Here is Chapter One One :D lol
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The sun rose to another day, and a few clouds joined him to make some company but not blocking his view from the people. It was a nice and warm weather outside comparing to places that stay at a temperature where it could freeze you completely. One of them was the hospital, lots hated it for this reason. It was worst than snow days, that's what most thought. Being sick and at a place where your body was trembling was more horrible.
Only two young persons slept like a baby. This was because they shared what no other could that night, a same bed with two bodies sharing their heat. Not to mention they were comfortable as well. Having each other as a personal pillow felt sweet and warm. Nobody of the employees dared to wake him up and get him out of the bed as it was only for patients, but they will just tenderly looked at them, do the check and leave without giving any sound that could wake up the couple.
Their bodies kept in the same position all night since they fell asleep. Sometimes she would just embrace him more with her arm, giving little moans from time to time as she was comfortable by his side. The Casanova would occasionally open his eyes when he felt her moving, trying to be more close to him. He would smile by this and close his eyes again to sleep.
A promise was made to the country bumpkin the day before, the promise of a morning arrival. Visits were soon to be available as the F4's cars show up at the same time in the parking lot. Everyone got out of the car and met at the entrance of the hospital. Each one of them had brought a present for the commoner, but neither the Don Juan or the leader of the group show the gift as their dignity seem more important. Ji Hoo was the only one who didn't care to exhibit his present as a gratitude for Ga Eul, and not to forgive the affection he was having for her.
The talented violinist volunteered to walk first and be ahead of them because none of them wanted to risk being seen with their present. The two F4 would walk like crabs, walking sideways looking awkwardly at each other's face. Ji Hoo would give a glimpse every minute and smile of how shameful they acted.
Pressing the button to open the elevator, they were the only ones who got in. A silence filled the close space and none of the two who previously acted like a child wanted to make eye contact. Ji Hoo would glance at the two of them and grin. The door soon opened and once again the violinist was the first one to walk. The leader of the F4 would hide his gift inside his jacket while the Don Juan had to hide it behind his back.
Finally, after getting to the front of the room, Ji Hoo was about to grab the doorknob when Gu Jun Pyo spoke "Yah! Who's going to give her first the present?" his question seem dumb as nobody would think of that. Handling it to her was all it mattered.
They both looked at the boy with dark curly hair and shrugged at the same time. "Let me see what you have in there" Gu Jun Pyo tried to opened Ji Hoo's little pink bag to see what he got for her, feeling insecure of his own gift. The violinist didn't let him and this made the leader annoyed. "Aish! I just want to know" he said offended and looked at Woo Bin, almost about to ask him too when the Don Juan slowly shook his head, not approving either.
After this, Ji Hoo cautiously begin to open the door so he didn't wake her up if she was asleep. As it was open widely, the three of them behold the cute position of their friend and the country bumpkin together in the same bed. A slight chuckle it came out of their mouth as they slowly moved to watch them more closely.
"I have to take a picture of this" Woo Bin said still smiling and took his phone out of his pocket to use his camera. When taking it, he looked at the photo and smirked. This was a clearly evidence of the love they felt for each other. The image showed how the Casanova was sleeping in a soldier position, his right arm around Ga Eul's back while his left hand was placed over her cheeks. The commoner girl was sleeping on side, arm placed on his stomach and her head on his chest. Both their faces seem happy even though they were unconscious of their position.
Woo Bin sat down on the chair were Yi Jeong previously sat in the night while the other two F4 stood up in a corner, watching them all the time and smiling.
After what seem like an eternity of sleeping, So Yi Jeong slowly opened his eyes, looking still at the ceiling and not noticing the presence of his friends. A smile came across his face as he felt Ga Eul by his side. Turning his head to look at her, he could see she was beginning to wake up too. The first thing her eyes saw when she opened them was his looking at her. She smiled to him and he returned it back. Carefully, he lean close to her head and kissed her on the forehead. While he was doing this, coughs were heard and the couple's eyes grew wide as now they heard the sound.
So Yi Jeong glanced at both sides of his bed and could see his best friend by his side while the other two where at Ga Eul's side of the bed. Blushing was inevitable as the three visitors laughed of what they saw. She hide under the blankets, embarrassed. The Casanova would just stared at them in disbelief, smiling of how unfortunate they were.
"Ga Eul..." Ji Hoo called her name and this made her slowly pulled the blanket out of her face so she could see him. "I brought you this" he raised his hand, showing the cute pink bag that hung on his finger. Carefully, she took it and saw what was inside.
"Ji Hoo sunbae, thank you" her eyes shined as she grabbed what was inside of it. "I haven't eat this for a long time" her hand had picked up a cookie from the bag. It had the figure of her face on it. Quickly and without waiting, she began to eat it not noticing the others impressively watched how she could put a whole cookie in her mouth.
