Hey everyone I forgot to credit a few lines I used. "There was never a choice...It's you, Its you. It will always be you."

I really really loved this. It's just too sweet so yeah it's from the one shot I LOVE YOU ENOUGH TO LET YOU GO

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Today was the day. Tris was going to experience her fear landscape and complete her Dauntless initiation though she is not joining the faction, she still is excited. She's also very happy because of a certain Dauntless leader who might be named Eric. Just thinking of his name brought an ear splitting grin on her face. She can't wait to pass the test and rejoin him. God I love him so much it hurts, she thought. She made her way to the cafeteria for a much needed breakfast. After all she will need as much energy as possible. She picks a big slice of Dauntless cake along with spaghetti and a hamburger. "You gonna eat all of that" she heard the shocked voice of Zeke, who sat beside her. "Morning to you too Ezekiel Pedrad" she mutters sarcastically as she begins eating while Zeke stares at her dumbfounded.


Being busy with running the faction, the other leaders couldn't come to watch her go through her fear landscape, not that Tris wasn't relieved. Eric, Tobias and Tori are gonna see the deepest, darkest secrets of her mind. Great, she thought sarcastically. "Are you ready", Tobias asks. Nodding she says "let's just get this over with". He injects her and mutters "He brave, Tris" and her eyes close.


The three observe Tris as she is enclosed in a glass tank, but that's not all. Soon water begins to fill in the tank, moving her body upwards as it rises and rises. Tris tries to calm her breathing and elbows the tank. Her lips move "The glass is thin ice." she says and kicks, shattering the tank and darkness envelops her. One, they count.Losing Control.

Tris is running in the streets in the dead of the night. The night is pitch black and she has a lot of trouble navigating. "I need to get back to the Dauntless Headquarters" she whispers to herself. Suddenly, a lot of burly men appear. Their faces are not clear due to the darkness. They move towards Tris and grab her. She struggles very hard but her efforts are futile as she grows tried. They cover her eyes and she knows she is powerless against them all. "Mom" she says. Suddenly an older woman appears and shoots the men. She looks like an older version of Tris and they understand she's her dead mother. Darkness. Two, Powerlessness. They say looking at each other.

Tris is pushed in a closet by some invisible force. The door of the closet is slightly ajar. Tris watches with tears streaming down her face as her parents and brother are killed by faceless men. With a look of sheer determination, she lunges at the men and knocks them all out. She sits with her family's dead bodies and weeps until darkness ensues.Three, Being responsible for her family's death. Eric says quietly.

They watch her as she walks in front of a beautiful house. Eric stands there waving at her with a small girl holding his hand. The house appears to be in Dauntless. They watch as Tris tries to reach them but is held tightly by several Erudite. Tris yells but Jeanine Matthews steps towards the two and kills them. Tris crumbles to the ground sobbing violently as Eric and her daughter fade into nothingness. She lets out a frustrated scream and everything goes dark. Four, Losing her future, Tori says.

They watch as Tris' body changes and she becomes Jeanine Matthews. She uses serums and multiple experiments on innocent people. They beg and she ignores them carrying out what ever experiment she feels like should be done and ends up killing so many Divergents, Abnegation and Factionless. And then darkness. Five, becoming cruel and heartless like Jeanine.

She stands in the middle of a city that is completely demolished and holds no signs of life. She sees bodies and recognizes her family, friends and various Dauntless and Erudite, all dead. She stands up as she hears a voice 'This is all your fault.' and another 'we are so disappointed.' and then many more voices join in. Voices of her friends, family and faction. They are all demeaning her, rebuking her and blaming her as she tries to defend herself but the voices grow louder and louder until Tris screams "Yes you all are right this is all my fault. MY fault alone. I am worthless. I am a huge disappointment and I failed my responsibilities. I am sorry. I am so so sorry" she keeps apologizing until the darkness folds her in its embrace. Six, failing responsibilities and becoming a disappointment. Tobias mutters.

And the lights turn in. The three of them gasp and share at the screen and start dumbfounded at each other. In front of them a screen says 0:10:20:36. "Ten minutes and six fears, that's amazing." Tori says. Tobias continues staring ahead. Eric is the first to snap out of his stupor. He hurries to Tris and pulls her in his arms, whispering how much he loves her and how great she did as she tries to catch her breath.

"Congratulations Tris! you have completed your final evaluation. I doubt anyone could go faster at it than you did. Baby, you are a Dauntless prodigy" Eric says to Tris as he pulls her for a sweet and loving kiss. Tris smiles and kisses him back. Behind them, the Dauntless began clapping and hooting as she turns back and waves happily. She knows that even though she chose Erudite under pressure, this is where she belongs. These are her people. I am finally home, Tris thinks as The Dauntless including Eric pick her up pass her around. This is the best day of her life.


The banquet was amazing. There was an abundance of amazing food and liquor. The Dauntless cafeteria made a huge Dauntless cake as a treat to celebrate her achievement. The leaders were thoroughly impressed with Tris. She ate, drank and danced the night with Eric and her friends, as they applauded, hooted and hollered the success of their faction's bravest female member. She was loved. She was respected and most of all this was her home and her family.


Fear landscape. Woohoo. Tris holds the record of the fastest fear landscape timings and is determined to be the bravest woman of Dauntless.Well done Tris!Hope you guys enjoyed. Please review, favorite and follow. Be Brave my lovelies :)