Hey everyone! So this story got its first criticism! First I want to say thank you to the person who criticized me. Criticism can help improve stories so I'm glad I'm getting some.
Now this person stated that they felt the execution of my idea was not handled the best. Which is probably true, but I think it still came out alright.
First thing was they said Deku was out of character. This is somewhat true. The Deku in this story is obviously different than the one from the canon. In this story due to his mom being so busy Izuku interacted with people even less, making him a lot more awkward and lonely. He also has less guts than the canon Deku but the core of his character stays the same. He wants to help people. I feel that as long as Deku's motive is altruistic in nature than he is not completely out of character. But that's just my opinion. Also, he's a genius in this fic but that's kind of necessary for the concept.
The second thing was Sukui being a bog-standard A.I. I don't think I agree with this one. I've seen plenty of Bog-standard A.I.'s and I don't think Sukui fit's that trope. Perhaps this will be more clear when I've given her more interactions and more to do in general.
The third was they felt I booted All for one and Overhaul out of the story. This is half true. Overhaul is just gone. I hate Overhaul so I take an oath to kill him in all my fic's. But All for one will still be present in the story.
The fifth was about Nezu being too compassionate. This is also not true. Nezu in canon can be a bit of a sadist but it's not like he lacks compassion. If he did than Izuku and his friends wouldn't be able to get away with half the things they do in canon. Also, Nezu was acting mostly off his own interest in that part. He needs Izuku for things he now had planned.
Sixth was that Izuku shouldn't feel guilty about working with All for one if he knew what he was getting into. That's also untrue. Firstly Izuku never outright knew All for one was a villain. His existence is a secret and the heroes think he's dead so he's not on any wanted list. And Izuku only started figuring out he was probably a villain after he already started working with him. And second, you can do things and still feel guilty about them.
Lastly was about grammar errors. I'll be honest here I'm not the best with grammar. I use Grammarly but only the free version so there's still some stuff that doesn't get corrected. I'm sorry about those the only thing I can really do about that is to improve my grammar the old fashioned way. By practice. They also suggested a beta reader but I don't know how that works and also it implies direct communication with another person and that scares me.
So anyway. Thank you for your criticism and if your still reading feel free to leave more. This goes for everyone else. If you see something wrong with my story please don't hesitate to point it out.
With that said. Onto the chapter!
Sukui was bursting with energy. Figuratively of course, if her power-source was overloading than Izuku would have had her stay home.
Today would be her first day at U.A.! She would get to meet her classmates learn about there quirks and if she was lucky she might even get to spar with them!
"You're really not nervous at all?" Izuku asked. The two had been walking to U.A. together and were nearly there. Only about a mile away. The two were already familiar with the route as Izuku had been working there for a little awhile now and Sukui always walked with him.
"Of course not!" Sukui said. "I get to make new friends! See new quirks! Train to become a hero! What could I be nervous about?!"
Izuku gave her a surprised look for a moment before smiling. "I guess when you put it like that you really do have nothing to fear. Your you after all."
Sukui grinned. "And you built me this way so you have to take credit for my amazingness to!"
Izuku turned red. "W-well I mean-"
Suddenly Izuku found himself getting hoisted over Sukui's shoulder.
"I want to get there early so we need to go!" She said before speeding off.
"Sukui!" Izuku yelled as his already red face turned crimson from being carried.
Later
Sukui scanned the hall's looking for her classroom.
It didn't take her long as the entrance was a large door with 1-A on it.
She stood in front of the door with a large grin on her face.
"Alright. This is it! My class for the next three years!" Sukui said to herself.
She opened the door.
"Take your feet off the desk!" Shouted a blue-haired boy. "It is disrespectful to the students who previously used them!"
Bakugo glared at him. "Who the fuck cares!"
"Fuck," Sukui said, all the joy she had was gone after seeing Bakugo. He may have been part of her creation process but he was still an asshole.
"Language!" The boy said marching up to her. "Future heroes should not use such deplorable language!"
Sukui shook her head. "I apologize. It's just me and him don't have a good history. How long have you known him?"
"About two minutes." The boy said.
"Than you already have a grasp on his personality," Sukui said shooting Bakugo a smug look.
In response, Bakugo flipped her off and said nothing.