"You were really hungry" the Casanova looked at her and chuckle. This made Ga Eul stop before taking a bite from other cookie she had took out. Feeling shameful she was as the boy she liked saw her eating like this. Everyone else kept smiling. "I am glad you liked my present" Ji Hoo said and she happily nodded.
"I think is my turn" the Don Juan said and he was about to grab his present from the floor, where he had hide it so nobody could see it.
"Wait, you brought her a gift too?" So Yi Jeong's eyes seem like he was serious but it was just curiosity. A little jealous he was feeling as everyone brought something to Ga Eul and he was the only one who stood there with nothing to give her.
"I'm a Don Juan, the Don Juan" he emphasized. "I do this all the time" he blinked at him but the Casanova didn't felt like it was a joke to laugh about.
"Don't worry my man. The country bumpkin here is a different case" without looking at the Casanova anymore, he grabbed his present and stood up. He walked around the bed to be at Ga Eul's side.
"This is for you" he handed her the gift that was previously behind his back, trying to hide it until he got to her. It was a big panda plush with gigantic cute eyes. This time her smile was the one who shine. She took it from his hands and hugged it tightly.
"I love it" she happily said while still embracing her panda plush.
"That's not all" Woo Bin said and lean close to her. So Yi Jeong's jealousy was increasing. "Press here" he pointed to one of the panda's little paw.
"Ga Eul, fighting!" his voice came out of the panda plush and her mouth fell open, impressed that the toy could do that. Before the Don Juan could lean back again, Ga Eul's arms went around his neck embracing him and somewhat choke him a little. "Oppa, thank you" she warmly said and he stood there, taken aback by how she called him. His heart was definitely getting warm around her. Woo Bin patted her back "Okay country bumpkin, you can release me now" but before she could do it by herself, So Yi Jeong pulled them apart and after doing this he felt embarrassed.
The F4 could obviously see the Casanova felt a little uncomfortable of how his best friend and his girl were embracing in front of him. He chuckled nervously and lowered his gaze. The Don Juan just smirked, understanding his feeling. Ga Eul just glance at him, confused by how he reacted. So Yi Jeong stood quiet, ashamed of his action.
"I think is my turn now" Gu Jun Pyo said and walk to be at her side. He took out of his inside jacket pocket a small jewelry box. "Take this" he boldly throw it to her and she fortunately catch it. His pride was standing out the most of all of them. The leader of the F4 was the least who have done this, and it seem hard for him as he didn't know how to act or say. Throw it like that made him feel his macho side was still there.
Without saying something, she opened the little box and was more than surprised. A golden bracelet was placed over cotton. Her name was engrave over it with incrusted little diamonds on it. Her jaw drop open amaze by the expensive gift.
"I can't take this" she raised the box to his direction.
"Yah! Take it" he pushed the box again to her, annoyed. "You accept their gift but mine don't?" his head swing from side to side, unbelievable.
Ga Eul slowly nodded and gave him a smile. "Thank you, Gu Jun Pyo sunbae"
"Don't lose it" crossing his arms he warned her and looked to another direction. He didn't want anyone to see how he was caring for her. He wanted to act like if it was just a simple gift for someone who saved his friend, but it was more than that. She was his crush's best friend and now his best friend's girl, and after saving the Casanova, she won full respect from the person who seem impossible to have his trust.
Even when she had to spend a night at the hospital, everything went and was perfect; spending the night sleeping beside So Yi Jeong, having the F4 there to visit her and give her special presents was more than she could ask for. Geum Jan Di was the only one missing, and she wondered why she didn't come with the guys. It was still very soon but it was odd from her best friend to not be there even in the morning.
"Where's Geum Jan Di?" she asked and looked at the three who were standing.
"School" Ji Hoo answered her.
"SCHOOL" the country bumpkin realized she would be missing it by being at the hospital. The F4 watched her worried expression and So Yi Jeong asked her what was making her preoccupied. "I can't miss school. I can get kicked out by my so many absence" her hand was placed on her head as in disbelief.
"tsk..owner here!" Gu Jun Pyo said annoyed with his arms crossed.
"Right..." she nervously laughed and felt dumb for not acknowledging it before.
After that, the hours passed quickly as everybody would have a nice conversation or play a game. Laughs filled the room as Gu Jun Pyo was always the loser and he wouldn't like that, Ji Hoo would win many of them as he was more skillful than the others, Woo Bin would just try to cheat everytime he could, and last but not least, even when So Yi Jeong and Ga Eul play, they were more interested in looking and hugging to each other. The F4 repeatedly had to call their attention to make their move as they noticed how lovey-dovey they were becoming.
Having now a nice conversation about businesses between the guys, the country bumpkin took this opportunity to go to the bathroom. She definitely had to go immediately or she would have to deal the embarrasment in front of the boys.
