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Dear Guest Reviewer agar aapko story pasand nhi aa rhi toh read mt kijiye… but writer ya story ki bashing mt kijiye…aapka review maine read kiya tha usko approve bhi kiya tha but may be some technical glitch voh abhi tkk show nhi hua h… Fanfiction site pr ese technical issues aate rehte h… pehle bhi aaye h… isliye maine aapko last chapter mein bhi address kiya tha note mein k pehle story aage progress hone dijiye phir decission dijiye. Agr aapne review section dekha ho theek se toh aur bhi guest reviewer h jisne criticise kiya h but bashing nhi ki…
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Team had their lunch with some chit chat while Abhijeet helped Isha set her house. Later Abhijeet ordered dinner for both of them and went to her house to call her. They moved inside his house together while laughing on something when Daya noticed him from his window. Daya turned his face away in anger. Both of them were having dinner while laughing on some jokes when Acp Pradyuman walked in knocking the door. Abhijeet and Isha stood up seeing him while cleaning their hands with napkins. Abhijeet asked –
Sir aap… aayiye na dinner kijiye.
Acp Pradyuman (looking little dissappointed) – nhi Abhijeet… main dinner krke aaya hun… bs walk kr rha tha toh kuch baat krne ke liye aagya… Sorry maine dekha nhi tum log dinner kr rhe ho.
Isha – Sir aap kya baat krne aaye the… kahiye na…
Acp Pradyuman (looking at Abhijeet) – Tumse nhi…Abhijeet se baat krna aaya tha main.
Isha – Oh… aap log baat kijiye na…(to Abhijeet) Abhijeet main thodi der mein aati hun.
Abhijeet nodded but Acp immediately felt bad so stopped her with – nhi Isha… tumhe kahin jane ki zrorat nhi h… main bs ye kehne aaya tha k (to Abhijeet) Subeh mere khabri munna se mil lena kuch information dene ki baat kr rha tha… usee bta diya h k tum aayoge… Chle jaoge na?
Abhijeet (confused) – Han sir… pr aap ese pooch kyu rhe h.
Acp Pradyuman (silently) – Kuch nhi… ese hi.
Saying so, he left. After that Abhijeet and Isha continued their dinner. Then Abhijeet made two glasses of cold coffee. They took their glasses and sat on the comfortable chairs outside Abhijeet's house. While having coffee, they were relaxing. At around 1AM she moved to her house while Abhijeet went inside.
Meanwhile Acp came to his own house angrily and sat on his arm chair. His thinking -Pehle voh DCP Pathak ab ye Isha… inke saath hi rehne lga h Abhijeet aajkl. Apni team ki kuch pdi hi nhi h… Khana khane tkk nhi baitha hmare sath. Tum sach mein humse door hote ja rhe ho Abhijeet…
Next day they were interogating a criminal. The criminal was sitting on a chair in main hall. While team was standing there surrounding him. Daya slapped him to confess the truth but he started laughing –
Tum log chahe jitni maar peet krlo… lekin mujhe maar nhi skte tum log. Agr tumne mujhe maar diya toh sb k sb phsoge… Main kuch nhi btaunga.
Abhijeet (sarcastic tone) – Acha… itna bhrosa h tujhe. Theek h phir… tu kuch btana nhi chahta toh kya kr skte h… maar hi dete h. (to Isha) – Isha… ye criminal ab tumhare hwale h… lash ka dekhlenge.
Team was shocked while Acp and Daya were utterly confused. Isha wore her gloves and closed the bureau door and windows. She turned off a particular switch button and came towards him and said in a dangerous voice –
Ye switch yahan ke cameras ka h… ab yahan ka koi camera kaam nhi kr rha. Darwaze khidkiyan bhi band h… ab yahan tujhe maar dalun, ya tujhe ulta latka dun, ya kitni bhi maar peet kru… kisi ko pta nhi chlega. Ye log mujhe nhi rokenge. Tera paas 10 seconds h… sach btayega ya…
Criminal (little shacken) – ye tumne gloves kyu pehne h…
Isha (same tone) – saboot nhi chodna mujhe… jb tujhe qatal kru… toh koi nishaan na reh jaye… isliye. (To Abhijeet) Lgta nhi ye sach btayega… iska kaam khtm kr dete h.