Sukui gasped. "That's the nicest thing he's said to me!"
Bakugo was about to curse at her when a large green caterpillar appeared in the doorway.
Everyone turned to look at it, no one saying anything when suddenly something started coming out of it.
Turns out it was a sleeping bag containing Eraserhead!
"If you're done acting like pre-schoolers I would like to start class." He said.
Most of the students were wondering who exactly this was but Sukui already knew.
"Eraserhead!" She squealed. "So cool!"
Eraserhead raised an eyebrow, surprised that somebody recognized him. Then he realized that this was the android that he had been told about.
He decided to ignore it and move on.
"Get changed and meet me outside in the field." He said getting right to the point.
This shocked the class who was not used to such an approach.
"But what about orientation!" Uraraka said.
"Waste of time," Eraserhead said. Before anyone could say anything else he walked out of the room leaving them all speechless.
Except for Sukui who stood up and started walking out before realizing her class was in shock.
"Judging from the data I have on Eraserhead's teaching style, we are all in for a very interesting year!" She said to everyone before turning and leaving.
Later in the girl's locker room.
Momo Yaoyorozu felt very uncomfortable.
She was somewhat used to getting stared at by both men and females alike but something about Sukui's gaze was unusual.
The girl's gaze was fixed on her chest but unlike most people who looked at her with envy or perviness, she seemed to be looking at her with curiosity.
"Could you...stop looking at my chest?" She asked uncomfortably.
Sukui's eyes shot up to Momo's eyes. "Sorry."
She then looked up at the ceiling for a few moments before getting a determined look in her eye and saying. "For science!"
She then walked right out of the girl's locker room.
"I have a bad feeling about what's about to happen next," Ochaco said.
Later outside
All the students had gathered outside waiting for their teacher.
The boys were giving Sukui some strange looks though. Ranging from glares to winks.
"Midoriya!" Iida yelled at Sukui. "Bursting into the men's locker room is against the rules! It is also shameful behavior for a student of U.A.!"
"You did what!" Yelled most of the girls. Except for Mina who snickered.
"I wished to test my sexuality," Sukui explained. "I had no particular attraction towards the females so I tried the males. There was no attraction there either."
"Wait so your...asexual?" Toru asked.
Sukui shrugged. "No clue. I'll have to ask father."
"Ask me what?"
Everyone looked in front of them to see Eraserhead and Izuku walking toward them. Izuku was now in a white lab coat and green shirt with blue jeans.
"Deku!" Bakugo yelled. "The fuck are you doing here!"
"Language," Iida yelled chopping the air.
"Shove it glasses!" Bakugo snarled.
"Quite!" Eraserhead yelled activating his quirk.
Bakugo grumbled but didn't say anything.
"Good," Eraserhead said deactivating his quirk. "This is Izuku Midoriya. He is an engineer at U.A."
"WHAT!?" Yelled everyone but Sukui and Todoroki, the latter just looked at him with wide eyes.
"But he's the same age as us!" Mina shouted.
"Shouldn't he graduate first before getting a job?" Kaminari asked.
"He did graduate," Sukui said. "He graduated on the same day of the entrance exam."
"WHHAAT!" Yelled most of the class again.
"How the hell did Deku graduate before me!?" Bakugo yelled.
"Well when you're smart enough to create life, high school just seems unnecessary," Eraserhead said.
"WHHHAAATTTTT!" Yelled the class again, this time even Todoroki joined in.
"Wait wait wait!" Kaminari said. "His names Midoriya. And...can I call you Sukui?"
Sukui nodded.
"Sukui's name is Midoriya." Kaminari continued. "And when Suku said she needed to ask her dad. That guy said that he was her father. Plus there are those rumors about that robot girl."
"Oh my god, Sukui's a robot!" Mina yelled.
Momo spoke up. "That seems a little farfech-"
"Correct." Eraserhead said "Izuku was the one who built Sukui and as such U.A. allowed his to graduate immediately. Afterward, he was offered a job at U.A as an engineer. Now that, that's dealt with let's move on. If you have more questions you can ask him after the lesson."
"But I have so many questions!" Mina said, saying what most of the class was thinking.
"Moving on!" Eraserhead said more forcefully. "I was going to have a quirk apprehension test. But Nezu and Midoriya had other ideas."
