Hello, my name is Kingbulldog. This fanfic is a rehash of Crimson Dragon Emperor and Crimson Eyed Knight By: Writer with bad Grammar T-T.
So I guess in a way, you could say it's a fanfic of a fanfic. I've never written anything in my life, so I felt a good way to get started is to make fanfic based on a fanfic I liked. Like I can change stuff and rework it how I want.
I'm not taking credit for his story in any way; I'm a fan of what he writes. I'll give you an example of not me not pasting word for word.
Orginal Chapter word length
2,670
My Chapter word length
4,852
What I'm doing is expanding and cleaning up the story. With also added things I wanted. So basically, I copy the chapter into Grammarly and redo EVERY SINGLE sentence. I also add something that I feel needs to be there. I did the same thing a year ago and never kept with it, so don't expect anything.
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Why did she do it? I thought we were happy. I thought she loved me. I asked her to marry me. I pictured my life with her. Everything was going so well; what did I do wrong?
This is the right thing; there is no other way out. I just have to take the first step, and everything will be okay. Just a single step, and I won't ever have to think about this again.
I never wanted this; I was once happy.
Twenty-four hours in the past.
Mike, we've been through this so many times already. I'm going. I already told you that I couldn't cancel. This is the last time I will hang out with Evelyn. She moves to New York next week for that job. I won't be able to see her for such a long time. Look, we'll do something on your next day off, we can go to dinner or something. The girl said from her perch on the bathroom sink, inches away from the mirror, trying to get her eyeliner just right.
That's the thing I already had plans for both of us; I told you a month in advance that I was getting this day off. You've known that Evelyn was leaving for that job hell you've hung out with her so much we haven't been able to do anything together. I wanted us to spend some time together. Emily, I got a reservation at Flemels to go out to dinner. I planned a whole thing for us today, and you're going to blow me off. Mike said with a hint of anger from the couch in the living room. His eyes focused on the ceiling, trying not to lose his temper.
Mike, I'm going, and that's final. I promise we will do something on the next day you have off. Quit being a baby, Emily voiced with exasperation. Getting off the bathroom sink, she walked towards the couch and sat down, putting on her heels. With a bit of a struggle, Emily got both black heels on and started to walk towards the door. With a shift of the door handle, she hurried out the door, not glancing back into the apartment.
Hey, wait! At least say bye to me. Mike exclaimed from his seat on the couch, halfway from getting up to say bye. But he was too late. Emily was already out the door and, with a click, locked it behind her. Not knowing what to do for the night for what he had planned was in the trash, Mike decided to call his brother Adam to see what he was doing.
Letting out a sigh and a shake of his head. Mike pulled his phone out of his pocket and dialed his brother. holding the phone to his ear; the familiar voice message played in his ear. "Hey, you reached Adam. I'm sorry I couldn't take your call. Leave a message, and I'll call you back as soon as possible" Not caring enough to leave a voice message, Mike hung up the phone.
Bastard never answers his phone anymore. Mike vented to no in particular. Not having many friends, Mike resorted to his favorite pastime, napping. Sitting back down and getting comfortable, he let sleep take him.
An unknown amount of time passed.
Mike Pov
What the hell? What is that feeling?
Wakey Wakey, a voice said in a purr.
This feeling, oh shit, Emily's fucking blowing me. God damn, this is new. She's never done this for me before. She must be feeling bad about canceling on me.
What cat got your tongue. Mmmmm, I'm so horny. I mean, you've been teasing me all day. Emily rasped, clearly intoxicated but not letting that affect her performance. Her hands went up and down the shaft using her saliva.
I don't know what the hell she's talking about. Holy fuck, she's never been like this before. I have to see her with a pull. The blanket came off. There she was, Emily worshipping Mike's cock like there was no tomorrow. Here baby, let me give you some help. You seem to be struggling. I don't want to overwhelm her, so I slowly use my hand to push her down. Emily's face started to get red, and tears streaked out her eyes. Fuccccck, take it all, babe. I can't hold it back anymore. Coming down Emily's throat was heavenly.
I love it when you're rough with me, Adam Emily said, coming up from his cock already having swallowed the load. Her eyes were teary, and the smell of alcohol was on her breath.
I love it when you're rough with me, Adam
I love it when you're rough with me, Adam
I love it when you're rough with me, Adam
I love it when you're rough with me, Adam
I love it when you're rough with me, Adam
What the hell did you just say, Emily.
What silly shut up, let's continue. Emily slurred, not realizing her slip of the tongue.