Abhijeet – Krdo.
Criminal (little scared) – Tu mujhe goli maregi toh shreer se goli milegi… sbko pta chl jayega.
Isha (same tone) – Kisne kaha k main tujhe goli marungi… main toh tujhe zehr dungi. Esa zehr jo 4 ghante baad tere khoon mein bhi nhi milega. And she took out a bottle from her trouser's pocket. It was a small bottle having a green-colored substance in it. Ye zehr se 1 ghante mein tu mar jayega. (Coming close to him) Teri zindagi ke sabse mushkil 60 minutes ab jiyega tu… Teri zindagi ke sabse bhyanak aur dardnaak 3600 seconds honge ye… antidote h mere paas agr tune agle 15 min mein sach nhi btaya toh ye antidote bhi asar nhi krega.
Now she was few inches away from her.
Purvi (panicked)– Aap ye kya kr rhi h… voh mr jayega isse.
Pankaj (tensed) – Aap criminal ko hmari custody mein nhi maar skti.
Freddy (scared) – Madan hum sb fas jayenge… Abhijeet sir rokiye inhe.
Rajat – Acp sir please… rokiye inhe.
Acp too got tensed seeing all this. He said angrily – Isha… ye gair kanooni h… chodo usee.
Abhijeet -Sir isne bhi km gunah nhi kiye h… umarkaid honi hi h… abhi mr jayega toh acha hi h na…
Daya (shocked) – Abhijeet… tum kya keh rhe ho… hmara saath dene ki bjaye tum iska saath de rhe ho.
Abhijeet – han Daya… kyunki yhi sahi h. (to Isha) – Isha jldi.
She held his face giving deadly glares to him opened the bottle and made him drink the liquid. The crminal immidiately started coughing hard. He fell from the chair while Isha closed the bottle and kept it inside her pocket again. While Acp said to Isha angrily –
Ye kya kiya tumne… Main tumhe CID se nikalta hun abhi isi waqt.
(To Daya) – Daya Salunkhe ko bulao yahan kaho usee iska antidote dene ke liye. Aur Abhijeet tumhe toh main baad mein dekh lunga.
While Isha ignoring all, held the criminal again and asked –
Abh bhi waqt h sach btade… bcha lungi tujhe. Warna yhi tadap -2 ke mrega.
Criminal (coughing ) – Bta… btata… hun…
And he confessed all the crimes he did. Abhijeet and Isha looked at each other and did the high five. The criminal got unconscious. Acp shouted angirly –
Abhijeet… voh mr jayega.
Abhijeet (casually) – Kuch nhi hoga sir… relax. He picked a water bottle from the side table and sprinkled some water on criminal's face. He got up but his coughing was stopped. Abhijeet asked Freddy to lock him in another room and started explaining –
Sir ye toh hum dono ka plan tha… voh kuch btane wala nhi tha toh humne chota sa plan bnaya aur voh phas gya.
Daya (in tension) – Aur vo zehr… uska antidote toh dena hoga na.
Isha (casual tone, taking out bottle from her pocket) – Ye… ye toh green tea h… isme sirf coughing ke liye ek mamuli sa chemical mila diya h… kuch nhi hota isse…( forwarding to him) Lo dekhlo.
Team was shell shocked to hear that. Daya took the bottle opened it and smelled it – Han sir… isme se toh green tea ki khushboo aa rhi h.
Acp (shocked) – Kya? Lekin fir voh behosh kyu hogya.
Isha – Voh chemical ki vajeh se… usse insaan ko neend aa jati h immidiately. Paani dala toh jaag gya. Aur usee lga k voh mr ke lauta h.