Before anyone could ask anything Izuku pulled out a big red button from his coat and then pressed it.
Suddenly the ground started shaking, and All Might came out bursting out of the ground.
"What the fuck!" Bakugo yelled.
"Combat test. Go." Eraserhead said.
Before any of them could react All Might charged at the class and was about to punch Mina.
Just before she got hit Kirishima stepped in front of her and hardened his arms, blocking the hit.
"Holy crap holy shit we have to fight freakin All Might!" Mineta yelled.
Sukui blasted All Might with her laser eyes knocking him back and Sato followed up by eating a bunch of sugar than landing a right hook on him.
All Might recovered and charged Sato, tackling him and throwing him aside.
Before he could do anything else however he was fully encased in a huge chunk of ice.
"That won't hold him for long," Todoroki said. "We need a plan fast."
The pressure increased as the students could hear the sounds of ice breaking, knowing that soon All Might would be free.
"This is not All Might," Sukui said causing everyone to look at her in confusion. "All Might is much stronger and faster than this and my sensors detect that our foe is not holding back. And given that my father is here our opponent is most likely a robot."
"So we're not fighting All Might?!" Mineta asked hopefully.
Sukui shook her head. "No."
Todoroki grunted as he added another layer of ice to stall the fake All Might. "While that's useful to know we still need a plan!"
"Just blast him," Sukui said. "A combined assault from all of us should be able to destroy this thing."
"Tt. I don't need your fucking help! I could beat this fake by myself!" Bakugo yelled.
Sukui rolled her eyes. While Bakugo could probably beat this thing by himself, it would not be easy.
At that moment the fake All Might broke free of ice. Although it was not undamaged. The ice seemed to have done a number on it and its fake skin was torn in several places, including its eye.
"Sato, Kirishima can you hold it in place?" Sukui asked.
The two nodded and charged at the robot.
"I can help!" Uraraka said running off with them.
The fake All Might charge at Uraraka but Kirishima blocked its punch.
Sato took this opportunity to grab it's arms, holding it in place.
Uraraka than touched the automaton, causing it to float.
Sato threw it up in the air, making it completely vulnerable. Unfortunately, it started floating out of range.
"It's going out of range!" Sukui yelled.
"Not on my watch," Sero said using his tape to wrap it up and keep it from floating any further.
"Now!" Sukui signaled letting off a full power eye blast.
"Don't tell me what to do!" Bakugo shouted while sending a high power blast at the fake.
Momo shot a cannonball from the cannon she made(Unfortunately making a giant hole in the back of her tracksuit), and Aoyama unleashed his navel laser.
These attacks all landed and blew the machine to bits.
Once the smoke from the attack cleared there was nothing but a bunch of floating bits of metal.
"Release," Urakara said, making the metal fall to the ground.
"We-we did it!" Mineta cheered.
"You didn't really do anything," Sero muttered.
Sukui crossed her arms in a proud stance, with a smug grin on her face. "And it was all thanks to my plan. Your welcome."
"Like I said. I could have destroyed that thing on my own!" Bakugo snarled.
"Is he always an asshole?" Kaminari asked.
"Congratulations," Eraserhead said sarcastically. "You finished the warm-up. Now onto the real test."
"Wait what?" Mina said.
Izuku pulled out another button from his other pocket and pressed it.
Suddenly the ground started shaking again this time much more violently.
Then ten more All Might robots popped out of the ground.
"Oh come on!" Mina shouted.
"AHHHHH!" Mineta screamed in terror.
The fake All Might's charged them all scattering them and splitting them up.
One of the robots was about to punch Ochaco but Sukui blasted them with a full power blast, knocking it to the side.
Sukui kept blasting the robot. Destroying it's fake flesh and burning the metal.
Then the beam stopped.
Optic beams reaching overheating level. Need to go on cool down. Damn it! Sukui thought as the robot charged her.
Just before it reached it suddenly started floating. Sukui took this opportunity to punch the robot into the air.
Sukui looked at Ochaco who let out a sigh of relief. "Made it."
"Thank you," Sukui said smiling at the girl.
"You saved me first." Ochaco smiled back.
Sukui looked up at the now flying robot. "In five seconds I'll be able to unleash another blast. I'm going to go into overcharge mode and destroy him in one go."