Stay calm, Emily. I'm going to take you to bed. Come on
Okay, let's go. Shhhh, don't wake Mike; we'll do it in the office. You owe me from last time. Being so drunk, Emily didn't know what was happening or who she was talking to went to sleep.
She was drunk; I have nothing to worry about. Where's her purse? If I go through her phone, I'll be able to put this behind me if it's clean. I probably thought I heard Adam. I'm tired from all the hours, so my mind is messing with me.
Emily POV
God damn, my head hurts. How much did I drink? Where's my phone? What time is it? Here it is, what the hell are these papers—grabbing the pieces off the nightstand. No No No No fuck how did he find out we were so careful. Fuck I need to call Adam.
Ring Ring Ring
What up, baby, you get home safely. A male voice said, a voice similar to Mike on the other line. It was her fiance's brother Adam.
Shut it, Adam. Your brother knows about us. He printed out our text messages and left them on the nightstand. I don't know what to do. I don't know where he is at. Emily said, her voice full of worry.
What does it matter? Isn't this what you wanted? You never wanted to marry Mike. Now we can be together. Adam supplied his voice nonchalant.
I didn't want to do it like this. I wanted, I don't know fuck I don't know what to do. Emily cried, stopping in the kitchen to see if Mike had made any food. A hint that he was still in the apartment, but none showed. A letter addressed to Emily sat on the counter.
Adam, I found a letter with my name on it. It's from mike. That's how he writes. Emily said in a voice that held a little hope.
Of course, he wrote a letter that a pussy couldn't even confront you. Adam said with a sneer, knowing his brother for avoiding confrontation if he could.
Ripping open the letter and reading it out loud so that Adam could hear it over the phone, it said.
I can't take the thought of facing what's to come from this. I took the cowards way as I have always done. I don't accept it but live it. I stare at myself in the mirror while you sleep peacefully on the bed. I couldn't bear it. I've always struggled with this more so than others, but I always pushed it into a cage in my mind. It has escaped. I will always love you both, and for that, I hate myself. I'm sorry.
-Mike Pull
Back to the present.
Mike POV
Why did she do it? I thought we were happy. I thought she loved me. I asked her to marry me. I pictured my life with her. Everything was going so well; what did I do wrong?
This is the right thing; there is no other way out. I just have to take the first step, and everything will be okay. Just a single step, and I won't ever have to think about this again.
I never wanted this; I was once happy.
With that final step, I plunged to my death.
Nothingness…
Just nothingness…
How long has it been since I took the first step days? Years? Centuries?. Is this what awaits me for all eternity. When will the madness of nothingness come in? Has it already come in, and I just don't realize it. I've always run from my problems. I killed myself. Isn't that a proving factor? I'm mad. What if I'm not dead, and I'm just in a comma. Is that even better than death?
What will mom and dad do? They won't be able to pay for the hospital bills. What will this do to my mom? She shouldn't have to watch me rot away in a hospital bed. I guess I will disappoint even in death.
Some unknown time later.
I'm losing myself.
I can't remember the last time I've seen sunlight. I can't remember my mother and father's face. I can't remember all of myself. Who am I, or what am I?
Light
Is that what it even is? I finally went mad enough to see what I wanted to see.
Shaking
An earthquake?
Scene Change
It's been four years; I believe—four long years. I went mad in my prison. Now I live in a dream or delusion that my mind has created. Insanity has created a world where I'm a baby. I was born again. It sacres me of natural it is. That prison wasn't a cell but a womb.
My name is Mike Pull, and I'm a 27-year-old man in a baby's body.
My name is longer Mike Pull. It is Kai Hyoudou
17 Years Later
17 years later
Oi, didn't I tell you to stop doing this shit? I mean, at least have the decency not to make what you are doing so obvious. I said, exasperated already having this encounter over and over—the thick skull idiot Issei Hyoudou...my younger brother.
With a quick head turn, Issei turned in my direction with a look of surprise on his face. Almost shocked that he was found.
"Aah Kai! What are you doing here! Aren't you supposed to be in the library or something? I mean, we probably have a test or something. Issei said, with a sheepish expression on his face. His back towards the hole cut out in the girls changing room wall. Trying to cover up what he was doing.
Yes, my brother was a piece of work, a raging pervert that had no boundaries or human decency. He is the spitting image of dad with brown hair and eyes. Not taking any part from his mother. On the other hand, I looked more like my mother than my father, with darker brown eyes and hair. We are twins, so saying anything wrong about his appearance would catch me in the crossfire. But I like to think I'm the better-looking twin.
