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"This is a total trap... and I know that it is..."
Ramen Toppings
"This is a trap made for me to fall into." Naruto looked at the Succu-girl store that JUST opened up, and he saw the sign on it. He knew it was a trap, but damn if he wasn't going to willingly jump into this trap. He had just been coming back from a quest, when he saw this store out of the corner of his eye.
It was being ran by a group of Succubus, Lilim, and Bunny Hybrids.
They were looking at him with thirsty eyes from the other side of the glass window into the store, and Naruto's eyes narrowed as he looked at about 20 of them.
Eat Ramen AND Pussy, first customer to eat 30 bowls of ramen can have sex with all of the girls in the store for free for as long as they want.
"This is too good to be true... I can totally eat that much." Naruto looked at the store even more as he saw the challenge to him.
"Hey Naruto!"
"Oh thank god the idiots are here to rescue me before I make a mistake. Sup guys." Naruto waved his hand when he noticed that Stunk and the others were walking towards him with a shivering Crim behind them. "Just got back from taking down an illegal slave trade for a quest, and was looking at this place... I think it's a trap... want to go in?" Naruto asked them as he pointed to the place.
They ignored his question.
"Illegal slave trade huh? Yeah, those do pop up every once and awhile. Since most slave traders are money lenders who allow people to sell themselves to pay off debts, you don't see the illegal stuff much anymore." Stunk rubbed his chin in thought. Usually, a person could sell themselves into slavery willingly to pay something off, and slave traders would make contracts with the slaves, and those contracts would be proposed to people looking for slaves.
Naruto paused.
"... There is legal slave trade?" Naruto and Crim questioned together.
"Yeah, but it's not as popular as it was 100 years ago. Now girls can just sell their bodies at Succu-girl joints to make money, so there isn't much business for it. The pub has been getting more Dark World visitors to it, and Crim's been having trouble, so we were going to take him to a place to bath in the light." Zel explained what THEY were doing. Naruto looked at Kanchal, who looked at the Trap ramen store with a raised eyebrow, having not completely ignored what Naruto had stated.
"Yeah, he's been going tatatatata all day." Stunk agreed with Zel.
They needed to get Crim into some light.
"Ah... the feeling of getting hit by really nasty stuff, like your soul is getting ripped out. I've had that happen to me before, it doesn't feel great." Naruto stated as he shivered. He remembered when Nagato, as an Impure Zombie, ripped his soul out of his body and he needed to play tug-of-war with his own soul to pull it back in his body.
He could sympathize with Crim on that for sure.
"You've had your soul ripped out... what does that feel like?" Stunk asked, since he just knew what it was like to get hit by dark element magic.
"Tatatata is accurate way to describe it."
"Ah, so it's the same as dark element attacks. So, you want to join us and a review some Will o' Wisps... light spirits?" Stunk proposed to Naruto.
He nodded.
Crim was startled when he realized that they were going to a store and NOT going to a nice and sunny field like he had thought they would go to. He calmed down when he realized who his friends were though, and realized that this should have been the first thing that he thought of that they would think to do.
'Of course this is the outcome.'
-At the Store-
"This seems... bright." Naruto summarized when he saw a large building with a TON of bright light leaving the front door, so much light that you couldn't see a thing on the inside of the building. The sign on the building itself was kind of worn down in some spots, so it was for sure an older store.
"Woooooah!"
They were all excited with a bright and shining butt naked hottie came flying out of the door and greeted them. Her nipples were quite visible, but for some reason there was a bright light in front of her crotch that they couldn't see through.
"Eep!" Crim could see through the light, seeing as he was a divine being who had a holy aura about him.
"Nice." Naruto could see through the light, seeing as he was a divine being thanks to his Six Paths Sage Mode, his own divine transformation. It was still very bright to him, but he could still see through the light as it were.
This store was going to be interesting.
"Hello boys, quite a few of you here, you want to come inside-"
"You're already naked!?" Crim asked loudly.
"Of course, no reason to wear clothes when people can't see the important stuff anyway, and depending on the day sometimes our nipples aren't visible. Sadly, our crotches are never not covered in light... but that fine, they still fuck the same." The Will o Wisp stated as she floated around them. None of their eyes left her tits for even a second, not even as she led them into a large room.
...
A large room with several Will o Wisps floating around, and no other rooms or doors inside of the store itself. Just a very large and very brightly lit room.
"Okay ladies, we have a group of 5 this time!"
"... No private rooms?" Naruto muttered.
