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Beatrice Prior walked towards Jeanine Matthews' private lab. She waited for a while, composing herself and making herself presentable by Erudite standards and knocked twice. She waited and then heard a faint "Come in!" so she did. The impeccable Erudite leader gestured for her to sit down. Beatrice immediately complied. A few minutes of awkward silence passed. None of them spoke, just analyzed each other with the calculating gaze Erudite are known for, daring the other to speak first. Several long moments later, Jeanine spoke up "Beatrice how are you my dear!" As if you care, Beatrice thought.
"I must say I am proud of the woman you have become, so intelligent, beautiful and confident. And I am very much proud of your choice. You chose sensibly and it will reward you for your entire lifetime. Maybe even your generations will benefit from your wise and mature decision. That said I have to assign a very important task to you Beatrice. You are a born leader. You are chosen to lead the faction of the Intelligent in the near future. I have placed you on fast track leadership program based on your loyalty to your chosen faction and your IQ. You are truly an asset to us. Beatrice listen closely and listen good." Beatrice looked at the Erudite leader and sat straighter, indicating that she is listening carefully."I will personally train you for this mighty position. You see this is why I advised you to choose Erudite when I for one knew that to wanted to choose Dauntless badly." More like left me with no choice regarding my future, Beatrice thought wryly but listened to her nonetheless. "You will be working closely with the Dauntless. We need their co-operation with our plans and without them we will be like a fish out of the water, alive but hardly functioning. That will give you a wonderful opportunity to spend most of your time with Dauntless and you can even train like the hellions if you wish so." Jeanine added with disgust. Clearly she wasn't fond of the Dauntless. "And another reason for you there is ,well you see my trained Erudite spy in Dauntless clothing, Eric Coulter seems to be infatuated by your beauty. And while love is foolish, it definitely blinds men and robs them of their independent thoughts. So you will pay close attention to our very lovely, soon to be Dauntless leader Eric to keep him on his toes and if he behaves well give him all of yourself in a way he craves for more and does his duties competently, just to have more of you. Understood?" Jeanine calmly said. Beatrice wanted to slap that smug look of her face. "You have 10 minutes Beatrice, think wisely."
Beatrice thought of the older woman as a sadistic human, no she wasn't a human. Humans have a heart and a conscience which Jeanine lacks. Therefore she is a machine in a human form, Beatrice decided. Yes she is a machine. Beatrice slightly smiled as she dreamed of her as an Erudite leader instead of Jeanine and thought of all the wonderful things she could do for humanity had she been in her Aunt's shoes. She sighed. Ever since her parents were brutally murdered, she got adopted by her aunt Jeanine Matthews.
Jeanine was attractive, but in no way came to the beauty that her 11 months younger sister Natalie had been. Everyone loved Natalie, men lusted after the younger woman and she was capable, strong and confident, a strong and perfect Dauntless. Whereas Jeanine was the weaker, less attractive and somewhat annoying woman who hated her faction of origin with great passion and left to Erudite when the time came. She fell in love with Andrew Prior who was younger than her by a few months but nonetheless the most handsome Erudite of that time. When Andrew defected to Abnegation to marry Natalie, Jeanine was heartbroken, jealous and extremely furious with her younger sister for getting away with anything and everything . Including her long loved man, Andrew Prior. She wanted revenge and plotted it for years until she got a perfect opportunity. The night before the Prior twins' third birthday. She was the mastermind behind the murder but little did she knew that she would lose whom she thought she would get. Andrew driven by rage and hurt by the sight of his beloved wife's murder, tackled one of the attackers who in defense killed him and his son too, all the while little Beatrice watched through a small hole in the closet she was hiding in. Even as a little girl she was intelligent and silently mourned her beloved family in hiding, not making a noise in fear of her own life. Jeanine was enraged. White hot anger pulsed through her at the eternal loss of her beloved man. She thought she could seduce Andrew into her as she was Natalie's sister and still looked like her a bit due to her honey blond hair. But too late she realized the flaw behind her plan. So she decided to eliminate divergents, those just like her sister. And who better to be her partner in crime than the last living Prior, Beatrice. And based on her long evil plan she adopted Beatrice Prior although she was clearly disgusted by the little girl that was a living proof of the love shared by her stupid sister and her beloved Andrew.
So here she is, grooming Beatrice Prior to become a vermin in disguise of the beautiful Erudite leader that she will soon become. And now her plan isn't limited to demolishing the people who do not confirm to the confines of a single faction, but also to use her loathed faction of origin to destroy the faction Andrew defected to when he followed Natalie. Abnegation. Little did she know that Beatrice Prior, the strongest divergent was capable of reading her like an open book. Beatrice gave Jeanine a sweet but very fake smile and said "Very well, I have chosen to follow your footsteps my beloved aunt and Beatrice is dead. I m Tris Prior."