How many times have we gone over this, Issei? You always get caught. I'm not always going to be around to bail you out. I should let the girls beat you; maybe then you would learn. I sighed, feeling the lines on my forehead crinkle.
Hey, we wouldn't get caught if Matsuda and Motohama didn't get greedy with the peek holes we put. They always want more than their allotted time looking. He said. Without a hint of shame once more, he was annoyed but his friend's selfishness over the peek hole. Indeed my twin was a mega pervert.
This is why I don't want you hanging out with them. Those two idiots are a terrible influence on you. They enable this dreadful behavior. Issei, join a club or something, please make other friends. I begged
Oh, come on, Kai, they aren't bad at all. They are my friends we have so much fun together. Also, how are you telling me to make other friends when I don't see you hang out with anyone. All you do is study, you nerd. He protested.
Yeah, well, at least I don't get pummeled by girls! I mean, how times have you gotten a beating from them. You would think you would learn by now. It wouldn't kill you either to study for once. Your grades are atrocious.
Oh, my name is Kai. I use big words to sound more intelligent. Issei said, imitating my voice in a mocking tone. In the way, only a brother could do, trying to get under your skin would say. It was working.
Yes, this was the person who held the almighty Red Dragon Emperor. One of the original thirteen Longinus, specifically a mid-tier Longinus. A sacred gear allows the user to double their powers every ten seconds without limit until the user reaches their limit, whether it's their physical abilities, magic, or demonic power based on the user. It has been described as allowing the wielder to surpass the capabilities of God and Four Great Satans for a temporary amount of time.
I know this because I, formerly known as Mike Pull, watched Highschool DxD. I enjoyed the story, and the boobs were a plus. I never really watched anime much, but I like Highschool DxD. Now I'm living it a brother to Issei Hyoudou, the main character. When I was ten, I accepted that this world or universe was real or at least real while I was in it or something. It's too honest not to say it isn't. People here have lives like real lives. Random strangers walking down the street have a history behind them. It's terrifying to think about what that means.
This place is a dog-eat-dog world. Only those strong have a say on what's going to happen. You either comply or die.
Kai Kai, you're doing it again. You look like your going to shit yourself. Dude, seriously, I hate when you look like that. My brother said, waving his hand in front of my face trying to shake me out of my thinking.
Ah, sorry, I lost myself again. I just was thinking about something. Anyways let us go. I don't want to get caught up in your mess. God forbid the girls to think we do this together. I said, dragging Issei out from the area behind the girls changing room by his arm.
Oh, come on, Kai, no one will catch us. They just started to take off their clothes. Imagine all the boobs we could see. What do you- he never got the chance to finish his sentence.
AAAAH, Please have mercy. We were only looking at how sexy you are. If anything, you should-AHHHHH NOT THERE! ANYWHERE BUT MY MAN PARTS.
The screams of the other two members of the perverted trio ringed out in the air. Matsuda and Motohama Issei's best friends. The scum of the earth.
You were saying? I said with a deadpanned expression.
Thank you?" He said, unsure, and I sighed
Again this was the person who held power to rival God.
Ohh Kai-Kun, I didn't see you there. A feminine voice called out while I tried to get away without notice. Stopping me in my tracks. With a fake simile and lovely tone. I turned to see Katase and Murayama taking the lead of the kendo club members. Boy, did they not look happy to see Issei.
Ah hello Katase-san, Murayama-same and kendo club. How are you doing today? Did you have a good practice? A cold sweat broke out on my back.
Well Kai-Kun unforutanly no. You see, we just caught two of the perverted trio, and it seemed odd that the third wasn't with them. Katase said sweetly, speaking for the whole Kendo Club.
Ah well, Katase-san, as you can see, my brother was with me. So there was no way he was peeking on you guys. Isn't that right, brother.
Ah yes, you are correct. Wow, it is a hot one today, isn't it? Issei said in a rushed tone, trying and failing to portray innocence. Murayama and Katase not looking convinced at all.
Now Murayama, Katase-san, I was just on my way to see Sona-Kaichou. You know, I have an absence I have to excuse, and you know how she is. But it was great to talk to you. I hope to see you fight in your upcoming kendo match.
You can't always protect him, Kai. You, of all people, dislike his behavior et you enable it by letting him off without consequence. Katase sneered, already used to the older brother protecting the younger all the time.
As that might be, I don't think you should be the one dealing out punishments. I said in a calm voice.
What makes you think we were going to do anything to him? You have no proof. Katase smirked, all too pleased with herself.