Ochaco nodded.
"Five," Sukui said.
"Four," Ochaco said.
"Three."
"Two."
"One."
"Release!" Ochaco yelled bring her fingertips together.
Gravity returned to the robot and it fell down to earth.
Izuka stood underneath the robot and looked up.
"NOVA BLAST!"Sukui yelled as she unleashed a massive blast from her eyes, up at the robot.
The fake All Might was consumed by the blast and was obliterated.
Ochaco looked up at the blast with wide eyes, before looking back at Sukui whose eyes were smoking.
Sukui looked back and was delighted by the shocked expression Ochaco was wearing.
"Cool huh!" Sukui said.
"Yeah!" Ochaco said excitedly. "Why didn't you do that earlier!?"
"Oh simple. If I use it then I won't be able to use my optic blast for an hour!" Sukui answered.
"Oh," Ochaco said.
Meanwhile
Kirishima held off one of the fake All Mights. Protecting Mina who was behind him and Mineta who was behind her.
The fake punched him again, chipping away at Kirishima defense.
"Uh, a little help here!" Kirishima grunted as the robot whittled away at his quirk.
Mina turned to Mineta. "What does your quirk do?"
"Uh um, I have sticky balls," Mineta said nervously.
Mina would have laughed if it wasn't for the situation she was in. "Alright. You stick him I'll melt him."
"What!" Mineta yelled. "I can't-"
Kirishima was knocked back a little as he tried to hold back the robot.
"AHHHHH!" Mineta yelled.
He threw his balls right behind the robot in a panicked fashion.
Kirishima saw this opportunity and took the offense. "Red gauntlet!"
He punched the robot at full power, putting a small dent in its chest and knocking it onto Mineta's balls.
The robot struggled, trying to free itself but to no avail.
Mina smiled. "My turn!"
She then doused the robot in acid, melting it down until it exploded.
"Yes!" Mina cheered.
She looked at Kirishima and Mineta. "Hi, five!"
Kirishima and Mina high fived while Mineta tried in vain to jump up and join."
Meanwhile
Ojiro narrowly dodged another punch.
The robot was no fighter, it just swung randomly at the tailed boy.
Ojiro used this to his advantage and managed to block or deflect the fake's blows.
"Dark shadow!" Tokoyami yelled. "Bind him!"
Dark shadow shot out from Tokoyami's body and wrapped around the robot's body.
Unfortunately one of its arms was free it was about to punch dark shadow, but Tsuyu's tongue wrapped around it and kept it in place.
"Jiro now! Send him to the void!" Tokoyami yelled.
Jiro ran up next to the barely contained robot and shoved one of her earphone jacks in the things ear.
She let off a full volume blast of sound in the things head, making it explode and it's body to fall to the ground.
"Yes!" Jiro cheered.
Meanwhile
Sato was holding off one of the robots but he could only so much damage and his quirk was starting to take its tool on him.
"Hey." Said Toru. "Close your eyes! Me and the french dude have a plan."
Sato nodded and shut his eyes.
Toru unleashed a flash of bright light, causing the robot's optic center to go into overload.
"Grab him from behind!" Toru yelled.
Sato opened his eyes and saw that the robot was blinded. He went behind him and put him into a hold.
"Now!" Toru said.
"Prepare to be dazzled!" Aoyama said unleashing a powerful blast at the robot's head. Destroying it.
"Wahoo!" Tour cheered doing a victory dance no one could see. "We did it."
Aoyama smiled as he silently hoped this would be over soon so he could use the bathroom.
Meanwhile
One of the robots was rapidly attempting swat away a flock of birds summoned by Koda to distract the machine.
Than Sero took this chance to wrap the thing in tape, leaving it defenseless.
Kaminari smirked and ran up to the huge robot, before jumping on top of it.
"Get the birds out!" Kaminari said.
Koda nodded. "Fly away my friends."
The birds dispersed and Kaminari grinned.
"Indiscriminate Discharge 1,300,000 volts!" He yelled unleashing a massive burst of electricity causing the machine to explode and Kaminari was knocked into the air.
Luckily he was caught by Dark shadow who brought him down safely.
"You ok dude?" Sero asked.
"Wey," Kaminari responded with a stupid look on his face.
