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Harry started hanging out with Joe and his friends more. They always looked out for him; made sure he ate and felt good about himslef, and well it made Harry feel really good that people looked after him and cared about him.

After about a year of hanging out with Joe Harry started to see him as a parent figure. Even though he know that Joe's occupation wasn't exactly good. Joe would come back at strange hours bleeding, and Harry would over hear conversation sometimes.

"Yea that kid I don't fucking know how old she is- but damn she got me good, you know me and this other guy" he stopped for a second to take a sip of his whiskey.

"A strange guy that's for sure! he had a fucking- how you call it again? bow and arrow a fucking bow and arrow!" he started laughing.

"He looked ridiculous, but he was good like damn he could of taking me out real quick"

" Anyways we teamed up but she got away, couldn't expect less from the black widow" he stopped talking like he was thinking and he had a pained expression on.

"But I just-... I didn't expect her to be this young... she was Harry's age-" "I... me and the weird dude couldn't do it we couldn't take her out" he stopped talking and played with the his glass of whiskey.

Harry was really confused what did he mean by take her out?

How could someone his age escape Joe?

And how fucking cool is this guy with the bow and arrow??

Harry got home pretty late but he didn't really cared. He had a plan he would get Joe to train him and he would be stronger then Louis.

"Where is Harry it's pretty late..." Lopin said slightly worried.

"It's pretty normal he goes out we don't really know where but he always comes back" James said not really bothered that his 7 year old son is out at 22:30.

"What do you mea-" Lopin was interrupted by the noise of the front door closing.

"I'm home!" Harry said as he walked into the large living room their house was quite nice to be honest; 2 floors big rooms, a big kitchen that will make restaurant look bad, a really nice cozy living room. But Harry never felt home there he felt more at home in the old waffles shop with Joe and Miriam.

"Harry! where have you been I was worried sick!!" Lopin said looking for any injuries. "I'm fine im fine I was just out" Harry could feel a warm feeling in his stomach, Lopin really cared about him and it was really really nice.

"Where have you been it's to late for you to be out!!!" Lopin said slightly angry.

"Lopin stop it's not a big deal so he was out? so what?" at that point Harry already know that an argument was coming so he snuck into his shared room.

Even though they had plenty of rooms Louis and Harry still shared a room. Harry found it kind of annoying, he liked Louis of course but he was still jealous of him and the attention he was getting from EVERYONE.

The room was dark and Louis was already in bed his red brown hair that he never cut could be seen picking out of his blanket. "Harry!! pssst whats up?" Louis felt really excited that he managed to stay awake until Harry was home. He had something really important he needed to tell Harry.

"I'm fine you know the usual..." "what's up with you"

"I'm fine did you know Thomas Weir was forced to quit the quidditch team???!?" Louis said in a hurry like the whole world depended on it.

"WHAT???? THAT CRAZY WHY WAS HE FORCED TO QUIT??"

"I know that's what I said! how can they kick out this LEGEND" "Apparently if he stayed one more season they would have to pay him more or something" "but it's so dumb like they are going into I know season with out their lead player like what????-"

"They are gonna lose big time without him AND all his fans will change teams!"

"YEA I KNOWWW HE CARRIED THE WHOLE DAMN TEAM ON HIM BACK" "But some people say he would continue his career in another team"

Louis continued to explain to Harry the rumors about their favorite quidditch payer in the end they dosed off at 3 am.

The next day...

"Hey Joe I have a question and think about before you answer me"-