"No reception desk?" Stunk asked a different question though, and he asked it out loud. He noticed with some joy that ALL of the girls were stacked and sexy, no fat girls for him this time. He had been shafted too many times recently by getting the fat girls.
"Not at this store, in 1 on 1 in a small space, the room would be so bright you couldn't see anything." A different girl answered.
"Oh... oh... oooooooooh." Realization came to Naruto, Stunk, AND Kanchal right away, with Zel understanding what was going to happen. They all started to strip out of their clothes while Crim floated to a Wisp.
"... So, how does this work, we don't do it here, do we?"
"That's right!" She answered as another one of her species came up to Crim and the two of them started to forcefully strip him.
"Wha-wha-wha-"
"Don't worry Crim, the light of this store covers our dicks too." Naruto called out to Crim. He looked over at Stunk, Zel, and Kanchal and noticed that they all had lights in front of their crotches that corresponded to the size of their dicks. You couldn't see their dicks, but you could say who had the biggest and smallest. "They can't see your dick, and you can't see them either. Anyway, this place is pretty weird." Naruto stated as he changed who he was talking to.
He was speaking to Zel now.
"Yeah, pretty wild, I'll give it a try... damn that is a shine." Zel commented when Crim was naked and he had the biggest shine of them all.
The shine sizes when Crim, Naruto, Stunk, Zel, and Kanchal.
"Tehe, it's cute."
Only Kanchal was pissed about their size through, when a Wisp giggled and picked him as her partner. He seemed frustrated at the giggle, but he couldn't complain since he was going to get laid just like the rest of them.
"More customers!"
"Oh shit... oh... oh no... I figured out what kind of store this is." Naruto muttered as he was on the ground with two girls on him. Crim was just humiliated and shocked when more customers started to pour into the store as he was jumped by several girls.
Stunk had no problems with the store.
-Next Day-
Naruto, the Dimension Hopping Ninja: 2
Sadly, can't rate it any higher than this. The girls are great, but I'm not into orgies with a bunch of random dudes. At first, it was a few girls for every dude, but eventually it devolved into a few dudes for every girl. It is one thing when it's a good friend, like that threesome I had with the Salamander and Crim, but watching some random dude get your sloppy seconds isn't great.
Stunk, the Human: 7
This store is for pros. The girls are great and everything eventually turns into a big orgy, which isn't something for people who want one on one encounters. Experts only, these girls are too bright for private rooms, and you can't see their pussy. I can't recomend it for guys who want to see the bits, and I can't suggest it for beginners considering it turns into an orgy. I'm going to praise the store for the fact you can do it with a ton of girls.
Zel, the Elf: 5
You can relax, shrouded in light, in this store. Don't go into the store expecting that, you're in for a big surprise. As time goes on, strangers will come into the store and join in on the fun. You can't see anything because of their glowing souls around. The spirits are great, but I can't relax, and they charge you for every 20 minutes so take too long and it gets expensive.
Kanchal, the Halfling: 5
Not going to bother talking about the store itself, the others did that. The girls are great, but I was bothered by how bright their bodies are. These girls are super laid back because of how laid-back they are, or because of how dumb they are. These girls follow the ditzy spirit stereotype to a T.
Crim, the Elf: 0
I like the wisps, but I hate the store! Everyone kept talking about you how can't see anything, but I could see it all! I learned AFTER we left the store that Naruto could see it too, so that made me feel like I wasn't going crazy. I felt so embarassed that I barely remember a thing that happened, and I don't feel like I need to remember.
"Seems species that like orgies are interested." Stunk pointed out.
He noticed that Crim wasn't doing too well since there were still Dark World customers in the pub, but there wasn't anything he could do.
"Hey Meidri, do you mind if I borrow Crim for a couple of hours?" Naruto asked as he grabbed Crim, wrapping an arm around his shoulders.
"Go for it, I've got things here."
-Later-
"This is... nice..."
Crim relaxed against Naruto's back, laying down on the grass with an icepop sticking out of his mouth. Naruto had taken him to an open field and gotten him a cool treat, with the bright sun shining above their heads. Naruto just had a book on the ground in front of him, and he was copying the words from the book into a blank book, an icepop hanging out of his mouth as he relaxed as well.
Just chilling in an open, flower covered field.
"Don't feel shy, if you want to take a nap, you can. I figured that store didn't help you much, it was a weird experience. Tomorrow, I'm taking a quest to a town on the other side of the country, I'm going to see if..." Naruto felt Crim fall asleep laying against his back, and he grinned to himself and shut up. Naruto kept copying the words from one book to another in a different language, and he just smiled to himself softly.
He had a book to finish translating.
Chapter End!
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