Yeah... Upon looking back...
That was hot garbage.
Don't get me wrong, I think this was interesting, and as a proof of concept, it holds up, but it's not that great.
So I'm rewriting it. Every episode, every chapter, rewritten. Not majorly plot changing, but definitely some grammar, word choice, and length changes.
The first NEW chapter will come out on New Year's. until then, enjoy a much-needed redo.