What's up, readers? It's VickyT36 here with another criminal minds fanfic, enjoy!
Chapter 1
One evening in Providence, Rhode Island, a bus was driving down the road. The bus was filled girls from the sorority Delta Phi Gamma, and they were coming back from an event in another town.
"Now that was a great game." said a girl named Emma.
"You said it. They may be better than our school's team." added another girl named Sophia.
"Can't wait to get back to the house." replied another girl, her name was Hannah.
"We'll be back soon enough, girls." a middle aged woman told them.
Things were going fine, then the bus stopped, because there was a car stopped right in front of them.
"Now what is going on here?"
The woman got out of the driver's seat, and opened the door.
"Ms. Johnson, are you sure you should be going out there?" a girl named Camille.
"I'm gonna be quick, Camille." Ms. Johnson assured.
She got off the bus, and went to the car.
"Uh, excuse me? Do you need some help?"
But no one answered back, and she didn't see anyone in the car. As she looked around, she was shot from behind! The girls shrieked when they heard the gunshot, and saw Ms. Stevens fall to the ground. The gunman then appeared on the bus, wearing a black ski mask and waving two guns around.
"Unless you want to die right now, you'll do what I say." he ordered in a raspy voice.
All the girls whimpered, and some even started to cry. He ordered all the girls to throw their devices out the bus, and then he drove the bus away.
In Quantico, Virginia, Hotch gathered everyone in the conference room.
"What's the case?" asked Morgan.
"You're going to Providence, Rhode Island to help with the abduction of six members of Delta Phi Gamma, a sorority belonging to Rhode Island University." Garcia informed.
Using the remote, she brought up crime scene pictures.
"The girls Emma Jensen, Sophia Rogers, Hannah Cooper, Camille Stevens, Allison Palmer, and Isabelle Wilson were coming back from a football at another school last night, when they were stopped by this car in the road. The driver and supervisor, Mary Johnson went to investigate, but ended up shot in the back." Hotch explained.
"The gunman forced the girls to throw out their cell phones and drove off with them."
"Has there been any ransom demands?" Reid wanted to know.
"Not yet. But their parents are getting anxious and the police could use our help." JJ told him.
"Then let's get to it." declared Rossi.
"Wheels up in 20." Hotch told them.
"From pillow fights and gossip to being hostages." Prentiss remarked.
With the girls, their wrists and ankles were bound, and they were in a warehouse like building.
"What does this guy want?" asked Isabelle.
"What make you think I know?" Allison snapped.
"Girls stop it." sneered Camille.
"Quiet down there." called the man's voice from a speaker.
The girls stayed stayed quiet, and worried about what would happen next.
That's chapter 1, plz review