickered in Kirito's hands, an in-game object named, "Asuna's Heart." Kirito...
I want to end it here soooo badly! It's such the perfect cliffhanger it's freaking amazing! But then again Asuna's dead (Supposedly? I think so? Yeah, she's gone) and I shouldn't leave it like this, it's too heartbreaking! But it'll ruin the suspense of the story if I don't… Blegh! Too many choices! Ooh, here we go...
I couldn't see anything, or hear anything either. Even my harsh breathing was inaudible to me now. What happened to me? Where was I? And why did none of my senses work? I felt like I was floating, floating in something I was tempted to say was similar to water but couldn't tell for sure. This… this must be my life now I guess… A place where none of my senses worked and I felt like I was submerged in water. My body didn't respond when I tried to move my fingers, I couldn't even feel most of my body anymore, it seemed to be fading, another sense slowly trickling through my fingers. I was fighting... Fighting with my friends, and then this happened.
Suddenly I felt my lungs squeeze like I was suffocating, and felt what felt like grass beneath my bare feet as I landed with a rather soft thump. My knees buckled and I dropped onto the ground onto my hands and knees rubbing my neck and trying to make the choking dissipate. It wasn't until a few moments later when I managed to take in a deep breath and slowly release it, beyond thankful that I wasn't choking anymore. However, my eyes flickered open and I stared at what was around me. Or more like what was under me. I was standing on a mostly transparent area, but that wasn't what was surprising to me. The massive world of ALheim was directly below my feet, thousands upon thousands of feet away. My breath hitched, what now? Why was I here in another VR world?
"Excuse me?" A rather suspicious voice spoke softly and I whirled around to stare wide-eyed at a curly haired girl who looked to be in her late teens with thin glasses rimming her deep brown eyes. "But I have to ask what you're doing here."
"Here? What and where was here exactly?"