Acp looked at Abhijeet and Isha and said – Tum log ye plan bta ke bhi toh kr skte the na…
Abhijeet (calm tone, looking into his eyes) – Sir planning bta ke toh nhi ki jaati na…
Acp Pradyuman immidiately looked at him and went silent. Suddenly his own planning during that one dreadful case came revolved around him. His own words "Ye sab toh plan tha" started ringing in his ears. He just nodded and ordered them to prepare the file of the case and went to his cabin while team started working on the case files. Acp Pradyuman sat down on his chair and started looking at his right-hand man with some moisture in his eyes. He was thinking –
Aaj mujhe pta chla k hmare hr baar ese plans bnana tumhe bina btaye tumhe kitna hurt krta h. Aaj jb tumne mujhe bina btaye ye sb kiya toh mujhe bhi takleef hui. Aaj indirectly hi sahi tumne khud ke liye aawaz uthayi h Abhijeet. Mujhe khushi h is baat ki. Bhut khushi h.
Days were passing and everything was still same. One day a case was reported and three bodies were found in a row in three hours. Bodies were sent to forensic lab. Dr. Tarika was gone for some conference so Dr. Salunkhe was alone with the bodies. CID Team barged in and Acp asked –
Han Salunkhe… kya pta chla?
Salunkhe – Boss 3 bodies bhej di h tum logon ne… voh bhi 3 ghanton mein… abhi tkk toh 1 bhi body ka postmartem nhi hua… main kaise kuch btau?
Acp Pradyuman (irritated) – Kya? Toh tu ab tkk kr kya rha tha… Aur Tarika kahan h?
Salunkhe – Forensic ki conference pr gyi hui h… Boss mujhe thods waqt do… abhi main kuch nhi bta skta.
Acp Pradyuman (same tone) – Toh tb tkk hum kya kren… hath pe hath rkh ke baith jaye… ek toh Tarika bhi nhi h yahan pr…
Isha (interuppted) – Sir.
Acp Pradyuman (looking at her) – Han.
Isha – Sir Tarika nhi h toh kya hua… main hun na… I mean I can help Dr. Salunkhe in forensic… with your permission.
Salunkhe (angry tone) – Toh aapka mtlb h ab aap Forensic lab mein bhi Tarika ko replace kr skti h.
Abhijeet was about to say something but Isha held his hand stopped him and said in calm tone looking at him –
Dr. Salunkhe na maine aesa kuch kaha h na hi mera esa mtlb h. I just wanted to help to you. jis hisaab se 3 bodies 3 ghnte mein aayi h ho skta h agle 1 ghante mein 1 aur body hmare hath mein ho… aur hum fr se clueless hon. Agar aapko help nhi chahiye aur aap akele sb handle kr skte h toh CID Team would be very proud of you.
Salunkhe fell silent listening her. Of course, he did say it in anger as he too did not lke her like other team members. While Acp found the option worth trying so he said –
Salunkhe… Isha tere saath kaam kregi is case pr… theek keh rhi h voh. Vaise bhi saare khoon shayd zehr se hue h… jb tkk zehr ka pta nhi chl jata h tb tkk case hi aage nhi badh skta. Aur tere sath -2 hme bhi pta chl jayega k Isha ko kitni knowledge h forensics ki…
Salunkhe (little low tone) – Theek h Boss… jaise tum kaho.
Isha wore her gloves and went near the body to examine it and Salunkhe too turned towards the body to examine it. Abhijeet opened the door to leave the lab with team when he stopped and said –
Dr. Sahab!
Salunkhe (looking at him) – Han Abhijeet. Team too stopped and looked at him.
Abhijeet (looking into his eyes and serious tone) – Isha ko meri dost hone ki saza mat dijiye. Voh Abhijeet nhi h k chup reh jaye.
Salunkhe looked at him in disbelief and team was also shocked. Abhijeet never said anything like that. While Abhijeet just left from there.
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