Hello there.
I finally decided what to do to this story and how to improve it.
Well, let's get started on what my plan will be: I will re-write this. I fell like my English improved as well as my storytelling abilities.
As said by some of you, the plot and overall the telling and continuity of the story was sloppy and kinda poorly done. Seeing as I was simply throwing ideas on the page and calling it done. So I'm rrefining and working a little better on that.
One thing that I feel will make some of you stop reading (if you still stuck with this after all the abandonment/hiatus) is that I will be changing platforms. This story will be on AO3 with the same name by the username of Lu.ixaXD.
One of the reasons for this change is that I don't use or consume of F. anymore. Sorry about that.
But if you really want me to continue posting here, send me a message or make a comment, and I will try to remember to update the new chapters here.
The re-writing is still a work in progress, I decide on doing this for a while but started actually doing it not even a few day ago.
This premise and idea will continue the same. But I will try to make the characterization of each character better, that being said some of them still might be ooc. I will also work better on the POVs and the feeling and thoughts of each scene and character in it.
Like I was doing, the main character and main focus will be Nagisa and close second is Karma.
Now a bit of my work on the updates:
It will be slow and the chapters will be at least 1k words long.
By the time that this update is posted, the story will already exist on AO3 as a wip. So feel free to subscribe there to not lose when the chapters first starting arriving there.
That's what I wanted to tell you, I am really sorry for my delay on posting or updating you guys.
Shout out to MissPotterjackson that was willing to continue and adopt the story, you are saint, but sorry, I will still continue doing it. But if you want to translate it feel free on doing so, just give the proper credits (*ω*)