"Probably just quirk kickback," Sero said. "Hopefully"
Meanwhile
Shoji held the struggling robot in place, using his quirk to wrap his tentacle-like arms around it, while Iida ran in wide circles around them.
Iida had said it would take him a while to get into full gear so Shoji had to hold him off while he got there.
After a few more seconds Iida reached his top speed and ran full force at the two.
"Recipro Burst!" He yelled as he kicked the robot's head off.
Shoji let go of the robot's limp body and gave Iida a thumbs up.
Meanwhile.
Bakugo was getting his ass kicked.
Perhaps taking on two of these things at once wasn't the best idea, but like hell, he was going to let anything Deku made beat him!
He hit one of them with an explosion knocking it back, only for the other one to punch him in the face, causing him to go flying and land on his back.
The robot tried to stomp Bakugo but he rolled out of the way and was about to retaliate when the other robot kicked him.
Bakugo rolled across the ground using his explosions to stop himself.
He got up and the robots ran at him.
Just as he was about to unleash a strong explosion at the both of them, two E.M.P's were thrown on both the robot's heads, causing them to shake and malfunction until they just both deactivated.
Bakugo looked back to see that it was Momo who had done them in.
"I didn't need your fucking help!" Bakugo yelled.
Momo ignored that. "We need to help Todoroki. He also took on two of them and-"
Bakugo rolled his eyes. "Look behind you dumbass."
Momo looked behind her and saw that Todoroki had impaled both the robots on ice spikes.
"Oh," Momo said.
All the robots were defeated as many of the students cheered and celebrated.
Izuku looked at Eraserhead. "So do they have potential?"
Eraserhead sighed. These robots were tough. Even he would have a difficult time taking them out. For these kids to take down ten of them proved that they had what it took to be heroes. Which meant that Eraserhead would actually have to do his job this time. Yay.
"Alright," Eraserhead shouted, getting the students attention. "You all proved you had at least some semblance of skill so none of you are getting expelled...for now. Go change than your dismissed."
The students ran off leaving a smiling Izuku and a grumpy Eraserhead.
Later in the girl's locker room.
"So are you really a robot!" Mina asked Sukui looking all over her body for any robotic parts.
"Yup," Sukui said happy to have another chance to talk about herself. "The world's first fully sentient android!"
"I dunno you look human to me," Jiro said skeptically.
In response, Sukui reached for the opening in her artificial skin and took it off. Revealing her metallic face.
"I take it back you're definitely a robot," Jiro said.
"That explains why you called that guy father when we met!" Ochaco said. "I was so confused when that happened! I thought you guys were just weird!"
"Well, I would hardly call a teenager making a scientific breakthrough that's leaps and bounds above anything else in his field, normal," Momo said.
Suddenly the door slammed open and a pink-haired girl rushed in.
"Where is she!" The girl yelled before her eyes landed on Sukui.
"It's true." She said in a whispery tone as she walked right up to Sukui. "You're real! The marvel of technology I've dreamed about for years is real!"
The girl looked all around her body, not caring where her hands went making all the other girls go wide-eyed as their classmate was being felt up.
"Uhh? I get I amazing but slow down a bit." Sukui said. She didn't mind the girl was doing she was doing, she was just really confused.
"Oh, my name is Mei Hatsume! Please let me see inside you!" She said.
"Phrasing!" Mina yelled.
"Sure," Sukui said.
"Huh?" responded most of the girls.
"My father will probably want to do a rundown on my systems after I get changed," Sukui explained. "You can come if want."
"YES!" Mei said drooling slightly.
Later at Izuku's new lab.
Izuku's new lab was a small building on U.A.'s campus that was made recently for him.
It was large and filled with all sorts of machines to do various things.
Sukui opened the door and Izuku, who was working on something, looked at her.
"Oh, Sukui!" Izuku said smiling. "You're just in time for-"
Suddenly he was tackled by a pink streak and fell to the floor with something on top of him.
Something very soft.
He looked up to see Mei on top of him with her boobs right in his face.
All the color drained from his face.
"You're the person who made her!" Mei said, not caring about his age. "That's incredible! Please let me help you make your babies!"
It was that day Izuku had a near-death experience at the hands of boobs and poorly phrased sentences.
Tada!
You guys wanted Mei. Well, your gonna get her. Trust me.
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