Hey guys, AzAlexzZ here!

I've been really demotivated with the 'Hearthome Academy' story, and I just couldn't find the right things to put into the story.

I read through what I wrote and it seems there were quite a few problems with the way I wrote the story.

The first reason is I feel like I was again rushing through the story without establishing the components necessary for it to be a coherent story. There was a gross lack of character development and/or interaction, especially between Ash and Dawn, I didn't like the way that they interacted. There were many also instances of missing dialogue, exposition, and the lack of backstories.

The second reason is my accelerated pacing made it so that the story was all over the place. I realized that the time-skips I had in mind didn't work out because I was really, really unsure of where I wanted everything to go.

The third reason is that I lost some of the documents that had my plans for this story. So I won't be able to go off my original plans anyways.


So I deleted the story and decided to restart it.

I plan to have:

1) Fewer/no time-skips (and if I do they will be a maximum of 1 week skipped);

2) More dialogue/exposition;

3) Changes to character interactions;

Among other things.


I will write about 3-4 chapters before publishing the first one, this way there are no inconsistencies with the story.

Luckily it's only been 4 chapters in so not much has been missed/ruined. Probably the best time to make a change too.

Either way, hope y'all look forward to it, I'm already rewriting Chapter 1, I will probably start uploading somewhere near the end of March/start of April. Till then, I'm still working on 'The Aura Hero and Element Hero' which is my MHA/Pokemon crossover story featuring Satoshi and Serena.

AzAlexzZ out!