Disclaimer: First Chapter
Story Start!
The Elite Four Challenge
Can you defeat our great 4 and win yourself a free visit with our beautiful elite monsters?
"Fuck, that hurts!"
Stunk was launched out of a ring by a large woman, 2 feet taller than him easily, who had strong looking arms and horns coming from her forehead. He was not wielding his sword, since the challenge against this member was a hand to hand fight with no weapons or magic.
"Bwahahaha! If you challenge us and fail, you must pay double the price!"
"Ow!?" Zel was blasted out of his own ring.
Elite Monster Girls were monsters of a species that could be considered elite in some regard. The Elite Four Challenge meant that you were forced to fight against all 4 of the elite monsters chosen in their areas of expertise, and if you won the challenge you got a completely free stay at the succu girl joint and you could pick any, or ALL, of the girls in the place to become your women for the night. If you failed, you payed double the price to be with a girl, and you could only pick a single girl.
You could also be a bitch, and not take on the challenge at all, and just pay regular price, but it was still very expensive, as elite monsters tended to be.
Arcana, the Arch-Wizard (Human)
Daria, the Dragonewt
Euryale, the Siren
Kivara, the Vampire
You needed to defeat them in Magical Attack Power, Hand to Hand Combat, Singing, and Stealth if you wanted to win the challenge.
"Gotcha little halfling."
"Damnit, how did you see me!?" Kanchal shouted when he was tossed out of the shadows and into the light by his opponent.
...
"I'm ready for my next opponent." Naruto raised his hand when he looked at the crying siren, who had given up after hearing him singing. Apparently, something even he didn't really know about himself, he had a pretty damn good singing voice. He never sang for anyone before, though he had originally wanted to write a song to sing for Hinata. Either way, he won his first challenge, while the others had lost.
"I'm your woman little man!" Daria pounded her fists together as Naruto stepped into the ring against her.
"Watch out for her-" Stunk tried to send Naruto a warning.
It was not needed.
Seconds later, Daria was sent flying out of the ring and crashed through the wall of the store, landing in the street when Naruto used his superior speed and strength to appear in front of her and slug her in the face before she could even put up a defense against him.
"Does it count for us if Naruto wins our challenges?" Zel asked with a raised hand, looking at the receptionist.
"No."
"Damn." Kanchal stated with a click of his teeth when he heard the answer to Zel's question.
-1 Week Later-
Naruto, the Dimension Hopping Ninja: 9
It was a unique experience, and the fact that if you prove yourself up to their challenges, you get to go in for free and be with any girl, is a great way to motivate men to grow stronger. I approve of this store in how it runs, since it forces people to have to grow stronger than the powerful monsters in the store. By the way, if you do manage to win, go for an orgy with the Poster Girls who accept the challenges, they know how to handle a man.
Stunk, the Human: 4
If you go in there thinking "I'm skilled with a sword" like I did, then don't bother. You will be challenged by a fucking Dragonewt who is like 8 feet tall, she's sexy as shit, but she will wreck your overconfident ass. I had to pay double the price, and I went with an Arch-Imp girl, the sex was great at least, but not worth double the price.
Zel, the Elf: 7
Getting my ass beaten in a magic contest is a little humiliating, and I did have to pay twice the price, but I got to be with a High-Mage Human who had amazing mana, and she was in her 40s, so she had some real experience under her belt.
Kanchal, the Halfling: 1
Waste of money, elite monsters aren't that much better at sex than regular monster girls. I'm just bitter that I lost my challenge against the vampire girl, but the place is super expensive since it focuses on elite monsters. I went with an Hobgoblin woman, and the sex was disappointing since apparently they are size queens. Do NOT go with some of these girls if you are a smaller species.
"So, what are the differences between Elite Monster Girls and Monster Girls?" Meidri asked Naruto as she passed him the food he ordered. She had read the review, and she was a little curious. She wasn't part of an elite species, though she did know of Raptor Birdmaids who were considered elite monsters for her own species.
She would rather ask Naruto than the perverts, since he would give her a real answer.
"... Quality? I had to subdue a Dragonkin once for a quest, and this Dragonewt girl was bigger, stronger, and she felt more powerful magically. The same for the other elites, they felt like their "lesser" versions, but more buffed up in power." Naruto explained it the best he could. "Technically, Sirens are considered to be Elite Birdmaids... or are they Elite Mermaids?" Naruto asked Meidri.
"Both, Siren is the species name for both a species of birdmaid and a species of mermaid, but both species have an elite version called a Siren." Meidri responded, and she had to leave when she saw a table of girls were gesturing that they wanted to order something.
Naruto just started to eat.
"Hey Naruto."
"Sup Crim, sorry you couldn't join us, but we all know you're not a fighter, so we didn't want you getting hurt." Naruto noticed that Crim had just gotten to the table after reading the review. Crim was shifting nervously, as if there was something he wanted to talk about. "Something eating you?"
Crim nodded quickly.
"... I want to go visit the Genderswap Inn again... but... I'm low on money... and payday isn't until next week... so... can I borrow... just a little." Crim whispered, since he wasn't strong enough to do all of the stuff the others could do to make money. Not to mention, while he was getting money from reviews, those weeks that they all took off from reviews really hurt his wallet.
Naruto looked at him for a second.