Well, seeing as one of your members has a skewed picture of issei on her bokken. It doesn't leave much to the imagination.
Katase turned to see the girl with the picture on her Bokken blushing. She turned around to face me with a blush on her face and a frown to go with it.
Whatever, just keep a leash on him. We will handle it if we see him around the changing rooms again. Katase huffed a glare aimed at Issei. She walked back to the changing rooms with an angry turn, leaving Murayama standing there.
Well, I can't say I liked the circumstances of our meeting Kai-Kun. But it is a pleasure to see you goodbye. Murayama smiled and winked before turning around and walking towards the changing rooms, and taking the rest of the kendo club with her.
Of all the Kendo club girls, I like Murayama the most. She's always kind and respectful towards me. Sometimes I go to the Kendo Club and spar with her. She's terrific on her way to becoming one of the best in the state. She always gives me a challenge which I enjoy. I used to be in the boy's kendo club, but it was a waste the instructor couldn't teach me anymore. I show up just to keep up my skills, preferring to train independently.
I couldn't train in something I didn't want to die again. I was given a chance, and I fully intend to cherish it. Nor did I intend for Issei to struggle as much as he did in the anime. I had mom and dad sign us both up for kendo when we were little. Issei never liked it, but I forced him to learn the basics. Or I guess mom did. She is scary when she's mad. I know, either way, he is going to become a devil. I haven't thought much if I was offered a place in a peerage. I would like to stay human. I don't think my psychic could handle me forfeiting my humanity.
Thanks for the save, Kai. I don't know what would've happened if you weren't here to save me. Issei said with a sigh of relief. His posture relaxing.
You are welcome, Issei. But you need to get one thing straight; Katase is right; I'm not always going to be here to protect you. Nor do I want to keep protecting you from them. You don't have to not be friends with those wastes of space Matsuda and Motohama. But I need you to promise you will stop. I'm serious, Issei. I said, turning to face him with a stern expression. God to think that I would care for him like a real brother. It felt weird in the begging, but this is my new life. I intend to treasure this.
What are you talking about, Kai? You'll always be around. Don't be such a downer. Thiers so much boob to see and not enough time to massage them all. Issei said, not taking my words to heart with a perverted look on his face.
Never mind, let's go, we're going to be late for the next period. I said, not bothering to wait for him to get out of his stupid fantasy. The student council, for some reason, split us up in all years being at Kouh Acadamy; we've never had a class together. I don't know if it's a good thing or something to worry about.
Walking down the dirt path to get back into the school. A more annoying thing made itself known...Fangirls. Something I never thought I would have to deal with in my two lives.
Hey, look, it's Kai-Kun.
He's so dreamy
God, I wish he would ask me out.
I wish he would take me right here and now in front of the whole school. One especially avid fangirl said not to quietly.
Hey Yoo, these girls are insane. To think Issei could have all the girls he wants if he just kept up his appearance and acted right. I mean, for God's sake, we are twins. They are literally hitting on an Issei that takes care of himself. Well, whatever, I don't have time for this. Keeping my face stoic as not to give them any ammunition on their dead-end conquest, I kept walking.
Oh, hey, Kai-Kun, wait up! A soft masculine said behind me towards the right side.
Turning to my right, I see the Prince Of Kuoh Academy Yuuto Kiba, a handsome young man with short blond hair, blue eyes (bluish-gray eyes in the anime), and a mole underneath his left eye. He wears the average Kuoh Academy boys' school uniform, consisting of a black blazer with white accents over a white, long-sleeved dress shirt with a black ribbon on the collar, matching black pants, and brown dress shoes. Also, he's a knight under Rias Gremory.
How I would describe our relationship as two people who suffer from the same thing: hormonal fangirls. We aren't close per se. We wouldn't invite each other to the other's house or really hang out. But if one of us needs help with something, the other would have no problem helping. So I guess acquaintances, yeah, that's the right way to put.
Ahh, hello Kiba, how are you doing today? I asked
I'm doing great today, and you? He said with a perfect smile. God, how are his teeth that white?
The usual saving Issei from being beaten to an inch of his life by the Kendo Club. I'm still trying to get through to him, but nothing I say works. I sigh. Kiba let out a chuckle.
Ah yes, I believe you're going to have a hard time getting that through to him. You know it's still funny if it wasn't because your faces are precisely the same. I wouldn't believe you two to be brothers. You both act entirely differently. It's very odd. Kiba said with a laugh. I think I saw one of his fangirls faint from hearing him laugh.