After closing the door, Woo Bin looked to see she was in there, he then turned to look at the Casanova and the others knew he was about to say something.
"So, are you official?" the Don Juan asked him and blinked at him with a smirk on his face.
"What?" So Yi Jeong didn't understood his question and asked confused of what he meant by that.
"Ga Eul, is she your official girlfriend?" he asked a bit serious like if he was the commoner's big brother and needed to know their actual relationship status.
"No" the Casanova plainly said and give a serious glare, but after a long pause he cleared it out "Not yet" his mouth turned into a grin and he glanced at the Don Juan who was now smiling happy at him. His best friend was very proud of his decision. Even though his reputation consisted in going out with different woman and just have a great time with them, he knew the story of his friend was different. Ga Eul was a girl who should be taken seriously as she is different from what they have seen all their life with the female. Woo Bin envy his friend as he had a girl whose innocence could attract any man by her cute personality. He knew he could someday find the right girl for him, one like the country bumpkin, but for now he was more than happy to have her as a friend and now little sister.
"Yo! That's ma' men" he said with his swag tone.
"When are you going to ask her?" Ji Hoo asked, curious of what the Casanova was going to do. The F4 wasn't ordinary, that was for sure. They were always impressing people by their big surprises and mostly for someone special, and this time it was very special to one of them.
"I haven't thought about that" So Yi Jeong said and his mind was now in space, thinking. Ji Hoo was always the one who putted everyone to medidate by his deep statements or questions, even when this wasn't that deep, he had a point. How would the Casanova ask her to be his girlfriend?
"That's easy" Gu Jun Pyo spoke and looked at him like he had it all fixed up for him. Everyone stood there glancing at him "I will ask her for you" his voice sounded so calm and assure of what he was telling them that the F4 knew he wasn't joking.
"No, I want to do it myself" Yi Jeong said and placed his index finger on his chin, in sign that he was thinking how.
"I can give you an idea" Ji Hoo politely told him and crossed his arms, proud of the idea he had in mind.
"Idea for what?" Ga Eul asked getting in their conversation as she slowly walked to the bed. Woo Bin helped her as he was the most close to her, not wanting to see the Casanova's expression.
After finally sitting down on the bed, she looked at the F4 and their eyes traveled o different places, not wanting to make eye contact with her.
"Is just that Woo Bin, here" Ji Hoo smiled and went to the side of the Don Juan and putted his arm around his shoulder. "He needs some advice" the violinist lied but kept a smile on his face that could make anyone believe everything he was saying.
"Advice for what?" she asked curiously and the other F4 were very confused of what Ji Hoo was trying to do.
"You see, there's a girl who drives him crazy and to get matters worse for us, he wants to ask her if she wants to be his girlfriend" Ji Hoo leaned close to her so she could pay more attention to what he was telling her. Ga Eul's smile grew more when she imagined the great Don Juan being in love.
"Anyways, he doesn't know how to ask her, so that's when I had an idea of how he could do it, but now that I think about it, it's jot going to work" his acting skills were great too as he sighed desperate looking at Woo Bin, not knowing what to supposedly say to him.
"But now that we are here with you and you're a girl, I think you could give him some advice of how a female would like to be asked" Ji Hoo nudged the Don Juan's arm and this made him realize the violinist was looking for back up.
"Oh yes! Please, Ga Eul" his acting was very awful and he sounded very fake, but Ga Eul still believe the story and was happy that they were taking her consideration.
"Well, I don't know. It depends on the girl's personality and what she likes" she said slowly shrugging, not knowing what to give him as an advice.
"Give us an example of how would you like to get asked to be his girlfriend" Ji Hoo finally said, and this was definitely working. Every other F4 smiled to him and they were all thinking the same: Ji Hoo was the smartest of them all.
"Well, I would like him to first take me on a ride to somewhere beautiful that I haven't seen before at night. Then, have dinner and nice conversations about ourselves. After all that, having him ask me with flowers in hand if I would like to be his girlfriend" her imagination was taking her far away as she thought about it while she told them what would she liked.
"Interesting" Ji Hoo and Woo Bin said in unison while looking at Yi Jeong and giving him a blink of you-know-what-to-do-now. The Casanova smiled at this as he knew this was the best way to ask her since it was her preferences. This couldn't go wrong now, he needed to ask her the question as he was dying to finally proclaim her as his girlfriend. Having her to himself and no other boy.
His mind began to get to work as for where he could take her. An idea popped immediately and his smile grew wide while the others would secretly look at him without Ga Eul knowing their plot. Gu Jun Pyo noticed how the Casanova would stare at him, trying to say something with his eyes, and surprisingly he understood what he meant. He really wanted to surprise her and he knew he was certainly going to achieve it. The only thing that obstructed his plans was how long was she going to have to stay at the hospital. He knew she was getting out today, but he needed to know the hour as to acknowledge when he would start his plans with the F4.
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