"... You want to see Elza again, and be treated like a woman... I guess I can help you out, since it's partially my fault you guys took time off of reviews for my sake. I do have a good amount of money saved up anyway. Still... lets turn it into another review, but focus on a different side of things." Naruto stated as he rubbed his chin in thought. "That way you can get your own money for your next visit."
"I'll pay you back, I promise!"
"No worries, I'll just take a portion of your review money for this one. Anyway, the other guys are gone on a quest, and Brooz is out of town visiting his sister." Naruto stated as he tried to think of who he could get to go with them. "Not to mention, I really don't want to go there that much." Naruto muttered to himself.
It just wasn't a shop he liked all that much, he would mostly be doing this as a favor to Crim.
"I can join after we close down the bar." Ivy had one of her flower vines come out of the floor and tell them.
"You were listening?"
"I'm almost always listening."
"Weird, but that checks off the 3rd person... we still need a 4th. Ah, I've got it... lets go see what Samhain is doing. He owes me a favor anyway." Naruto stated with a grin.
...
"Why does Samhain owe you a favor?"
"He and his wife got into a spat, and I was the mediator for it. I helped them make a fair and balanced contract that they were both happy with. He can now freely visit succu girl joints, so long as she can visit inbo joints in return. They have to maintain silence to each other about... the details don't really matter, they want to fuck whoever they want to fuck, but without the feeling of cucking each other." Naruto waved his hand, and dismissed the details of the contact. "... They are both horrible about cheating on each other, but now they can do it in a controlled way." Naruto grinned at the stupidity of it.
-The Next Day-
(Return Visit) Naruko, the Dimension Hopping Kunoichi: 7
A different experience, this time we had a woman in our group. Me and Ivy went into a room together with our genders swapped, and it was a strange experience. Not only did we know how to please our own gender, but we both had experience sharing the other person's body, so we already knew each other's weak spots. I suggest going to the Bodyswap Shop, and then coming to this place with the person you swapped with. It makes the experience better by giving your partner knowledge of your body.
Sammy, the Demoness: 6
An okay experience, but I have a contract with Naruto, so here goes. I've never been a woman before, so this did open my eyes to how female demons feel. The female demon has a far stronger lust than a male demon, so it was strange having my lust shoot up.
(Return Visit) Crim, the Fem-Angel: 10
I love this place, but this time I tried something even more amazing. Not only did I get to experience Elza again in my favorite way, but now that I have more experience with my female side, I was able to be more proactive during the sex from a female point of view. The more you get used to the female body as a woman, the better you get at sex with women as a man. My confidence shoots up everytime I come here for awhile.
Ivan, the MANdrake: 10
Go to the Bodyswap Shop, then come to this place when you get your body back. Of course, this was an even better experience than the Bodyswap Shop, because I got to have sex WITH the woman of my dreams as a man. I got to see faces on my partner that I loved to see, and want to see more of. Getting to see the flushed face of a woman in sex, when you're so used to seeing their strong manly face, just gives a whole different meaning to visual pleasure. Not to mention, women, you should go to this shop if you want to experience what your man feels during sex.
'I got to have sex with Naruto... YES... suck it Piltia, I got to...' Ivy was mentally bragging against the girl she saw as her biggest rival for Naruto, before she remembered that Piltia and Naruto were Friends with Benefits. Not only did they have tons of sex, but they did it both inside of work and outside of work, though much less when Piltia was not working. '... but... well, at least I got to have sex with him as a woman!' Ivy mentally bragged to herself.
Crim was sending her an odd look.
"... You do realize that..." Crim stopped talking when Meidri saw him and silenced him with a finger to the mouth.
"Let her have this... to her, she is one step closer... and I REALLY want to let her have this confidence boost. Maybe she will work up the courage to ask him out on a real date, and make a real move." Meidri whispered to Crim.
"Why?"
"I want to win the Dating Pool, my money is on Ivy, and her odds aren't great right now. Right now, Piltia and Death Abyss are in the lead, and that Deli girl is getting her odds raised up... and somehow I'm in fourth place. Guess people are less likely to bet on flat girls." Meidri stated as she looked at Ivy.
Ivy was a normal sized woman in height, but she had a flat chest on her, so she didn't have the loli angle playing in her favor, but she also didn't have the titty plant girl thing going either. She was a super beautiful girl, but she lacked some sex appeal that everyone else on the dating pool had going for them that made them unique.
Ivy was a normal girl, but with flowers and vines coming out of her body.
"How much?"
"Right now, the odds are 1/50 on Ivy... I will make a killing if she wins." Meidri whispered to Crim, and Crim nodded his head.
It would seem they needed to give their Employer a gentle nudge.
Chapter End!
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-Dating Pool- Odds!
Ivy: 1/50
Death Abyss: 1/10
Piltia: 1/5
Meidri: 1/20
Deli: 1/25
Crim: 1/30
Lilims: 1/3000
Harem: 1/40
Tiaplate: 1/40
(Note: These are the IN STORY odds for the Dating Pool that the In-Story Characters use to place their bets, not the actual odds for the pairing results. These odds were made by characters in the story who placed their bets.)
PLACE YOUR BETS!
(Bonus: Crim is not a real option, just a joke about how some of the perverted female characters really WANT Crim to win, so they placed bets on him)