Ah well, that's what my parents have been saying ever since we were born. I chuckled, making Kiba laugh.
To my left, "Both Princes laughing together what I wouldn't give for them to go down on each other with me watching at the helm. An extremely perverted Fangirl said, swooning with her friends.
Ah yes, Kiba, I think that's my signal to be off. It was a pleasure. I said, not wanting to hear more about the Princes being together.
Yes, good call. I will see you later, Kai. Kiba said, hurrying off also uncomfortable with what was just said.
At Home Later in the day
YOU WHAT?! Mother, Father, and I yelled in shock. Each one of us has our reactions.
Mother Reaction "I thought I would. I have no chance of having Grandbabies. One son is a shameless pervert, and the other does not show any attention to the opposite sex. My dreams aren't crushed. She said, crying on my father's shoulder.
Fathers Reaction" Oh Issei, good job. Does she know? He said with a leer leading to making the gestures of squeezing breast with his hands. He was a pervert, just like his son having no shame.
Kai's Reaction "Oh no, it's starting. Kai thought in his head, worried about what was to come in the next couple of years.
"I got a girlfriend!" Issei grinned from his spot on the couch, looking at all of us on the other couch. We were just watching TV before he burst through the door yelling for us.
My parents were over the moon with a chance to receive grandbabies, both giving up on their sons long ago for the way they acted.
Her name is Yuuma Amano. She has violet eyes long silky black hair, and you should have seen her slender body. She asked me out on my way home from school. She asked me to be her boyfriend, me she asked me. Issei said with a grin so broad you would think his face hurt. He was all giggles and butterflies over his date to come.
What's wrong, Kai? You seem pale? Are you starting to get sick? Mom said, trying to take my temperature with her hands.
Yeah, what's Kai? You look like you are about to throw up. Issei said, moving a couple of steps back from me.
I have to choose my words extremely carefully.
Err...In no way do I mean to mock you, Issei. But doesn't it seem weird that a girl you have never met before comes out of nowhere and proceeds to ask you to be her boyfriend? I am not saying you're not good-looking because that would be like calling myself ugly. But you do know your reputation as a pervert. Don't you find it strange? Did you ever ask why she wanted to go out? Or how she knew who you were. I just don't want you to be lured anywhere. I said in a worried tone, trying to get my point across that it wasn't normal. My statement had caught my mom and dad's attention.
Kai does have a point, Issei. It is odd, my mom said, not trying to hurt her son's feelings in a motherly tone.
Hey, don't you guys think I could get a girlfriend for just being myself. I have many positive traits that girls would be gunning for in a man. Issei said, trying to project confidence. Trying to keep the hurt out of his voice.
Of course, honey, son, brother, we all said in a tone of sympathy.
Well, it doesn't matter what you guys think. If your sooooo worried, Kai, you can meet her before we go on our date. Kai is the only one going to meet her though I don't want you guys to scare her off. We have our date on Sunday Kai, so you can come with me to meet her when I leave. After that, you need to Skedaddle; scram, I don't want her getting caught up in your robotness. I'm going on a date with a girl who has big boobs. I might even get to play with them. Issei said with the most stupid grin on his face. God, he started skipping towards the stairs for his room.
What am I going to do? How can I help him? He's going to die.
Kai's Journal
Sacred Gears an in-depth look
Sacred Gears, also known as God's Artifacts, are items with powerful abilities bestowed upon humans by God of the Bible. They are one of the main points of interest in the High School DxD. The original God of the Bible created the Sacred Gears to enact miracles on Earth as part of his system. It stated that specific individuals with Sacred Gears have become very powerful and influential. A large number of the people who've had their names etched into history were most likely Sacred Gear possessors.
Humans or Human hybrids are the only species born with Sacred Gears; however, they maintain them upon their reincarnation into Devils and Angels. The Fallen Angels from Grigori devised a ritual to extract a Sacred Gear from the original owner and use it for themselves; this results in the original owner's death. A person can own more than one Sacred Gear at the same time. However, it usually means that the individual comes to a second or even more Sacred Gear through rare circumstances than through birth.
End Of Chapter One.
Pairing Issei? Kai ?/Give me your ideas. It has to make sense, though.
Lemons, I have no idea if I will. I'm sure I ould rip one off someone then go through changing how I see fit. I'm not forcing it. That's dumb.
Plz, read the Orignal Fanfic Crimson Dragon Emperor and Crimson Eyed Knight by bad Grammer.
If you have an idea and wanna discuss it plz dm me the same thing if you want to proofread. Leave a comment on how you want the story to go and your ideas.