so i got some reviews at three and some reviews are helpful now the Grammar is actually kinda bad from my opinion I was just starting so don't judge me and second it's hard to do it when your also doing YouTube and I'm also posting it on Wattpad and Webnovel so thanks for the tip of grammarly I will use it in the future. Now for the himiko hmm interesting I'm still doing Naruto x kaede tbh but the reason I asked for himiko is because of 3 reasons one is that I had a strange dream one night and it was about them to them it caught me to mind to try it, the second reason is that I thought of maybe Naruto could teach himiko chakra (Yeah probably not) and third Himiko like someone said was annoying tbh so I wanna try to change her this time especially in this story plus Naruto has TALK NO JUTSU so it will definitely change her. Now one more question for you all do you want to have the same people die or it will be re rolled into a wheel decide you say it in the reviews and also like I just said It will be a Naruto X Kaede Fanfic but I just wantef to see what y'all think leave ur reviews down below but wolfy signing out