I'm writing stories about my favorite character in Jak 2 Torn he is the best character of the game he ever in Jak 3 Torn is a awesome character in this I'm add Oc name Destiny she a childhood of Torn and Errol they used to be friend's till she went to the past to grow up peacefully with Jak and Dexter I'm not going to give all the spoilers a away read to find out more.
Part 1 separate from Jak.
Destiny doesn't know what's this mean but after save the world from Gol and Mala Acheron and stop them from used dark eco Destiny keep thinking of him Torn she hasn't see him since she was child or Errol Destiny is wondering what's they are doing now she was lost in though when a voice behind made her jumping it was Keira Hagai.
Destiny what's what's wrong said " Keria Hagai.
nothing wrong said " Destiny.
there's something wrong with you said " Keria Hagai.
will I was thinking what's your father Samos Hagai planned to do with that precursor ring we found said " Destiny.
what's about said " Keria Hagai.
hello ladies said " a voice.
Dexter we are having conversation here said " Keria Hapai .
I'm so sorry said " Dexter.
listen Dexter I'm try to finger out where large precursor ring lead it could be connected to my past said " Destiny.
what's said " Dexter.
Dexter don't touch anything though the
precursor vanished along ago the artifact they left behind still do great ham said " Samos Hagai.
or great good if you finger out how used them said " Keria Hagai.
I has experience with such things I know you made work said " Samos Hagai.
Jak push a bottom to start the rift ride.
looking like Jak still got the Mojo said " Dexter.
interesting it appears to be read out some preset coordinator said " Keria Hapai.
then sky turn dark.
what's going on said " Destiny.
wow looking at that said " Dexter.
finally the last rift gate has been open said " Voice.
ahh what's are though things said " Dexter.
so this is how it happened said " Samos Hapai.
ah you cannot hide from me boy said " the monster.
do something Jak said " Destiny and Keria.
what's do or that everyone push all the bottom said " Dexter.
Jak push the bottom they head towards rift gate un where they was going.
what's was that's thing said " Keria Hapai.
hung on everyone's said " Samos Hagai.
ahh i went off this said " Dexter.
ahh yell Keria.
find yourself Jak said " Samos Hapai.
Jak said " Destiny.
in a new world.
they land somewhere they never be before Destiny and Jak was confused where's they
was at.
Jak where's are we Destiny asked him.
Jak just looking at her and did not say anything or a word has used.
okay I swear that last I ever ever touch any precursor crap said " Dexter.
some here said " Destiny.
there he move in step a away from the girl and the animal said " Krimzon Guard.
forget the girl and rat the Baron went him we be waiting for you said " The man.
the guard knock out Jak has Destiny and Dexter running a away.
Destiny knew she was separated from her friend Jak .
Errol what do so call Baron Praxis went with Jak Destiny though to herself.
do you know him or something said " Dexter.
yeah I do my memories are coming together said " Destiny.
that's fine a everything but we to find a way to save Jak said " Dexter.
yes of course said " Destiny.
Destiny and Dexter started working for a man Osmo he give a new outfit to wear it fit her will and give her weapons for her fight with he was worried about her but she really missing Jak and her another friend's she made it her mission to save Jak from the Baron and Errol she decided to a solo Job without Dexter went she find herself on crystal island where's saw another figure from her past she wasn't worried about it's till she was attacked by metal heads again this figure save her she was shocked to see him again.
Torn is that's you said " Destiny.
Destiny is that's you said " Torn.
I can't believe it said " Destiny.
we are reunion after those years being separated from each said " Torn.
I though you forgot about me said " Destiny.
no I couldn't forget about you said " Torn.
what's have you been doing said " Destiny.
I join underground to remove the Baron from power said " Torn.
really I'm fighting the Baron to save a friend of mine his name is Jak said " Destiny.
I don't know who is but I'm happy to see you again said " Torn.
I'm happy to see you again too said " Destiny.
why don't you coming back to the haven city with me to slums I have a hideout there's I can talking to the shadow about let you join the underground said " Torn.
okay said " Destiny.
Destiny took up Torn offers to go back to his hideout where she be safe from Krimzon Guards and she can be with Torn forever that's what's he went from her Destiny doesn't know what's he was real planning for her now she know went walk up behind her and wrapped his arms around her this made her nervous.
Destiny I love you since we children now you back I can confirm my love for you and how much I missing you said " Torn.
I miss you too and I has this feeling you love me back then I has the same feeling for you I doesn't know how to show I was afraid of you rejecting me and my feelings said " Destiny.
no I have never went have done that's said "
Torn.
thank you for understanding how I feel about you and I love you said " Destiny.
I love you too said " Torn.
to be continue
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