To everyone who gave me their input on this issue, thank you so much! I will be going with the third person POV. I already wrote 23 chapters of this in the first person and it was uploaded on AO3 and I just got to the point where I was dreading writing it because it was in first person and it just seemed choppy and poorly put together. I am going to be rewriting the whole story in third person and reuploading/replacing the the old chapters with the new third person ones on AO3. The story is called The Rich Boy, named after the F Scott Fitzgerald work of the same name. It's one of my favorite FSF stories. I can upload it here as well if anyone is interested, please just let me know in the reviews!
Thanks again to everyone for the help,
~HP
