Hi everyone this is gonna be my first story so please be nice . R and R.


ERIC AND TRIS BOTH ARE SAME AGE AND ERUDITE!


He used to watch the small blond girl all the time. He never understood what was so special in her , why she intrigued him the way only she did but his 6 year old brain didnt knew the answer to that question. She came to Erudite when her family got murdered in cold blood right in front of her 3 year old self. No one knew where she was from or dared ask who her parents were . She never talked to anyone or played like kids her age did but instead chose to stay holed up in all sorts of books. He wanted to ask her name. Wanted to ask if she was alright or needed anything, but he couldn't gather the courage to do so. He knew he wasn't daring like the dauntless. Didn't wanted to look creepy or foolish so he stayed and watched her from a safe distance. Sometimes she caught him staring at her and in those moments he stared straight into her eyes. Her eyes were cold and looked light blue in colour. He thought she had the prettiest eyes he had ever seen. But they looked so sad , so lonely and hurt. He wished, oh how he wished to take all of her pain away. But he couldnt do anything. How could a 6 year old do something so big.


He watched her whenever and wherever he could. In the library, cafeteria, housing area and anywhere she would go his gaze would follow her. He was a boy, had heard love stories and romance and in his heart always wished upon shooting stars. He wanted nothing more than for her to love him just as he was sure he loved her. He wanted to be able to talk and laugh with her. He wanted to be the one and only one who could hold her hands and hug her and tell the world that this pretty girl is his lovely girlfriend. But oh! he was so delusional. She hardly ever spared anyone let alone him a glance.

He wished and he wished and he wished some more but Erudite said shooting stars couldnt grant your wishes. Well they were right!